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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!!!!!!!!!! DAT WAS AWESOME PLZ CONTINUE 😊 😊 😊
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Yaar it is just awesome 👏 Please continue soon
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that was soo good
haha kanya jealous!
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Part 3

Ranbir and Archita are unaware of Kanya being present while they get carried away with the kiss. Archita and Ranbir end up on top of each other on the bed. Kanya looks like she's about to rip Archita's head off and play football with it. She couldn't bear this scene any longer so she tries to make some cough noises but nobody listens to her. Kanya walks towards Ranbir and drags him away from her.


K-What the hell are you doing stupid saand?Us ladki ke saath tum tennis khel rahe te. Your so disgusting.(Looks at Archita) Do you not have any shame kissing a strange guy randomly? Get your hands off him now.


R-Kanya woh. It's not what it seems she took me by surprise Sach. I swear she just pounced on me. Archita has a habit of doing that. Besides use kucch mat kehna. She's my friend.


A-Ranbir what the hell is this? Itne saalo baad mein pehli baar tume mili hoon and instead of being happy tum us naukrani se sifarish deh rahi ho. Why? Look at me Ranbir. I came for you. Now maid go do your work and get me a nice cold Orange juice.


K-I am not a maid you stupid woman. Kisise baath karne ki tameez nahin. Tum sab ek hi mitti ki baani ho. Ameeri ki saath thora morals agar saath latte to achcha hota. Mujhe tumhari saath baat karke apni hesiyat gavana nahin chahti. Ranbir get away from her now. I mean it. Us churail se door jao. Abhi. If you don't i swear mein tumhara sar por dalungi. Mere sar pe khoon sawar hain. Pehle main use tikana lagathi hoon baad mein tumhe dekhloongi.


A-Ranbir don't listen to this do kauri ki aurat ke baat mat maan na. She is insulting me. Plus she has no right to talk to you this way. Who ever you are tum mere Ranbir ke bare mein aisi baath nahin kar sakte. Churail kisko bol this hain. Churail tu hain. Kaisi aukat hain teri. Tu kya mujhe mare ghi main tujhe tikana na laga doon to meri naam Archita nahin hai. Jaake apni kaam kar ya phir mu band rakh. Kaise kaise servants tum log rakhte ho.


R-Archita she's my wife! Shaadi ki hain maine. Uski bare mein kuch mat kehna woh hain aisi. Baath baath pe jagra kea lava use kucch karna nahin aata. Come lets go down. She'll calm down after another year.(Laughs)


A-I'm sorry. I can understand. Pehle mujhe bata dehte to yeh itna bara jagda nahin hoti. I'm Archita. One of Ranbir's best friend. Let's start again. Any family of Ranbir's would be family of mine.(Get's a little upset)


K-Get lost. I don't want to know you. Ranbir mein tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon. (Staring at Archita with a lot of hatred.)


R-Archita tum niche jao. I will come back in a bit. (Smiles and gives her a coded wink letting her know that he's not mad at her)


Archita goes downstairs and joins Aditya bhai and tells him about the big kick off upstairs. Aditya gets happy and tells Archita their story in short missing out the fact that Ranbir has feelings for Kanya. He didn't know why he did that but he did. While Archita is happy again. Meanwhile upstairs Ranbir and Kanya were carrying on where they left off. In a heated row.


K-Tum sab mard are so weak. Ek ladki ne kiss kya kardi apni hosh ko bet thi ho. What the hell was that about. Yeh tonsil tennis why. You are so despicable. Ghar mein ek musibat se chutkara mili tho yaha ek aur perishani kari hogayi. What are you upto Ranbir. Tum itna weak kaise ban gaye.


R-Mera bheja ko aur mat karaab karo. Tumhe ek paagal doctor ko dekhna chahiye. Tumhara saath rehte rehte mein to bilkul hosh ko beti hoon. You have no right to tell me what to do. Tumhara kartoot achi tara dekh chukka hoon. Tum hote kaun ho jho mera dost ki saath aise baat karo. Usne sorry kaha na. What more do you want. Anjane se galti hogae aur raha mere sawaal well like i said she took me by surprise. I was sat on the bed and she just kissed me but that's her style. She loves surprising people. Us ki saath panga mat lo. She is nothing like me. She takes things to heart, she means well. Plus tum uski saamne mera insult mat karna she can't bear it ok.


K-mein uski saath jaise baath karna hain main karungi but you stay away from her.


R-You can't tell me that. She's my best friend. Itna door se aye hain mujhe milne keliye aur tum kehte ho door rahu. Nahin rehta. Kaan kol ke sun lo. Main apna marzi ka malik. I never stopped you from seeing Chunnu as i knew he was youre friend and maybe more just for you. You think a guy likes seeing his wife flaunting herself with another man in front of everyone. Nahin na so there. Deal with it. Besides tumhara Chunnu ne jo mere saath kiya na woh Archita nahin karegi tumhari saath kyunki is ke paas tameez hain. Besides England main ladkiya know how to carry themselves. Don't you dare mess with her. Tum hote kaun ho.(Ranbir getting really worked up.)


K-I'm your wife dammit. Don't forget that.


R-Kaise wife. This is a contract marriage like you keep reminding me a million times. Don't you forget that. Jitna jaldi apni demaak mein yeh kahoge tho uthna achcha.


K-Ranbir but you're family think we are married you can't hurt them.


R-I will do what i want. Jaise tumne mujhe kitni baar tumhara maayka mein mujhe remind kiya. Now i did everything to please your family and you. I managed to to impress and make a mark in your familys heart for me. I have even changed as a person i am thankful for this. But don't expect me to sit back and let you do what you want hurting everyone in the process. Aggar Archita ke saath tum ek achcha insaan ki thara baath nahin kar sakte then just be civilised.


K-Ranbir. I over reacted but come on this is our bedroom and i am feeling a little home sick.


R-Kanya i know but even i am missing your family but life goes on. Come downstairs soon yeh. They probably think hum ek doosre ke khoon kardi. Smile. (With that Ranbir leaves to go downstairs.)


Ranbir was thinking what the hell happened to Kanya. I knew she was a paggal billi but why is she gone into Hyde mode. Scared the hell out of me. I just will never understand women. Ever. This is why i used to stay away from them so i wouldn't have to see a day like this. Bechari Archita. Well hope she's not upset by all this. That girl sure knows how to kiss a guy.
Kanya was on the verge of tears but held them back. What the hell is wrong with me. I want to go home but i can't leave Ranbir with that wanna be it girl. Looks like i really hurt Ranbir with Chunnu but he's my best friend surly he should understand that. Why am i getting worked up. Its not like Archita is here to stay. With that Kanya goes downstairs.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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1st one to comment!!

But!!! that was good. I wish I could read more...so update soon!! I want kanya to burn!😆

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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great update! love to see kanya jealous 😆
continue soon
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Part 4

To celebrate Ranbir coming home a changed man and with the arrival of Archie the Nandas throw a party the next day all the immediate family and cousins were invited. So the Godboles were coming to visit the family. Including Chunnu. He was dying to meet up with his best friend Kanya and winding up Ranbir . The preparations were all set.

Ranbir and Kanya were officially at war with one another. All night Kanya couldn't sleep as she kept on replaying the kiss with Archita or was it Archie and Ranbir. It was too much intimate and she couldn't believe Ranbir a guy that hates love and all things associated with it all of a sudden had no problem touching her. Kanya hated the fact that Ranbir was ignoring her and barely said two words to her. She missed the way he made fun of every little thing. Its all Archita's fault.

Ranbir had enough of Kanya's dual personality. He thought it was best to avoid each other completely. He thought he should talk to Archie. He still remembered that kiss and thought the world went upside down. Aditya bhaiya seemed pleased with himself and wasn't telling Ranbir the inside joke. He kept telling Ranbir to keep on doing what he was doing. But he didn't have a clue what he was doing that made Aditya bhaiya so pleased with himself.

Downstairs the Godbole's arrived and greeted everybody with a warm smile and Pammi was too busy looking for Ranbir.

P-Mera jamai Raja kaha hain. I lost him.

R-Lost him nahin missed him. I missed you too Pammi the mummy and gave her a hug.

P-Ghat tumhara bina suna suna lagraha tha beta. I missed tumhara meeti meeti bathein aur ptaar se jho Pammi the mummy keh te ho.

R-Meine apke liye khaas karke puuge banwaya hain. Hum Nanda House mein sab ko bhigo denge. What say.

P-Ha. Hum masti karenge lekin chupke chupke.

K-Aap dono kya chupke chupke karenge.

R-Kuch nahin yeh mera aur Pammi ke beech ki baath hain.(Gives a wink) Aap dono baat keeje mein aata hoon saare pariwar ko milke.

P-Tu kush hain na Kanya. Mein jaanti hoon ghar ko yaad kar rahi hain par tu bohut kushnaseeb hain Ranbir jaise pati pa ke. Kitne mard hain jo abpne biwi ke khushi keliye apne aap ko badalte hain. Usse khabie naraaz na karna beti.Woh motio(Pearl) se be anmol hain. Heera hain. Us pyar ko salamat rakhna yehi dua mein rab se maang ti hoon. (Looks at Archita) Woh ladki kaun hain aisi lagti hain jaise kapra pehna bhool gaye.

K-Woh Mamma Ranbir ka dost hain. Ranbir se doorse milne ayi hain.

P-Usse Ranbir se door rakh. Uski niyat kuch tikh nahin. Dekh kaise Ranbir ko ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi hain. Ranbir mard hain aur unki to akal gayab ho jati hain aise ladkiyo ko dekhe.

K-Ap chinta mat karna. Ranbir use sirf ek dost maangta hain. Waise bhi woh ladkiyo se door bhagta ta. Khabie khabie mujhe se bhi.(Kanya thinking of last night)


Ranbir and Shanta exchange their usual insults like always along with Pooja putting her two cents.

S-Kya he re ghenda. Tu kya samajha. Ke hum se peecha choot gaye to tu araam se bhet ke ghotia kelega.

R-Come on Shanta bhai. Jab bhi ate hoon apna sara huwa mu leke tum damkiya dete ho. Samajha tum ne mujhe miss kiya na. Jaanta hu. Mujhe gaaliya na dekhe tumhe neend nahin ata hain. Mere jaise pati dekhne ke kwab jo dekh rahe ho. Mujh se door raho.

Pooja-Tumne Kanya ko kuch kaha kya. Look my sister is all depressed.

R-Your sister is always depressed. Mere khan uske ghaliyo se pakh gaye aur tum uske kale saayon ho aur mere peeche peeche aagaye. Bohut zulum sehna parta hain mujhe. Ab mein mera pariwar ki saath hoon so tum kuch nahin karsakte.

S-Saand tune agar Kanya ko chuwa ya phir kuch kaha to phir mujh se bhura koi nahin.

R-Yeh sab sun chukka hoon main. To be frank jo marzi mein aye karo. Enjoy the party poonch aur Chipkali ki bahen. Mein is Mele main nahin paroonga.

S-Yeh saand ko kya huwa. Uska jagra ke bin mujhe khana hazam nahin hota. Mein mere friend Rewa ki saath khelti hoon. Tu jha Pooja kanay ki saath.

Pooja goes to see kanya who is really depressed. Can't take her eyes away from Ranbir and Archie.

Pooja-Kanya are you ok?Did Ranbir say anything to you?

K-That's the problem D he won't speak to me. Woh Chunnu ki saath jo kuch din humne saath saath bithaya usise leke woh Gusse main hain and ke meine Chunnu ko humara contract marriage ke baath kyun nahin ki hain.

Pooja-So whats the big deal. It's not like you care for Ranbir. The more he stays out of your way the better. That way we can guarantee ke tum dono ke beech koi feelings nahin.

K-How many time D i don't see Ranbir that way. We have an arrangement that i will keep my end of the bargain and then we will both go our own way. But i am not used to Ranbir behaving this way.

Pooja-Woh toh pehle se pagal hain tu iski problem mein mat par. Aur concentrate on doing your thing. Waise bhi you've tried to be in the bad books of Malika and everytime it's backfired. Sit back and enjoy this lifestyle. Tu baar baar un dono ki direction kyun nazaar lagarahi hain.

K-Look kaise sab ki samne use pakar ke rakha hain us saand ne. Public mein. Humari bezaati karake chodega yeh ghada us ghadi ghe saath.

Pooja-Kucch jalne ki bhu arahi hain Kanya. Come on don't compare yourself to her that girl is nothing but cheap. Aise ladkiyo ko easy kehte hain. Kaun hain woh?

K-Ranbir ki English madam. Lagti hain danda karti hain jaise Ranbir ke saath chipak ke uski haath pakar rahi hain.

P-Dost hain so leave it. Tu kaise chunnu ke saath tera rishta hain waise Ranbir aur uski hain. They do look cut together na. You should thank your lucky stras ke Ranbir is moving on. After all you are poles apart and woh dono ekhi duniya ke hain.

Ranbir and Archie have a conversation about why certain Godbole members are looking at her like that as if she needs to be covered up.

Archie-Yeh sab. They are making me Paranoid Rannu.

R-Don't worry woh Dil ke bohut ache hain. They aren't used to seeing women a little out there like we are. You will enjoy yourself with them once you get to know them. Harry will make you laugh. Kanya well you know about her. Pagal. Her parents are cool and Pooja is adorable. Their maid is annoying but i gel with her in a weird way. Suhaas and Adita are a nice couple. What about him? Chunnu he is a pest. He's my sworn enemy. I guess he wants to see the nandas in action. Well he certainly will see it. American Bandar.

Archie-Are you sure he's from America?He sounds like he's from here. He doesn't even have an accent. Well i don't care about him Rannu. I want to spend time with you.

C-Hello Mr Ghambir! Apne friend ke saath mera introduction nahin doge kya?

R-Tunnu yeh hain Archita and Archita yeh hain munnu ya phir Chunnu. Jo bhi ho they all mean nonsense.

Archi-Hi! Aur bye.

C-Itna jaldi kya hain Archita. Lets get to know each other. Ranbir can go see to his wife Kanya while me and you get aquainted.

Archie-Mujhe tum jaise idiots ke saath nahin baath karna. Jo mere friend ki insult kare woh mere dost khabhie nahin ho sakhta and besides i have no interest in you. Come on Ranbir.

R-dekha my friend has good taste. Woh rotten egg or sona mein fark jaanti hain. Get lost.

C-i'm not that bad really. Come on na lets make peace not war.

Archie-look Rannu's told me everything i need to know about you. I have no time for wannabe romeo's. Body is well built, loo ok kuch kaas nahin but akaal bilkul kaali hain. Bye.

Malika comes in and says that the whole family should dance and enjoy themselves and just mingle. Arth, Ira and Eva have something special for all the couples. They also come up with game night for everyone to enjoy. Antakshri. Kanya seems to be lost in thought while Chunnu is still trying to get Archie's attention.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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ooo me first! gr8 update yaar! continue soon!
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that was awesome!! please cont!!
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great update
i think kanya and ranbir will dance together
continue soon 😊

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