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Posted: 16 years ago
woooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh great
i think this boss is none other then our raj
plzz update soon.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey really nice update yaar. ๐Ÿ‘
To Naina mil gayi Alekh, Pooja, Ali , Huda aur Yudi se good pace in ur fic yaar.๐Ÿ˜›
Bus ab Raj se milna baaki hai real shock to tabhi lagega na.๐Ÿ˜‰
cont soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Happy Durga Puja!!!!
pls pls pls pls... ud soon ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Ladakh ki sundar wadiyon mein Naina ko aaj college ka woh ek saal bahut yaad aa raha hai!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Naina aaj bhi Raj ko yaad karti hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณAaj bhi woh uski hothon pe muskaan aur ankh mein aasu lata hai!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Aaj bhi woh usse bhuli nahi hai magar Farewell party ke baad Raj gayab hi ho gaya tha!!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

The poem is very nice and so touching and emotional!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Naina meets Suriji and also Dr.Shalini there with whom she becomes friends!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Naina ko waha Aalekh mila!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Thats a surprise!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Aalekh ko army mein apna lakshya mil gaya aur Neelu se shaadi ho gayi aur ab she is pregnant!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠThats just great!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Aalekh ne kaha re-union abhi complete nahi huya hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Haan Raj ke bina yeh re-union complete kaise ho sakta hai??๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

Why is Aalekh acting so mysterious??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•Kya surprise hai??๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Kya Raj waha aanewala hai??๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Aalekh Shalini ne chupke se kehta hai unke boss ka special friend!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Iska matlab Raj unka boss hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

I am so happy!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Raj wahi hai!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Ab woh aur Naina milenge aur background mein gaana hoga............ ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tere liye hum hai jeeye
Hothon ko seeye
Tere liye hum hai jeeye
Har aasu peeye
Dil mein magar jalte rahe
Chahat ke diye
Tere liye.....tere liye........... ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Puja and Ali are engaged!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Thats great!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Huda loves Ritu magar Ritu unke boss ke peeche hai matlab Raj ke peeche!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜กThats bad!!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’

I am waiting for Raj and Naina to meet!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Naina sabse kaafi mhiljul jaati hai.Khanne ke baad sabhi chale jaate hai.Sirf Alekh & Naina canteen main betha hua hai.

Naina- Aaj itna accha lag raha hai ki main tumhe bata nahin sakta, words nahin hai

Alekh- bapre tu mujhe dekh kar words bhul gayi, plz iske baad faint mat ho jana

Naina- Tum bhi naa Alekh main neelu ko dekh kar kyun faint ho jaungi?

Alekh- boooo, arre main to bhul hi gaya tha mere saare dost hopeless hai.

Naina- tum mujhe hopeless kyun bol rahe ho???

Alekh- chor tu nahin samjeghi, tujhe maine hint diya tha, but u failed to understand.vaise tujhe yeh base camp & Ladakh kaisa laga??

Naina- superb,sab itne acche hai yaha par,aur Ladakh ki khubsurti ka to kya kehna.

Alekh- sab acche nahin hai Naina

Naina- haa Salini bol rahe the Mojor Nair bohut khadus hai,aur kisike bare main bolne jaa rahe the, tab tum aa gaye

Alekh- ohhh, Dr.Ritu Mishra hai dusri khadus,Psycharist hai,1 years se iss base main posted hai,Huda to bilkul lattu hai, but Rituji don't care,but I like this lady kitni hot & sexy..

Naina- wait Alekh tumhe har ladki sexy dekti hai.vaise iss base main sirf hum dono hi Bengali hai.???

Alekh coffee ki mug table main rakhta hai.

Alekh(smiling slightly)- actuallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy no,yaha par aur ek Bengali hai,Major Chatterjee

Naina- ohh, senior hai humse,kaha hai woh??

Alekh- kyun milne ki itni jaldi hai??surname sun kar????

Naina- Alekhhh.tum bhi naa

Alekh- ok, ok, woh patrolling par gaye hai,shyam tak nahin lautenge,actually yaha par Major Bhargav posted the,woh aur Major Nair ko ek mission diya gaya tha, aur kuch officers the,but the mission failed,un logo ki postings dusri jagah kar di gayi,phir new officers select kiya gaya, phir se woh mission start hoga.very important mission,sab kabil officers hai,offcourse including me,aur Major Chatterjee best officers main se hain.

Naina- hmm, ek baat mujhe samaj main nahin aaya ek mission fail ho gaya, uss mission main involved sab logo ki dusri jagah posting ho gayi, naye tarah se mission shuru hoga with new officers,to Major Nair kaise thik gaye??I meanโ€ฆ

Alekh- tu kya mean karna chati hai main samaj gaya,come on Naina shayad koi bada connection hoga,chor naa mera kya,but woh bohut disgusting hai,mujhe to baat karna bhi accha nahin lagta,but senior, respect to dena parega naa,but Mojor Chaterjee ke saath already jung shuru ho chuka hai.

Naina- hmmm, milna parega Major Chaterjee se.

Alekh- balike tera iccha abshay pura hoga,kripaya pritiksha kijiye,ek kaam kar abhi tu quarter main jaa, rest kar, kaafi thak gayi hai naa,shyam ko mere quarter main aaja,tab jam kar re-union party hogi.

Naina-okkkk.

Suriji khud Naina ko uske quarter tak leke jaate hai.Naina itni tried ho gayi thi ki woh fresh ho ke so jaati hai.

At evening,

Naina Alekh ke quarter main aati hai,Neelu was shocked, uske baad sawalo pe sawal,Neelu kuch zyada hi khush hai,uski best friend,jo ki zindagi main kuch kar dikhane ki ladai main kahi kho gayi thi,aaj usse mil gayi hai,naina & neelu baate karne main busy hai,neelu ko khush dekh kar Alekh bhi bohut khush hai.Naina neelu ke health ke baare main sawal puch rahi thi.Achanak darwaje pe knock,Neelu & Alekh ne ek secret smile exchange karte hai.

Alekh- arre tum dono beth kar baate karo main dekhta hu.

Alekh jaake darwaja khulta hai.

A young man entered.He was wearing a simple jeans,& Black shirt ke upar ek black jacket,because of the very cold weather in ladakh.

Man- Neelu ka tabiyat kharap hai aur tune mujhe bataya nahin, mujhe Salu se pata chala.ab kaisi hai Neelu??aur Salu kuch keh rahi thi ki koi nayi doctor aayi hai, jo ki tera dost hai,yeh kaunsa tera naya girlfriend aa gaya??shame on u alekh.kuch to bol

Alekh- bas kar mere baap,koi kaise bolega tere samne bol, aaj tak tere samne koi kuch bol paya hai.Nandini jaisi acchi khiladi ko bhi tune patak diya Raj,aur jawab to mujhe dena parega afterall sawal tune pucha hai.Neelu ki tabiyat thik hai,yes, ek new doctor aayi hai,lekin woh mera old friend hai, girl-friend nahin.chal andar chal, milata hu usse.

Yeh keh kar Alekh Raj ke haath pakad kar usse andar le jata hai.

Alekh- Naina dekho to isse pechanti ho ya nahin?

Naina Alekh ki taraf mudhti hai,& ekdum stunned ho jaati hai,Raj ka bhi same haalat,woh bhi Naina ko ek dum stunned ho kar dekhta hai.waqt jaise kuch pal ke liye tham jaati hai.Naina ke aankh main aasu aa jate hai.& Raj ussi aankho main kho jaata hai.

Jaanewafa Hoke Bekaraar

Jaanewafa Hoke Bekaraar

Barson Kiya Maine Intezaar

Dil Bebasi Mein Chupke Se Rota Hai

Kya Karoon Hay Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

Kya Karoon Hay Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai

Alekh Raj ko pinch karta hai & Raj ko reality main laata hai.

Alekh- tum dono ko kya main introduce karau??

Raj(recovering himself)- thanks Alekh, but mera memory itna bhi bura nahin hai,aur main apne doston ko bhulta nahin.

Alekh- nahin phir bhi main introduce karunga,arre baba official introduction,Naina yeh hai Major Rajveer Chatterjee, & Raj yeh hai Doctor Captain Naina Das.

Dono kuch bhi nahin bolte,lekin dono ke mann main bohut saare sawal hai.

After sometimes,

Alekh- Raj tu Naina ko le jaa.

Raj- what???????

Alekh- arre baba main Naina se akele main baat ki,Neelu ne apne dil ki baat ki, to tum kyun nahin karoge??koi natunki kiye bina jaa.

Raj Naina ko chalne ka ishara karta hai,Naina apna shawl utha kar Raj ke saath chalti hai,bina kisi sawal pe.

Dono saath chal rahe hai,aaj aasman bohut saaf hai,aisa lag raha hai jaise chand bhi haath main aa jayega.Raj & Naina ek bench main jaa kar bethte hai.dono ek dusre ek taraf dekhte hai,aur ek durse main kho jaate hai.Raj Naina ko dekhta hai,Raj ko lagta hai Naina kaafi mature ho gaayi hai,Raj ko lagta hai Naina abhi bhi bohut simple hai,chand ki faint roshni main Naina aur bhi khubsurat lag rahi hai.Naina bhi acchi tarah se Raj ko dekhti hai wohi personality,wohi spirit,aankho main wohi chamak,confident,no wrong over- confident,ab attitude to baad main pata lagega,baat karke.achanak Naina ko lagne laga kya Raj ne shaadi kar liya hai??oh god,Naina tolerate nahin kar payegi,Naina ke dil main aaj bhi Raj ke liye feelings hai,yeh baat Naina acchi tarah se jaanti hai,inn 6 years main Raj ko bohut miss kiya usne,Naina kabhi ishaar karne ka himmat nahin juta paayi,coz naina was confused about Raj's feelings,Raj se woh apna dosti nahin torna chati.idhar Raj samaj jaata hai baat usse hi shuru karna parega.

Raj- kaisi ho tum Naina??

Naina- thik hu, aur tum kaise ho??

Raj- kaisa lag raha hu??tum to ek doctor ho to batao

Naina- mujhe to tum thik hi lag rahe ho.

Raj- aur jab purane dost mil jaate hai to aur bhi accha lagne lagta hai,yaha ki posting itni lucky hoga maine imagine bhi nahin kiya tha,pehle Alekh, Neelu, aur phir tum.

Naina- lucky indeed,tum logo se wapas mil paunga socha nahin tha.

Raj- main to yeh apni dream main bhi nahin socha tha tumhe main army main dekhunga.

Naina- tumhe bhi maine army main expect nahin kiya tha.

Raj- hmm, to kaha expect kiya tha??

Naina- u know Raj main naa roz TV on karti thi iss expect se tumhe koi speech dete hue dekhu,u understand naa what I mean?

Raj- yes, I understand u mean politician,but I must say not a very good expectation.

Naina- phir army main kaise aaye?tum to bilkul gayeb ho gaye the??

Raj- farewell party main tumse mera aakhri mulakat hui,phir main aage kya karu yeh soch kar pareshan tha.phir maine ek magazine main part-time job le li,pehle to sirf chota article likhta tha,phir ek din mere boss ne mujhe bola ki iss magazine Indian Army ek upar ek cover story likhega,maine bohut saare base main ghuma,youth ko attract karne ke chakkar main main khud attract ho gaya,uske baad maine apna result dekha,aur phir exam diya, select ho gaya, IMA main gaya,aur ab main yaha hu.& also I love challenges.

Naina- interesting,kitne din hue yaha par ho?aur Major, itni jaldi aage kaise nikal gaye?

Raj- main yaha par 2 week se hu,pehle Ambala main posted tha, wohi ek mission ko solve karne baad promotion mila.phir yaha par posting ho gaya,ek important mission ke liye.

Naina- Alekh bata raha tha,yeh mission pehle fail ho gaya hai.

Raj- yes, iss mission ke baare main humhe kal pata chalega, kal meeting hai, kal Col.Chandra humhe brief karenge.

Naina- Shaadi nahin ki tumne Raj?(Naina byte her lips)

Raj kuch pal ke liye khamos ho jaata hai, Naina ke aankhon nain dekhta hai.his eyes was full of disappointment,

Raj- nahin ki maine shaadi,isse pehle pucho kyun? Main bata deta hu meri marzi,aur tumne bhi to shaadi nahin ki?

Naina(raising her eyebrows)- tumhe kaise pata main shaadi kar bhi kar sakti hu?

Raj(smiling mysteriously)- mujhe pata hai tumne shaadi nahin ki,(more confidently)tum shaadi nahin kar sakte yeh baat ke liye main sure hu.

Naina was stunned,& Raj bohut jaldi apne tone ko change kar leta hai.

Raj- apni kahani bhi to batao?main to sabkuch bata diya

Naina-

Joint main chance hone ke baad main medical collg ke hostel main rehne lagi, uske baad army main apply kiya aur selected ho gayi.

Raj- tumhare mom dad,naveen?

Naina- mom, dad ki death ho gaayi, Navin ki shaadi ho gaayi,woh ek collg main professor hai.

Raj- hmm, I am sorry.

Naina- aur tumhare??

Raj โ€“ roz phone pe baat karta hu.maa hamesha pareshan raheti hai, woh nahin chati thi main army join karu, hamesha darr jaati hai, lekin dad hamesha mujhe himmat juthate hai.

Raj- chalo kaafi baat kar liya hai,kuch bachke bhi rakhna chayiye,dekhte hai Alekh & neelu kya kar raha hai.

Naina- ok,chalo.

Alekh, Raj, Naina mil kar khana taiyaar karte hai.

Dinner time,

Alekh- tum dono itni jaldi laut aaoge maine expect bhi nahin kiya tha, main hota tho aur bhi baat karta.

Raj- main tere tarah nalayak nahin hu, ekdin main saare baatein khatam kar du, Naina thaki hui hai, kuch to samjha kar.

Neelu- ofcourse Raj, we understand,tum Naina ko nahin samjoge to kya hum samjhege?

Raj samaj jaata hai Neelu usse tease kar rahi hai,Raj jat se topic badal deta hai.

Raj- so naina tum base main sabse mil li?

Naina- haa,Salini, Suriji, Huda, Ali, Puja,Yudi,sabse mili, sab bohut sweet hai, infact Major Chaterjee se bhi mil li,kyun bossji?

Alekh- arre dramatic way of introduction.

Raj- haa, sab bohut acche hai.

Naina- lekin main Dr.Mishra se & Mojor Nair se nahin mili.

Raj- Thank god ki tum un dono se abhi nahin mili.

Alekh- arre Nair to hai hi khadus,par Rituji woh bohut acchi hai, very beautiful

Raj- correction Alekh,beautiful nahin Bichuti ful(Yeh ek tarah ki flower hai, jo jungle main hota hai,isse touch karne se skin disease bhi hoti hai.)

Alekh(laughing)- u are too much Raj,kya problem hai tujhe Ritu se?

Raj- pata nahin Alekh, I just don't like this lady,u know mera gut feelings kehta hai uske zuban par ek baat hai, & dil par ek baat hai.

Alekh- chal chor kuch aur baat karte hai.

Uske baad sab collg ki purane yaade taaza karte hai.uske baad Raj & Naina Good night wish karke apne apne quarter main chale jaate hai.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thats all for today, thanks to all for replying, actually meri tabiyat kharap hai, update main agar kuch garbar hua hai then sorry
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Posted: 16 years ago
damn cool
update soon long asap...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
so cute and nice
Raj Naina ko leke kitna sure hain na sounds too good
plz continue soon and get well soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey update was really cool.๐Ÿ‘

Rajveer se mil gayi aakhir Naina after so much time n again us k charma me kho bhi gayi.๐Ÿ˜†

Raj hai hi aisa ki sab ko apna deewaana bana deta hai.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kitne confidence se bol raha tha na ki i know ki ab tak tum ne shaadi nahi ki hogi.๐Ÿ˜‰

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update dear. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj met Naina finally .๐Ÿ˜‰
She was so happy to see him here with him.๐Ÿ˜›
Bahut dino baad us ne socha bhi nahi tha ki vo Raj se milege.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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