Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 15

hey that great

pl continue it is exciting

R: naina...wat is all this..you are....
(now we see that nain and the guy have turned around and raj sees a handsome man infront of him, he have wore a suit and had naina's hand in his hand..which made him more angry)
N: oh raj i am sorry i didnt told you that i was coming here.
R: its okay but what is this...you were kissing him and holding hands infront of me...
N-P: burst out laughing...they both hi-fyed
R: huuh...you are happy..naina i...(niana cuts him in b/w)
N:\ raj meet him this is my cousin captain karan alluwalia(yes he is karan guys...aka hiten tejhwani)...and karan he is...
K: your love, your life and your fiance right.
N: bingo..
K: but have you seen his face when i kissed you...hahahahahahha
N: hahahahahahhahahhhhahahahahahah
(raj was shocked that, that he was her cousin and was embarassed. he looked at naina and karna they both were laughing which made him more embarassed, naina looked at him and hugged him and he responded immediately, almost hiding his face under her hair)
K: ahem ahem....(they both parted)
N: oh sorry woh kya hain na mera raj thoda sharmila hain...(saying this he winked at karan)
R: naina tumhe to main nahin...
K: hey dont say anything to my sis..
R: see now you have a bodyguard who will not allow me to come near you.
K: yup you are right jeejaji...(raj blushed )
R: waise nain tumne bataya nahin ki tumhara cousin is here.
N: well i didnt knew either it just happened that we meet.
R: how..
N: well
-----------------FLASHBACK------------
when i was sayin bye to you and nandani maan i went with alekh to cafateria but on way i heard somebody singing a tune. the tune sounded kindda familiar. it didnt popped up right away but then someboby called be mamni(rabbit). i knew that only person who calls me that is chuha(rat)..i mean karan. we had nick names, he gave me name of mamni as i use to run fast and i gave him name of chuha as he was always hiding from me after messing with me. so i said...CHUHA apne bil main ka chupe ho, bahar aao, aaj bhi mujshe daar ke bahar nahin aaoge...saying this she saw karan appearing from behing the wall with a michevious smile on his face. he ran up to him and hugged me. he took me to his room and their were talking and i saw you from mirror so i told karna that you are my fiance so he winked at me and hugged me. he wispered in my ear: kya lagta hain mera jeejaji gussa honge.
N: oh tum dekhte javo.... and he kissed me on cheek and i kissed him back and we were watching your reactions in mirror behind me. we tried hard not to laugh but....
----FLASHBACK ENDS----

Waise ek bat batao..Ritu shot Navin from behind...huh...is this Kasauti Zindagi Kii.

Aur bloopers ki dukan...how did Naina's parents know ki Raj shot Navin...only Naina knew it.

And you can't get to Point 1857 by car.You have to climb hills ...remember.

great part Raj is so possessive 😆 😆 continue soooon 😊

Huh i got it.Nandini will be paired up with Karan.

By the way who is playing Nandini?

And Dastan spelling is this.

hey jus nw read ur ff...its amazing!!!u rock!!pl continue..

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Waise ek bat batao..Ritu shot Navin from behind...huh...is this Kasauti Zindagi Kii.

Aur bloopers ki dukan...how did Naina's parents know ki Raj shot Navin...only Naina knew it.

And you can't get to Point 1857 by car.You have to climb hills ...remember.

i am sorry that you didnt liked my story but let me answer your question first...

*yes it is just like kasautii!

* naina told her parents about raj first so thats how they know about raj being a katil..

*i wanted raj and naina have a romantic movement so instead of climbing hill i made them go by car..it just all part of imagination, its not like everything goes according to story line.

Originally posted by: jaychan

hey jus nw read ur ff...its amazing!!!u rock!!pl continue..

i am glad that you liked my story.....😛

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Huh i got it.Nandini will be paired up with Karan.

By the way who is playing Nandini?

And Dastan spelling is this.

uhmmm maybe you are right...and maybe not. lets just see in future..

nandani is played by gauri

Originally posted by: aishwaria

great part Raj is so possessive 😆 😆 continue soooon 😊

yes he is...and i like him that way....you will see why raj is so possesive in next parts