my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
are aap ne to hame rula diya aap ka ye ff hamre liye ek sachi kahani se kam nahin tha .thanku sooo much for this great writung aur aap ne raj aur naina ka bichad ne gam ka gham dur kardiya masshalha bahat acha ff hai aap ka shukriya 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Too good!!!Very nice!!!

The last lines were very well said!!And loved the proposal scene!!

Looking forward to lots and lots of more romance!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
ohhh!!!!!!!!it was fantastic updt............... 👏

all dos history knowledege was very good too.......... 😊

update soon...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
hi,tomar ff ta amar khub bhalo legeche.ami tomake prothom comment dicchi.eto bhalo legeche je comment na diye parlam na.anyways keep it up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
Thanks to all for replying,love u all, muahhhhhhhh
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
It was quite sometime latter both apart to take breath.He was looking at her & smiled at her naughtily.She couldn't take it anymore & hugs him tightly.
Naina- I love u raj,plz mujhe kabhi akela chor kar mat jana.
Raj hugged her more tightly,just like he was trying to protect her from this world.Suddenly Naina notice kiya Raj kisi aur ko dekh raha hai.
Naina- Raj tumhara koi secret girlfriend hai kya?
Raj- What??????
Naina- nahin main tumhare itni paas hu,phir bhi tumhari dyan kisi aur taraf,something fishy,maine NO ENTRY film dekha hai,samjhe.mere sath koi chalaki mat karna samjhe.
Raj- Naina, mere saath reh kar tumhari sense of humour bhi kafi acchi ho gayi hai.
Naina- Raj seriously batao na kya dekh rahe the??
Raj- Naina koi hamara peecha kar raha hai.
Naina(shocked)- What??
Naina dekne ke liye utne jati hai, but Raj grabbed her hand & made her sit..
Raj- naina kya kar rahi ho?
Naina- Raj koi hum he follow kar raha hai dekh rahi hu kaun?pata nahin kab se follow kar raha hai
Raj- Naina jab hum subah nikle the tab se yeh admi hum he follow kar raha hai.& tumhe usse le kar itna pareshan hone ki zarurat nahin hai,but aisa pretend karo ki hum
usse dekha nahin,samjhi.
Naina- matlab tum subah se jante ho yeh hum he follow kar raha hai tumne mujhe bataya nahin?Raj mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai.
Raj- Naina uss incident ke baad mera aankh & kaan dono khula hai,& u trust me na??main tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga.
Naina- Raj mujhe tum par bhorosa hai,mujhe pata hai tum mujhe kuch nahin hone doge,but tum plz apna khayal rakhna
Raj- Naina tum yaha pehle bhi aa chuki ho na?tum itna details janti ho iss place ke bare main?
Naina - Raj tumhara guess absolutely wrong hai,main yaha pehle kabhi nahin aayi,but u know History meri subject hai,to iss place ko le kar main kaafi research kiya hai,samjhe.
by the way chalo ab palace laut chalte hai,sham ho gayi hai.
Raj- hmmmmm,kya jaan abhi to poori raat baaki hai.
& winked at her,& she turned as red as tomato.

Hawa main kitne saare phool ki meethi khusboo,green field,red soil,"Kaash"(catkine)flowers sab mila kar ek romantic environment.
Jab apki saathi ho aapke sath, to aapke aas paas,yeh poori duniya aapko khubsurat lagegi.
Dhadakte Dil pe hath rakh gaya koi,Abhi chingariya bhuji bhi na thi,firse jalane ka ehsaas rakh gaya koi.
They came back in the palace.Both were in a daze.
After dinner,
Raj sat on the bed,but not with his laptop.Naina came in the room wearing a white nightgrown.
In the dark Naina's beauty extended in to the room as moonlight.Her earrings were glittering like little stars in the night.
Raj came near to her.She close her eyes With shyness and fear.He removed the clip from her hair & started playing with her hair.
He kissed her forehead.He was kissing passionately on her neck,shoulder.She was enjoying the beautiful sensation running through her body.
Raj lifted her up on his arms & place her to the bed. He lay on top of her.He kissed her lips with full of passion, love & care.The kiss
was so deep that her lips got a small cut,& started playing with her tounge.

You were so passionate to know how much did i love u
I couldn't explain, because, I didn't know how deep the sea was, but I knew
My love was deeper than the sea, longer than sky, more numerous than your hair
Beloved, i care for u more than me.

Naina unbottoned his shirt.Raj also removed her grown, & started cuddling her,nibbling her & caressing her.Their legs entwined.
She was mourning & scraching his mascular back.Both were enjoying the moment.

Undress me until I am stripped bare of
The world's evil and tainted essence until like
The day of my birth, I emerge beautiful untouched- unpoisoned.
Let this nude daughter of Eve stand
Before you liberated from the negative-
pure & positive & free to melt into your loving embra.

Raj kissed her on shoulders,cheeks.Naina also kissed his face,bare chest.Raj kissed her eyelids & started caressing her stomach.She was
clinching the sheet in her fists & enjoying the pleasure.

Hoth tere mai ke pyaale,kajrare naina tere,mathe par sinduri subaha, julfho main raina base,
saasein yeh teri hain,dhadkan bhi teri hain,jeevan yeh teera hua,
tere hi choone se, taan maan saja mera,hui main parineeta.

Today two bodies & soul became one.they both enjoying their union.


Thats all for today guys,waiting for u'r comments


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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
hii madhu..
tum kaheti ho k main apni ud main sixer marti hoo waise tum bhi kam nahin ho yaar kya likha hai 😉 waise ek baat samajh nahin aayi raj ko pata tha k ek aadami unka peecha kar raha hai phir bhi woh naina k saath romance kar raha tha 😆 i know naina ko dekhkar sab bhul gaya hoga.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
madhu it's really really amazing update..........
so touchy,so romantic,full of passion,full of love.....,full of desire....

raj to kamal kar diya...tention k time me v romance kar sakta hai!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've dedicated a song 2 ur 2day's update
"tu mile dil khile..aur jine ko kya chahiye..."
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
i agree with sana...yaar raj itna pagal ho gaya pyar main 😆 😆 i'm thinking about the person who was following them...raj ko to khabar nehi raha, but uska kya hua hoga!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
tooo good..............bahut hi accha tha..........par woh kaun tha jo picha kar raha hai..........

updt soon

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