**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 7

Wow awesome part,
Cute,Romantic and Funny at the same time....
I cant wait to read Sweet Revenge! i love it already! 😳
cont soon 👏

lmao!! wut an awesome part!!
neev and prachi r soo cute
anjali and kavya hmm...butter? no..jam? how bot chocolate?? lol 😆 😆
and ahh angad bare chest.. 😍 ..
plzz cont soon..and ur new ff sounds really cool..cant wait to read it! 😃

LUVED IT!!!!! very funny n cute part. very romantic 2. cont soon. 😃

amazing loved it where do u get ur ideas from 😆 they r so exquisitely awsome

wonderful part !!! 👏 👏 👏
continue soon !! 😛

hope u cont soon plzz cant wait


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EXTREMELY sorry for the delay! lol my mind is not cooperating and every time i try to write it, the part turns out crappy so i have to rewrite! anyways hopefully i can continue soon k and again sorry about the delay!!

aaww its ok numera
take ur time 😳
cant wait for it 😃

In the morning, Kavya and Anjali wake up due to the sounds of their cellphones ringing. The both grab their phones with Kavya finding Angad on the other line, while Anjali hears Neev's voice on the other end. Kavya asks Angad, "Dude why are you calling so early in the morning, why didn't you just knock on the door!" Angad on the other end rolls his eyes at Kavya's unattentiveness replying, "Well maybe I would have IF I WAS HOME!!" Kavya jumps out of bed asking, "What? You aren't home? Where are you? IS KRIPA OKAY?" Angad sighs, "YES, geez relax! I'm at the gas station with Krips because the car stopped in the middle of nowhere last night! Anyways we just wanted to let you know we are coming home in like ten minutes!" Kavya nods to himself and then asks, "Wait where did you guys stay last night?" Angad grins, "Somewhere amazing… oh I think the mechanic is back with the car so we will see you in a bit!" Kavya then remembers Neev and Prachi and is about to run out the room to check their room when he hears Anjali saying, "Ok Prachi see you soon!" Kavya asks, "Wait Neev and Prachi aren't at home either?" Anjali shakes her head, "No they got stuck in the rain and had to get a hotel room. What do you mean by either?" Kavya fills in Anjali about Angad and Kripa's whereabouts while they both sport embarrassed expressions for not bothering to enquire about them last night. Some friends they are…

As soon as everyone returns to the beach house, they all sit down to have breakfast. Angad asks, "So… you guys got any ideas what you want to do today?" Everyone shrugs and then Angad continues, "How about we go swimming in the lake by the house?" Everyone agrees seeing as how they didn't feel like traveling much and especially not by the unreliable cars because of all the occurances last night. The boys head up stairs and get ready in swimming shorts, while the girls quickly change into their bathing suits. They all start walking towards the lake in pairs.

Neev smiles as he sees Prachi is angry because Neev happened to switch Prachi's bathing suit when he had changed around her clothes during the packing process. Her original bathing suit was slightly less revealing than Neev's choice. Neev catches up to Prachi slinging his arm around her neck whispering, "Hey it could have been way worse… like a TWO PIECE bathing suit!" Prachi gasps in shock and then glares while continuing to walk straight ahead. Neev catches up with her again and starts whispering how great she looks, only making Prachi tug at her sarong even more. She begins to smile as he continues to compliment her almost as if he is begging her to forget her anger. Prachi giggles thinking, "I so have him wrapped around my finger!"

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Kavya and Anjali walk hand in hand towards the lake when she suddenly lets go. Kavya stops walking and turns around, but sees only Angad and Kripa. He scratches his head in confusion until out of nowhere, Anjali jumps onto his back screaming, "YAY!! KAVYA LET'S GO! GIDDYUP! MUSH DOGGY MUSH!!" Kavya groans and asks, "Doggy? Do I look like a canine to you Anju?" Anjali ignores him and slaps his bak yelling, "MUSH… CUTE DOGGY... MUSH!!" Kavya yells, "Anjali you're calling your own husband a dog… you know what that makes you rite?" Anjali flares up in anger and feels Kavya's body shake as he chuckles to himself. Anjali jumps off Kavya's back and kicks him on his butt, making him land face down in the sand. Anjali yells, "Did you call me a… NO, GET AWAY!!" Kavya runs after her and picks her up his arms, running towards the water simply saying, "Babe maybe this will help you learn how to respect your husband!" Anjali looks at Kavya questioningly and then out towards the water. She yells, "Kavya you dog let me go!!" Kavya shrugs his shoulder saying, "As you wish my love!" He throws her into the lake, laughing his head off while she shoots daggers through her eyes.

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Angad and Kripa walk towards the lake, brushing their arms against each other. They both quietly walk just looking at the beautiful atmosphere of the trees, plants, flowers. Kripa smiles as she watches Anjali kick her brother in the sand and run off towards the lake. Kripa looks towards Angad and whispers, "Race you to the lake loser!" She speeds off and looks back to see Angad completely lost. He finally realizes what Kripa had said and takes off after her. Kripa reaches there first and stands at the edge of the lake, looking quite victoriously at him. Angad smirks and charges towards her in full speed, wanting to bring her into the water along with him. Kripa moves out of the way and Angad is not able to stop running enough to notice Kripa is no longer in his path. He falls right in the water… alone, while Kripa points and laughs. Kripa comes near him putting out her hand for him to grab on to. Before Angad can accept her help, she rakes her hand through her hair with a smirk on her face. Angad smirks as he looks towards her feet and yanks at her ankle making her join him in the cool water.

They all get into the water and every now and then, the boys would swim deep under water and drag the girls in the water kicking and screaming. The girls nearly think they are about to die, forgetting that it is the foolishness of their husbands to play stunts like these on their honeymoon. After the fun and games, the boys get out of the water and decide to just bask under the sun, until they feel hungry that is. The girls continue to swim, thrashing and splashing around in the water. The boys prop themselves up on their elbows and watch their wives having fun in the water. The guys can't help, but stare at their gorgeous wives completely wet in their bathing suits that hugs their every curve. They girls suddenly catch sight of the guys' oogling eyes and stare back at their husbands' bodies gleaming in the sun, giving them a perfect golden tan. They all start to blush realizing they are with the gang and not by themselves. The girls shyly get out of the water, noticing the lingering eyes of their husbands. Prachi sits next to Neev, who engulfs her in a tight cuddle. Anjali lies down next to Kavya placing her head on his broad chest. Kripa lays her head down on Angad's abs and looks towards the cloud filled sky.

After the romantic atmosphere has settled in, the girls hear strange growls from their husbands stomachs which can mean only one thing… they are starving. The girls set up the picnic, laying out all kinds of food for everyone to devour. After having their meal, they decide to walk back to the beach house for some alone time. It seems as though the boys can never get enough of the girls.

The rest of the honeymoon is filled with some much needed adventure. They went racing on ATVs, horseback riding on the beach, snorkeling with dolphins, helicopter tours around the island, hiking through the forest, racing in kayakes, learning to surf, touring volcanos, clubbing, shopping, and much much more. They had a total blast and almost wished they didn't have to go back because this had been a heavenly experience. It isn't as if any of the couples needed time to get to know one another, but they did gain precious memories to take back with them. The couples soon find themselves outside the Sharma and Khanna House to start their new lives together.

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I'm soo totally sorry about the delay! Anyways hope u enjoyed the part and please comment!

Check out my new ff if you haven't already! It's called Sweet Revenge (click the link)

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part very cute and romantic and yeah I read the prologue to ur new fanfic its awesome

thanks so much!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

romantic part!!!!!
so this ff has only 12 parts left?????????//
heeyyyyyyyyyyy
ill miss it!

lol i guess like 10ish... it might drag a little... so not really sure but thats the ballpark number!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hahaha totallly loved this part!!!! all 3 going teir own ways n endied up gettin soaked in the rain n sharing sum cute romantic moments!!! soooo awesome!!! n woah this ff ending in 12 parts 😭 a shame but it has 2 happen one day, ive commented in sweet revenge n will b looking 4ward 2 the next part of this1 👏

lol thanks! yea 10ish lol!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

hayeeee i just loved this part 😳
prachis so innocent lol i love her well atleast they got a room in the hotel
luckyyy kavya n anjali had their beach house all to themselves lol....but i got abit confused coz if kavya n anjali cud get home den y cudnt da othas????:S n kavya knew they were alone n didnt bother to phone the others to ask if theyre ok? silly boy all he cares about is romancing 😛 😆 😆
kripa n angad found a cottage lol but when they were on the desserted road i woz thinking they could have just slept in the car till the rain stopped lol like in humko deewana kar gaye that was soooo romantic hehe
i cant wait 2 find out what happens next so plzzz do cont soon this was like the 2nd wedding night for all of them haha bet it was better than the 1st naa 😉
and i saw ur new fanfic **Sweet Revenge** cnt wait 2 read it...im lovin d title!! 😃

xx hin xx 😛

thanks soo much! i hope i cleared ur questions... if not the check out the page ur post was on k! 😊

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

great part as usual and your fanfic sweet revenge is good too. keep up the good work 😊 😊 😊

thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

omg i loved that part 😃 😃 😃
nnev-prachi scene was too adorable 😳
kavya-anjali..... well it seems kavya always thinking naughty intentions but anyways its hott 😉 😳 😆
wow i can actaully imagine angad looking hott in wet shirt 😍 😍 😍

thanks hun! glad u like!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

amazing part
boys r really smart and their plans r always successful
lolzz... luved angad's plan... giving girls their credit cards 😆

sana

thanks soo much!!! yup shopping can cure anything lol!

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

awww how cute....gosh naughty guys...man the girls need to stiffen up a bit...anyways lovely part continue soon cant wait 😳

thanks soo much!! yea the girls are a bunch of softies lol! i guess i write from the perspective of OMG he is soo HOT how can anyone stay made at him lol! cant be helped LMAO... well actually in my new ff i guess its completely opposite!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome mindblowing dear 👏

thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

hey dear very lovely and romantic part. really long part to. i am glad to read ur new ff. i love all the parts of the ff. please continue soon.


mittal 😛 😛 😛

thanks soo much!!! glad you like both!

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey greta part...very romantic..plz continue soon... 😛 😛

thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

awww that was so cute
yay for the rain!!
love your new ff so far too
cont. sooooooooooon with both
ishuu?

thanks soo much!!!

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

"Butter? That's not a bad idea! Perhaps we should try that! I'll go get the butter!"

lmfao 😆 i waz lyke rolling on the floor my mom waz lyke 'wtf is wrong wit her?' she's never said dat b4. lol, kavya's a little freak.

angad-kripa were really cute too. for a sec, i thought the cards were fake too...lol.

i loved ur part, cont soon.

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

p.s. i love sweet revenge so far, its sooooo good. omg, i read it and im hooked.

lol kavya is a little freaky lol thanks a bunch!!! glad u like sweet revenge!! hopefully i can continue both soon!

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita fan

hey! i m commenting i guess for the first time..!!
well superb ff..!! continue soon!!!!

THANK YOU!! glad u like!

Originally posted by: pmrockz

Wow awesome part,
Cute,Romantic and Funny at the same time....
I cant wait to read Sweet Revenge! i love it already! 😳
cont soon 👏

thanks soo much!!!

Originally posted by: subhag

lmao!! wut an awesome part!!
neev and prachi r soo cute
anjali and kavya hmm...butter? no..jam? how bot chocolate?? lol 😆 😆
and ahh angad bare chest.. 😍 ..
plzz cont soon..and ur new ff sounds really cool..cant wait to read it! 😃

thanks soo much!!! hope u like the new ff!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

LUVED IT!!!!! very funny n cute part. very romantic 2. cont soon. 😃

thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing loved it where do u get ur ideas from 😆 they r so exquisitely awsome

thanks sooo much!! lol the butter idea occured while typing the phrase are you trying to butter me up... and then i thought about it literally and it was funny so i used it lol!

Originally posted by: za7n4b

grt part

thanks!

Originally posted by: sabzz

wonderful part !!! 👏 👏 👏
continue soon !! 😛

thanks a bunch!!

Originally posted by: Navi IqNeha fan

great part 👏

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: crazy_craze

hope u cont soon plzz cant wait


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yeah sorry bout the delay!! thanks!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

aaww its ok numera
take ur time 😳
cant wait for it 😃

lol thanks!! this part kinda sucks but i felt bad for not continuing so i tried!