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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
i read ur fic for d 1st time....honestly its awesome...........u r very good....keep it up.......update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
hey!!!!! raj naina ko jaldi milvado naa plz plz plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankyou all you guys for appreciating.

I'm glad u liked the concept.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nainarocks

hey!!!!! raj naina ko jaldi milvado naa plz plz plz

Karwadenge, karwadenge

well up till now the search for Rajveer was going on

now hes going to cme bac inthe ff so automaticaly Naina wll meet him

Remember to catch the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
sorry guys theres a prob with the internet so havent been able to ud

right now im using the dial up connection so il try my best to do it.

thanx for ur patience.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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FOUND RAJVEER


Two days later in Delhi…

Rajveer couldn't understand how the system worked. The handwriting on the piece of paper he had received by the unknown biker before coming to Delhi was the same as the messages he had received by the red shirt guy. He was dead so how could it be the same? There had to be someone else involved in this, someone who was constantly watching his move and perhaps was even planning it. So far everything was being handled by Alisha and he couldn't tolerate how she kept so many secrets from him. Already his life seemed a secret to him without any memory and she just increased the fuel in the fire. He sat on a bench reading the message again.

You've you hurry. When you reach Delhi, reach Red fort on Monday and make sure you give all the information away about the bank details otherwise your life is in danger.

Why couldn't the messages just reveal everything? Rajveer was just frustrated because all these messages just created a web, a maze in which he couldn't find a way out. Who exactly were these people and why were they after him? What was the deal with this bank account? He made a flow chart of all the possibilities in his mind. Then there was this mysterious bank account details that unknown people wanted and somehow coming to Delhi sent a sense familiarity through him. It felt like he knew everything around him. He even knew the way to the Red Fort without asking directions. When he reached here, he realized. As Rajveer sat on the bench still disguised as the father, he thought over everything. Alisha had disappeared that morning which didn't give him positive vibes. Suddenly the hair on his arms stood up. All of a sudden he realized that he was being watched.

His follower was a slim man with a 9mm handgun in his Levis' pocket. He hid behind a corner of building nearby and watched Rajveer as he sat still on the bench. The man flipped his black mobile and dialed the name 'sweetheart'. "He's already here, you know what to do." Once off the phone the slim man looked up towards Rajveer and was shocked to see that he was not there anymore. The tasks had to reach its finish or there would be drastic consequences. The slim man knew that and now if he didn't find Rajveer than he would be history.

Abhimanyu, Naina and Alekh had also reached the Red Fort now and were roaming around trying to catch glimpse of anyone known, especially Rajveer. If the information Abhimanyu had gathered from the computer was correct then there was definitely something happening there that day.

"Kya aap ko pakka yakeen hai ke yahee jaga hai Abhimnayu?" A skeptical Naina confirmed.

"I can see your concern Naina, but don't worry. I know we are at the right place."

They decided to split up and search. As they moved about Rajveer caught them by looking over from behind a wall. These people also were looking for someone. Perhaps they were also with the other guy who was following him. Now who was friend and who was a foe was too hard for Rajveer to decide. At the moment he couldn't trust anyone, not even himself. He kept an eye on all of them whilst standing quite closer to the wall making sure he couldn't be seen. His gaze fell on Naina and he couldn't take them away. There was something about her. He had seen her somewhere, but where?

Abhimanyu noticed the slim man walking around getting angry on the phone. He couldn't help but to over hear him.

"You better get here quickly…Yes he's disappeared…Something is definitely wrong. I think I'm being followed. Yes three suspicious people have arrived here and I think I've seen one of them before. Yeh it's this guy…what is his name? Whatever. Just get here and find that son of a b***h."

"Lagta hai yeh hame pehchaan chukka hai. I better alert Naina and Alekh to be more careful." Abhimnayu rushed from there to find the other two. They definitely were in the right place and he knew that now Rajveer wasn't far from them.

The wall was not enough anymore because Rajveer could see Naina coming his way. He had to escape before he got caught. But there wasn't any place from there to which he could run without being seen so he was in a dilemma. He just waited for her to approach, impatiently.

As soon as she reached the wall, she got pulled by someone and her mouth was covered with a strong hand so she couldn't even scream. She was really shocked but something happened to her as she stood close to the guy who pulled her in. The strong grasp, the sound of the breath and that similar smell was so familiar. Was it him? She struggled to get out and desperately wanted to see the person's face but the guy just wasn't budging.

Rajveer held her tight whilst he peeked from the side of the wall again at on lookers. His main concern was the slim guy who had been following him from the beginning. This woman seemed strong and fierce so he had to make sure he held her securely. Perhaps he could use her to get out of there without being harmed.

"Alekh, Naina kaha hai?" Abhimnayu rushed over to Alekh to warn him.

"She must be here somewhere."

"We have to find her. Look someone is here and he knows us. So we've to be careful. I'm sure Rajveer is here somewhere too."

"To phir dair kis baat kee? Let's go"

Again both split up. Alekh went to find Naina because her life was in danger.

The hand reminded Naina of the same hand that had grabbed her so many times for several reasons. This hand was definitely the same. It was him. She elbowed the guy but still he didn't budge. What was the deal with him and why was he after her? She could see that he was constantly looking for someone but whom?

Due to her moving about so much, the slim guy was able to catch a glimpse of her. This alerted him towards the wall. He made his way there pulling his gun out and holding it up in order to be ready to aim if needed. As he approached near the wall his gun got kicked down.

Rajveer managed to kick him down before getting out of there with Naina. He took out a knife and pointed it to Naina's throat whilst he saw the guy struggling to get up. "Don't move or I'll kill her."

That voice was enough for her to confirm that it was him. Finally she had found him. But why was he holding her like that? Didn't he recognize her?

"What? Hey who is she and why would I care. Just hand over what I want and you can go your way."

"You think I'll just do that? Think again." Rajveer moved back a few steps still holding Naina and he checked behind him to see if the escape was easy or not. Then he let go of Naina and threw her fiercely on the slim guy whilst he ran from there.

"Rukye Rajveer sir!" Naina shouted after him.
He froze. She knew who he was and the way she called his name seemed so familiar.

Just then Abhimnayu and Alekh arrived there and saw what was happening. Alekh came rushing over to Naina and then saw Rajveer staring at them. Alekh noticed that the slim guy was going for his gun and was going to aim at Rajveer so he quickly jumped in the middle and moved Rajveer away, throwing him on the ground.

The slim guy shot aimlessly throwing Alekh on the ground.

Everyone were shocked. Naina covered her mouth with her hands with shock. Rajveer noticed how Alekh dropped on the floor. Abhimanyu reached Alekh immediately and he couldn't stop the slim guy. He also prevented Naina from running after him because it would be pointless. She protested that they have to catch him but he kept on telling her not to do anything foolish.

Rajveer came over to a bleeding Alekh and looked at him. He definitely had some connection with this guy, otherwise why would he have saved his life? The face was familiar but still not clear.

With little life left Alekh acknowledged Rajveer and smiled. Finally they had succeeded in finding him. "Rajveer sir. We've found you." He spat blood.

"Who are you?" He had to find out who this was.

Police sirens could be heard in the near distance so Rajveer let go of Alekh and got up instantly. He stared at Abhimanyu and then at Naina. These people were something else. At that time he didn't have time to consult so he ran away from there before the police caught him.

Both Abimanyu and Naina were shocked by Rajveer's actions and couldn't understand why he ran away like that. She was going forward to stop him but Alekh's hand pulled her down again. Then he passed out. Now she was stuck between the two. Who should she take care of? Alekh or Rajveer.

In the distance Rajveer was seen running away and soon a woman came and took him away with her. Things were getting more complicated and now Naina thought that at least they have found Rajveer.

end of part.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
wow brilliant 👏 👏 👏 but whts this yaar u separated them again
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
mindblowingg.. but i hoped that on seeing naina raj would hav got back his senses .............. but looks like it is going to be different
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherlock_holmes

wow brilliant 👏 👏 👏 but whts this yaar u separated them again

sorry about that but don't worry soon they'll reunite.

he still is quite confused so he was bound to run away.

anyways thanx for reading and appreciating.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

mindblowingg.. but i hoped that on seeing naina raj would hav got back his senses .............. but looks like it is going to be different

thanx

hmmm, well it is not going to be that easy. Rajveer will have to go through a lot before he remebers everything. but he has already begun to sense familiarity in Naina so don't worry he'll be back with ehr in no time.

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