'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 25

Just read the last two parts...that was some twist..so sad yaar.. 😭 ..v..well written... the songs in the antakshari so apt..n those luvely poems..just fab...

Originally posted by: golu_1677

yeh kya hogaya bhoomi 😭 😭 . But very well written parts also the poems.

chalo flashback to hogaya na...ab present mey atey hain...lol.am happy that Golu u liked my style of writing..will keep on improving and ya glad to knwo u r likign the poems too...😃

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Just read the last two parts...that was some twist..so sad yaar.. 😭 ..v..well written... the songs in the antakshari so apt..n those luvely poems..just fab...

Hi Bini.....so raaz lata chala na..ab u kow why dono judaa heee the and flashback bhi khatm ...just in two episode maine judaa kiya re...main bh na..lol.. hey u liked the antakshri song..thoda i needed nice songs..jo sujha likha... am happy u liked hte poems too..😃

Episode 30

01-01-08

Back to the day they r in…. They have seen each other and sat into their car and had gone through the whole series of meeting each other…and upset with the way they have to put an end to their relationship.

Jeet driving his car. Jeet and Saachi both in the car r listening to the radio and the song is playing… Tumse milkey…

Jeet sings along as these lines came…

maine kiyaa, hain raatadin bas teraa hee intajaartere beenaa, aataa nahee, yek pal muze ab karaarhumadam meraa mil gayaa, hum tum naa honge judaahumadam meraa mil gayaa, ab hum ...........(pause) hogaye... judaa

Saachi sings alogn as these lines came..

mere sanam teree kasam chhodenge ab naa ye haathye jindagee, gujaregee ab humadam tumhaare hee saath

apanaa ye waadaa rahaa, tum se naa honge juda (she pausd) hogaye…judaa

Both sang listening to the radio…

tum se mil ke, ayesaa lagaa, tum se mil kearamaan huye pure dil ke, aye meree jaana-ye-wafaateree meree, meree teree, yek jaan haisaath tere rahenge sadaa, Mann se to kabhi naa honge judaa

Both had tears gogin different routes as Jeet turned his car towards left and Saachi's car was gogin straight. Jeet had this last day in Mumbai and he was gogin to Delhi the next day, handing the branch responsibility to Atish.

Jis rastey se main guzru

koi na jaaye tere ghar sey,

Koi na rasta dikhta

jahan tera deedar ho sakey,

Judaa hogaye hum tumsey,

Shayad milsakey agley janam mey…

As Saachi's car was going the other way, they heard a loud noise of the mob, when Saachi's boss asked the driver , he told the slums near the other road were upset with the demolition and so came on the road and in that area creating nuisance. Saachi suddenly realised Jeet's car had gone through the same road, she asked the driver to stop and turn to that lane for a moment, but her boss and the driver told its not safe and its better they reach home quickly..Saachi got upset and told she wants to get down; she opened the car door from the other side and left…

As she saw the lane, Jeet's car was surrounded by the mob and they with sticks were breaking the glasses of the car, Saachi got much tensed and ran towards the car Screamign Jeet!!! Jeet!!! ….

Jeet who was inside the car had dropped his head down to protect himself. He bent and was not at all hurt but as he heard Saachi calling his name…he tried to get a look from behind and saw her running towards his car with tensed eyes… he looked in front the mob who realised were alreted that someone is running towards them…

Jeet didn't understand what to do, he kept looking at both ends… the mob were around 30 people with sticks in their hands and extremely angry… Saachi reached and immediately one of the Person form the mob held her hand as she was about to take a look inside the car to see if Jeet was fine… Jeet could sense that…

Saachi: Jeet tum theek to ho na…(to the person from the mob holding her hand)Mera hath chodo, janedo hamey..Jeet ko agar kuch hua to main tum sab logo ko nahi chodungi..(she cried but didn't realised that She had indeed got herself in a big problem)

The mobs took petrol burnt a piece of cloth and were about to throw it on the car…

Saachi heart was shocked, she culdn't get herself out of the hands of the person..and kept trying hard to save Jeet and go towards the car… the person held saachi's waist and looked at her from top to bottom while she hadn't realised it , she was just thinking to save Jeet some how..she cried for Help!!! Police!!! Jeet …

Tumse badkar kuch nahi,

Karu dua tumhe kuch ho nahi,

Tumhari fikr kuch itni hai,

Apni sudh mujhko nahi hai…

As the person from mob took her close and removed her duppatta from her neck Saachi felt scared…she then realised she herself will be in trouble, the person took the dupatta slowly from her neck keeping his hand too close to her body and held the duppataa and wrapped around his neck and laughed…said, 'CChori chikni hai…Woh to gaya hum sab hain tumhare sath' the other people laughed with an eveil look and Saachi heart was beating faster… as they were about to throw the burnt piece of cloth..Jeeet came out and looked at Saachi…

Saachi immediately felt relieved that Jeet is alive..She went fell on his chest , held her one hand on to his collar and clinched in his fist tightly… while her other hand was held by the person.

Saachi: Jeet tum theek ho, chot to nahi ayii na..She spoek with breaks as her due to her shock and cries…

Jeet: Main theek hun,(without saying through his eyes he asked, Kyun yehan ayi ho…mushkil mey ajaoogee…main tumhe iss halat mey nahi dekh sakta…

Saachi too with her eyes replied: tumhe marne ke liye chodeti..ussey pehle main hi na marr jaun…She kept her head on to his chest…Jeet kept his hand on to her back giving her strength to relax…he is fine..

The person from the mob pulled Saachi and Saachi was in pain..She held her hand on to Jeet collar..there were around 30 people with sticks it was impossible for Jeet to fight all at one…

Jeet: Ladki ka hath chodd…mard hai to mard se ladke pehle dikha…

With those words the man left Saachi's hand and all came close to Jeet. Jeet kept Saachi to go to his back and stand…he wit his optehr hand signaled her ot run from behind..but Saachi held on his hand..signally she will go with him only..Jeet looked behind…at her.. feeling 'why do u love me so much' and got her answer without words saying it, 'First tell me why do u?' They were surrounded by the whole 30 people looking tough and with sticks in hand…Saachi was standing heldign her hands close to Jeet….

Aisa lag raha hai

maut samne khaddi hai,

Sath humdono hai

kya yeh akhari ghaddi hai,

'Jee't tumhe kuch ho to

us pal main dharti mey dafna hojau,

'Saachi' tumhe kuch ho to

tumhare pass apni bhi kabr bana dun,

Shayad issi kaaran

hum phirse sath hongey,

Iss janam mey nahi

to agley janam tumsey Milengey…

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hey lovely part i virtually had tears in my eyes a really well explained and expressed part aaj two big jappis for u 🤗 🤗 plzz cont soon

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part i virtually had tears in my eyes a really well explained and expressed part aaj two big jappis for u 🤗 🤗 plzz cont soon

Hi jyothi...awww thats so ncie to know that u felt this was a well written part..dotn know these parts have actually written in a flow...and havnt rechecked it ...thoda busy ho gayi thi...but still feels so nice that u liked it...thanks dear for ur apprecaition...two big jhappiss..wow!!1😳meri to nikal padiii...😳..will post it soon...😃

awesome part. good to see both of them together again

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome part. good to see both of them together again

Hi Golu, am glad u liked this part as wel...😃

Episode: 31

01-01-08

Jeet left Saachi's hand and went in front while Saachi was afraid how they can fight the 30 odd people with sticks..Jeet punched the one who had Saachi's dupatta around his neck… and pushed few others behind… rushed and held Saachi's hand tightly and said, 'Run!' And they both ran crazily behind while the mob was behind them…

Tumhe jisne zara sa bhi chuaa tha,

Jin buri ankhon ne tumhe dekha tha,

Main unn ankhon ko bhi noch leta,

Uss insaan ko kabhi na jhod deta,

Bhavnaao ney marney ko majboor kiya,

Samajhdari ney wahan se tab bhago keh diya…

Jeet ran while he knew these people may surely divide themselves to go through the short cuts and follow them and catch them in the end, the divider was very huge..Jeet helped Saachi to climb and jump on to the divider. After her he jumped from the divider and ran as he saw a Bus (public transport BEST) gogin to the other side..they ran quickly ..Jeet told Saachi 'Rush! We need to catch the bus or the mob will get us from the other lane..we have only this chance…' They ran with speed and just gave everything…Saachi was pushed by Jeet to enter the bus while Saachi climbed Jeet slipped and hanged holding to the rod.. Saachi and Jeet for a sec felt Jeet may fall under the tyre of the Bus…Saachi held him with all her strength and pulled him in..and Jeet came into the Bus , they hugged each other …

Jeet held her close enough… Saachi kissed him on his cheeks… After observing the people straign at both of them..Saachi realised how with love she kissed him, held him close and felt too shy ….Jeet looked at her and realised she was without her dupatta and he removed his coat and gave her… Saachi said, 'No' but Jeet just made her wear it…Saachi looked at him and both their eyes met and just felt, 'LOVE YOU'…

Tumsey Milkey jaana tha pyaar kya hai,

Tumsey Milkey aaj janaa pyaar ki taqat kya hai,

Maut se darr nahi lag raha tha,

Ekduje ko khone ka ehsaas daraa raha tha,

In ankhon mey kuch aur mujhe nazar na aye,

Tumhare liye chahat bas badti hi jaye…

They sat on the seat... Jeet called up Ashu and told him everything and to send a car immediately at the end destination of this bus...he also discussed not to be late to reach the eairport to take the flight to Delhi. Saachi heard she looked at him..with disappointment..Saachi tears fell on her hand…and Jeet felt the pain she was gogin through…

Pyaar sirf tumhisey karti hun,

Tumhare sivaa kuch nahi chahti hun,

Ab dooriyaan badti jaa rahi hai,

Jeeney ki chah bhi marti jaa rahi hai…

As the bus stopped safely at the final destination. Jeet helped Saachi to come down and took her to the place where he knew Ashu will come with his car…As they waited…Ashu informed him that its difficult to get through the traffic he wil need 10 minutes more..Jeet told him he will wait… Saachi was standing there and Jeet looked at her, she looked so pale and weak..then he thought why is he thinkging for her.?.in someway he knew why she is upset? and he cannot change the fact ever, ...this will be the last evening he is with her…

Jeet: Sachi thanks aaj tumne meri jaan bachalee…Tum nahi ati to sahyad aaj jalkey main bhi uss gaddi mey hota..

Saachi: Socha tha Dosti zinda hai..theek hai thanks bolkey Dosti ka rishta bhi nahi chahtey…

Jeet wanted to say..No way…but he stopped himself…he having any kind og relation with that family member..no..no….no… he kept saying to himself..

Saachi realised and felt really sad that he didtn even say…atleast ache dsot to rahengey…She knew..btu somewhere she hoped…Saachi was sweating…and Jeet asked,

Jeet: Paani pina hai kya… itna bhagne ke baad pyaas lagi hogi…main leke ata hun..

Saachi: Nahi…kissibhi cheez ki pyaas hi nahi rahi..

Jeet understood what she meant.. zindagi mey kcuh bhi pane ki ab koi pyaas hinahi rahi… (this was something he would say…he felt Saachi the innocent sweet beautiful girl ..what has happened to her…he felt very sad… and tried to control his emotions)

Mujhe hamesha sahara hausla deti tum,

Apni pyaari baaton se khushi bhardeti tum,

Aaj tumney Apna hausla kho diya hai,

Lekin tumhe sahara denewala koi nahi hai,

Main majboor hun tumhe yunh tadpa raha hun,

Mera Mann gavah hai main bheeter se dard soss raha hun...

Saachi: Jeet Delhi ki flight aaj hi hai na tumhari..Maa bhi jarahi hogi.kehna Saachi se kabhi mulkat nahi hogi lekin Saachi hamesha sabko apne dil mey basaye rakhegi..

Jeet with those words knew what she was tellgin to him…

Jeet: Haan aj hi..raat ki flight hai… dil mey anhon mey basake rakhte hain…saari yaadein, saaare dard….

Saachi realised he meant his pain and what happened in the past…

Saachi: Tumsey milkey maine kabhi nahi jaana tha..humareey beech yeh bhi rishta hai… mere apno ka tumhe gam deneka aur tumhare mere apnose nafrat ka….aur hum Ankhon ke dard tak to pahuche dard ki upaj jahanse thi…woh hi deir se pata chali…

Jeet loked into her eyes…even Saachi looked into his eyes ..even now they didn't had past in their eyes but the love they have for each other…

Tumsey Miley Naina merey,

Naina nahi yeh thagte hain,

Bheeter dil mey prem ki chaya tere,

Yehi Aaina asani se dikhlatey hain…

Saachi and Jeet were lookign into each otehrs eyes and Saachi's mobiel rang, her dad called,

Saachi: haaan..Papa..

Jeet was very uncomfortable now, realizing what he is doing with Abhigyans daughter, he has to always remember this..and keep distance from her..

Saachi: Papa..main theek hun, ghar pahuncti hun…

Papa: Saachi Kushal ka airport pe intezaar kar raha hun, woh mujhe ane mey deir hogayi traffic aur aaj kuch areas mey problem hcal raha than a..shayad Kushal ghar par hoga…tum ghar pr pahunchke dekhlo..

Saachi: Accha Bhaiyaa ko kehti hun … Woh ghar par hi hongey..unhe intezaar karne ki adapt hi nahi…

Jeet hearing this.that kuchal and Abhigyan were in town and ..felt like Saachi has no tproblem…she has so many people to take care fo her…and he was feeling for her… She has called her dad & bro to be with her… he was getting angry at himself for feelgin so much for Saachi..whcih had made him weak..

Saachi realised the change in Jeet;s body language and now he was uncomfortable stnadign beside her..

Saachi: Jeet main cab leke jati hun…she gave him the coat and kept on his arms..

Saachi walked a distance… and was upset…Jeet's car arrived…Jeet sat in it..Jeet as she Saachi…

Jeet: Aa jaao tumhe chodeta hun..

Saachi: Maine hamesha tumhe iss baat ki pareshani ka mauka nahi diya..ki tum mujhe chod sako…Main pehle sey hi chali gayi hun…taaki tumhe mujhe chodne ka kasht naa ho…

Saachi went and her face had this gried that Jeet was moved to tears…

hey lovely part. the love b\w saanchi and jeet was very evident and the poems were par excellence but what is kushal doin here ?????????????????????

any ways love part and two jappis 4 u as usual . 🤗 🤗

cont soon