'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 24

😭 omg saanchi ki baap aur bhai ki galati ki waje se saanchi aur jeet ko alag hona pad raha hai.


a really emotional part every emotion was really well described and the poems were really awsome.

a big jappi for u for writin such a wonder ful part 🤗

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

😭 omg saanchi ki baap aur bhai ki galati ki waje se saanchi aur jeet ko alag hona pad raha hai.


a really emotional part every emotion was really well described and the poems were really awsome.

a big jappi for u for writin such a wonder ful part 🤗

Hi Jyothi....hey glad htat u felt this episode and descibed kar payi naa theek se😊 poems bhi fine na....wah kya jhappi hai..😃 flashback bhi over hoga jald..

Originally posted by: togepe30

😭 how very sad 😭 😭

sad...sad...kitna confusion bhi na..ab kaise hoga..next episoe will help u to know the exact situationbefore flashback..hope u like that too Vandu....waise tumhare assuu mujhe dekhe nahi jatey lekin zindagi kabhi khushi kabhi gam...

Originally posted by: sanightingale

Goddd..maine socha hi nahi tha ke ye reason hosakta hai..phew..bechara Jeet yaaaar 😭 😭 ... aur Saachi bhi 😭
brilliantly written didz..jeets and saachis reactions to the sad truth 😔 ..and well written poems...ekdum pure scene ko explain kardeti hain, in a diff way...waiting to knw wat happens finally..milenge aakhir mein ya nahi???????? cont. sooon...but dont stress urself...love yaaaa!
p.s. rcvd mail, will reply soon:)

Oh oh.. am happy that u liked this episode and peoms as well...haan yeh to pata nahi milengey ya nahi...har story ka end ek jaisa nahi hota na...lekin haan itna to hai ki flashback khatm hoga... yup will not stress myself..hopefully..hehehhe...luve u too....araam se reply karo..no problm..

Episode: 29

18-07-07

Jeet: Saachi ..kash Ashu…..Saachi aur Main miley nahi hotey..kash aisa hota main wahi purana Jeet hota… Saachi ne mere uss Dil ko dastak dedii..jahan main apne liye bhi kuch sapne dekhne lagaa tha…apne aap pe sharm ati hai..Papa shayad khaffaa hongey ki Beta tu mere katilo ke ghar se rishta jodhna chahta tha…(Jeet had tears filled in his eyes)

Ashu heard this and knew Jeet and Saachi getting together is just impossible…

Kya kuch taqdeer kar sakti hai?

Inhe phirse ek kar sakti hai?

Lagta to mujhe ab yeh namumkin hai,

Jo beeta inpar sulajhna bahut mushkil hai…

07-08-07

Jeet as was leaving for office, he took his coat and as he kept his hands in the pocket he got hold of the ring he had bought to give it to Saachi and propose her.

Jeet on first instance felt like throwing it away but his heart didn't let him do it and he had tears in his eyes but just kept it in the corner of the cupboard and as he closed the cupboard he again opened and saw it ..and sat on the bed…kissed the ring..and as he saw his dad's snap he said, 'nahi papa, main kamzor nahi padunga..' he left the room throwing the ring on the bed…

18-08-07

Saachi was wearing her dupatta and getting ready to go to office, she looked at her scars on her arm and remembered how Jeet cried and was totally upset with her pain and how he held her close and gently touched and tried to ease her burning sensation… Saachi smiled remembering those moments and realised, they r seprated forever…she cried and her mom came into her room to tell her she is getting late but she was crying and her mom knew Saachi has to bear this pain…she had got to know along with saachi when they were at Canada that when her son Kushal

went to his friend's sister's wedding in Delhi years back this accident took place and her husband supported and helped Kushal to come out of the custody by a false sucicde story…

Kuch saal pehley hua gunaah aaj bhi zinda hai,

Gharwalo ke gunnah se hum kitne sharminda hai,

Saachi tera pyaar bhi aaj ruth gaya hai,

Meri bacchi tera chehra kitna murjhagaya hai…

14-09-07

Saachi got to know the good news that Masumi delivered a baby girl. There was a small party organized by Atish for his family and close friends. Saachi and Jeet were invited and Saachi though not in mood to go went just with that little controlled emotion to see Jeet after so many days…atleast hear his voice… Saachi knew that Jeet may not come to the party, after all that happened it may be more difficult for him to see her face … still somewhere she hoped to see him …

18-09-07

Masumi was with her baby girl

Saachi reached she was very happy to see the little bundle of joy but her face had a mark of grief and Masumi could feel it. As SAachi saw around Jeet wasn't there among all Atish friends, she had more disppointmetn and when she got to know that Jeet is leaving Mumbai and shifting to Delhi next year she felt this may be the last time she willl meet him. She wanted to leave the place as she couldn't act as really happy in front of all for long…

Tumse milkey jana tha

zindagi haseen hai,

Aaj judaa hue to

zindagi lagti kitni kathin hai,

Aajaoo ek baar

dekhlun main tumhe jeebharke,

Inn naino mey tasveer basalun

Tum ab bhi sathi zindagibharke…

Saachi was sitting wondering if she will never meet him and Jeet entered righ tin front of her..Saachi saw him and a smile came on her face but Jeet saw her and he tried to look at the other side, Saachi realised lots has changed… When all had given gifts they decided to have a small antakshri to enjoy with the grandparents wanatign to enjoy as Masumi and Atish parents had come all the way to see their grand child. All sang songs with taking a word from each song of the previous song… and sinign with a sogn having the word in first mukhda. Atish was sitting next to Masumi and Jeet was sitting next to Saachi as people in between had left. Both were not itnersted in playing but didn't want to disturb the mood…

Masumi sang with her baby girl 'Pari': Mere ghar aayee ek nanhee pareechaandanee ke haseen rath pe sawaarus ke aane se mere aangan mekhil uthhe fool gunagunaayee bahaardekh kar us ko jee naheen bharataachaahe dekhoo use hajaar baar

Atish took the word 'Chandani'and sang:

Yeh raat yeh chaandni phir kahaan, sun jaa dil ki daastaan
Hey pedo ki shaakhon pe
Pedo ki shaakhon pe soyi soyi chaandni, pedo ki shaakhon pe
Tere khayaalon mein khoyi khoyi chaandni
Aur thodi der mein thak ke laut jaayegi
Raat yeh bahar ki phir kabhi na aayegi
Do ek pal aur hai yeh samaa, sun ja dil ki daastaan

Saachi sang taking the word 'Do' sang with a lot of emotions… Jeet looked at her and felt her words:

Do nainaa aaur yek kahaanee thodaa saa baadalthodaa saa paaneeaaur ek kahaaneechhotee see do zeelon mein wo bahatee rahatee haikoee sune yaa naa sune kahatee rahatee haikuchh likh ke aaur kuchh jubaaneethodee sai hain jaanee huyee, thodee see nayeejahaa ruke aansoo wahee pooree ho gayeehai to nayee fir bhee hain puraaneeyek khatm ho to doosaree yaad aa jaatee haihothhon pe fir bhoolee huyee baat aa jaatee haido nainon kee hain ye kahaanee

Jeet sang taking the word ' naina' with a stern face

Nainon Ki Mat Suniyo Re Naina Thag Lenge

Naina Thag Lenge, Thag Lenge, Naina Thag Lenge

jagte jaadu phukenge re jagte jagte jaadu
jagte jaadu phukenge re neenden banjar kar denge

bhala manda dekhe na paraya na saga re
nainon ko toh dasne ka chaska laga re

nainon ka zehar nasheela re
baadalon mein satrangiyan bonve
bhor talak barsaave
baadalon mein satrangiyan bonve
naina baanvra kar denge
naina thag lenge thag lenge naina thag lenge

and couldn't control his emotions and went away as the song ended

This was the last time they had met…

Flashback over……

01-01-08

Present sitting in their car, their eyes looked at their respective cars, Jeet took a look at her car from the rare mirror and felt very very emotional…

Saachi saw his car in front and felt is this the last time…Jeet is leaving Mumbai she knew…

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😭 .......AWWW..........THIS IS TOO SAD!!!!!! 😭 😭

aww such a sad part cant wait to read what happens next. well written part bhoomi. cont soon

Originally posted by: togepe30

😭 .......AWWW..........THIS IS TOO SAD!!!!!! 😭 😭

awww Vandu....areeee cant see those tears...but u know zindagi may hotahai...sab kuch miley to zindagi kitni seethi lagedi..zindagi ki raah hai hi tedi medi.....

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

aww such a sad part cant wait to read what happens next. well written part bhoomi. cont soon

hmm sad to hai..flashback over bhi..thanks for appreciatign dear...this was the base on which i first started my story ..so am glad i could may this far journey in writign this ff..so happy ot to knwo u al in this ...hey Jyothi ya will post the next as i finish it...😃..have becoem little lazy u see..😆

yeh kya hogaya bhoomi 😭 😭 . But very well written parts also the poems.