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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina Raj se mili jo jogging karke laut raha tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ne sahi kaha ke Raj aaj bhi baat ko kaise palat deta hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Woh log Osmaan ko pakadna chahte hai jo ladakh mein chupa huya hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Ish mission mein pehle Abhimanyu shaheed ho chuka hai!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Great choice for Osmaan!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So you have watched Time Bomb??😊 😊 😊 😊

I think Col.Chandra ka fikar karna jayaz hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”It is strange that Nair has remained at that base!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

I liked Raj's confidence!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina ne pehli baar Raj ko army uniform mein dekhqa hai aur usse dekhe hi jaa rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiiii!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Shalini ab Raj ko tease kar rahi hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Waise usne sahi kaha ke Raj se baaton mein koi nahi jeet sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne Raj aur Naina jo jaan bujh kar akela chhod diya!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Kitna drama karta hai Aalekh!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Magar musibat aa gayi yahan!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj ne directly bol diya no!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Naina is right sirf Raj hi aisa kar sakta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Dr.Misha toh aake ek dum Raj ke paas jaake baith gayi!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj and her convo was very interesting!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj dabe huye labzon mein keh raha tha aur woh samaj bhi rahi thi uski baatein!!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Ab Ritu Naina ko suna rahi hai pehle hi din Raj se itni jaan pehchaan banane ke liye!!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj ne accha jawab diya usse!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Ritu Raj se mission ke baare mein information nikalna chahti thi magar Raj ne bhi accha jawab diya and Naina ko lekar chala gaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kisiki nahi sunta aur nahi apne gusse pe control kar pata hai magar Ritu ke saath usne jo kiya sahi kiya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko bada confidence hai ke uski biwi nahi bhagegi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊Lagta hai usse yeh bhi pata hai uski biwi kaun banegi!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne toh direct keh diya tum ho naa!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Waah kya baat hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina toh sharma gayi magar phir Raj ne bhi keh diya ke woh bas mazak kar raha tha!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Kal dono Ladakh ghumne jayenge!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow thats great!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I think the end conversation Osmaan aur Ritu ka tha!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Par Ritu ne kya jaal bichaya hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•


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Posted: 16 years ago
hehe.. as i've heard about the reactions of some, i can easily guess ur haal... must say u r really lucky.. :)
ud was really.. r-r conv reminded me of rapid fire round of coffee with karan.. nainar sathe raj er befash kotha i enjoyed thoroughly..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow. It was a fabulous part. Kisiko muh tor jawab dena to koi raj se sikhe. I luv his attitude.❀️ He is just too cute n frank. Love the ways he talks. It feels he very well knows what to do n when to do. Its just superb.

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON. I'M WAITING 4 IT EAGERLY.
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Posted: 16 years ago

really ye Raj bhi na kitna buddh hai agar naina ko itna like karta hi hai to kam se kam ek baar bole to us ko.😳😳😳

Dheere dheere mujhe bhi lagta hai ki Raj realize karga Naina k liye apni feelings aur vaise bhi Naina to pyaar karti hi hai na Raj se.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Doc Mishra ko to accha welcome mila kabab me haddi ban k.pata nahi kyoun us ko koi aur nahi milta hai humesha Raj k peeche padi rehti hai vo.😑😑😑

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing yaar. πŸ‘
Raj ne kitni buri tarah Doc. Mishra ki insult ki par us ko to koi fark padta nahi hai na besharam kahin ki.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Bahut accha kiya Raj neπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰, vaise bhi vo bus Raj se un k mission k baare me pata karne aayi thi na.😑😑
But as being a good army officer he didn't give a single information to her.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
To Raj Naina se shaadi karna chahta hai g8 yaar.πŸ˜‰
Sach baat jabaan se fisal hi jaati hai na kabhi na kabhi.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
do update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Next day,Naina subah jaldi uth jaati hai,usne alarm laga kar rakha tha.Raj promise kiya hai Ladakh gumayega.9.00 a.m par Raj base ke bahar apne jeep main wait karega.Naina jaldi fresh up ho kar aati hai.Ab next problem yeh hai ki woh kya pehnegi.saree,no no,ghumne main problem hogi.

Naina- main koi date pe thori naa jaa rahi hu,ghumne jaa rahi hu,Raj sirf company dega,,jis dress pehen kar main comfortable hu main wohi pehnugi,zyada sexy dikhne ki mujhe koi jarurat nahin hai, warna meri bhi halat Dr.Ritu Mishra jaisi hogi.

Yeh sooch kar Naina jeans aur kurti hi pehenti hai,uske upar ek jacket pehenti hai, kaafi thand hai bahar,zyada style dikhne ki koi zarurat nahin hai,thand main marna hai kya?

Raj yeh sab nahin sooch raha hai,kyuki usse lagta hai ki woh kuch bhi pehne woh Naina ko impress kar hi dega.Lekin usne subah uthne main hi der kar diya hai,actually kaafi raat tak Raj case history study kar raha tha,kab so gaya tha usse yeh bhi nahin pata,subah jab need khuli to 8.30,

Raj- ohhh nooo!Naina ke saath meet karna hai 9 baje, but hai bhagban army officer ho kar late.

Raj jaldi jaldi fresh up ho kar ready ho kar neeche aata hai,jeep nikalta hai,aur base ke bahar aata hai, dekhta hai Naina khadi hai.Raj ko dekh kar,

Naina- Major u are late..

But Raj Naina ko hi sirf dekh raha hai.Naina ka aankho ke upar eyeshadow,uske hootho ke upar lipstick,oh god,perfect,itni kaam make up main bhi itni khoobsurat, but hang up yeh baal khula kyun nahin chora??

Naina bhi shocked ho jaati hai Raj ko is tarah dekh kar, My God Raj chup kyun hai??Raj kuch nahin bolega yeh ho sakta hai??upar se Raj ko is tarah se dekh kar Naina blush karti hai,jisse uska gaal thora laal ho jaata hai.Raj ko lagta hai subah jab sunrise hota hai,tab iss ice covered mountain jaise laal ko jaata hai.vaise Naina ka gaal hai,.Raj ke dil main ek ajeeb sa feeling hoti hai,aise feelings Raj ko pehle bhi hua tha jab Raj Naina ko Durga Puja ke waqt pehli baar saree main dekha tha. She is so pure.

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon

Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon

Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi

Ki Jeene Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Bata Sakun

Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen, Kaynaat Mein Nahi Hai Kahin

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..

Raj aise hi chupchap khada hai.Naina Raj ke paas aati hai.

Naina- Raj kya hua aise chupchap kyun khade ho jana nahin hai kya?hum pehle hi late ho chuke hai,plz jaldi chalo varne aur late ho jayenge.

Raj apne sapno ki duniya se bahar aata hai.

Raj- I am sorry,tum bohut der se wait kar rahi ho naa?by the way tumse ek baat kahu tum aaj bohut khubsurat lag rahi ho, ek dum "fatafati",aise lag raha hai jaisa Kanchanjunga pe suraj ki pehli kiran gir raha hai.

Naina(blushing)- jaa tum bhi naa,aaj itna tariff kyun sujh raha hai,by the way tum bhi bohut handsome lag rahe ho.

Raj- boo, aisa dress to main roz pehenta hu,kuch khaas nahin kiya,nothing special yaar.

Naina- phir bhi, come on ek ladki tumhari tariff kar rahi hai aur tum??kal jab Dr.Mishra……

Raj- plz plz Naina hum ghumne jaa rahe hai,tum God ka naam lo,,jaise meri mummy bolti hai durga durga, uss ki naam lena jaruri tha kya?

Naina- ok ok baba, itna chidh kyun rahe ho??chale, vaise bhi humne faltoo bohut time waste kar diya hai.

Raj jeep start karta hai.Raj jeep pe bohut zyada speed uthtata hai.

Naina- Raj kya kar rahe ho?itni speed main kyun chala rahe ho?

Raj- come on, hum late ho gaye hai, agar jaldi nahin chalaya to zyada ghum nahin payenge,trust me kuch nahin hoga, main aise hi tez chalata hu.

Naina(in mind)- I trust u Raj,khud se bhi zyada.

Raj- tum ne kuch kaha kya?

Naina- tumne kuch suna kya??

Raj- aaahhh,pata nahin, mujhe laga..

Naina- maine kuch nahin kaha, tum samne dekh kar thik se drive karo.

Raaste ke dono taraf baraf hai,uske upar suraj ki kiran uss par gir kar,ek ajeeb si raunat hai.Naina baraf ki khubsurat fiza ka mazza le rahi hai,aur bilkul paas Raj ko mehsus karke khud ko protected feel kar rahi hai.

Tum Huye Meherbaan, To Hai Yeh Dastaan

Abb Tumhara Mera Ek Hai Karwaan, Tum Jahan Main Wahaan

Raj drive karte waqt bhi Naina ko mirror main dekh raha hai.Iss khubsurat fiza main jo dil ke sabse kareeb ho usko paas pana aapne aap main ek great feeling hai.

Main Agar Kahoon Humsafar Meri Apsara Ho Tum Ya Koi Pari

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..

Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon

Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi

Ki Jeene Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun

Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen, Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Finally they reach Thiksey Gompa.Thisis one of the largest and most impressive gompas representing Ladakhi architecture in its best form. There are several temples in this gompa containing images, stupas and exquisite wall paintings. It also houses a two - storeyed statue of Buddha which has the main prayer hall around its shoulder. This monastery has an art gallery in its chambers with rare collections of art.

Naina awe-struck ho kar sab dekh rahi thi.

Naina- Raj dekho kitna great culture hai naa hamare India main.

Raj- of course East yaa Weat, India is the best.

Naina- agar Neelu hoti to details bol sakti thi, hai naa?

Raj- haa, yaa phir koi guide.

Phir Raj & Naina prayer hall main aate hai.Naina aankhe bandh karke prayer karti hai.Raj usko dekh raha hai,oh she is so innocent.Prayer khatam karke,

Raj- kya prayer kiya?

Naina- wish batana nahin chayiye.puri nahin hoti.U know Raj agar bhagban se kuch mangna ho to sacche dil se maanga chayiye,to hamesha mil jaati hai.koi bhi bhagban ho, afterall sab ek hi hai.tum ne kuch nahin maanga??

Raj- I don't believe in God.

Naina- really to yaha aaye kyun??dont say sirf tumhe ghumane.

Raj- yaha ki great art ko dekhne ke liye,aur feel karo yaha par kitni shanti hai,yaha par aakar main ek freshness mehsus karta hu.

Naina- hmm,samjhi, by the way ab chale.

Raj- tum jeep ke paas chalo, main abhi aata hu.

Naina jaane ke baad,Raj prayer hall main apne ghutno pe bethta hai.

Raj- mujhe aapse kuch nahin chayiye,lekin Naina bohut acchi ladki hai,plz uske zindagi main kabhi koi dukh mat aane dena,woh tolerate nahin kar payegi,agar koi dukh yaa problem ho to mujhe de dena, I will handle.aur haa usne jo kuch bhi maaga naa aapse plz usse woh de dena.

Raj bahar aata hai.

Naina- kya kar rahe the??

Raj- kuch nahin, chalo,ghumna nahin hai kya?

Next they reached Stok Palace.Stok was the Palace of the banished royal family.The palace is about 200 years old.

Naina- Raj yeh trip main nahin bhulungi,great.waahh!

Raj- coffee chalega?

Naina- ofcourse mujhe thora aur energy chayiye.

Dono coffee pee kar vapas jaap main bethte hain,naina poori mood main hai.Next they reached Spituk Monastery.15th century monastery.collection of ancient masks, antique arms, and and an awe inspiring image of Mahakala.

Naina- baapre dangerous,zaara soocho Raj pehle yeh sab leke log kaise ladai karte the?

Raj- yes, I totally agree, aaj to hamare paas sab automatic hote hai, heavy bhi nahin.U know ek din main Alekh ko leke yaha aaya tha, woh kaha agar yeh sab weapon abhi bhi army main hota to woh kabhi army main nahin aata.

Naina- u know Raj mere peth main chuhe daud rahe hai,subah khayi thi, chalo naa kuch khate hai.

Raj- bhukh to mujhe bhi laga hai,chalo khate hai.

Raj Naina ek dhabe main beth kar khana khate hai.Naina notice karti hai Raj ka nazar baar baar ek tata sumo par jaa raha hai.

Naina- Raj any problem??

Raj- arre nahin re baba,tum jaldi khatam karo hum market jayenge.

Naina khana khatam karti hai.Raj bill pay karke jeep start karta hai.Phir dono market aata hai.Naina idhar udhar ghum rahi hai,Raj sirf usko follow kar raha hai.

Naina ek churi ki dukan ke samne rukhti hai,kya legi decide hi nahin kar paa rahi hai.Achanak Raj kuch churiya utha kar Naina ka haath pakad leta hai.Raj ek ek karke Naina ke haath main churiya pehnata hai,Raj ki garam saase Naina ke chere par gir raha hai, Naina was shivering coz of his touch, Naina apna aankhe bandh kar leti hai.She just wanted to feel this moment & enjoying his touch.

Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya

Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya

Neeindo Mein Aankhon Mein Pyaase Khwabon Mein

Tu Hi Tu Hai Yara Mehki Saason Mein

Har Bechaini Reh Reh Ke Yeh Kehti Hai

Har Dhadkan Mein Teri Chahat Rehti Hai

Tere Bina Tere Bina

Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam

Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam

Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam

Raj- bohut khubsurat lag raha hai

Naina- hmmm?

Raj- maine kaha yeh churiya tumhare kalai pe bohut khubsurat lag raha hai.

Naina kuch nahin kehti, chupchap khadi rehti hai.

Raj- chalo shyam ho raha hai,base pe chalte hai.

Naina- hmm.chalo.

Dono base main aate hai, ek durse ko goodnight keh kar apne apne quarter main aate hai.

Naina apne kalai main Raj ki pehnayi hui churiyon ko dekh raha hai,chu raha hai, abhi bhi Raj ki touch ko woh mehsus kar sakti hai.

Jiye chaye hai lamhe,bas yehi pe rukh jayen,

samne tum raho aur hum tumhe dekte jayen

Dil main hone lagi hai,meethi meethi si hulchul,

tum raho sath jaise,mere aankho ka kaajal

saath din raath rahe,pyaar ki baat rahe

aur rahe kuch na baqi,Maine izhar kiya hai,

sun meere saathi,thora sa pyyar hua hai,

bohut hai baqi.

Raj kamre main aakar khidki khol deta hai, thandi hawa aane lag jaati hai.Raj chand ko dekh raha hai, aaj aasman bilkul saaf hai.

berang si hai badi zindagi kuchh rang to bharoon

main apani tanahaayi ke waaste abbb kuchh toh karoon

jab mile thodi fursat, mujhse karle muhabbat

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

usako chhupaakar main sabse kabhi le chaloon kahin door...

aankhon ke pyaalon kse pita rahoon usake chehre ka noor

iss jamaane se chhupakar, puri karloon main hasrat

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

in dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thats all for today,jaldi jaldi update likha hai maine, check karne ka time hi nahin mila,garbar hui hai to sorry, thanks to all for replying
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Posted: 16 years ago

bahut dino baad kiya update?😑😑😑

vaise bahut hi romantic tha ye update,😳😳😳 Raj ne Naina k liye ab kuch kuch feel karna start kiya hai lagta haiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ aur Naina to pehle se hi feel karti hai par ab mujhe bhi lagta hai ki us ko lagta hai ki Raj likes her.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Nice song selection yaarπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘. Raj ne Naina ko chudiyaan gift ki so sweet.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Ye red gadi me kaun tha?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so cool
but why they are not confessing their love to each other
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Really a different n nice fic yaar,

i loved it and i hope u will update it soon.

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