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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Aalekh hinted towards her meeting Raj but Naina nahi samjhi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Ritu bhi bahut khadoos hai aur Huda ko ghas nahi dalti!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Aalekh ko woh hot aur sexy lagti hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛

Aalekh ne kaha waha ek aur Bengali hai Major Chatterjee!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Aur Naina ko milna hai toh Aalekh tease kar raha hai ke surname sunkar!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina is right ke agar sab ki dusri jagah posting ho gayi toh Major Nair kaise reh gaye??😕 😕 😕 😕

Major Chatterjee ke saath already jung shuru ho chuki hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats interesting!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neelu Naina ko dekhke shock ho gayi magar bahut khush huyi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Jab darwaze pe knock huya toh Neelu and Aalekh exchanged a secret smile!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj and Naina finally met!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina ke ankhon mein aasu thhe aur Raj un ankhon mein kho gaya!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and suits the situation and Raj and Naina perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I was crying while reading this scene!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Aalekh is teasing Raj aur phir dono ka official introduction karwata hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh Raj ko Naina ke saath akele baat karne ke liye bhejta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 He is so sweet and understanding!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ko lagta hai Naina kaafi mature ho gayi hai but it still simple!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊She is looking beautiful in moonlight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ko darr hai ke kahi Raj ne shaadi toh nahi karli hai kyunki she still loves him even though she never could confess!!!!

Naina and Raj's convo is very sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne finally pucch hi liya ke Raj ne shaadi ki hai yaa nahi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj ne bhi keh diya nahi and he is sure that Naina has not married!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina's mom dad are dead!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Thats so sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh aur Neelu milke Raj ko tease kar rahe hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj called Ritu Bichuti ful!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆He feels ke kuch gadbad hai usmein!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He is right!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Ab I hope Raj aur Naina jaldi apne pyaar ka ikraar karde!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Ish baar jo mile hai phir kabhi naa bichre!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
it was soo good!!!
thanks a lot for the update!!!!
my wordstock is improving.. thanks to ur "bichuti-ful".... LOL
ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow the story was too GR8. The best FF I've read till now. I really like it. Please Continue Soon. WAITING 4 IT EAGERLY.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sania ....

Nice update dear .it's really Gr8.
waiting for more RN.... plzzzzzzzz update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

how r u now???

update na plss

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Posted: 16 years ago
when r u going to update it dear plz do it soon na
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy great story i am new tour ff and i realli like ur ff so plzz continue soon Star⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Next day,jab Naina ki need khulti hai to woh dekhti hai usne uthne main late kar diya hai.Naina jaldi se fresh up ho kar ready ho jaati hai coz yeh uska 1st day hai.Naina jab ready ho kar bahar aati hai tab woh dekhti hai Raj jogging karke quarter main wapas laut raha hai.

Raj- hey Naina good morning

Naina- Good morning.

Raj- itni jaldi??

Naina- 1st day naa, mujhe jaldi infirmary jana hai.ofcourse canteen main pehle khana khungi.

Raj- ofcourse khana khao,bina kuch khaye marne se behtaar khana kha ke maro,aur iss baat ki gurantee main tumhe deta hu,tum Suriji ki tarah fitfat nahin ho jaogi.

Achanak peeche se,

Voice- oye Raj puttar tu mere baare main kya bol raha hai?

Raj- oh don't worry Suriji ,main kuch bura nahin bol raha tha,main to Naina ko yeh samjha raha tha,dieting ki koi jarurat nahin,aur aapka banaya hua khana to lajawab hai,aur acchi khayegi tab to aapki tarah fit rahegi,hai naa?

Suriji- yeh baat to tune ekdam thik kaha Raj puttar,vaise tu jaldi mess main aa ja,main bhi jaa kar dekhta hu, sab thik tarah se kaam kar rahe hai yaa nahin.sab ke sab kaamchor hai.

Yeh keh kar Suriji chale jaate hai.

Naina- kis tarah se tumne baat ko ulta diya, aadat nahin gaya.

Raj- isse kehte hai madam,old habit,kambaqt jaata hi nahin.

Naina- main chalti hu, tum kab aa rahe ho canteen main?

Raj- tum jao main ready ho kar aa jaunga,vaise mujhe nahin lagta itni jaldi koi tumhe milenge Canteen main,abhi tumhe akele khana parega.Upar se aaj bohut bada meeting hai, aaj Col. Chandra mission ki details denge.

Naina- by the way Raj, kya tumne salini ko dekha hai?

Raj- oh Shalu to hamesha hi first hai,tum infirmary main jao,dekho wohi hai.

Naina- Thanks,ok, bye

Raj- bye, have a good day.

Both of them left.

Naina jaldi se khana kha kar infirmary main chali jaati hai, aur Salini ke saath kaam karne lagti hai.

Few hours later in conference room,

Raj,Alekh,Yudi,Ali,Puja, Huda betha hai,aur Col Chandra mission ki details narrate kar rahe hai.

Col Chandra- Officers aap sab jante hai ki aap logo ki posting yaha ek bohut hi important mission ko accomplish karne ke liye kiya gaya hai.

Yeh keh kar Col.Chandra un logo ko ek photo dekhete hai.

Chandra- yeh jo photo aap log dekh rahe hai yeh Osman ka hai.Iske upar kayi charges hai.iske baare main koi proper information nahin hai,but RAW ka yeh kehna hai ki filhaal yeh Ladakh main hai,kuch baara karne ka saazish kar raha hai,kuch baare log shayad iss Osman ke peeche hai,jiske bajah se koi iss par haath nahin daal paa raha hai.Isko pakadne ki kohsish pehle bhi kiya jaa chukka hai,but aap log jante hai ki woh mission failed ho gaya tha,aur ek officer Capt.Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan uss mission main shahid ho gaaye the,lekin iss baar yeh mission kamyaab hona bohut hi jaruri hai.Osman ko pakadna hai,saath hi saath jo bhi plan unlogo ka hai usse bhi nakamyab karna hai,aur unn chupe hue chehara ko sabke samne lana hoga.Aur Iss baar iss mission ko lead karenge Mojor Rajveer Chaterjee.

Any question??

All- No Sir

Chandra- all the best & dismiss

Sab nikal jaate hai.

Chandra- ek minute Rajveer mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

Raj- yes sir.

Chandra- Raj mujhe tumhari kabilayat par pura bhorosa hai,mera sixth sense keh raha hai yeh mission jarur kamyaab hoga,lekin yeh itna asaan bhi nahin hai.

Raj- mission to kamyaab ho ke rahega sir,kyunki main koi kaam adhura nahin chorta sir.

Chandra- I know Rajveer,lekin problem bohut ayegi,lekin tum hamesha yaad rakhna main tumhare saath hu.

Raj- Thank u Sir

Chandra- aur ek baat Rajveer tumhe to pata hai Major Nair iss mission par kaam kar chuke hai,so unhe kuch details jaroor malum hoga,maine unse kaha bhi tha,lekin usne kaha usse kuch nahin pata,jo ki koi jakin nahin karega,lekin hum unpar pressure bhi nahin daal sakte,kyunki iss baar woh iss mission main samil nahin hai,aur ek baat sab officers ki transfer hone ke baad unka reh jana,mujhe kuch ajeeb laga.

Raj- ajeeb to mujhe bhi laga sir,but aap fikar mat kijiye,I will handle,iss baar yeh mission jarur kamyaab hoga.

Chandra- All the Best Rajveer, tum jaa sakte ho.

Raj Col.Chandra ko salute karke conference room se bahar aa kar canteen main aata hai.

In Canteen,

Naina, Salini,Alekh betha hua hai,paas ki table main Ali, Puja betha hua hai.Huda canteen main nahin hai.

Alekh Raj ko bulata hai.

Alekh- hey Raj, yaha aaja yaar.

Raj aakar bethta hai,Raj Alekh ke paas bethta hai, Naina uske samne bethi hui hai.Aaj usne pehli baar Raj ko Army uniform main dekha.Naina sirf Raj ko hi dekh rahi thi

Raj- arre Col.Chandra mission ke baare main kuch details kar rahe the.

Alekh- arre yaar,mission ki baat to hamesha hota rahega,khane ke waqt to baks de yaar

Raj- ok, so Naina 1st day, kaam kaisa raha?

Salini- Raj main bhi yaha hu, aate hi Naina se baat karne ka bahana chayiye, hai naa?

Raj- come on Salu, u know me, kisi se baat karne ke liye mujhe bahano ki jarurat nahin padhta.arre Naina new-comer hai isliye puch raha hai.

Salini- tumse baato main koi nahin jeet sakta, U & U'R attitude.aur tumhare Naina ka khayal rakhne ke liye main hoon naa.

Raj – maine aisa kuch kaha kya?

Alekh- Shanti banaye rakho,dekh yaar mera khana ho gaya hai, main Neelu ke paas jaa raha hu,tum dono khao,Salini tum bhi chalo, Neelu ko tumse kuch jaruri baat karni hai.

Salini- ok, chalo.

Naina- hey wait Alekh main bhi chalungi.

Alekh- Nahinnnnnnn, tu nahin, mera matlab abhi nahin,yaha beth,tujhe mera khasam,hilna mat yahase.

Raj- what???Alekh dimag kharap ho gaya hai tera??

Alekh- mujhe nahin pata, tum dono beth kar baate karo.

Alekh, & Salini hurriedly left from the canteen.

Raj- yeh Alekh bhi naa pagal hai ek dum,haa to main kya bol raha tha kaisa raha tumhara aaj ka din?

Isse pehle Naina kuch bolti,achanak peeche se,

Voice- Hello,Rajveer.

Raj(in a low tone)- ohhh,noooo

Naina surprised ho jaati hai,Raj oh no bol raha hai,matlab koi aisa vaisa to nahin hoga.naina peeche mur kar dekhti hai,A lady,wearing a pink saree,looking extremely gorgeous.

Lady- kya main yaha beth sakti hoon?(in flirty tone)

Raj- NO(In stern voice)

Naina stunned,iss tarah se insult!!!!!my God,Raj hi aisa kar sakta hai.

Lady- What???(in a surprised tone)

Raj-(with a forced smile)- agar main aap ko mana karu to kya aap nahin bethengi yaha par,, just joking Dr.Mishra.formality ki kya jarurat,beth jaiye.

Dr.Mishra- aap bhi naa,mujhe hamesha satate hai.

Yeh keh kar Doctor saheba Naina ke paas jo khali chair hai uspe naa beth kar ek dum Raj ke paas aa kar bethti hai.

Raj raised his eyebrows,but kuch nahin bolta.

Dr.Mishra- arre aap ko to nahin pehchana??

Naina- oh, hello,I am Naina, Doctor Captain Naina Das.aaj hi join kiya hai, iss base ka new doctor

Dr.Mishra- ohhh, I am Dr.Ritu Mishra,Psychologist,military board ne appoint kiya hai,Officers ki mental condition par nazar rakhne.

Raj- are u sure Rituji? Pata nahin aapko dekh kar mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai aap Officers par hi nazar rakhne aayi hai.

Ritu- Aap mazak accha kar leta hai.

Raj- aap bhi to kitni jaldi mazak samaj jaate hai, hai naa??

Ritu- iss ko main apni tariff samjhu?

Raj- Aapki marzi, main kaise aapni marzi aap par thop du?

Ritu- choriye,by the way……main aapko sirf Naina keh kar bula sakti hu?

Naina- off course, no formality

Ritu- I must say ki aap bohut saatil hai,1st day hi aapne Major se kaafi acchi jaan pehchan bana liya hai, great going.

Isse pehle Naina kuch bolti,

Raj- jaan pehchan banane ki kya jarurat,hum bohut purane, & bohut acche dost hai, good friends, u know,from collg days.

Ritu- ohhh

Raj- by the way aur ek compliment main aapko dena chahunga, kisise jaan pehchan banane ki mamle main aapse great koi nahin hai, iska gurantee main deta hu.

Ritu- thanks, by the way aaj Col.Chandra ne aap logo ko mission ka details narrate kiya hai naa??

Raj- haa, isliye main bohut busy hu,waste karne ke liye time hi nahin hai,main chalta hu.

Ritu- mission ko lekar aap ka kya khayal hai??

Raj- matlab????

Ritu- matlab iss mission ko le kar kya sooch rahe hai aap??

Raj- well,Dr.Mishra main iss mission ka in-charge hu,aur mujhe jitna malum hai aap iss mission main officially involve nahin hai,isliye iss mission ko lekar main kya sochta hu,woh confidential hai,plz excuse me, Naina tum bhi chalo, Alekh tum se kuch baat karna chata hai,bye Dr.Mishra.

Yeh keh kar Raj Naina ko lekar Canteen se bahar chala aata hai,aur Naina ko le kar apni office main aata hai, aur door lock karta hai.

Naina- Raj yeh kaisa behave kar rahe the tum??is tarah se koi misbehave karta hai kya??tum Dr.Mishra ki insult kar rahe the.come on Raj,control u'r attitude,be a gentleman

Raj- don't teach me ok, kiske saath main kaisa behave karu, woh sirf main hi decide karta hu, I don't need any advice.

Naina Raj ko acchi tarah se janti thi, Raj kisike baat nahin sunta.Raj apna gussa bhi control nahin kar pata hai.

Naina- itna gussa,Raj agar tum aise behave koroge,aise attitude dikhoage to bolo kaun karega tumse shaadi? Dekhna biwi bhag jayegi.

Raj- tumhe agar mera behaviour accha nahin lagta to tum jao naa, I don't care. & I know mera biwi bhagegi nahin.

Naina- itna confidence,kaun karega tumse shaadi?

Raj- kyun tum ho naa.

Naina ek dum chup ho jaati hai, woh apna muh pher leti hai,uske gaal ek dum laal ho jaata hai.Raj byte his lips.

Raj- sorry, main woh actually mazak kar raha tha,main aisa kuch mean nahin karna chata tha, I am sorry.

Naina- hey, don't say sorry, I understand. Vaise tumhara dimag agar thanda ho gaya ho to yeh batao kal kya kar rahe ho??

Raj- kal to off day hai, to main free hu.

Naina- hmm,to main sooch rahi thi Ladakh itni acchi jagah hai kal thora ghum kar aau

Raj- to jao naa, problem kya hai.?

Naina- problem yeh hai mujhe koi guide nahin mil raha hai.

Raj- kal kitne baje wait karu tumhara??

Naina- raat ko message karke bata dungi,bye, kaam hai abhi.

Raj- ok, bye.

Aur kitna waqt du main, jaldi se jaldi kaam khatam karo.

Kaam almost khatam hu chuka hai, bas thora intezar kar lo.Intelligence ko kaise pata chala tum yaha ho?

Pata nahin.Suna hai Major Rajveer Chaterjee mission ka in charge hai?

Thik suna hai,par I don't care, kuch nahin kar sakta woh mera.

Itna over-confidence hona thik nahin hai.u don't know him.

Mujhe janna bhi nahin hai,aisa jaal bicha kar rakha hai, koi chah kar bhi iss jaal se bahar nahin nikal sakta.tum fikar mat karo, kaam ho jaayega.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks to all for replying,sorry main late update kar rahi hu,thora busy thi, upar se 16th Octobor Rajeev se baat karne ke baad meri to ...my god...main kaha paunch gayi thi, i dont know,

fic main Osman ka role Akashdeep Seigal play karega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was amazing
love the scene between Raj and Naina
want more
plz updaet soon

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