'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 26

lovely part. bhoomi. just cant wait wat wl happen next pls pls next part jaldi post karna

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part. the love b\w saanchi and jeet was very evident and the poems were par excellence but what is kushal doin here ?????????????????????

any ways love part and two jappis 4 u as usual . 🤗 🤗

cont soon

Hi jyothi...its great to know that u r enjying reading...yup trygin my best to try and describe everything...and feels nice that u felt the love between Saachi and Jeet...Kushal kya kar raha hai..yeh to next episode batayega....awww ur jhappis in this cold season..feels realy sweet and needed ..😆😆🤗thanks..

Originally posted by: golu_1677

lovely part. bhoomi. just cant wait wat wl happen next pls pls next part jaldi post karna

Hi Golu, areeeey oh ho..u r too eager to knwo agey kya hua...heheh actualy these days am gettign less tiem to write the episodes warna main to ek din mey hi jaldi jaldi bhejdeti to give in to ur excitement akhir Golu nekaha to baat manhi lun..but comp miley later need to upload hte pics....ab tak pics upload nahi kiye..so will try and do that ans send it soon..ok😃

I feel for Jeet so much ....completely undrstand what he is going thrw.... yeh ladai to khud se hai....dil mein pyaar aur nafraat dono hai.....ek dusre pe havi hojata hai .... oh oh .... the way u wrote Bhoomi ..i just cud feel the pain.. even Sachi is just too nice having a gud n dignified personality n sooooooo much in love.... Dlgs r just brilliant dear ....

Jeet ko aur na tadpao plz.... looking fwd to the next parts....

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

I feel for Jeet so much ....completely undrstand what he is going thrw.... yeh ladai to khud se hai....dil mein pyaar aur nafraat dono hai.....ek dusre pe havi hojata hai .... oh oh .... the way u wrote Bhoomi ..i just cud feel the pain.. even Sachi is just too nice having a gud n dignified personality n sooooooo much in love.... Dlgs r just brilliant dear ....

Jeet ko aur na tadpao plz.... looking fwd to the next parts....

Hi Sara,

u r not getting my offlines na...hey check i won Parody contest..here😆 comign to my story yaa I want that when people r juadaa for some reason the reason have to be really strong it cant just be Papa ne nahi kaha or the hypothethcical suddenly u get to knwo u have cancer...so I thought this story with the base of thsi reason separatign the two...later I decided t write this story... So feels really nice that u can understnad the hcarcters r right in their palces...nothing they shoudl behave like that wala feeling.....

Aww u r likgin the dialogues...hmmm interesting... i feel this episode posted in hurry...spellign mistaes were too many...feels so bad..but u all r wonderfl enoguh to encaourage me.. thanks..Jeet no naa tadpau...areee lets see...

Episode 32

01-01-08

As Jeet saw Kushal in his house, he got extremely angry…he went rushing towards him… he felt like getting hold of him and throwing him out of his house…but as he saw the two cute children sitting with their father…he felt bad to do this in front of them…he remembered how sweetly they spoke with him..And have recently lost their mother…Jeet felt sympathetic towards them…

Jeet: Kushal…who let u come in… leave from here…I Dont want to see ur face… (Kushal was about to say something that Maa came..)

Maa: Maine ander aney diya hai.. he wants to speak something with u…baat karlo Jeet.

Jeet: Maa aap..aap jantey ho? ..yeh kaun hai ?..Papa…

Maa: Mujhe pata hai …baat karlo Jeet…baat suneke baad apna jawaab dedena… (Jeet with lots of anger said)

Jeet: kya baat hai…Jo bakna hai bakoo aur mere iss ghar se jaoo, tumhe dekh mera khun khoul raha hai… sirf in bachoo ka lihaaz hai warna…

Maa took the kids to come with her inside…

As they went in Jeet immedaitely held Kushal's collar hit him one hard..

Jeet: Ab Bata kya kehna hai..Main bhi to sunu..itna sab honey ke baad bhi apni shakl leke iss ghar mey anee ki himmat kyun kar rahe ho…

Dekh tumhe mera to

khoon khoul uthata hai,

Dukh ka woh kaala badal

manoo zameen pe girjata hai,

Itnee Saal to muh chupaaye

kahin basey rahey,

Aaj kyun akaar

humdard bananey chaley…

Kushal looked guilty with what he had done…

Kushal: Main harek sazaa lene aya hun..jo bhi tum do..agar mujhe maarkar tumhara dukh thoda sa bhi kamm hota hai..to maaaro jitna maarna hai maroo mujhe..main tayyar hun..lekin meri behan ne to koi gunaah nahi kiya..ussey apnalooo..

Jeet realised what he is saying…Jeet pushed him away left his collar..and said…

Jeet: Kya sazaa…Tumne mere papa ki jaan leee hai…meri maa ko zindagi bhar ke asuu, merei behano ke sarr ke upar ka saya…itney saalo maine kitni mushkil se ekek intt khadi ki hai…jabki tum bail milney ke agley hi din Canada ravana hogaye…tum kya janogey hamara dard..tum aur tumhare baap ka naam ,shakl main nahi bardasht karsakta…koi rishta nahi rakhna hai..koi bhi.. (Jeet looked at him with a stern and angry face)

Jisney mere Papa ki jaan lee hai,

Ussey main Sazaa tabhi dila na paya,

Jisney Aaraam se zindagi bitadi hai,

Aaj phirse dekho koi pharyaan hai layaa...

Kushal: Main manta hun, mujhse gunaah hua…us waqt main accident kar dar gaya…lekin tumsab pe kya beeti yeh nahi mehsus kar paya…aaj jab mera koi apna.. meri biwi ki maut ankhon se dekhi…tab ehsaas hua kissi apney ko khone se insaan pe kya beetati hai… Main aaj tumhara dard sacch mey samajh ta hun,…aur apney liye sajaa chahta hun…mere pita ko main kasurwaar shayad naa samjhu…aaj main khud ek pita hun..aaj mere beton ke liye kuch bhi main kar guzru..sahi galat se jyada unki suraksha chahun....kyunki unsey jyada mere liye koi aur nahi… Jo bhi gunaah hua hai..woh mera hai mujhe police mey dedo..jo sazaa tum kaho woh main apnalunga…lekin meri pyaari behen..meri Saachi se rishta na todo…

(Jeet removed his wrist watch and threw it on the sofa, he folded his shirt sleeves and with anguish replied.)

Jeet: Behen… Papa ke jane ke baad apni beheno ki shaddi karne ke liye mujhe kitna kuch karna pada, tum logo ney mere papa ko ek kamzoor insaan banakey dikhaya… Unkey Naam ko badnaam kiya hai..Main kissi bhi halat mey Saachi ko nahi apna sakta hun...

Jeet feeling little emotional said: Main jaanta hun, jitna main tum logo se nafarat karta hun, ussey bhi jyada woh tum logose pyaar karti hai...

Kushal: Jeet..woh tumse pyaar karti hai…tumjaisa kahogey waisa hoga…main aur papa tum kaho to ussey nahi milengey, jaisa tum kahogey waisa karengey..lekin jiss behen ke ankhon mey main assuu tak dekh nahi pata tha…woh meri laadli behen Canada mey mere ankhon ke samne marr rahi thi..

(Jeet was shocked...he looked at him with a shocked face…)

Kushal: Jaise hi Papa ne bataya ki meri hi car se Accident hua tha..

to Saachi bahot hi shock mey ayi..woh yeh baat ley hi nahi paa rahi ti..ki uskey Bhai aur pita aisa kuch karengey..woh janti thi accident ke baad tumhare ghar ki halat kya hue hai aur tumhari..ussi hi din ussney knife leke hamare samne apne haath ki nass kaati…hamey sazaa de rahi ti..woh..

Meri choti si laadli behen,

Meri phoolo si nazuk behen,

Jissey goud mey utha jhulaa deta tha,

Jissey har khushi dene ka wada karta tha,

Keh gayi ki Bhaiyaa aapne kisika ghar ujada hai,

Kaise aankh milau Papane gunaah ko aur badhaya hai,

Woh mere gunaah ki sazaa akeley seh rahi thi,

Dard mey roo hatho se khoon baha rahi thi…

Jeet had tears in his eyes…feelgin the pain..and he wiped the tears before kushal notice that..

Kushal continued: Hum hospital mey le gaye … tumhare tab mobile pe phone ateey they hum mey se kisi ki himmat hi nahi hue kuch keh paney ki..phone kissiney bhi receiove nahi kiya…

1 week woh wahi thi..out of danger hone ke baad..Mom ne kaha ke unkeliye woh kabhi bhi aisa kadam naa le..akhir woh mom ko sazaa kyun de rahi thi..tab Saachi ne kaha ke mom ke liye woh zinda rahegi..aisa kuch nahi karegi… lekin…main jaanta hun..yeh zindagi tumhare pyaar ke bin..aur mere gunaah ke bojh ke neechey Saachi bahott tutt rahi hai.. woh meri bholisi, pyaari si Saachi to kahin khoo gayi hai…(kushal had tears in his eyes) plzzz Jeet main apne liye maffi nahi chahta sazzaa chahta hun…lekin apni behen ke liye uska pyaar…usey dedo..chahe to mujhe maardo…

Jeet controlled his emotions…: Nahi… Nahi Kushal aisa nahi hoga…main aaj hi dellhi jaa rah hun….Tum mujhe mere pita lauta do..main tumhe maaf bhi kardun… lein kya tum woh karsaktey ho?..nahi na..?aur Saachi ko apnalun to tum khush ho jaoogey na.. tumhare pita bhi….kya main tumhey khushi dekar Papa ko muh dikha punga…?aaj apni behen ke liye tadaptey aye ho…main kitniii baar dar dar gaya hun..mujhe to ghar ke ander bhi ane nahi diya hai… Tumhe maar kar, jaan leker koi sukun nahi.. main tumhari tarah nahi hun..main janta hun tumhare baachey yateem hongey jaise hum hogaye the…main itna bhi neechey nahi geer sakta naa jitna tum log gir chuke the.. (Kushal fell on his knees, holding Jeet's feet..)

Kushal: Jeet mere gunaah ki saza Saachi ko matt do..

Jeet didn't listen and went aside..Jeet's mom heard satndign on the stairs..Maa came..and called him to come inside… Kushal took his son's..they were sleepy and Kushal kept asking Jeet..Jeet..plzz..Jeet…but Jeet didn't look at him..he told his servant to close the door..and keep the car ready they need to go to the airport…

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wow a nice part but cant believe that saanchi tried to kill her self .........

this part wasd reall yamazing and really well written lovely part cont soon and a big jappi to keep u warm 🤗

great part. bahut emotional tha. well written. cont soon

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow a nice part but cant believe that saanchi tried to kill her self .........

this part wasd reall yamazing and really well written lovely part cont soon and a big jappi to keep u warm 🤗

HI jyoti...am glad thta u liked this episode..ya Saachi as an emotinal girl..i guess when u know ur parenst or family has done wrong..its really diffuclt to digest that fact..adn they did that to Jeet...so its like more pain for her.. i wanted to show her gettign weak at that poiint....and that shows how strong Jeet has been...for his family he has kept himself really strong..that little aspect i wanted to show..thanks for the jahppis dear..😃always love it..

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great part. bahut emotional tha. well written. cont soon

Hi Golu, glad u liked this episode too...emotional tha..hmmm.. will post as i complete my next episode... 😃