Jhoom Barabar Jhoom Note pg. 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

KYA KEH RAHE HO?! it waz a gr8 part!!!

dat waz funny, we need to go 2 hollywood so we can see Jlo. I <3 jennifer lopez, i gots da same first name as her.

the part waz a little short, but im glad u continued after SOOOO long.

btw, im not sure if i already said but im sorry bout da whole pakistani thing. i didnt realize ppl didnt kno i waz jokin. and yes, i got carried away wen ppl change stuff dats famous. in comedy circus 2nite, 2 dudes had an item on diff singers and theyre songs and i snapped cuz they messed the lyrix up.

im sry, i have a few issues with particularity. so sorry again, but i REALLY wish ppl wud stop bringing it back up.

i THINK im da first to comment so YAY!

the part waz GREAT! too short tho. cont soon! i <3 dis ff!!!!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

thanks that was the longest comment i ever got so i feel special yea i know i'm like that sometimes

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part and funny part 👏 😆
cont soon 😊
by the way i am kanza
pm me right now 😊

thanks hon

Originally posted by: me2kool

oh sorry about ur grandpa...

am a new readear n ur story is aweesome... 👏

thanks thanks and i'm glad u like my story

Originally posted by: hotaditya

I LOVED IT!! i count as at least 5 pplz, because i love u n ur work! 😉 😆

thanks and yea okay i am going to post the part now

luv ya all,

mani

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Jhoom Barabar Jhoom
Chapter 4
Angad goes back to Spain. He goes and meets
Andina. " Here you go this is all your money plus the money for the airplane ticket. Now can I get my stuff and leave". Andina who heard this looks sad. " Well if you are anxious to leave here is your wallet and everything else". Angad opens his wallet is shocked " where is my lotto ticket"? " Well I kept it with me". " Kya Khera Ho. Meri ticket hai muje do". " No way it is like this I let you stay here and you should give me something and that should be the Hollywood lotto ticket". " No way give I back to me". " Let's see". Andina runs away while Angad is chasing her and starts singing.
akhiyon ke nile sheesh mehal mein
soniye ni soniye beh ja ni beh ja
do din jeena hai, ik din reh ja
tere bina jeena bhi kya
os mein??? kholi mint ki goli, meri khushbu ??? ba
ganni se kaante maanjhe ki dori, kaategi tu bhi ba
ona pona hi sahi, dil ka kona hi sahi
lauta de mera ticket to hollywood
ticket to hollywood arre ticket to hollywood - 3 (lauta de)
os mein??? kholi mint ki goli, meri khushbu ??? ba
ganne se kaante maanjhe ki dori, kaategi tu bhi ba
jameen se do inch upar hawa pe chalati hai tu
kahin pairon ka nishaan jo pade toh chhupu??
shehar ke uss mod par jahaan se tu paas ho
toh main jindagibhar wahi pe rukuun
no no musiye?? no no itana simple nahi, chal dafa ho kahin
ho thenge se tera ticket to hollywood
ticket to hollywood arre ticket to hollywood - 3 (lauta de)
give me give me give me give me my ticket
no no no no no no no musiye?? no no(my ticket to hollywood
no ticket to hollywood) - 2
akhiyon ke nile sheesh mehal mein
soniye ni soniye beh ja ni beh ja
do din jeena hai, ik din reh ja
tere bina jeena bhi kya
yeh jiddi hai sakt hai, bada hi kabakhkht hai
yeh dil jab aa jaaye toh jid se hatata nahi
tu raani hai france ki, main baasuri baas ki
hamaari society mein yeh chalata nahi
no no musiye?? no no itana simple nahi, chal dafa ho kahin
lauta de mera ticket to hollywood
ticket to hollywood arre ticket to hollywood - 3 (lauta de)
os mein??? kholi mint ki goli, meri khushbu ??? ba
ganne se kaante maanjhe ki dori, kaategi tu bhi ba
" So will you leave me" Andina asks innocently. " Do you want me 2." " No I want to come with you" " Meaning that.." Angad says excited " we..you.." " Yes I love you and want to marry you". " Kya kheri ho". Angad grabs Andina and kiss.
" Isn't it a romantic love story" Angad said dreamliy. " Yea...yea...whatever" Kripa said fussing on her sandwich. " So how did you guys fall in love". " We fell in love through Superman" " Superman what" " Shut up if you don't want to listen then leave" " Okay sorry " " fine............
Hey guys,
Sorry for the delay please comment. I want 5 comments atleast PLEASE.
luv ya,
mani
Edited by stars4life9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
such cute part
now i want anita and iqbal to be couple
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
yeah, in da song where u put da ??? he says beeba. juss thought ud lyke to know....haha, kripa's already annoyed! angad is hilarious, wenever i watch JBJ now i always dream of angad and kripa....*sigh* angad has dat kind of affect on me.... *swoon*

cant wait till u so kripa's superman story....tho the kiss of love song is a bit *cough* annoying *cough* lol.

this part waz WAY short but i loved it newayz....please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please (dats 15 pleases, so c'mon now!) update soon!!!

so here's ending another hopefully sufficiently long enuff comment to say: I LOVE THIS FF!!!!!! great part, cont soon...

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
i dear i am new reder thx for great update 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Thanks Cutie 13, kIrAn...E>GA<3, kaa_san, hotaditya, nihita, monikaseth, crazy_craze

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jhoom Barabar Jhoom

Chapter 5

Flashback

Kripa and her cousin Kanza were at Madam Tussan Wax Museum looking at the waxes.

" That time there was a cartoon hero special going on there". Kripa tells Angad. " I was taking pictures when all of a sudden a guy screams " WATCH OUT" and I look up and see that superman falling where I was. I was so shocked thinking that today was my last day when I see that same guy holding me up and I just staring at his handsome face".

" Hi I am Kevin Singh, are you okay?" Kripa just stares at his face until he asks the question again. " Uh..oh yea I'm fine by the way I'm Kripa Sharma". " Okay" He puts her on the floor when she starts complaining that her ankle hurts. " Which one?" " Um...both". He picks her up and takes her to the limo.

In the limo he was massaging her feet while Kripa on 7th heaven. " Would you girls like anything to eat". " No thanks" Kripa says politely. " Sure I will take Pepsi wait no I will take sprite, potato chips, and kitkat" says Kanza happy like a 5 year old while Kripa gives her the you-are-embarrassing-and-eating-like-a-pig-look. " Um...Kevin if you don't mind me asking are you Indian". " Well only half". " Huh". " My dad is Punjabi and mom American". " Oh okay". Kripa is so happy.

" Why would you ask someone that?" Angad asks. " Because when I was 6 years old...

You see a 6 year old Kripa in Church praying " Dear God, I do want to marry a Indian , I want to marry a white American. Thank you God"

"Wow that was stupid" Angad says. " Whatever loser anyways where was I before I got rudely interrupted" giving Angad the look.

" Kevin carried me to my bedroom and dropped me on my bed and left. When I remembered that I needed his number and I ran back downstairs to the street when he was already gone. The next day when I came back from work and I went to my room there was bunches of flower bouquets and chocolates and there was a letter saying

Dear Kripa,

Please get ready by 6PM by driver will come and pick you up.

Kevin

" When I reached there it was so big. The inside was so beautiful. When I reached his cabin he was there in his desk looking so hottest man in the universe in his black suit."

" Why did you call me here" " I called you here because I want to make a deal with you." " Which is?" "The board of directors want me to ask you to sue the museum but I don' want you to do that." " But why not" " Because if you do that our relationship will be lawyer and client but I don't want that I want to be husband and wife" " How much will we get if we win the case" " About 10 million dollars" " Dang that's a lot" Kripa whispers " How about if you do the case and no matter what it won't affect our relationship and with this we will be able to get to know each other better"

In the court you see Kevin fighting for Kripa's case and they win and they Kiss of Love

Hey!!
Stay away frm da kiss of love

Oh teri neem nazar ne mara (kiss of love 2)
Mera gardish mein hai tara (kiss of love 2)
Oh teri aankhon mein jab bhi jhaakun (hoye shawa oye shawa)
Mein saaans atak jati hai (hoye shawa oye shawa)

Oh teri aankhon mein jab bhi jhaakun
Mein saaans atak jati hai
Oye band karle bandkar yaara
daka dalti aankhein

[Kiss of love 2 stay away frm da kiss of love]2


Aye dil-e-nadan tere
Romance ki majbooriyan
Umar se lambi hai yeh
raat bhar ki dooriyan

O tere ishq mein tu kya jaane
kitne khwaab piroota hoon
Ek sadi tak jagta hoon mein
Ek sadi tak sota hoon

Teri aankhen jhooke too( Oye shawa 2)
Gir padte hai taare( Oye shawa 2)
Oye band karle bandkar yaara
daka dalti aankhein

[Kiss of love 2 stay away frm da kiss of love ] 2


Appse arz hai
Appka yeh farz hai
Nabhz to nabz to dekhiye
Jaan ka yeh marz hai Haan Mud mud ke na dekh zamana
Muh ke bal gir jayega
Edi maar ke rakh sakta yeh waqt palat ke aayega

Teri aankhen jhooke too( Oye shawa 2)
Gir padte hai taare( Oye shawa 2)
Oye band karle bandkar yaara
daka dalti aankhein

[Kiss of love 2 stay away frm da kiss of love ] 4

You see Kevin kissing Kripa.

" So you guys did it" " Yea but not like the way you say it we made love"

Thanks for the comments. They encourage me to write more. School started and I have dance classes now so I won't be able to continue that much hopefully I can update once a week. Please leave comments.

Edited by IndianCutie13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
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Edited-hehe i come on I-F nd this gett updated wow lol cool part........AK are hilaious contnue soon😳
U better coninue tomrow or else....duh duh duh
jksz
😳😆
Edited by crazy_craze - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
lol i watched this movie about a month ago, so when i read ur parts i imagine abhi n priety, was an okish film anyways do continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
gr8 part
thank u to making me kripa cousin
u make my day
cont soon

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