my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
a nice update



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make the next update a very loong one a 3000 words
😆 😆 😆
thank u
waiting for the next update eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Beautiful!! but why do you write such small updates yaar!!! by the time we get into it just then its over.. plz write long updates na..

i loved the RN part, its getting interesting to see them get closer...

plz update soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
million million claps...wonderful

superb secene.....

and wonderful sketch of RAj's character
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
dat was awesome 👏 👏 👏

gr81....

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Naina was stunned, disturbed & also tensed.
Naina- Raj yeh sab kya ho raha hai?kisine tum par attack kiya?plz yaha se chalo.
Raj- chill naina.....
Naina- main kuch nahin sunna chati,plz chalo yaha se,meri shar ghum rahi hai,mujhe chakkar aa raha hai.
Raj- really Naina,to tumhari shar clockwise ghum rahi hai ya anti-clockwise?aur aisa to kuch hua hi nahin ki tumhe chakkar aaye?
Naina(slightly blushing)- plz raj,i am serious,main mazak ke mood main nahin hoon.
Raj- ok baba,main to situation ko light karne ki koshish kar raha tha,dekho naina plz listen to me
Naina- main kuch sunna nahin chati,hum kab bapas ja rahe hai?
Raj- aur is case ka kya hoga?tum hi mujhe goodluck wish karti ho aur tumhi vapas jane ki baat karte ho?I am confused
Naina- Raj tumse imp kuch nahin,agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga kabhi tumne socha hai?
Raj- listen to me,dekho hamare profession main yeh bohut common hai,aise threat humhe aksar milta hai,in sab ko itna seriously mat lo
aur ek baat, threat woh log karte hai jo darte hai,ek confident person threat nahin karta.& by the way Main hoon na.
Naina- SRK ki dialouge maar rahi ho?
Raj- ok,"ami achi na"
Naina- ek hi to baat kaha tumne?
Raj- arre baba,bengali main kaha,SRK ne Bengali main to nahin kaha tha na?to hua na mera style
Naina- oh,u are too much,ok ek baat kahu?
Raj- yaa,bolo
Naina- mujhe nahin pata tha tum itna mazak bhi kar lete ho?mujhe laga tha tum bohut serious ho.
Raj- jab main duty par hota hoon,then i am the soul of seiousness.But i dont see any reason to go around all the time with a long face.
par main thora shy hoon,sabke sath main first meeting main hi free nahin ho pata.
Naina- hmm, samjhi
Raj- It is my own life,it is not meant for anyone else,when your's life over,do u think anyone will give u a bit of thiers?so kisi false modesty &
dignity ke sath jeene ka koi reason to mujhe dikta nahin,every moment,every bit of it is precious,so isse enjoy karna chayiye.
Naina- ohh, hamare sooch kitna milta hai,accha hua ki tumne bol di varna main tumhe yeh dialouge denewali thi.tumhare saath baate karte karte ek baat
to main bhul gayi
Raj- kya?
Naina- aaj subah kaki bol gayi thi ki woh sham ko khana banane nahin aayegi,ab kya kare?eiii,suno?
Raj- Main sun raha hu
Naina- aaj itni barish ho rahi hai,aaj khicri banate hai,woh mujhe banana bhi aata hai,chalega?
Raj- of course, chalega.

Naina went into kitchen.then at night,while they were at dinner,
Raj- wow naina,aaj tumne first time khana banaya,but khana kha ke lagta hai tum kabhi kisi 5star hotel ki head-cook thi
Naina- aghhhhh,Raj plz tease mat karo,socho first try main maine agar aisa khana banayi,to jab sikh jaungi to kaisa banungi?
Raj- umeed par to duniya thiki hai.
Naina- Raj shut up ok.

After dinner,
Raj- Naina tum ho history main M.A kiya hai,thora help korogi?
Naina- main help karungi?????
Raj- mujhe history ke bare main zyada kuch nahin pata,"Gaur"ka aisa kya historical importance hai ki Archaeological Department itna
interested hai yaha kaam karne main?
Naina- Gaur is historically a very important place because a large portion of Bengal's ancient history was written here.
Raj- plz plz batao
Naina- The ancient city Gaur in Malda has also been mentioned in Hindu Puranic texts & its history is recorded since 500 B.C.At that
period,Gaur & Pundrabardhana (Pandua) was under the Mauryan empire.Archeological findings have also indicated that the whole of North Bengal was part of the Gupta Empire in the ancient times.
Thereafter, the Guptas were succeeded by the king of Karnasubarna in 700 A.D, who ruled for almost thirty years.
From mid 8th century to 11th century AD the Pala dynasty ruled Bengal and promoted Buddhism.After the rule of the Palas it was the turn of the Sen Dynasty;
Balal Sen was the third ruler of the Sen Dynasty who ruled over Gaur and established sole control over entire Bengal within 1168 A.D.The Sen Dynasty wielded their rule over Bengal till 1204 AD,
after which, the Mughals and Afghans ended their rule by invading Bengal.
Malda was conquered by the Mughals in 1198 A.D., and was the headquarters of their ruling power over Bengal. After the Afghans came to power, the headquarters were relocated to Pandua
Gaur came to prominence again in 1453.In 1539, Gaur was attacked by Sher Shah, and in 1575 it was invaded by the army of Akbar.After that city lied in a heap of ruins.
Raj- wow,tumhe history ke baare main itna knowledge hain,my god,i am impressed.
Naina- thank u
Raj- ek kaam karo Naina SSC exam main beth jao,apne knowledge ko waste mat karo.
Naina- ok, i will think about it.

Thats all for today,waiting for u'r comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hey awesome ud.

mindblowing. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
Good One!!

Entertainment ke saath saath serious history bhi pada rehe ho sab ko... 😉

Waiting for the next part per plz itni der mat karo ek update likne ke liye...

Cheers!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hmmmmmmmmm vison sundar..I mn gr8 update
ek baat batao tum history me spelized ho na?????????

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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
Wow very nice.Too bad unka romantic moment kharab ho gaya but its nice they are opening up.

Waise tum bhi kya history mein kuch pad rahi ho......I mean this much knowledge of history!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Thanks to all for replying 😊 😊

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