Jhoom Barabar Jhoom Note pg. 9 - Page 4

it is ok
we will wait 👍🏼

wow love ur ff. n kiran, i understand, i even get i little upset when ppl dont put the real thing on there. lol, but i dont think she did on purpose just to make u upset. n indian cutie i love ur ff (did i say that already?) n i am soooooooo stupid, my name is preeti, lol.

Originally posted by: hotaditya

wow love ur ff. n kiran, i understand, i even get i little upset when ppl dont put the real thing on there. lol, but i dont think she did on purpose just to make u upset. n indian cutie i love ur ff (did i say that already?) n i am soooooooo stupid, my name is preeti, lol.

lol i know hey preeti nice name my name is mani

Jhoom Barabar Jhoom

Chapter 3

The Chef tells Angad what to do. Angad has been busy with his work. Andina comes to see how Angad is working but her eyes are sad and it looks like she has been crying a lot. Angad see's that and goes to her. " What happened"? " Priya Waila died and her boyfriend died and I can't even go to her funeral". " Kya kehra ho? Tum kaisa ne jakshikti ho"." Because I can't get a week off to go to New York". " No Problem I will go for you anyways I live there and I will go to the funeral and drop some flowers for you" Angad said proudly. " Lekin you can't go remember what you did you will have to pay for everything you did and you didn't have no money so that's why your working here until your "loan" is payed off". " Hey madam listen how about if I let you keep my wallet and everything here and go to NY and come back in a week and I will also bring back the money I have to pay you". " How can I trust you that you will just go there and you will never come back huh what if that happens I will lose my job because of you"? " Trust me it won't my ticket to Hollywood is there." " Okay you can go but promise me you will come back". " I promise". Angad leaves smiling.

" So did you come back?" Kripa asked. " Wait yaar" Angad tells her " anyways were was I oh yea I went back to New York and….

You see the Saint Patrick Cathedral in New York City and everyone there is mostly dressed in black and you see many people crying and you see a guy who is in his 20's sad and looking at Priya Waila's picture it is no other than Josh. " Josh was a big fan of Priya and loved her very much". Angad comes there and drops some flowers near Priya's coffin. " Man where were you for so long" Josh asks. " In Spain because I didn't have money to pay the bills there and was forced to work there and Guess what". " What" " I'm in love". " That's good to hear finally this flirty man is going to settle his life. So when are you guys getting married and who is she" Josh says. " Her name is Adina and she is the hotel manager but getting married I don't know because she never told me that she loves me or neither did I but to win her heart I will have to go back to Spain and pay the bill. So I need money". " How much?" Josh asks hoping not that much. " Like um…around 50,ooo dollars." Angad says hesitantly. " What that's a lot" Angad show his What-Are-You-Crazy-My-Life –Depends-On-This –And-You-Can't-Give-Me-That-Much-Money " Fine I'll give it" Josh says sadly. " Anyway did you check your ticket? Did you win" " Nah I didn't check it". " If you do I want to go with you to Hollywood man we can see Jlo".

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Okay guys here is the next part. I know it wasn't that good but I'm sorry and sorry for nor continuing for such a long time but my grandpa died recently and I didn't feel like writing so that's why the part may be crappy. Leave comments

Luv ya all,

Mani

KYA KEH RAHE HO?! it waz a gr8 part!!!

dat waz funny, we need to go 2 hollywood so we can see Jlo. I <3 jennifer lopez, i gots da same first name as her.

the part waz a little short, but im glad u continued after SOOOO long.

btw, im not sure if i already said but im sorry bout da whole pakistani thing. i didnt realize ppl didnt kno i waz jokin. and yes, i got carried away wen ppl change stuff dats famous. in comedy circus 2nite, 2 dudes had an item on diff singers and theyre songs and i snapped cuz they messed the lyrix up.

im sry, i have a few issues with particularity. so sorry again, but i REALLY wish ppl wud stop bringing it back up.

i THINK im da first to comment so YAY!

the part waz GREAT! too short tho. cont soon! i <3 dis ff!!!!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

gr8 part and funny part 👏 😆
cont soon 😊
by the way i am kanza
pm me right now 😊

oh sorry about ur grandpa...

am a new readear n ur story is aweesome... 👏


cont soon 😳

Only 3 comments no one liked it 😭 😭 😭

i lyked it, i lyked it!!!!!

am i allowed to comment more than once?! i REALLY lyke dis ff...i REALLY want u to continue....

wat bout the loyal readers lyke me? 😭 we suffer cuz ppl are dumb. (ahem, SILENT readers)

newayz, if u read dis ff...PLEASE COMMENT! da author needs encouragement and direction. i kno i got da same problem.

newayz, indiancutie13 (sry 😕 i dont kno ur name) ur ff: JHOOM BARABAR JHOOM is sooooooooooooooooo incredibly amazing.

i luv ur writing style and at first, it pissed me off kinda how u changed a buncha stuff but now i LOVE all da creativity u added by changing details. i lyke dis so much better than the movie.

please please please please please please please cont soon!!!!!! if u dont, ill be REALLY sad. 😭

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

I LOVED IT!! i count as at least 5 pplz, because i love u n ur work! 😉 😆