'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 23

Baapre.. itna confusion ... I knew Sacchi wud refuse him when he porpose so was not that shockd but after her inkaar they wud share such romantic moments toghtr in his room ..that's what I never imazined .....nice srprise Bhoomi ....

great part. but still lots of confusion why did saachi refused????????????

What's her prob???...bechara jeet ..nice parts bhoomi..esp reading the romantic bits...wonder why she is rejecting the chap when she obv feels the same...

Originally posted by: togepe30

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Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalti rahi... 😭
Mujhko saza di pyaar ki 😭
Aisa kya gunah kiya jo lutt gayee... 😭
Haan lutt gaye 😭
To lutt gaye hum teri mohabbat me!! 😭

Hi Vandu....ya dil to tadapega....and I hope u feel the genuiness why Jeet and Saachi juda hote hain... 😭ab kya karein story yehi kehti hai...hope u like the next crucial episode as well...

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey bhoomin a wonderful part yeh saanchi toh meri samaj se bahar hai why did she say no is still a big?


lovely part loved every poem the emotions were really well descirbed.



gr8 part cont soon

Hi jyothi just wait for this episoe in my 27 episode that i am posting it now..all answers r given.. hope u liek the way i ut the story ... thanks dear for appreciatign the poems..ya it takes emotions to feel it as i feel to write them instantly ..😃

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Baapre.. itna confusion ... I knew Sacchi wud refuse him when he porpose so was not that shockd but after her inkaar they wud share such romantic moments toghtr in his room ..that's what I never imazined .....nice srprise Bhoomi ....

hi hi....Sara confusion to rahega hi naa..btu not for log..am postign hte next episode sab kcuh cear hoga..and very soon flashabck bhi over...hmm u flet Saachi wil say no..lekin yeh romance nahi socha..there is a littel connection to show this in my next episode.. thanks dear for appreciatign my efforts...hope u like the next crucial episoe..

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great part. but still lots of confusion why did saachi refused????????????

Hi golu, yaa condusion hai but next episode will clear it in once..hope u like the episode..all ?'s will be answered..

Originally posted by: binidoshi

What's her prob???...bechara jeet ..nice parts bhoomi..esp reading the romantic bits...wonder why she is rejecting the chap when she obv feels the same...

Hi bini dear, Saachi ka problem areee batati hun in this next episode... u liked the parts na..😃feels glad u all r likign it... yup kyun ...ka jawaab milega jald..actually this was the bse for me startign the story in the first place..ehehhe

Originally posted by: sanightingale

haayeee 😳...dekho chodke...kis raste...woh jaate hainn..saare raste..wapas JEET ke dil ko aate hain 😉 😃
didzzzz...kya hua Saachi ko? itni confused state mein hai... 😕 and flashback kab khatam hoing?
mujhe jaaaanna hai ke kyaaaaaa hua..mast suspence haan...picture abhi baaki hai, mere dost???? 😆 😆 cont. soooooon, jhappi!!
San...
p.s. hope u rcvd my mail...

Hi...wow!! nic ewords yaar.haan sarey raastey Jeet ki taraf na..heheeh flashbakc will beover too soon..just after this episoe as this episode wil reveal the reason... ..suspense i dont keep for long... San mail..oh i havnt chaecked will check n tell u about the mail..😃

Episode : 28

16-07-07

As Saachi got up and saw she was beside Jeet sleeping on his chest…she realized what she was doing...And She with utter shock and feelgin of wrong… removed her hands from Jeet's shoulder and ran out…

Jeet was also taken aback by the way Saachi pulled her Hands out of his cuddled shoulders around her and he too went running behind her…

Kya hua ek pal mey chahat,

Kya hua ek pal mey darr ki ahat,

Kaunsa jasbaa tumhe chubbh raha hai,

Izhaar karnekeliye kaun rok rahaha hai…

Saachi had let her duppata behind, Jeet holding that dupatta ran after her. He screamed and told her to stop….it was midnight and absolute silence was all around…

Jeet: Saachi kya hua hai… ab se kuch pal pehle apne aap ko mujhe saupney mey tumhe jarasi bhi jhijhak nahi thi…ab achanak kya hua… kuch hi palo mey mere saayese bhi durr kyun bhagna chahti ho..

Saachi was out of breathe and she fell down..Jeet immediately held her in his arms…

Saachi: Tum mujhse shaddi to jhodo pyaar karna bhi nahi chahogey…

Jeet: Saachi…tum mujhse pyaar karti ho na?…. Kitna jyada yeh main samjh sakta tha...aur main bhi bepaanh pyaar karta hun, phir kyun hum ek nahi ho payengey?

Saachi got up stood and went a distance far.. she wiped her tears and said,

Saachi: Haan…main kehti hun…I love u ..I love u more than myself..main itna pyaar karti hun key aaj hamari shadi ho ya nahi hue hoti to bhi tumhe tan man sab deti…har maryada ko shayd toodd deti kyunki tumpar mujhe yekin vishvas aur bahot bahot pyaar hai…tumhare bina zindagi mere liye bhi angaro ke samaan hai…

Yeh Sach hai main tumse pyaar karti hun,

Tumhari banker rahu kehna chahti hun,

Har pal mey tum hi tum ho,

Har sans ki mehak tum ho,

Har yaad ki tasveer tum ho,

Har rang ki rangat tum ho,

Har muskaan mey tumhari chalak hai,

Har pal kadam lagey tumhari bhanak hai,

Tumhare pyaar mey kuch bhi karjaun,

Hass ke maut ko bhi tumhare liye apnaun...

Jeet had a huge smile on his face and he was about to come closer and hug her…her words had made him to just be with her life through…

Saachi: Lekin…aaj tum Saachi se pyaar karte ho...kal kar paogey? ???yeh jaan kar ki main Saachi Mishra hun…Abhigyan mishra ki laadli beti… hun! Kushal Mishra ki laadli behan…hun!

Jeet was shocked and he went two steps back…Saachi went two steps ahead and said,

Saachi: karogey mujhe shadii yeh jaankar ki main ussi Kushal mishra ki behan hun jiske car ke neeechey aakar tumhare papa ki jaan gayi … woh kushal mishra

jisne tumhare ankhon ke samney tumhare papa ki jaan li…

Jeet went two steps back again…as if those scenes came back to him...Saachi went ahead two steps and said,

Saachi: Itna hi nahi Abhigyan mishra jisney apne bete kushal ko bachane ke liye yeh sabit kiya ki tumharey pita ne atmahatya ki...Suicide… aur isliye weh khud gaddi ke samne aaye…tumhare kitni minnat ke baad bhi naa mere papa ne sunaa aur naa hi police ney…Kyunki tumhare papa crore's rupaiye ke karz mey dubbey hue the… mere papa ko kaise bhi kar Kushal bhaiyaa ko riha karna tha..isliye tumhari gavahi bhi kuch nahi kar payi thi…

Jeet: Nahi… tum tum…(feeling very uncomfortable) Unn logose judii ho…beti..behan…

Saachi: Kar paogey mujhse shadii Jeet? (she cried…) Mere papa ko jab pata chala tum wahi JK Jeet kalra ho Omprakash Kalra ke bete, unhoney mujhe yeh haqueekat batayi… aur main jaanti hunt um… (Jeet didn't let her complete her sentence)

Jeet: Kushal… Abhigyaan mishra…. Inka to naam tak main bardashat nahi kar sakta…chali jaooo ..jaoo tum… unkey ghar se main koi rishta nahi Rakhunga…Khooni katil hi nahi Insaaniyat bhi nahi rahi..Jhuthey hain woh log…chali jaoo tum…(he yelled at her…as he was very angry & very upset...)

Saachi went while Jeet walked to his house stepping his foot with anger… why did he love Saachi he felt guilty and also it was an end to his dreams…

Kya yeh hogaya? Kiska yeh dosh hai,

Judaa hum huee, ghogaya ab josh hai,

Tumse milkey lagaaaa tha…ooooo..

Tumse milkey laggaaa tha, milgayi khushiyaan saaari….

Khogaya pyaar ab to, kuch nahi hai ab baaki..

18-07-07

Ashu came to meet Jeet. Jeet was very sad and lost in his thoughts. Ashu kept his hand on his shoulder…

Ashu: Kya soch raha hai Jeet. Saachi ne kuch bataya kya baat hai...teri kuch baat hue...

Jeet told him about all that happened with a firm face. Ashu was himself very tensed with this; he didn't understand what to do. Ashu kept his hadn over his head and was confused what to say…

Jeet: Tujhe pata hai na Ashu, main kiss daur se guzara hun. Papa ko apni betiyon se kitna lagav tha, mujhse koi umeed nahi...

lekin Dia Di ki shaddi tey huee aur unhe yeh bhi andaaza hua ki bete ko business sikhake rahun... tab mujhe business mey shamil kiya mere manaa karne ke baad bhi...

Jeet: Uss dinko main kaise bhulun...jab mere Papa mere sath office se bahar jaa rahe the..unhone kaha tha, ki yeh sare karz sirf kcuh din ki baat hai..jo investment kar ke unhoney rakha hai..kuch salon mey woh munaaf itna deggi ki unki company unchayioo ko chuuegi…hum baat hi kar rahe the..aur speed se overtake karte waqt aakar Uss Kushal Mishra ne Papa jo mere sath footpath ke side pe chal rahe the…unhe thokar maarri aur papa mere samne ujhalke uski gaddi ke neeche aye , unki shirt bhi tyre ke pass thee...Ek majhli ki tarah maine apne Papa ko tadapte dekha uss samay... aur woh Kushal peeche dekha aur car aur speed kar bhaag gaya....

(Jeet was cryign and Ashu consoled him to relax... )

Gaadi ne takkar mari,

Papa ko lagey kitne ghav,

Rooraha tha main dekh

khoon ka badta bahaav,

Woh ek ek saans ke liye

kar raahe the guhaar,

Main kuch na karsaka

Hogaya tha kitna lachaar…

Ashu: Main jaanta hun, kaise tujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki tu kya karey, apne pita ke khone ka dukh ya phir katil ko sajha? Ya phir uss jhut ko badney se roke jahan Kushal ke pita ne tere papa ke naam par lagaya. Logo ki badtey taanney, karzdaro ki dhamakiyan, Maa ko sambhale, Dia dii ki shaddi ke baarey mey soche, ya phir company ko band karey…khane piney takki ki teri musubat main janta hun….woh to Tu hi karsakta tha…Tuney apni Pita ke marne par ek assuu nahi bahaya..balki karzdaroo ke pass gaya , himmat dikhayi kuch karneki…I am so proud of u Jeet.. U made everyone to respect u who thought u all were finished. People who talked and felt pity on u and ur father now respect him and take his name among the leading business men. Dia Dii aur Ria Dii ki shadiiyan kabil ladkon se karaya…Main to jaanta hun, aaj tak aise kitne asuu hain jo tune har ek se chuppake bahaye… Kyun Kyun Saachi teri nahi ho payi…

Kitna kathin tha safar aur woh bhawander,

Saikado muskiley aur Dukh ka khol samander,

Lachaar ho tutta nahi tu,

Khada hua bina saharey ke tu,

Maa aur behano Ko himmat bandhayi,

Papa ke har ek sapne ko pura karne ki kasam khai…

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