Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 13

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Suddenly his room's door opened and he looked back and saw naina. he wiped his tears and turned around immediately not to show her his tears. but naina saw a tear in his eyes. she knew alekh well and it was hard for her to see his bro/friend like this. she went to him and puts her hand on his shoulder, alekh turns around and saw her looking eqaully sad as he was. he knew that she haev figured out he was crying and why? he burst out crying and hugged her tightly. he sobbed
A: niana i cant take it anymore. i cant see neelu like this.
N: alekh control yourself. even i cant see you like this.
A: you know when everi see her i see a totally new neelu. she is not the neelu that was used to be when i fell in love with her. she hates me after that accident. i accept that wat i said to her she was supposed to talk to me like this but that accident was not done purposely.
FLASHBACK:
N: (she came and closed his eyes from behind) guess who is it?
A: neelu...(he was suprised, but very happy)
N: how did you know that it was me?
A: well i know you so...but how come you are here?
N: well i have news for you.
A: wat?
N: i think you have to take care for 2 ppl now?
A: huh...
N: and you have to stop drinking now.
A: a wat...you know that i cant...i mean why
N: well(she pulled him toward her ) soon somebody is going to call you papa...
A: neelu saf-saf bata..a wat?
alekh was shocked he didnt knew how to react.HAPPY or SAD...he was exicted but then a thought struck him...No i cant do this...he knew that this would hurt him but he had to do this for neelu's sake for his child sake.
A: neelu apun ko yeh baacha nahin magta.
neelu who was now by 9th clould suddenly fell...she didnt knew what she heard was right.
N: wat?
A: yes you i dont want this child to come in this world...abort this child.
neelu had tears in her eyes.. she was broken she didnt knew that alekh was saying this...but before she could say anything, alekh went from their..
(and after that accident scene comes)
--------FLAHBACk OVER-------
by this both naina and alekh were crying.
N: alekh i know wat you did was wrong but why did you do this. you know that being a mother a great pleasure for every mother and being a father is great pleasure for dad but then why...
A: because i didnt wanted my child to come to this world before i can provide any thing to him. as every men i was also happy to hear that i am going ot be father but then when i questioned myself that when my child is going to come how am i going to raise him, the same way i was rise. i have seen life niana. i wanted to give my child each and every happiness to him but i was not capable to do that. i didnt have any family, then where amd i going to keep in. i didnt have any money or any statues. i was a theif first and i didnt wantes everybody to call him a son of theif. i wanted to be something, i wanted to make myself capable to be something. you dont know when i was saying to abort my child i was broken. it was hard for me too..but now i am a men, i have achived something in my life and now i am ready to have a family to which i can provide shelter, love and respect.
N: alekh but you knw that neelu is hurt and... she is not letitng anybody entering her life.
A: no naina i will not let neelu live rest of her life like this i am going to be his humsafar and i am going to bring my old neelu back.
N: and i will help u in it..promise
A: no..(naina cuts him in b/w)
N: plz as a sister
alekh smiled and hugged but they didint knew that somebody was listening to their conversation..

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they share such a sweet sister-brother bond 😊

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Originally posted by: cute_rabi

Nice Part i just read ur fic 1st time...Pls continew its great 👏

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