Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 12

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It was early morning and everybody were awake b/c they have to catch their flight early. everybody were exicted about their trip and expecially our couples raj-naina, pooja-ali and alekh and neelu(they both wanted to some time with each other) and huda he was just waiting to go beach and see those sexy ladies...he was overexicted but yudi was very gunsum...everybody noticed that and knew the perfect reson for that. they were trying to supress their smile. naina nudges raj..
N: raj kyu pareshan kar rahe ho bechare ko..
R: main thodi na kar raha hoon, yeh to tumhare dost kar rahe hain..
N: raj dekho na bechare kitna muh phool gaya hain..kuch karo na..i cant see yudi like this.
R: ok jaan lets see..(raj goes and stands by him)
R-A: alekh pata hain aaj shalani ka phone aaya tha..(hearing this yudi eyes shot up)
A: sir kya kaha unhone?(knowing wat raj was doing)
R: kaha ki woh hume kaunse flight mein jana hain aur kitne baje?
A: to apne kya kaha?
R: kya kehna tha, maine kaha ki hum log ki flight 6:00 A.M to nikal rahi hain aur hume air india main jana hain.
A: hmm to kya kaha unhone?
R: kaha ki woh hume airport mein see off kareghi..(yudi was sad again..and seeing his face everybody burst out laughing, seein all laughing yudi got confused)
H: oye..teri shalani maan bhi humare saath ah rahi hain..(yudi's face had a instant smile)
N: or haan yeh sad wali sakal maat dekha bahut bura lagta hain...
Y: to kya tum log mujhe ullu mana rahe the?
H: ullu bane ki kya jarurat hain...tu ti hain e
Y: bro dont call me this..or else..
H: or else..
N: or else i am not going to let you go to darjeeling..got it..(naina said in a strict tone)
H-Y: hmmmm...
they all headed toward airport and their they meet shalani who was as happy to see yudi as he was. soon they reached darjeeling...they were shriving b/c it was so windy. raj held naina tightly and ali help pooja 's tighly. they all sat in 2 cars i one car raj-niana and ali-pooja and in other car neelu-alekh, huda, yudi and shalani. they wanted to send love birds alone so...they adjusted in one car...their in other car raj and ali were very happy as their future wifes were so close to them(hey sorry guys i forget to tell you that pooja-ali are going to do their engagement soonnnnn)they all reach the place at same time. the hotel was gigantic as raj's dad(his real dad...wats his name i dont know, you know he does best for his son-bahu hehe) the manager showed the rooms..raj was on other end and naina was on other end and huda and yudi's room was in b/w and on second floor their was 1 room for neelu and shalani. alekh got his own room as he didnt wanted the couple to disturb. pooja's room was just beside raj and ali's room was right beside naina. the couple was very sad b/c they werent able to stay beside each other but soon raj got a idea and he winked at naina. she got confused by raj's behaviour..she went to her room and started unpacking but she heard her room's door open she looked back and saw pooja with her bags. she went to her.
N: yeh kya pooja aane se pehle jane ka irada hai kya? (she said playfully)
P: hahha funny but your romeo has sent me here.
N: huh..
P: i mean your rajveer sir ha sent me here so that we can exchange room....so he can stay near you...
Naina blushed at pooja's sentence. but soon she replied..
N: or tu apne ranje kay paas reh sake? (now it was pooja's time to blush)
naina took her bags and went to poojas room and smiled at raj's idea.

hey too good dear
pl continue soon

Originally posted by: ami_princess

😳Hi! 😛 i am BHUMI..... i am trying to write this FF about rajeever( raj) and naina...i love those two....especially raj b/c it is played by RAJEEV😳..........they have great chemistry....😆This is the 1st time i am writing a FF...so if u dont like my concept..plz tell so i can improve it.😛

My FF revolves around KANCHANGA MILITARY ACADEMY...and My main characters.......RAJ and NAINA...and their friends

My FF contains ROMANCE😳, TRAGEDY😭, TRILLER, SUSPENSE and funny at some point😕....and many more things....i hope u like this story....and plz keep commenting😛

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i hope u like the intro........i will post the character sketch soon😳

Thanks😛

Bhumi😳

Thanks a lot friends..........

Their huda and yudi were fighting for their beds...huda wanted bed toward window where as yudi wanted bed their...but soon the matter was sloved by shalani who was passing by room and heard their conversation. and alekh was their seeing the view of the room but he shot a thing...he saw neelu standing thier and her hair were flying due to heavy winds. alekh went to garden to call neelu inside as the wind was getting to strong.
A: neelu..(she turned back) tu yahen kya kar rahi hain...kitni tez hava hain..lagta hain tufan aayesha...chal andar
Neelu: Tufan ah bhi gaya aur meri zindigi to bikaher kar chala bhi gaya..
Alekh was shocked by her answer, he didnt knew what to say..
N: tu ja mein abhi aati hoon.
A: par..
N: maine kaha na ja..
A: neelu...mein us waqt tayaar..
N: i said GO...(she yelled)
alekh went b/c he knew that what he did was wrong..but he had no option that time...he was worried for neelu...and for her sake he took that step....
------FLASHBACK-----
boy: wat are you doing here?
Girl: i am here to talk to you...we need to talk..ab..(alekh interrupted)
B: i dotn think so..and leave me alone..
G: no...we need to talk rght now..i dont care of you dont want to talk or not..
B: neelu go away..(yes it is neelu= the girl)
N: y...u dont care about me b/c now i carry ayour child..
B: shut up...
N: no you shut up alekh...you dont behave with me properly from the day i told you that i am preagnet..
A: that not true..i just need some time to accept that..
N: accept wat..i know tha you dont want to accept this child....you all mens are same..nonsence.
A: neelu...dont you dare say anything if you dont know..listen
N: no you listen..now i am not listening to your crap anymore...i have decided to give birth to this child, wether you accept it or not..she turned to go but she tripped by rock and fall on her stomach...ahhhhhhhhh(alekh yelled neeluuuuuuuuuuuuuu)
he took her to hospital and teh operation begun...after some time doctor came and sadi that i am sorry i could't save the child...(alekh had tears in his eyes..., he didnt knew what to say to neelu..how is he going to face her) but before he could say anything to doc he sae neelu by door...he was shocked..
A: neelu..."(but neelu fassed out...he took her to her room and doc checked and told her that she have got big shock thats why she passes out)...
after couple of hours she gained her coincious back and saw alekh seeing him her anger raised she got up(alekh was about to say her something but he got tight slap from her)
N: you...u killed by child(she cried) what re you doing now....i know you like to see ppl cry but today your own child died but you have no sorrow....infact i can imagine that you are happy...just go and get put of my life mr. alekh sharma..dont ever come with your to me again..or else...she got up and left the room leaving the shattered alekh with tears
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Now also he had tears in his eyes..

hey too good dear

pl continue soon

hey how romantic n dreess was too grt... yaar frm vere u got all dese lovely ideas....

great part Bhumi 👏 👏 loved it please continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

HEy
woo...tht was a shock to me 2!!..aalekh!!...hehe,,,raj is sooo naughty!!...hehe...cont soon

hey thanks yaar..i hope you will find more shocking things as the story goes ahead....KEEP READING