my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 7

Naina- Raj tum kyun itna history pata kar rahe ho mujhse?tum C.B.I chorna chate ho kya?
Raj- C.B.I chorna chata hoon matlab?
Naina- nahin,main sochi tum iss place main aakar history main interested ho gaye,aur ab professor banna chate ho
Raj- Naina main tumhe professor banne ki suggestion de raha tha.& history isliye pata kar raha tha ki mujhe bohut jald un archaeologists se milna parega,aur aisa logo ke paas jane se pehle thora bohut
knowledge hona chahiye na
Naina- hmm,samjhi,ab kya tum apne kaam le kar betnewale ho?tum bohut boring ho.
Raj- really,itna bara insult naina tumne mujhe boring kaha?u know main collg main apne friends ke beech sabse charming tha.
Naina- oh really Raj i impressed tum to phekte bhi ho,jhuth mat bolo
Raj- Naina tumhari sense of humour bohut acchi hai,main phek raha hu.
Naina- ek baat puchu raj,maine kabhi aisa boli kya,why do u messg me?never msg.me again,dont call me,dont distrub me,to tum mujhe kabhi messg nahin kiya,call karke zyada baat nahin kiya,why?
Raj(innocently)- kab naina mujhe to yaad hi nahin aa raha hai.
Naina- raj,dont pretend ok,shaadi ke baad jab tum Delhi chale gaye the for some stupid case,tab ki baat kar rahi hoon main
Raj- haa,yaad aaya.
Naina- to kya explanation denge aap mr.charming?
Raj- hmm,explanation hai naina.
Naina- kya?i am waiting.
Raj(thought sometimes)- hmm,dil se dil laga kar to dekho,meri yaad main aasu baha kar to dekho.1SMS kya main SMS ki barsaat kar dunga,ek baar mere mobile ka bill chuka kar to dekho.
Naina( speechless for a moment)- this is too much.
Raj- kaun si mach?Ilish mach???(Guys Bengali main fish ko mach kaha jata hai)
Naina- arghhhhhhh
Raj- u know Naina jab mummy shaadi ke liye ladki dhund rahi thi,to ekdin I dropped a coin in the wishing well & prayed for a intelligent, beautiful life partner,& God gifted me u, & said...
Naina(eagarly) - what??
Raj- itna paise main itna hi milega.
Naina- I HATE U ok
Raj- then,pata hai i wrote ur name on sand,it got washed away,i wrote ur name on the wind but it got blown away,so i wrote ur name on my heart...
Naina- bolo,heart attack aa gaya
Raj- no,i wrote ur name on my heart coz i know that it will stay there forever.
Both looked at each other for a moment,they gazed at each other.
Naina(blushing slightly)- Raj tum bhi na
Raj- aaj tum bohut exhausted lag rahe ho naina,plz so jao,u need rest.
Naina- tum bhi so jao raj,good night.
Raj- Goodnight.

soon naina's breaths becoming heavier,as she drifts on to sleeps.Raj looked at her,admired her innocent beauty.He came near the window.
bahar abhi bhi tez barish ho rahi hai.cold breeze blew on his face,sprinkling the small dropslets on his face, & serious expression on his face.
Raj looked at the knife,& thought aaj jo dhamki mili aise situation se main khud familliar hu,but naina,agar usse kuch ho gaya to,nahin aisa main nahin hone de sakta.
main naina ko kuch nahin hone de sakta.
finally they were opening up.isliye kehte hain.....
The whole air is charged with sadness,A profound slience is all that prevails.But then,slience is the language of love.so,no word,no song i sing to say how much u mean to me.
Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth,until the hour of separation.


thats all for today,waiting for u'r comments

hey awesome ud .aur raj ki lines bahot acchi thi. 😳 😳 😳

but yaar plzz next time bada ud karana. 👏

Wow this was too good!!!

I loved the last lines.
Also his jokes were nice!!!

it was very nice specially raj k dialouges.............

update soon

in short mind blowing
jokes r superb

feelings r superb

hatts off 2 u

Hi Sania ,
i just read your update it is just MIND BLOWING 👏 👏 👏
the conversation bet Raj n Naina are very funny as well as very sweet 😉 😉 😉
do update soon with long part also with more scence speasially romantic 😳 😳 😳

plzzzzzzzzzzz update fast

Then next day,aise hi guzar gaya,Raj case ko lekar pareshan & naina bore ho rahi hai.At night, Raj laptop lekar betha hai,Naina uske paas bethi hui hai.Raj ekbaar bhi
uske taraf nahin dekha.
Naina( in heart)- oh god,yeh laptop lagta hai meri sauten hai,baat karna to door ki baat hai raj meri taraf ekbaar dekha bhi nahin,uffff,this is too much.
Naina- Raj ekbaat kahu??
Raj-(without looking at her)- hmmm,bolo.
Naina- Raj main bore ho rahi hu.
Raj-(again without looking at her)- hmmmmmm
Naina- Raj sun rahe ho main tumse baat kar rahi hu,hawa se baat nahin kar rahi hu,rajjjjjjjj
Raj- ha,ha,bolo,sun raha hu,chikh kyun rahi ho?
Naina- Raj main bore ho rahi hu,mujhe sirf akele ghar main bethna accha nahin lagta.
Raj- oh god,tum roz bore kaise ho jati ho?kuch jokes kahu?
Naina- no,thanks,tumari ghatiya jokes sunne main i am not interested,main ghar main bore ho rahi hu.
Raj- ohhh,yeh to bohut problem ki baat hai,ok,kal subah ready ho jana,kal pura din tumhari naam,kal main tumhe Gaur ghumayunga.ab khush???
Naina- oh sweet of u raj,main bohut khush hu.
Raj- kal tumhare liye ek suprise bhi hai,ok,chalo ab so jao,kal ghumna hai na,engry barao,ok,goodnight
Naina- tum bhi jaldi so jao,goodnight.

Next day,jab raj ki need khuli tab dekha naina already uth chuki hai.
Naina- raj agar tum bhul chuke ho,to main tumhe yaad dila du,tum kal raat kaha tha aaj tum mujhe ghumane le jaoge.
Raj- dont worry,mujhe yaad hai,mera memory itna bhi kamzoor nahin hai,ok.
naina- koi bharosa nahin,khana maine pack kar liya hai,ab aap jara uth kar ready hone ki takleef uthange.
Raj- naina main to ready ho jaunga,par tum bohut time lagati ho,at first tum ready ho jao,phir mujhe gyan dena,ok.
Naina- aaj tum fighting ki mood main ho na?
Raj- naina,plz ready ho jao,nahin to tum apna suprise miss koroge,main bol raha hu tumhe.
Naina- dhamki de rahe ho,jaa rahi hu.
After sometimes, as usual,raj ready ho kar Naina ka intezar kar raha hai.
oh god,yeh naina kabhi time par ready nahin hoti,ufff.Then,after sometimes naina came out,raj got dumbstruck seeing her.She was looking awsome in
a red chiffon saree.
Raj- oh Naina,u look beautiful,khub sundar lagche tomake.
Naina- raj flirt mat karo,ab hum late nahin ho rahe hai??
Raj- tariff karo to bhi problem,tum bohut disgusting lag rahi ho,ab chalo.
Naina- raj kya kaha tumne ??
Raj- kuch nahin meri maa,chalo plz.

At first,they went in Bara Sona Masjid.
Raj- ohh,kya khubsurat jagah hai teh.isska kya history hai?
Naina- well,Bara Sona Masjid,the 168 ft x 76 ft structure reportedly had 44 gilded domes, of which only 11 exist.
Sadly, the gold cover did not survive the ravages of time.The construction of the mosque was started by Hossain Shah and was completed by his son Nasarat Shah in 1526. It is locally called Baraduari but contrary to the name, the mosque contains 11 spectacular arched gateways.
Raj- wowww
Naina- just wow,zara socho Raj & proud feel karo, ek waqt hamare Art, culture & Architecture ko dekh kar.
They got completely lost in this place.After sometimes,
Raj- chalo Naina, samne jakar khade ho jao.
Naina- kyun?
Raj- arre baba,photo leni hai ek.tumhari & iss jagah ki.
After sometimes,they went to see Dakhil Darwaza.& isse dekh kar bhi Raj ki bilkul bolti bandh ho gayi.
Naina- Raj sirf woww bol kar iss place ka insult mat karna ok.
Raj- ab iski kya kahani hai Naina?
Naina- well, Measuring 113 ft x 73 ft at the base and rising 73 ft, this structure formed the northern entrance to the citadel of Gour. Historians differ on the date of construction of this structure but agree on its status as a priceless brick architecture.
After sometimes,they reached Qadam Rasul.
Naina- This rectangular structure, crowned by a huge dome,was constructed by Sultan Nasarat Shah in 1530
and is said to contain the footprints of the Prophet. The holy footprint on white marble was brought from Arabia by Pir Shah Jalal Tabriji. The complex also contains a dochala (twin-roofed) temple-like structure that is said to contain the grave of Fateh Khan.
Raj andar chalo,dekho sab log ja rahe hai andar,tumhe kuch dua nahin karna hai,andar chalo na plz
Both removed their shoes & went inside.they both prayed & came out from the place.
Naina- dekho Raj waqt ka pata hi nahin chala,chalo is dhabe main kuch kha lete hai.
Raj- yeh jagah dekh kar mera bhukh chala gaya,what a place.
After lunch, Naina started washing her face.Raj stared at her,she looked beautiful.
tujhe dekh dekh sona,tujhe dekh kar hai jagna
maine yeh zindagani, sang teri betani
tujh main basi hai meri jaan,haii,
jiya dharak,dharak,jiya dharak,dharak,jaye.
Naina- Raj kaha kho gaye??aage nahin jana hai kya?
Raj-(came out from his dreamland) haa,chalo.
Next,they went to three-storeyed Lukochuri Darwaja.
Naina- Raj iss place ki significance zara dyan se suno.
Raj- why????
Naina- It was constructed by Shah Suja in 1655 and was originally called Shahi Darwaja,but locals settled for the name Lukochuri as according to legend,
the gate was used for the game of hide and seek between the sultan and his begums. The gate is 65 ft x 42 ft and has a 10-ft wide entrance with a drummer's chamber.
Raj- oh thats great,chalo chupa chupi khelte hai.
Naina- very funny Raj.ok ab jab tumhara itna mann kar raha hai,to main chupti hoon,tum mujhe find out karo.but no cheating ok
But naina ka baad kismati ki Raj usko find out kar hi leta hai.
Raj- mujhse kaise tum hide karogi haa?
Naina- raj plz chalo,thora aage bhi hum he dekna hai,childish gama khelna ka waqt nahin hai.
Raj- haar gayi ho na isliye keh rahi ho.
Next they went to see Gumti Darwaja.
Naina- Raj It is decorated with Hindu motifs, suggesting that it was once a Hindu temple. Almost nothing is known about the historical background of the structure.
Raj- hmm,samjha.
Naina- ab chalo,sham ho rahi hai.par.....
Raj- par kya??
Naina- Firoj Minar dekhe bina main nahin jaungi.
Raj- ok, chalo.
Now,they reached Firoj Minar.It was built by Firoj Shah II in 1489 to mark his triumph over Barbak Shah.
A 84-step spiral staircase leads to the top.Its exterior is decorated with beautiful terracotta design.
Naina- Raj chalo upar chalte hain.
They reached to the top.They saw the sunset.The moment the sun slipped,a low dark curtain descended upon the stage of the day.
They lot in this beautiful sight of nature.
Raj- Naina mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai,yeh perfect jagah hai kehne ka.
Raj- Naina,A candle may melt,& its fire may die,till the end of time,i am just so in love with a girl,who is in my heart,the love for her
will always stay as a flame in my heart.& the girl is U.
I LOVE U.
the place was silent.Naina's eyes were filled with tears,tears of joy.She spoke softly,I LOVE U TOO.
Raj moved forward,She could smell his manly intoxicating smell.Raj drank her tears & kissed her neck,which sent current in her body.
Raj kissed her forehead & started biting her lower lips,their breath grew faster.then Raj pressed hard his lips on her.He sucked her mouth & Naina started responding
him with same passion.
pyaar koi hawa nahin jo kho jayega,waqt nahin jo gazaar jayega,mausaam nahin jo badal jayega.pyaar to ashu hai khushi ya ghum dono main sath rehega.

Thats all for today,waiting for u'r comments

hii madhu ...

superbbbbb update dear.
👏

hey dat was great m sorry k me pehele ud par comment nahin karpayi but is bar kar rahi hun ok and tumhara ff padh kar aisa lag raha hai ki jese tum bahat intelligent ho yar just amzing mind blowing keep it up b t w mera comment kab milega hahaha 😉 😉 😉

"is pyaar ko main kya naam doon.............."

madhu it's really amazing.........................ye ehsaans hamari dil k kitni kareeb hai na!!!!???????

the description is 2 good

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