my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08

C.B.I Branch office in Kolkata

Officer- May i come in sir?
D.C.P - yes come in officer, i am waiting for u.
Officer- Sir itni subah subah apne mujhe bulaya?koi important case hai?
D.C.P- yes officer,tumne famous archaeologist Mr.Joshi ke death ke bare main newspaper main padha hai na?
Officer- yes sir, bohut hi interesting case hai
D.C.P- & Government ne yeh case C.B.I ko diya, & tumse best officer mujhe nahin mil sakta is case ko handel karne ke liye,main chata hoon tum one week andar "Malda"ke liye nikal jao, & woha ki local police station se tumhe help milega
Officer- ok sir
D.C.P- tumhe case ki detail Dutta se mil jayega, so best of luck Rajveer
raj- yes sir.


Rajveer Chaterjee, 27 years old, born & raised in kolkata, 2 years hua hai usne C.B.I join kiya hai,kabil officer hai, kolkata
main hi posted hai, ghar main uske mummy papa hai, uske papa bhi C.B.I main the, filhaal retire kiya hai,ghar main wife bhi hai,
7 months hua hai shaadi hua hai uski,ek bengali girl se, naam hai Naina,arranged marriage hai.

Naina chaterjee, 24 years old, she also born & raised in Kolkata, bohut zyada bolti hai, & bohut charming hai, shaadi karne ka
irada nahin tha, but gharwalo ki kehne se karna para, History main Naina M.A kar chuki hai.


Rajveer shaadi ke baad Delhi main ek case ke silsile main chala gaya tha,Naina ghar main thi, coz shaadi ke baad bohut rasham hoti hai,
so isliye ek durse ko samajne ka chance nahin mila, Raj jab ghar aake bola usse "Malda"jana hai, to uske parents ne kaha Naina ko bhi
sath le jao, bohut sari argument ke baad Raj maan gaya.




Malda, situated in North Bengal, Malda main ek chota sa village hai,"Gaur", this place is very important in Bengal history,
yeh jagah King Shasanka ka waqt Bengal ka Capital tha, jab India main Mughal empire tha, tab bhi yeh jagah Bengal ki
history main bohut important thi, filhhal yeh jagah totally isolated hai, zyada log bhi nahin rehte,sirf winter ke waqt local log
yaha picnic manane aate hai, filhaal West Bengal Government ne yeh jagah ke taraf dyan diya hai, maintainance ki ja rahi hai,
Archaeological Department se bhi log aakar research kar rahe hai, bohut sari objects, structures & materials dug up from this old
site, lekin kuch din pehle famous archaeologist Mr.Joshi ke murder ke baad sare kam main foolstop lag chuka hai, local logo ka kehna
hai yeh jagah par sharp(curse) hai.government ne yeh case C.B.I ko diya hai.


First time main fiction likh rahi hu, life main first time, plz batana kaisa laga

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Raj ne ek hafte main case ko study kiya, case main involved logo se baat ki, Forenchic report ko study kiya, place ke bare main information
collect kiya, but usse koi conclusion to door ki baat hai, koi clue bhi nahin mila, andhere main teer chalane ke barabar hai yeh case, but he
is sure yeh kisi bhoot ka nahin kisi human beings ka hi chakkar hai. Naina almost packing kar chuki thi, but uski dil ki haalat usse bhi nahin
pata thi, she feels something very strange.

Then one fine morning in October, the festive season, they began driving,stopping only occassionally to stretch their legs & eat something.
The drive is a long one, & they reached Malda almost in evening.Each of them maintain slience in this time.


Gaur stands upon a very isolated site, as there is no habitation nearby. The village & the market are a good distance away,Gaur actuaaly Bangladesh ka border
hai, thats why aas pas ke area main sirf kuch B.S.F camps hai,many Historical monuments are situated in Gaur,pehle Gaur ke paas se river Ganga behti thi, now
the river changed its way.Right on its banks, rises a palace built of white marble.Issi palace main Archaeological Department ke log bhi reh rahe the, ab issi
palace main hi Raj & Naina rehenge.Nobody knows who built the palace upon this remote & lonely site.But yeh palace Raja o ki pleasure house thi.

Raj ko jagah bohut pasand aayi, par Naina ko jagah kuch khas pasand nahin aayi, the emptiness of that abandoned marble mansion bore down on her like a
curshing weight.


Long drive ke baad dono bohut tried ho gaye the,raj to sote hi sapno ki duniya main chala gaya, Naina raj ke sath apne ristey ke bare main sochne lagi.
dono ki arrange marriage the.Naina M.A complete karne ke baad uske gharwalo ne uske liye ladka dekhna suru kar diya tha.Naina ki family bohut
conseravative family hai, isliye Naina school se lekar collg tak kabhi ishq ke chakkar main nahin giri thi.first day Raj ke gharbhalo ne Naina ko dekh
kar pasand kiya tha, uske baad Raj ne ekdin aaya tha, Raj Naina ke taraf pure ek ghante main sirf ek baar dekha tha, lekin Naina ne Raj ko bohut acchi
tarah se notice kiya tha.Usse Raj pasand bhi aaya tha.Uske baad Naina ne Raj ko shaadi ke mandap main dekha tha.Bechara apni dhoti samalne main busy tha.
Suhaag raat main ghar ke andar aane ke liye Raj se sabhi ladkiyo ne pure 2000rs liye the.Naina bohut nervous thi,Raj usse pasand tha,par phir bhi woh ek stranger
hai.Raj ne usse kaha tha ek dusre ko samajhna bohut important hai,uss raat dono ke beech sirf ek dosti ka rista hua tha, koi physical relationship nahin hua tha.
Par shaadi ke thore din baad Raj ek case ke silsile main Delhi chala gaya tha,phone pe baat hoti thi, but sirf hello, how are u?,Take care, bye, isse zyzda kuch nahin.
& now this case.Naina hamesha sochti hai agar sirf case hi solve karna hai,to shaadi kyun ki?aisa sochte sochte when she felt asleep,even she dont know.


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