Jhoom Barabar Jhoom Note pg. 9

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Mani

@IndianCutie13

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: spring92

i dont think she meant to offend anyone. i think its just that the name kripa sharma is indian so maybe she made it india. u really need to chill out. dont over react😃

yea ur right

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Mani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: annu2005

lol...i think she made it bombay n not lahore so tht her ff isnt exactly as same as the movie...not because she has sumthin against paki's🤔.....geez woman, u need to chillax!

yea

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Mani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Jhoom Barabar Jhoom

Chapter 2

" You know when two lover die two lovers come together. That's what happened with Andina and me" Angad said. " Really". " Yea you see Priya Walia and her bf died and mine and Andina's love story happened. It all started in..."
Flashback

We see Spain and we are in a hotel called Maria de Plaza ( I don't know if it is a real hotel). We see Angad sitting in the hotel and we see everybody taking pictures of Priya while Angad see's only Andina. " It was first love". She was walking like a princess protecting Ms. Priya. " I was there for a deal that time me and Josh used to sell diamonds." " Isn't that illegal". " NO. Anyways were was I oh yea Josh was coming to Spain from India he had the diamonds and I was there with these Spanish people who were waiting impatiently and yelling."

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nde el infierno es l?" guy 1 said. " Yo no s que espero que l est aqu antes las policas vienen" guy 2 said. " Si". Angad is looking at both of them confused when Angad's phone rings. " Hello...Josh". Josh says " Angad there is a big problem the police came and they are searching for the diamonds so I ran away before they found out about". Angad fake smiling " Kya kehra ho" Angad hangs up " um big problem guys the police found about the diamonds so um..." before he can finsh the guys leave. Waiter " sir your bill". " Can I get it later I don't have money." " Sorry sir but you need to pay it up". Angad says " okay let me go to my bedroom and get the money" " Okay sir". Angad goes to his room and puts on all the clothes and goes out of the room through his bedroom and runs. The waiter goes outside and tells the other waiter about Angad. The waiter bumps into him and says sorry but realizes its Angad and gets him. Then Andina come "Qu es esto?. "La seora que este tipo no pag su cuenta y se escap" the waiter said. " Bueno lo trae a mi oficina" she said and left.
Angad goes with the waiter and to her office and she lets the waiter leave. " Mr. Khanna you will not leave until you pay for the bill". " But I am broke." " Too bad now you will follow me and work here until you pay off the bill and before you leave I will need your wallet and passport". " Okay but first can I take these clothes off". " Yes you may". Angad goes to the bathroom and takes the extra clothes off and comes back. " Here you go and please take care of my lottery ticket first place and you win two tickets to Hollywood". " um...okay"

Andina takes Angad to the kitchen and explains to the chef what Angad is supposed to do and leaves.

Okay here is the next part. I hope you guys like it and I am really sorry that I didn't continue for 2 days but since it is summertime there is always unexpected plans to go to places. So sorry and hope to get lots of comments like before. If you guys don't understand the Spanish tell me and I will tell you what it means in English.

luv ya all,

mani

Edited by IndianCutie13 - 17 years ago

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Great Part love the french in it 👏

xxAnuxx

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Sanu

@Fashion101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Awesome FF can't wait for next update.

Love,

Saniya

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Prachi Chopra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

👏 Its FAB. plz continue sooooon. i cannot wait... 👏
Prachi<3 😳

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Rima

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

awesome fanfic but a little suggestion i think anaida is spelled this way just a suggestion otherwise it depends on you 😃 😛

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Jennifer Mall

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

im pretty sure every1 here forgave me for my little Lahore outbreak. Lol. I was jking tho. So chill. But juss wanted 2 say, I STILL read ur ff and love it. Andina? Is dat lyke an anagram for anaida? Wow, I never realized how good Angad would play as ricky. Do u do all da Spanish urself? Cuz im in year 4 spanish and dats damn good yaar. Props 2 u!!!!! 😊

newayz, ur ff is SOOOOOOOOOOO goood! i loved da movie so i cant w8 till u write da next part. continue soon please!!!!!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

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Mani

@IndianCutie13

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Anu1993
Great Part love the french in it 👏

xxAnuxx

thanks but i wrote in spanish no offense

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni
good...cont soon 👏

thanks

Originally posted by: Fashion101

Awesome FF can't wait for next update.

Love,

Saniya
thanks

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Mani

@IndianCutie13

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

Sorry guys I won't be able to continue for a week since i'm going for vaction and then on i will see b/c i'm going to stay at my nani's for a month. Hope you understand
luv ya all,
mani