my first fanfic, plz see,updated 26.03.08 - Page 5

yaar plz tara tari update karo.r wait karte parchi na......plz jaldi karo.samjhi.??

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Raj & Naina both came back in the palace,Raj naina ko pura raasta le aaya apne baho main utha kar.at first Naina thora embrass feel
kar rahi thi,coz she had never been so close to any man except from her dad & her brother.It was totally a different experience to Naina.
She felt butterflies in her stomach,she did not know why,but she loved the feeling.Raj young hai,bohut charming & handsome hai.Intelligent
bhi hai,varna C.B.I par thori na hota.Naina kept looking at Raj from the corner of her eyes,ek baat par Naina sure hai Raj will never let her
down or Betray her.She can rely on him.yeh ek woman ka six sense hai,men ko judge karne ka,& she was sure about it.There something in his gaze
which made her hypnotised.Sirf ek problem hai Raj outgoing nahin hai,thora shy hai,jaldi kisike sath free nahin hota.First step usse hi barana hoga.
oh common main 21th century main belong karti hu,apne husband ke kareeb jane main kya prolem?Thank u so much god, & also thanks to my jhute chor.Ab iss
relationship ko aage barana chahiye,sirf friends ban kar kab tak rahenge?But SRK was right in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai,"pyaar dosti hai",uffff,mujhe bhi to kuch
kuch ho rahi hai.yes,I am in love,yehi pyaar hai.

Jiye chaye hai lamhe,bas yehi pe rukh jayen,
samne tum raho aur hum tumhe dekte jayen
Dil main hone lagi hai,meethi meethi si hulchul, &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p;tum raho sath jaise,mere aankho ka kaajal

saath din raat rahe,pyaar ki baat rahe aur rahe kuch na baqi, & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp;
Maine izhar kiya hai,sun meere saathi,
thora sa pyyar hua hai,
bohut hai baqi.
Raj was also not out of Naina's spell.He drawn to her by a magic. When he touched her,he felt a chill run through his body.Vaise Raj Naina par fida
Shaadi ke mandap main hi ho chuka tha.Naina in red benarasi saree, & four of her family members carried her in a piri.She kept her eyes hidden with a
beetle leaf,& they rotated her seven times around him.After that,he & Naina placed face to face & she removed the beetle leaf.This time they looked at each
other properly for the first time.Tab se Naina ke taraf Raj ka ek ajeeb sa attraction hai,par woh kuch bol nahin pata,kyuki usse lagta hai har chiz ka ek right
time hota hai.usse samaj main nahin aata Naina kya chati hai?Raj thought, ohh,women,if anyboby asked What is the thinnest book in the world?tab uska answer hoga,what men know
about women.Pyaar bhi bohut ajeeb chiz hoti hai.fruedian Psychology ki angle se dekha jaaye to,Human being ki conscious self was only the tip of an iceberg,a great
part of his mind being controlled by subconcious & also unconscious desires & passions over which he had no control.this desires & passions for somebody,is called
love.but whatever I love her,I need her.isliye log honeymoon par jaate hai,taki aapne chupe hue feeling ko express kar sake.Thanks mom mujhe force karne ke liye,agar aap nahin hote to mera rishta Naina ke saath,ohh,main
sochna bhi nahin chata.but ab iss relationship ko aage barana chayiye,Naina bhi yehi chati hai,varna jab maine usse uthaya,usne protest nahin kiya.
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se,
mohabaat ho gayi hai tumse,
meri jaan mere dilbaar,mera atwaar kar lo,
jitna bekaar hu main, & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; khud ko bekaar kar lo
mere dhadkano ko samjho, tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo
They were lost in themselves.Raj ne notice hi nahin kiya someone following them,isliye shayad kehte hai loves make people blind.Kaun hai woh admi?koi dost ya phir dushman?


I know yeh update bohut hi chota hai,but plz main itna hi likh paayi,waiting for u'r comments

hey madhu yeh ud choti thi par i likeit very much 😳 raj aur naina dono ki feeling ko tumne bahot acchi tarah se likha hai.i love the ud.i know k tum busy ho par plzzzz next ud jaladi karana ok. 👏

ab is pyaar me ye admi kaun hai???oh god...!!!
it's a superb update....plz update soon

dis was awesome update 👏 👏 👏

well described feelings of both of dem......

update soon

oooh..the songs were cool...just fitted with the scenes...and who's this admi now??? pyar me ye side effects kaha se aagaye???? 😉
anyways...it was a cool update..luved it

Next morning,a new day,but the sun not brightly shone that day,the day weather was very cloudly,& extremely hot.
Naina- lagta hai aaj barish hogi,actually acchi hai yeh garmi se to chutkara milegi,plz Raj aaj bahar mat jao.
Raj- no naina,mujhe police station jana parega,kuch logo se puchtach karni hai.
Naina- ufffff,duty & duty,aur kuch tum nahin soch sakte,boring ho tum
Raj- plz Naina,i promise main jaldi aa jaunga.
Naina- ok,yaad rakhna.
Raj- ok,Naina,bye
Naina- bye.

In Police Outpost,Ins.Alekh ne apna kaam kiya hai,3 log outpost par bethe hue hai
person1- kitni der hume yaha rehna hoga sahab?
Alekh- zyada shan-paati mat kar,bheja fry mat kar mera.chup chap beth
Just then, Rajveer entered in the outpost.
Alekh- good morning sir
Raj- good morning
Alekh- Sir,maine apna kaam kar diya hai,yeh log kaam kar rahe the.
Raj- sirf teen,baki kaha?
Alekh- sir,yeh log jo kuch mil rahe the uska hisab rakh rahe the.Khodne kaam jo log kar rahe the unlogo se baat karne ke liye aapko village jana parega.
Raj- ohhh,woh ladka,jisne first dead body dekha tha.
Alekh- Nahin aaya,kameena,samaj rahe ho na aap police ka jamela...
Raj- distgusting,ok,forget it,main mil lunga unlogo se.kuch kaam thik se nahin hota.
person1- sahab,hume kuch nahin pata,hum uss murder ke baare main kuch nahin jante.jo chiz milli thi humne barabar ki hisaab bhi de diya hai
Raj- aap log jaiye,main aap logo se baad main baat karunga
peson1- sahab plz,aise roz roz ki paresani,yeh jamela..woh log phir se kaam suru karna chate hai,par hum kaam mahin karenge.
Raj- main aap logo ko bata deta hoon,aap log jamele main fas chuke ho.aap log jaiye,aap logo ne to kuch nahin kiya,darne ki koi baat nahin hai.
After they left
Raj- Inspector Sharma mujhe F.I.R book chayiye
Alekh- kyun sir?
Raj- mujhe chayiye,abhi issi waqt
Alekh- koi Impartant case nahin hai,yaha par crime zyada nahin hota,ek hua to saala halla mach gaya.
Raj- Impo*nant hai ya nahin woh main dekh lunga Inspector
Alekh- ok
Raj F.I.R book le kar beth gaya,& started looking it in full concentration & he lost in it completly.Uska concentration break hua Alekh ki baat sunkar
Alekh- lagta hai bohut zor barish honewali hai.
Raj looked at his watch,oh god,Inspector Sharma main chalta hu.
Alekh- ajeeb hai,cyclone ban kar aata hai tornado bankar jata hai,par banda bohut smart hai.

Raj came back in the palace,
Raj- Sorry Naina,main late ho gaya,extremely sorry
Naina- Lunch ready hai,kha lo
Raj baat nahin baraya,chupchap fresh ho kar lunch karne beth gaya.
After lunch,it started to rain.
Raj- ohh, Naina,kitna accha mausam hai,chalo iss mausam ko mazza lete hai
Naina- tumhara dimak kharap ho gaya hai,pneumunia ho jayega.
Raj- common yaar,lets go
Raj took her outside, in the garden.Naina ek tree ke neeche khadi thi,while Raj,
closed his eyes,opened his arms & began circling slowly & enjoyed the rain.His flexed muscles,the way his black shirt struck to him,Naina felt a desire,
emotions rising in her.
Raj pulled her in rain,she completly drenched in rain.Raj could see each & every curve of her body as her white clothes struck to her body.

Fiza parto asar hawaka hota hai,mahobbat parto asar adawaka hota hai,koi aisehi kisika deewana nahin hota,kuch kasoor to nighhoki hota hai

Raj could not control himself.He pulled Naina near to him.They both started breathing heavily.His thumb rub her back slowly but seducingly.He slowly
increase the grip.His other hand moved her hair which fell on her face.The pleasure was too much for her & she hugged hin tightly.

Suddenly,kuch bilkul Raj ke paas se nikal jate hai,both were terribly shocked,they saw a knife got struck in the tree.
Raj knife le kar,Naina ke sath andaar chala aata hai.Naina was still shivering.Raj dekha chaku ke sath ek note attach hai,Raj read it,
First & also Last warning,case chor do.warna bohut bura hoga.
Raj-(in a determined face)-issi ka intezar tha,dhamki ka,but Rajveer Chaterjee yeh challenge accept karta hai,Challenge Accepted.


thats all for today,waiting for your comments

wow what a ud aur yaar aalekh k dialogue uske to kya kahene main to bas hase hi ja rahi thi.raj aur naina ka romance kaafi accha tha par knife ki entry acchi nahin thi 😆 plzzz next time aisa mat karana.