Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 11

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R: how is it jaan?

Naina was lost in the beauty of that place she just said POINT 1857....raj was shocked b/c he never told naina about point 1857...
R: jaan how did you know about this point.

N: well you know i have a brother who tells me everything..

R: huh...

N: raj bhaiya wrote about this point in his diary so the way he described was just like this so i thought that this place would be point 1857...isnt it?

R: well ya...i was going to give you suprise but this navin...

N: hey dont tell my bhai anything..

R: okay..okay calm down..

N: raj you know this place is so romantic and quite..

R: yes it is especially when you are here with your love...(saying this he kissed her hand and niana blused)...you know when ever i use to come to this place with navin i never thought it was this romatic but when i came here with you i feel that i have missed a whole lot of experience..i love you a lot naina...(he grew serious)
N: but i dont....

R: naina...(he was shocked)..

N: yes i dont love you....

R: naina...but that...

N: raj i was just joking...

Raj got angry and pulled naina to himself and said: never do this kind of joke with me naina...i dont want to lose you..

N: raj i am sorry..i didnt mean to hurt you....i love you more than my life...i love your eyes(saying this she kissed his eyes), i love your cheek(she kissed his cheek) i love your nose(he kissed tip of his nose) i love your lips(she came and gave a small peck on his lip but before she could leave his lip he pressed her lip to his and deepned the kiss...he started playing with her tounge. they could't help getting near each other, by now naina was sitting on his lap and raj hands were on her bare waist holding her tighly. he parted and kissed her jaw, neck...and then removes a peice of her blouse and kissed her...they both were lost in each other but soon their was a lightning which made them come out their love. both looked at each other with love and passion. the rain started poring and both were still in same position. naina got up and started enjoying the rain and raj sat their looking at his love, he moved toward her and took her in his arms and took her to his jeep..he made her sit thier and sat on drivers sit and pulled her toward him adn gave her a warm hug.
they came back to academy and both headed toward thier room as they knew that of they spent more time togther then they will cross thier lines which they dont want...raj went to his room and started thinking about naina...he questioned himself..Wht does that happen that when i am with naina i get carried out...i cant control my self, when i see her smile. her innocent looks and eveything i feel to kiss her...he went to sleep thinking about naina and on other side naina was very happy..she was telling evrything to pooja about her meeting except the kissing...pooja was very suprised as she didnt knew that rajveer sir was this romantic...soon they both went to sleep thinking about their ranja's...

soon it was day of graduation everybody were happy about their graduation excpet one person....raj yes he was very nervous b/c today he was going to talk to naina's parents about marriage. naina sensed raj nervousness as the time came near...everybody started coming to KMA(parenys). first poojas parent came and pooja introduces her friends and teacher to them. then came yudi's parent with neelu..alekh was almost going to faint when he saw neelu..then came naina's parent...naina went toward them and hugged them....they were very happy that today their daughter is graduating...but their smile vanished when they saw naina calling raj..raj came near them and took their blessings..

N: ma-baba meet him...

Ma: your bhais katil..

N: no maa he is my life and my love...(naina's parent were shocked to here this)

Ma: wat are you saying..you love the person who killed your brother...(raj was about to leave but naina grabed his wrist)

N: no ma i love the person who gave my brother a peaceful death..

Baba: wat are you saying naina...we dont get it.

N: ma-baba bhaiya was not killed by raj infact he was killed by ritu.

ma-baba: WAT?

N: yes..and then she told whole story to her parents..AT end they had tears in their eye...they looked at raj who was looking down...naina mum went toward hima dn placed her hand on his cheeck and sayinf sorry beta..(raj was shocked as for the first time after hismums death he was being called by beta..he sensed the love, the warmth of a mother)

R: no aunty...it is not your fault...

Ma: dont call me aunty call me muma...you are going to be my damad and my son...(she smiled)
Raj was so happy that he hugged his mum and said muma..naina also smiled at mother-son's love...she thought that the scene was getting so emotional so she said.

N: lagta hain ki ma aur beta ka rista mana kar mujhe bhul gaye...
M-R: laughed at her innocent face and hugged her...
Baba: now when do you guys want to get married..

R: sir..

B: son call me papa...thats not fair that you call her muma and me sir..

R: okay papa..i wish that after we come from our trip..

M:okay beta but i would like that you and naina do your engagement before you go to darjeeling

R: no problem papa...wat say naina. (looked at sying naina)
N: ya i am ready..

Ma: so the engagemt is tomorrow..b/c you guys are leaving day after tomorrow..so lets go we need to do lots of preperation.

Naina's friends got to know about naina's and raj's engagemet and all were exicted about that....they all changed the plane they decided that are going to go to naina's house for engagemet and then from their they will go to darjeeling...raj and naina were like leaving their dream..they have never expected that they are going to get engaged...overall raj was the most happeist person he got a muma-papa who takes him as a son then damad. he know its all because of one person..NAINA yes his love. his life and his strenght. he looked at naina who is laughing with pooja, seeing her smiling raj promised that he will maintain smile on naina's face forever.

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It was new day but everybody were busy for the engagement. naina's mum was yelling at everybody b/c she was so exicted that she needed everything perfect for her angel(naina), naina's dad was arrangeing flowers. niana was looking at all this from a corner and she had tears in her eyes..but soon somebody puts his hand on her shoulder and she turns back and sees alekh standing their.
A: bola to aaj ke din ye aasu kyu?(saying this he wiped her tear)
N: yeh aasu nahin hain yeh to khushi hain jo mera aakho(eye) se beh rahi hain.(alekh just smiled at her answer) tuje pata hain maine ma-baba ko itne khush nahin dekh jab se bhaiya...(she stopped, but her unsaid word were caught by alekh) alekh iam very happy today seeing my parents happy.
A: and i am happy to see my sis happy.(and naina hugged him)
(this all thing was seen by neelu who also had tears in her eyes, she was happy that today alekh got a family who addors him a lot and has a lovely sister whom he loves a lot)
soon it was afternoon and guests were comming, we see that naina is in her room sitting in front of mirror smiling. she was thinking about raj...she starting thinking about how they meet, how they fall in love and etc...but soon she was disturbed as pooja and neelu came to call her.
their raj was just glancing at staris to get a glimse of naina but when he saw her his heart stopped. he thought that he have never seen anybody this beautiful in this world. naina glanced at raj who was watching her with great intense and blushed.
(naina was wearing this dress)




naina stood beside raj and looked at him. she saw a deep sea of love and desire. raj looked a her and smiled.
MA: come on raj beta exchange rings..(raj looked at naina who smiled and gave him her hand, raj slipped the ring on naina's finger and everybody clapped)
the ring looks like this..

Baba: come on naina put ring on rajs finger..(raj gave her his hand and she slipped the ring, again their was a big appluse)...
soon the engagement was over and everybody were heading toward their room. niana was going through hall way when somebody pulls her, she was about to scream but the person puts his hand on her mouth. it was dark so she could see who the person was. she struggled but the person hand held her tightly. he blindfolded her and took her somewhere. she followed hin silently b/c she knew that person is not going to let her go. soon she felt like she was climbing stairs.
the person opened her eyes and saw a beautiful seeting for 2..soft music and rose petals everywhere. she felt a familiar touch..she knew that who the person was. she looked back and saw her fiance(yup raj)...who was smiling at her...raj came toward her and kissed her forehead and said..
R: how is it jaan?
N: it really good raj but why did you bought me like this..i thought somebody was kidnapping me..
Raj laughed at her answer and said: jaan i am sorry if i scared you but their was no pther way b/c your parents would allow us to meet at this time..
N: my parents or your mother in law..
R: both (and both laughed) they both ate their dinner and now dancing slowly. naina had her head on raj's shoulder and raj had his arms around her. the both were silently dancing. suddenly raj said..
R: naina THANK YOU..(naina looked up why question look) b/c of you i got a new family..i have never thought that i would able to get a love of a mother after my mums death...and a father who addores me a lot. thank you (he had tears in his eyes)
naina kissed his tears away and said: raj i should tell you thank you b/c you bought our familys back, you came in my life and changed it. you gave me this much love that nobody ever gave me, you filled my life with happiness and....(before she should speak further raj sealed her lips with his.....the kiss was warm and gentle but soon grew wilder and passionate...both's hand were sliding under each other's shirts....after a long kiss raj parted and looked at naina who had her eyes closed....he came forward and wishpered I LOVE YOU....she looked at him with love and passion in her eyes and hugged him. he was carresing her back, it was the right movment for both of them and hey wanted to capture it but they were diturbed by a noise..they looked around but they didnt saw anybody..
N: raj i better go before anybody sees us..
R: but you just came...
N: jaan i am your....(she pointed to her ring) this makes me your and only your...
R: hmmm(says in a sad tone)
naina came forward and gave a small kiss on his cheek...(raj looks up still sad)
N: jaan if you will make this kind of face then i wont able to sleep whole night...
R: sorry..good night..wife
N: good night hubby..(and naina went to her and room and slept thinking about the life that they are soon going ot start)

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awesome part waiting eagerly for trip and of coure the wedding cont. soon