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Posted: 17 years ago
hey baghvan yeh kya hogaya i thought she tooo was in love with him then what happened suddenly lovely poems cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 why???????? is she ill?????????? ya dad nahi maney?
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Posted: 17 years ago
bhoomi read the last 3-4 part but wat is this saachi ne aisa kyon kaha??????? 😭

pls next part jaldi post karna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey baghvan yeh kya hogaya i thought she tooo was in love with him then what happened suddenly lovely poems cont soon

am glad u liked the poems...and why and whats happenign will reveal the reason soon in couple of episode..ekdam fast...😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

😭 why???????? is she ill?????????? ya dad nahi maney?

awww cant see those crying icons from u..but ya story mey ab to yehi haal hai.. why?? hmmm will tell u in few episodes.. i dotn stretch my story so u will get to knwo soon...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sanightingale

OOhhh Goddd!!!
y did Saachi say dat???? soooo saaad!!!
bechaara Jeet!!!! 😭
the bachchoon ka part was soooooo cuuuttteee.... 😆 liked all the episodes alooot...... 😃
good going Dii... 👏
post the nxt part soooon....waiting fr it..... 😊
take care...
Nida.

Hi Nida,

areee Saachi ne kyun kaha woh to jald pata chalega... haan JEET ka dukh to humse dekha na jayega..😭..but all happens with a reason na..will be posting the next episode and in few episoe it will be relveade hope u agree of the resaon ...😉baccho wala part cute tha..awww thanks dear..am glad that u liked it...encourage karne le liye ek big jhappi ur way Nida...🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi read the last 3-4 part but wat is this saachi ne aisa kyon kaha??????? 😭

pls next part jaldi post karna

Hi golu....hope u r enjoyign whatevr u r reading..and ya wil be post the next epiosde soon... reason kya hai..u will get to know😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 27

08-07-07

Ashu was in Jeet's room trying to understand what happened and the reason behind this.

Ashu: Jeet hum sab dekh saktey hain Saachi loves u… Mujhe nahi malum woh jhuth kyun bolke chali gayi..Lekin yeh sach hai ki uska pyaar tere liya utna hi hai jitna tere dil mey…

Ashu called up Masumi and informed her, she was shocked...and she too felt Saachi loves Jeet why is she not accepting?

Inki chahat kitni pak aur sunder lagti thi,

Jodi ko dekh dil ki khushi badhjati thi,

Manoo sab ko inkey pyaar ki bhanak thi,

Ab achanak Saachi ne kyun naa kardi thi?

12-07-07

Ashu and Rithika went to Saachi's house to meet her and speak with her..

Ashu: Saachi, Hi kaisi ho

Saachi with a firm face said: theek…

Ashu: Jhut bolne ki practice ho rahi hai..

Rithika intervened: Ashu.. jaanedo…Saachi..humey Sunna tumne Jeet se kaha ke tum ussey pyaar nahi karti…

Saachi: Sunaa hai …Sunanewaley ne Sach hi bataya hai..

Ashu got angry: Lekin tumne sunanewale ko jhuth kyun kaha..woh Jeet yehan tumhare pyaar mey tadap raha tha..badal raha tha…pyaar ke liye marr mitne ko tayyaar tha….aur tumne ek tarfa pyaar kaha...mushkil naa badaoo kaha…(he later calm down as Rithika told him) kya baat hai..hamey bataooo ..agar tumhare parivaar wale khilaf hain to hum kuch hal dhundengey..

Saachi got very upset she got up and said: Maine jo kaha kisike dabav mey akey nahi...balki apni marzi se…aur jo kaha jo huaa woh mere aur Jeet ke beech ki baat hai main kissi aur ko haq nahi deti mujhe kuch aur kehne keliye….just leave now… she went inside and Ashu and Rithika with her arrogance went away.

Ashu knew Saachi was crying bitterly before they came and that showed on her face…he was worried what had happened…

Masumi and Atish also tried to get to know what had happened with Saachi but nothing came out… Ashu and Rithika informed Jeet's mom what happened and told that is the reason Jeet is not gogin to office and is disturbed..Jeet's mom was very sad and her health became bad….

Mere bachhey ka bahot dil dukha tha,

Abhi abhi to woh hasna jaan raha tha,

Ab phirse sanjeedgi issey gherlegi kya?

Ya phir taqdeer humse muh pherlegi kya?

16-07-07

She called up Saachi to come and meet her once..as soon as Saachi heard that Maa is not keeping well she rushed immediately to meet her…

As Saachi entered Maa's room she saw Jeet sitting besides her…

Jeet saw her and went out of the room, already he felt guilty that with his life Maa was also getting hurt….

Maa: Mere Jeet se pyaar nahi karti..(she had tears)

Saachi wiped her tears: Maa aap apna khayal rakho..plzz.yeh sab aap mat sochiye.

Maa: Jeet bura ladka nahi hai.. Saachi woh tumse kitna pyaaar karta hai..tumhari ankhen to kehti tum pyaar karti ho..phir..

Saachi was now getting emotional herself….: Maa kuch nahi ho sakta..kuch nahi…

Maa: Bataoo kyun?

Saachi: Maa Jeet mujhse kabhi shaddi nahi karega..kabhi nahi..main jaanti hun.. main iss rishtey ko yehin khatm karna chahti hun…

She went out crying and Jeet was at the room door he had heard everything. As Saachi was rushing out of the house… Jeet rudely held her arm and pulled her back…

Saachi: Jeet jane do mujhe…

Jeet: tum yehan aoo..He took her to his room..

Jeet: yeh deewarein rangne ke liye tumne samjhaya…ab jab rangna chahta hun to tumne Kala rang bhayega keh ke chal di…

Mujhe jeena to tumne sikhlaya,

Pyaar ka meetha ehsaas bhi dilaya,

Ab jab main jeena aur pyaar karna jaan gaya,

Tab kyun mere hathon se apne haath nikal liya…

Saachi looking at the wall…she cried .. .

Jeet: Tum mujhe bataoooo Saachi kya baat hai..main kyun tumse shadiii nahi karunga…pehle to yeh bataoo kaise tumne uss din kaha tum mujhe pyaar nahi karti..aaj ankhon mey ankhe dalke kahoo..aaj koi barsat ka sahara nahi..jahan tum apne asuu chuppa jaoogi.. dekho meri inn ankhon mey aur kaho….

Saachi just weeped… Jeet saw her crying and his heart was feeling the pain… he felt he gave her the pain, the way he ha held her arms tightly…he hit his hand hard on the table which was of glass and it broke.. Saachi immediately tried to stop him and as saw blood coming she took her dupataa and tried to tie around the wound but constantly crying.

Saachi: Jeet..aisa matt karo…tum jantey ho tumhara dard mera dard hai…main tumhe dard mey kaise dekh sakti hun…

As she tied her tears were falling on the wound..and Jeet held her face with the other hand and with love smiled..

Hai to tan man ka hojana ek sath,

Miljanedo hathon mey hath,

Saachi too smiled they hugged each other…

Aaj hamarey beech kuch nahi,

Koi sharm koyi hayya nahi,

Koi jhuth koi khauf nahi,

Koi darr koi bandhan nahi…

Jeet kissed her eyes to ease her and to stop her from crying as she was going out of breathe crying…

Saachi and Jeet kissed each other on cheeks, and Saachi kept her head on his shoulder and Jeet with soft gentle touch made her to calm down … Saachi's hair got entangle with his chain..and as they tried to settle it her hair was all over her face and Jeet looked it with love..they came close and Jeet kissed her on her lips…

Both cosily cuddled each other and the grasp was as soft and as silk… they didn't realized the intimacy with which they cuddled.

Rokna mann ko bahot mushkil hai,

Yeh dimaag ki tiki kabtak mehfil hai,

Prem mey jab jism jaan aatma ek hojati hai,

Dil ki haton pyaar mey behneko majbur karjati hai…

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalti rahi... 😭
Mujhko saza di pyaar ki 😭
Aisa kya gunah kiya jo lutt gayee... 😭
Haan lutt gaye 😭
To lutt gaye hum teri mohabbat me!! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey bhoomin a wonderful part yeh saanchi toh meri samaj se bahar hai why did she say no is still a big?


lovely part loved every poem the emotions were really well descirbed.



gr8 part cont soon

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