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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

HEy
hmm...I think neelu heard it...are alekh-neelu married?..anyways./..nice naina-alekh bonding...cont soon

no they are not married...they were boyfriend-girlfriend...i hope i answered your question's answer

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

they share such a sweet sister-brother bond 😊

ya i know! i wanted alekh and naina to have a sweet relationship, so i thought that wat's better then a brother-sister bonding😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
The day was fast and everybody were off to sleep as they were tired from their hectic day. They did so many things today..they saw monuments, temples and met ppl. but everybody was exicted about tomorrow as they were going to see the military academy of darjeeling next day. But we see a naina sittting by bonfire with deep thoughts in her mind. she was feeling cold but she was so much in her thoughts that she didnt even relized that she was shriving. soon she jerled out her thoughts as she felt a shawel wrapping her, she looked back and saw raj standing their with a smile on his face. she signed him to sit down and he sat. naina looked at fire and raj looked at her, he knew that naina was thinking about something deeply. he wanted to know what the problem was...so he asked.
R: nain wat is the matter?
N: huh..nothing..
R: hmm lets see i know this girl who dont know how to lie but always try to lie but gets caught by a boy..
N: hmm nice story but i am not lying.
R: jaan i know something is troubling you and you can tell me so now tell me wat is it.
N: raj i am worried about alekh and neelu.
R:(he took her hand in his hand and held it tightly) naina i know wat happened is wrong but it was alekh..(naina cuts him in b/w)
N: no, its not alekh fault he was doing right thing..
R: but..
N: raj you dont know what i know...
R: and wat do you know that i dont know...(she tells him the conversation b/w alekh and her)
R: you are right but what are you going to do now..
N: well leave that to me darling...(she winked at him)
R: naina you are relly a brat...(and pulled her toward him and hugged her tightly)
after little bit of talking and romance they dozzed of to sleep...just waiting for tommorw to come..
The morning was very bright and our gang was heading toward military academy of darjeeling....every body were exicted because raj's appereance gave them permission to see the academy.
H: sirji thanks...beacuse of you i am going to see sexy janani's their..
Y: bro i dont think we are going their to see girls...
H: oye pumpin head...tu vahan academy dekhne ja raha hain aur main janani's okay...
Y: bro but that is wrong..you are always after girls...
H: kyu tera pass koi ladki nahin hain na is liye....kyun sahi bola na...
(they both argued and finally alekh spoke)
A: oye dhaken ki aulado chup raho nahin to jeep se utar junga aur flight mein nanital bhej dunga...
both got silenced and they knew that alekh can do whatever he says so better be safe...on other side raj-naina and pooja-ali and shalani were supressing thier laughter...soon the academy came and one by one everybody got off and last was naina she was fixing her dress and was hoping on ground but raj grabs her han and pulls her toward a corner.
N: raj kya kar rahe ho?
R: woh kya hain na ki tum se morning kiss nahin lee na to woh lane aaye hoon...
N: raj yeh kya sahi jaga hain kiss lene ki to..(she shyly looks down)
R: to....
N: to mien tumhe kiss
R: tum mujhe kiss...(he is coming closer)
N: main tumhe kiss nahin karungi (saying this he pushed him and ran inside the academy) raj also followed her and both were chasing....but as naina was running she got collided with somebody...the persons books fell down...
N: sorry maan woh...i am so sorry(she bent down to pick up books)
P: its okay...but why were you running...(still havent looked up)sayin this she got up
N: woh...(before she could speak she heard raj voice...ruko naina abhi bata..he came in scene and hearing raj's voice the person looks up and was shocked....the books that were in her hand fell off again and on other side raj saw her and he stopped and he was as much shocked as she was....
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great going

pl continue

that tooo son
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey yaar awesome.... flashback mei hi life kyu nahi chaltiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
You are so predictable ..Nandini.Yeh Nandini mera peecha kab chhode gi.
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Posted: 18 years ago
GUYS I AM UPSET AS I AM NOT GETTING ENOUGH COMMENTS...IS IT BEACUSE PPL DONT LIKE MY FAN FICTION? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
no yaar..i like it...actually bohot days bad ayi hoon ..time binahi milta...anyways...who is it ???any new entry??? conts oon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Raj and the person look at each other and were shocked...they cant belive what they were seeing.....naina who was mean while watching them was also confused...she picked up the book and stood up...she said..
N: maam, i am sorry once again and here are your books...
P: the person didnt spoke...
N: maan..oh sorry by the way what is your name?
before the person can speak raj said: captain nandani virani....
N: here captain...but raj how do you know her(she knew she haev heard this name before but where)
R: well she use to be with us in academy. (he didnt told her thewhole truth)
Nandani: raj what are you doing here..
R: well i am here to see the this academy with my students and my..(nandani doesnt let him complete)
Nandani: well then this must be your student right..(she looked over naina who was confused...and continued) and wat is your name..
Naina: Lt. niana singh alluwalia
that name struck nandani's mind immediately...she looked at raj with shocked expression...raj looked at her..and said.
R: yes nandani you are guessing right, she is navins siser and...(he doesnt complete as alekh came up to call naina...aso she went)
R: so how are you princess
Nandu: aaj itne saal bad tumhare muh se princess sun kar iahut aacha laga...(she hugged him, raj didnt responed first but then he did)
N: raj par neveen ki behen yahan...tumharaa se saath..
R: well she was my student and now she is my fiance
(nandani was shattered in her heart, she knew that she still loved raj and seeing raj after this many years made a hope fo her to come back in his life but she still was happy for raj)
Nandu: thats great raj..i..i am happy for you CONGRULATION
R: hmmm thank you...so wat are you doing here
Nandani: I am communication and strategy teacher here.
R: oh really...i was the same teacher in KMA..
Nandani: really
Raj was felling uncomfatable and he was scared about what naina was thinking about him-nandani
R: i think i should go
Nandani: ya..i will see you around.
R: ya sure we will go to dinner time. me, you and naina..
Nandani: sure.
raj and nandani went on opposite sides. raj went to see naina and nandani went to her room. she needed some time to accept that raj was no longer hers but she was happy that he have found true love for him and he is happy with naina. Here raj was looking everywhere for naina but he doesnt find her..so he decides to look outside but while going outside he heard some voices that attracted him. he went on that direction and found naina hugging a guy(we cannot see his face yet) seeing this a beast forms inside him. He cannot belive what he is seeing. he saw more, he saw guy giving kiss to naina on her forehead and naina was not trying to stop him insted she gave him a kiss on his cheek. he was boiling up. his fiance is kissing somebody in front of him and that guy is kissing her and hugging her. he went inside and said..
Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEy
jhakkas part yaar...yeh ho kya raha hai...nandu aa gayi...also..naina kissing some1...gr8 part...with shocks...awesome...cont soon...

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