Red Triangle- RN Fic updated 07.10.10 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was gr8
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
anybody interested in this fic?????????????
yaa main stop karu???
i think mujhe stop karna chayiye
iss saal collg main mera final year hai,agar iss fic ko koi padh nahin raha hai so waqt barbaad karne ka koi matlab nahin hai.
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz dont stop updating ur fic.ur fic is gr8.plz cont soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago

madam kya aap ne kasam khaiye hai ki ek maheene me ek baar hi karegi update?

Itna accha fic likh rahi ho to kam se kam ek hafte me to karo ek baar update na.

V miss it so much and u don't care about our feelings.

update soon and with long part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!
Pure college mein yeh baat phail jaati hai ke Raj aur Naina ka chakkar chal raha hai!!! Ish Nandini ki toh main!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
Bechari Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Sab ussi ko ulta sidha kehte rahete hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Naina Raj ko bhi aviod kar rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 Usse kam se kam Raj se toh baat karni chahiye ek baar!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Aalekh ne accha kiya jo ush ladke ko pakda!!!!
Kya confidence hai Raj ka!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Nandini ko accha jawab diya usne!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Naina aise behave karke galat kar rahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
I hope Raj aur Naina ke beech jaldi sab theek ho jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
kya yaar.. itne dino me 1 hi update... i agree with mahak.. we like this ff a lot.. but agar itni time ud nehi karti ho to.. :(
this is a really nice ff... pls ud soon:)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Alekh-bye matlab kya??haa,apni baat hi final,not fair Raj,durso ki baat bhi sun liya kar.tu to apna feelings express karke chala gaya,jo log apna feelings express nahin kar sakte un logo ka koi feelings nahin hota.

Neelu- Rajveer plz samajne ki kohsish karo Naina tumhare tarah outgoing nahin hai,who bohut hi soft hai,woh kisi se zyada milti bhi nahin hai,dekho woh to aisi jamele main raheti bhi nahin.

Raj- yaa ofcourse mujhse dosti karke usse yeh sab sunna padh raha hai naa,yeh kehna chate ho tum naa,main galat hu,& tumhara tragedy queen sahi hai.main yaad dila du tumhe ki dosti ka pehla kadam Naina ne mere taraf barayi thi.

Neelu- boys! tum logo ko kuch samjhana bekar hai

Yeh keh kar Neelu woha se chali jati hai.

Alekh- tujhe ho kya gaya hai?tu to itna naasamaj nahin hai

Raj- enough Alekh mujhe kuch accha nahin lag raha hai.Naina ko main apna ek bohut accha dost manta tha,but lagta hai main apna dost chunne main galti kar di.arre jo dost kuch faltoo baate le kar apni dosti tor de….aaj ke baad kisi se friendship nahin karunga.sirf tu hi mera sabse accha dost hai.plz mujhse kabhi dosti mat todna.tab main bilkul akela pad jaunga.promise kar.

Alekh- Raj tujhe kya ho gaya hai?arre promise main & tu hamesha best friend rahenge.arre baba tujhe chor kar jaunga to mera kya hoga.but tu apni best friend ko ek baat bata isse pehle bhi dosti tuti hai, ,aaj iss dosti ko le kar tu itna serious kyun hai.

Raj- pata nahin,I just don't know.

Alekh- hmm,Raj ek baat bolu mujhe Naina ka pata nahin,lekin main tujhe bohut acchi tarah se janta hu.Tu na iss dosti ko nibhana,beech main mat chor dena.

Raj koi jawaab nahin deta.

Alekh- accha chal chor,Class main chalte hai.

Raj- tu jaa,aaj class karne ka mood nahin hai,sar dard kar raha hai.

Yeh keh kar Raj chala jata hai.

Alekh- tujhe nahin pata but I think mujhe pata hai, tu Naina ne pyaar karne laga hai,u are in love Raj.aur yeh baat tujhe manna hoga.

Next day,In canteen, tiffin break,bohut saare students canteen main beethe the,Naina & Neelu saath main bethe the,Raj ek table chor kar bethne wala tha,but Alekh ne zabardasti usko paaswale table main bithaya.Raj & Naina ek durse ko completely avoid kar raha hai.Naina ka dil keh raha hai ki woh Raj se baat kare,but students phir se gossip karenge yeh sooch kar apne aap ko control kar rahi hai.Achanak baato baato main Arjun kehta hai,

Arjun- aaj kal sacrifice naam ki chiz ka zamana hi nahin raha yaar, jo zyada honestly sochta hai uski raaho main muskil hi muskil hai.kaun badlega yaar isko?mujhe to iss desh main rehne ka koi saukh nahin hai.

Nandini- I completely agree with u Arjun, kuch nahin ho sakta iss desh ka.

Achanak Raj peeche se bolta hai,

Raj- kyun Arjun chale jana kyun chate ho?tum badlo naa iss desh ko,ghar ki safai gharwale nahin karenge to kya baharwale karenge?

Nandini- Raj tumhe to main bohut realistic samajthi thi,tum bhi yeh sab sacrifice main believe karte ho,kya hoga bolo kisi ek ki sacrifice se?jaisa chalta aaya hai vaisa chalta rahega.

Raj- first of all Nandini sacrifice koi bazaar main biknewali chiz nahin hai,jo tum apne paiso se kharid lo,yeh ek junnon hai jo dil se aata hai,mujhe nahin lagta tum iske mayne samjogi,Khudiram basu ne ek magistrate ko maara tha,iss se to British empire ka ek iit bhi nahin hila tha,lekin aur bhi log yeh raasta aapnaya tha naa.

Nandini- come on Raj, past apna great tha,iss ke saath tum present ko mat milao.

Raj- past main itne log sacrifice kiye the isliye tum apna yeh great present enjoy kar rahi ho,independent country main reh rahe ho,aur rahi baat present ki to tum yeh jo chain ki zindagi guzaar rahe ho, iske peeche kitno ka balidaan hain, raat main tum jab chain ki need soti ho,yaad rakhna border pe hamare jawan jaag rahe hain.

Nandini- hmm,to Army main join karke desh ki sewa ki jaa sakti hai…..

Raj- maine aisa to nahin kaha koi bhi kaam karo,offcourse saahi kaam,usse honestly karo,to tum desh ke liye kuch kar rahi ho,durso ke baare main gossip phelake nahi hi tumhari bhala ho sakta hai, na hi dusro kaa.

Nandini ne aur kuch nahin boli,Naina pehle Raj ko avoid kar rahi thi, but uske baat sun kar resist nahin kar paayi,canteen main aur students ki tarah woh bhi raj ko spellbound ho kar dekh rahi thi.kuch log hote hi aise great speaker,u can't resist yourself to listen to then.bolna ek baat hai lekin Raj ki aankho main ek ajeeb si chamak,uski body language se naina ko laga yeh uski dil ki baat hai.agar desh ke liye koi bhi sacrifice ho to Rah dubara nahin sochega.haa yeh baat aur hai ki woh apna attitude nahin chor sakta,last main nandini ko taunt karna nahin chora.But naina was very much attracted towards him,iss baat pe koi shauk nahin hai.

Of course Election Raj hi jeeta,aur bohut baari margin se jeeta.iss ke baad Raj aaya tha Nandini ke paas

Raj- hiiiiii,Nandini dear,how are u baby??

Nandini avoid kar ke janewali thi,but Raj uska raasta rokh leta hai.

Raj- come on Nandini apni hulchal to batati jao.

Nandini- kya karne aaye ho Raj zakham pe namak chirakne????

Raj(sochne ka natak karta hai)- aa aa actually u are………………right dear,main yahi karne aaya hu.dusro par to tum aise karte ho khud par kaisa lag raha hai??

Nandini- main tumse pyaar karti hu,par tum nahin samjhe.

Raj- tum agar gangajal main khade ho kar bhi bologi naa tab bhi main tum par jakin nahin karunga.main tumse pyaar nahin karta,baat khatam,agar dosti ka rishta thik rakhti naa tum to jaan bhi haazir,lekin iit ka jawab hamesha pathhar se.

Nandini- Raj mujhse zindegi main aage kabhi mat milna.

Raj- pehli baar tumhari & mera sooch milta hai,main tumse koi rishta nahin rakhna chata,nahi dosti ka, nahi dushmani ka.

Uske baad collg main 3rd year ki exam nazdeek aa raha hai,3rd year ka study leave chal raha hai.Raj bohut hi busy hai,Alekh bhi iss saal padai kar raha hai, afterall last year,Naina ka joint exam ki preparation main puri dyaan laga di hai,Alekh ne ek din kaha tha Raj se ki usse ja kar keh dena chayiye woh naina se pyaar karta hai.but Raj ne serious tone main kaha woh kisi se pyaar nahin karta & uske paas pyaar jaise faltoo chizon ke liye koi waqt nahin hai. dekte dekte 3rd year ka exam bhi ho gaya.

Collg main aaj 3rd ka farewell hai,

School main jab farewell hota hai, to dil main ek umeed rehti hai, arre collg main saath saath rehenge, but collg ke baad sab apne zindagi ki manzil ki talaash main nikal jaate hai, yeh dosti sirf acche yaadein ban kar reh jaati hai,kyunki saare zindagi humhe yeh sab dosto ki kaami mehsoz hota hai.kyunki iss ke baad jo dost bante hai, zyada se zyada log apna swarth pura karne ke liye dosti karte hai.

Sab ek dusre ki gaale mil rahe hai.sab ki aankhen naam hai.alekh & Neelu dono ek dusre ke saath waqt beetha raha hai.Naina aayi thi,Naina ne aaj decide kiya tha aaj woh Raj ke saath jo misunderstanding hui hai usse clear karke rahega.jab Raj ke aaspaas koi nahin hai,tab Naina mauka dekh kar Raj ki haath pakad kar side main khicti hai.

Raj- (surprised)- tum????????????

Naina- sorry, tab mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha,

Raj- really, I think I am a dog, waiting for u'r grace.

Naina- plz aisa mat bolo,dekho aaj ke baad kab milenge pata nahin, aaj to thik se baat karo, bolo tumne mujhe maaf kiya.(rone jaisi shakal bana leti hai)

Raj – ok, ok maaf kiya.

Naina- thanks yehi kehne aayi thi,Joint ki exam hai samne…isliye jana padega…preparation to…..

Raj- best of luck for u'r exam,hope kabhi main aa jau tumhare paas ilaaz karane.

Naina- Nahin, bhagban kare tum hamesha sahi salamat raho,tum jo bhi karoge aage uske liye Best of luck.bye,pata nahin phir kab mulakat ho.

Yeh keh kar Naina turn karti hai, uske aankhon main aasu hai.

Raj- ek minute Naina.

Yeh keh kar Naina ke haath main red rose deta hai.

Raj- yeh red rose yaha par aate hi diya tha, pata hai kisi ki diya hua phool nahin dena chayiye, par mere paas kuch bhi nahin hai dene ka.

Naina aur control nahin kar pati, rote rote Raj ko hug karti hai.Raj ki aankho main bhi aasu hai.

Naina- bye.

Raj- bye

Tumko bhi, hai khabar,mujhko bhi hai pata

Ho raha hai juda,dono ka raasta

Dur jaake bhi mujhse,tum meri yaado main rehna

Kabhi alvida naa kehna,kabhi alvida naa kehna.

Raj ( in his mind)- Remember me like a dry flower in your note book,it may not have any fragnance,but will remember you of my existence forever in your life.

Waqt milata hai logo ko aur wohi karta hai juda,log karke mohobbat hote hai barbaad,kya yehi tera farmaan hai khuda.

Lamhe yeh suhane saath ho naa ho, kaal main aaj si baat ho naa ho,yaado ke hasin lamne dil main rahenge,chahe tamaam umaar aapse mulakat ho naa ho.

Naina(In her mind)- keh nahin pane ki majboori hai,khamoshi ki bhi zuba ho,kya zaruri hai

Jane kyun woh hume kuch aise nishani de gaye,dohra naa sake aisi kahaani de gaye,hum to reh gaye pyaase par, who hamari palko ko paani de gaye.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thats all for today, waiting for u'r comments,i think yeh update kaafi long hai,& thanks to all for replying
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey g8 work yaar.

update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome
update is too cool
update soon long asap

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