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Posted: 16 years ago
superb
those last lines were awesome
wat aspeech given by raj
fantastic
i loved the ud
ua asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was to good
plz continue soon and RN ko plz jaldi se mila dena
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Posted: 16 years ago
the lines were so touching 👏
u r simply amazing.......
pls ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thank u Guys for replying, meri fic vaise bhi koi nahin padhta, ab to chor hi do,koi bhi comment ki expect naa karke i am updating it

6 years later,In Ladakh,

Army ka ek jeep full speed main Ladakh base camp ki taraf ja rahi hai.A lady,wearing jeans & a tight top,her hair tied in a ponytail,bahar ki khubsurati main kho gayi hai.Har taraf ice hai, aur uss ice par suraj ki roshni padh rahi hai,ek ajeeb chamak hai.Woh ek diary khol kar bethi hui hai.Phir se woh apni nazar diary par shift karti hai.Kuch purani photographs hai.

Lady(in her mind)- pata nahin kaha hoge tum sab log?aaj bhi kitna yaad karti hut um sab logo ko main,tum logo ke saath bitaya hua har pal mere liye anmol hai.pata nahin aaj collg ki ek saal kyun itna yaad aa raha hai.

Collg main jana,Neelu ke saath bus main dhakka khate hue jana,Nandini ka ragging karna, phir Rajveer ka…..yes Rajveer aaj bhi yeh naam uske hoto par muskan ke saath,aasu bhi lata hai.Farewell party ke baad Rajveer jaise gayab ho gaya,but woh last pal aaj bhi bulaya nahin jata.

Hope whispers in my ear:That day shall be near when you shall be again at my side.Yes,its only that hope,that lights our way from sunset to sunrise,through every pain.The autumn winds strip my garden of golden leaves.But my fruit trees no protest raise.The spring will come with new shoots & leaves,& adorn my trees,with abundant fruits.Sing,for faith & hope are high- more so true as u & I sing the lovers litany"Love like ours can never die"

Achanak,

Driver- madam base camp aa gaya.

The lady came out from her thought & put the diary her purse & came out.

A elderly Punjabi man came towards her.

Man- Doctor Captain Naina das,welcome to the base.

Naina- Thanks,par aap??

Man- myself Subedar Suri.

Naina- Namaste Suriji.

Suriji- oye hoye kitni soni kuri,Bengali naa??pata hai I love macher jhol.

Naina- I also love macher jhol Suriji.

Suriji- pata hai Doc….

Naina- formality nahin Suriji Naina puttar hi kahiye naa, aapna lagta hai.

Suriji gave her a big smile.

Naina- Suriji, mujhe Colonel Chandra ke paas jaa kar report karna hai,aap mujhe plz unka office dikha dijiye.

Suriji- arre puttarji tumhe sirf colonel sahab ka office hi nahin balki pura base dikhange, sabse milaenge.

Naina- to chaliye.

Suriji- ek minute.

He called a Orderly,gave him a key.

Suriji- Naina ka saman uske quarter main pauncha dena,agar koi garbar kiya naa…..

Orderly- koi garbar nahin hoga Suriji.

In Colonel Chandra's office,

Naina- Doctor Captain Naina Das reporting sir.

Chandra- Welcome to the base Doctor.plz sit

Naina- Thank u sir.

Chandra- aap kal se joint kigiye,aaj aap infirmary jaiye,aur Doctor Captain Salini Singhal se miliye.Aap ko unke saath hi kaam karna hai.aur rest bhi kar ligiye,.

Naina- Thank u sir.

Naina came out from Colonel's office.

Naina- Suriji mujhe Infirmary jana hai.

Suriji-puttarji abhi,kuch kho to lo pehle.uske baad chale jana.

Naina- Nahin Suriji pehle infirmary chaliye.

Suriji Naina ko infirmary leke jaate hai.

Naina- may I come in??

Lady- yes, come in.

Naina- hello,I am Doctor Captain Naina Das.

Lady- ohh,I am Doctor Captain Salini Singhal,khadi kyun ho, plz sit

Naina- Thanks.

Salini- arre itna formal kyun ho rahi ho, tum mujhe Salini bulana ok,arre saath saath kaam karna hai,to dosti kar lete hai.

Naina- friendship accepted.

Salini- That's great,but Thank God tum jaldi aa gayi varna Doctor Suraj ke posting ke baad akeli mere liye Infirmary samalna bohut muskil ho gaya hai.

Naina- Don't worry,dono milkar sab samhal lenge.

Salini- Ofcourse.

Naina- pata hai yaha par aakar bohut accha lag raha hai, jitney bhi logo ke saath meri mulakat hui hai sab kitne acche aur friendly hai.

Salini- ofcourse yaha par sab friendly hai, sibaye do log ke, major Nair & …..

Isse pehle Salini ki baat puri ho pati,One officer entered into the room.

Officer- Salini Neelu ka woh medicine chayiye,usse phir se dard ho raha hai.mujhe phone karke bataya.

Neelu naam sun kar, & uss officer ki awaz sun kar Naina jaldi se turn karti hai.& she stunned to see the Officer.

Salini- Don't worry Alekh, main usse dekh kar dawa de kar aati hu,tumhe jane ki jarurat nahin.

Achanak Alekh ki nazar Naina par padhti hai,He also stunned to see her.

Alekh- Naina tum???????

Naina- wohi to Alekh tum???????????

Salini- arre tum log ek dusre ko jante ho, khair jo bhi ho, main Neelu ko dekh ke aane ke baad baat karti hu.

Salini Neelu ko dekhne chali jaati hai.

Both were still surprised to see each other.

Naina- Alekh tum Army Officer??

Alekh- yes, Captain Alekh Dutta.

Naina- Oh my God, me faint, tum aur Army officer

Alekh- tum yaha par kya kar rahi ho Naina????

Naina- sirf Naina nahin Doctor Captain Naina Das bolo, aur posting hui hai meri yaha par.

Alekh- now me faint, hamari bholi bhali Naina army me doctor

Naina- kiski kismat kaha le jata hai, pata hi nahin chalta.

They both hugged each other.

Alekh- how are u Naina???

Naina- me fine re Alekh? Tu tera hulchal bata?aur Neelu??

Alekh- beth batata hu.

Alekh- tujhe to Joint main chance mil gaya, tu collg chor ke chali gayi, uske baad tera koi aata pata nahin raha.main har jagah apply kiya tha, roz mera baap bolta tha mera kuch nahin hoga,phir army main chance mil gaya, Academy main kadam rakh kar laga jaise aaj mujhe lakshya mil gaya,dilon jaan laga diya,aur aaj main yaha par hu.Aur Neelu collg chorne baad usse baat hota tha, but academy jane ke baad koi connection nahin raha,main jab Delhi main headquarter main posted tha, ek din maine Neelu ko dekha, woh kisi magazine ke liye kaam kar rahi thi, army ke upar ek cover story likhene aayi thi,phir kya, shaadi,& now she is pregnant.

Naina- Alekh congrats.meri kahani aur kya batau Joint main chance hone ke baad main medical collg ke hostel main rehne lagi, uske baad army main apply kiya aur selected ho gayi.

Vaise Neelu ko dard….

Alekh- arre koi serious baat nahin hai,Salini dekh rahi hai usse, & Salini ke upar mujhe pura vishwas hai.

Naina- kab aayu Neelu ko congrats kehne??

Alekh- jab jee chaye, aaj hi aa, arre paas main hi shayad quarter hai,invitation ki kya jarurat.main to sirf Neelu ki shakal imagine kar rahi hi tumhe dekhne ke baad

Naina- very funny.kitna pleasant surprise naa, aaj yaha par aakar hamara re-union ho gaya.

Alekh- re-union abhi complete kaha hua?surprise abhi baaki hai.

Naina- matlab????

Alekh- wait karo, sabar ka phal meetha hota hai.

Naina- Alekh tum kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samaj main nahin aa raha??

Alekh- tujhe samajne ke jarurat bhi nahin hai.sirf dekhna haa.

Tabhi Salini aati hai.

Alekh- Neelu thik hai naa??

Salini- haa thik hai, so rahi hai, medicine lena kyun bhool jati hai woh,tum bhi dyan rakho Alekh.

Alekh- ok, khayal rakhunga,aur tum pooch rahi thi naa Naina mera & Neelu ka collg friend hai, Neelu ki to bohut close friend

Salini- oh, phir enjoy karo.

Alekh- ofcourse,Naina canteen main chalo kuch kha bhi lo, aur sabse mulakat bhi ho jayegi.

Naina Salini ko bye bol kar bahar aati hai.But Alekh abhi andar hai.

Alekh( salini ko ahista bolta hai)- mera friend & sister, Neelu ka best friend, aur apne boss ka special friend,

Salini- What??????????

Alekh- Sssssssshhhhhhh, jaldi pata chal jayega.

In the Canteen,Naina & Alekh aa kar bethta hai.Tabhi ek ladki table ke paas aati hai,

Lady- oye Alekh yeh kaunsa naya connection bana liya kit u old connection kat raha hai.

Naina hairaan ho kar dekhti hai.

Alekh- yeh new connection nahin hai, yeh to bohut old connection hai, arre yaar mera collg friend hai,chal Naina main tujhe sabse milata hu, I mean hamare gang se.

Alekh- yeh ajeeb bolchalwali ladki hai puja, Captain Puja Ghai, aur yeh banda hai Captain Yaduvansh Sahani,in short Yudi,yeh dono control room samalte hai.

Yeh hai Captain Ali breg,Captain Amardeep Huda.

& guys yeh aajse join kiya hai Doctor Captain Naina Das

Naina dekhta hai Huda thora sabse flirt karta hai, baato baato main yeh pata chalta hai Huda kisi Dr, Ritu Mishra se pyaar karta hai, jo usse pyaar nahin karta, Ritu kisi aur ke peeche ghumti hai,sab usse boss keh kar refer kar rahe hai, iss baat ko lekar huda kaafi frustrated hai,puja bohut hi charming & friendly hai, Ali sharmila hai, but dono engaged hai.Yudi sweet & friendly, but sab usko bohut satate hai.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Aalekh aur Neelu ne sahi kaha ke Naina apni feelings express nahi kar sakti toh kya uske feeling hi nahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Neelu is right ke boys ko kuch samjhana bekar hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Woh bhi sahi hai ke aisi faltu baatein sunkar Naina ne dosti tod di!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aalekh kehta hai Raj ko woh dosti nibhane ko!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!

Aalekh ko lagta hai ke Raj ko pyaar ho gaya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He is right!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina Raj se baat karna chahti hai lekin gossip ke darr se nahi kar rahi hai!!!! Thats silly!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj kitna accha bolta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is a great speaker and just too good!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina and others are just spellbound by it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj jeet gaya aur woh bhi bahut badi margin se!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ab Nandini ko taunt karne aaya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Well she deserves it!!!!

Nandini is still claiming that she loves him!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj ne bhi sahi jawab diya!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Even I hope Raj never meets Nandini again in life!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Aalekh ne kaha Raj ko apne pyaar ka izhaar karne ke liye but he denied!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!!

Naina Raj ka haath pakad kar side mein kheech leti hai aur sorry bhi bolti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Accha hai Raj ne usse maaf toh kar diya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina toh Raj ke uske paas ilaaj karne aane ke naam se hi gabra gayi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj usse red rose deta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina usse hug karti hai tote huye aur Raj bhi roh raha hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Keh kyun nahi dete yeh dono!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The song is very nice and just describes their feelings so well!!!!😊 😊 😊

The lines were very so emotional and touching!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh dono aise juda nahi ho sake!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭I hope yeh dono jaldi phir se mil jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow what an update
aur ye boss kahi Raj to nahi
waiting for there reunion and love confession
plz do it fast na
and tum ye kaise keh sakti ho ki koi tumahri fic nahi padti i m a regular reader of this fic and plz let me know when ever u update this and dont say that again
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
yippe yippe🤪 boss boleto RAJVEER!!!!! HAI NA????
superb!!! base camp e Bangali der mela...!!!!
pls yaar.. dont stop it at any cost..
UD SOON pls pls pls...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Hiii Dear,

kya update di hai!!! just fabulous.......👏
collage campus se ek dum war field pe 🤪
waiting to see when Naina is gonna meet Rajveer.am sure boss is our Rajjj😛😛😛
well all gang is here so a waitig for more DHAMAAL😉
PLZZZZZZ update next part asap..................


yaar one request if possible then PM that u updated it....i luved to read it but due to this IF as u know it shifted from lrl forum to fanfiction i didn't get when it is gonna be updated.so pl
ZZZZ try to PM...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey madhu....
dekho jane se pehele tumhe comment de rahi hoo....😊mujhe nahin pata phir kab de paugi ..b/c mera net par aana abhi possible nahin hai😭par ha main jab bhi wapas aaugi saare UDs padhugi..aur phir apne baki k comments dugi...yeh UD bhi bahot accha tha ...awesome....very nice.....ab aage k parts ka wait hai...😛this is 4 u👏
TC bye.
love
sana😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Really nice part yaar.👏👏👏

Naina misses her batcmates 😭😭😭too much aur photo bhi dekhti rehti hai un ki us ko kya pata tha ki ab vo milne jaa rahi hai apne group se jaldi hi.😛😛😛

Shalu is so frndly aur Suri ji to hain hi apne so much loving 😊😊😊. Naina ko pata bhi chal gaya ki Neelu aur Alekh ne shaadi kar li aur ab vo massi bhi ban ne jaa rahi hai.😉😉😉

Abhi to sab se bada shock tab lagega jab vo Raj ko apne saamne dekhegi😲😲😲.Rest of the group se bhi mil chuki hai Naina aur Ritu ji bhi hain yahan.😃😃😃

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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