Jhoom Barabar Jhoom Note pg. 9

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hi..this is vishaka...i really love your Fan-fic..really interesting...continue soon...

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: crazy_craze
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Edited-hehe i come on I-F nd this gett updated wow lol cool part........AK are hilaious contnue soon😳
U better coninue tomrow or else....duh duh duh jksz
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Originally posted by: Gaurav's love

lol i watched this movie about a month ago, so when i read ur parts i imagine abhi n priety, was an okish film anyways do continue soon 😛

yea i know but I thought the story line would fit ak

Originally posted by: cutie13
gr8 part
thank u to making me kripa cousin
u make my day
cont soon

I know right then today will be your day again b/c i have ur name and u should come to my house some day

Originally posted by: VishakaGal 12
hi..this is vishaka...i really love your Fan-fic..really interesting...continue soon...

hey vishaka i'm really glad that u love my ff and keep on reading

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Mani

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Jhoom Barabar Jhoom

Chapter 6
" Whatever" said Angad. " Oh s***" both of them said. They both hurry and pick up their stuff. " Well I don't know if I'll see you again but it is nice meeting you" said Kripa. " Hey we might give me your number and I'll give your # and we will have a double date with our fiances". " Alright my # is 9149874565 and yours". " Mine is 9143546765". Kripa goes her way to the station while Angad goes to the coffee shop to pick up some donuts. " Excuse me sir but when did the train come" Kripa said. " about an hour later" says a random guy. " Excuse me lady and gentlemen the train coming from California will be delayed for another 1 hour" Kripa and Angad who hear that smile and run back to the place where they meet. " hi" says Angad. " hey". " So the train has been delayed….what do you want to do?'' Kripa says. " Um…coffee with donuts". " Sure but I only want coffee." Kripa says. " Okay".
Kripa and Angad go to Starbucks and have coffee. " Hey Kripa lets play a game" Angad says. " What kind of game?" Kripa asks confused. " Okay you have to do something that I did but you never and vice versa"." Um…I don't know you might make me do something embarrassing or weird" Kripa says. " I won't I promise" Angad says. " Okay".

" Okay have you ever went on the escalator the opposite side". " No" Kripa says . " Well I did so do it". " Okay hold this". Kripa gives him her handbag and goes. People start cursing her but Kripa just cures them back. When she reaches the top she is panting " That was so…………………MUCH FUN" Kripa says excitedly. " Okay your turn did you ever get a tattoo". " No". " Well I did so you should get a tattoo too. " Kripa says. " Where I don't see it?" " Okay I'll show it to you hold the newspaper like that" Kripa pulls the top of her shirt a little down and you see a red heart. " There happy" " I don't think I saw it. Can I see it again?" Angad asks mischievously. " NO". They go at a tattoo place and Angad gets the same tattoo the same place.

They are back in the train station. " Kripa pretend if Andina and Kevin meet each other and they dine together and they fall in love then we would have never meet right." Angad asks seriously. " Yea" " What if I were Kevin or you were Andina then we will be in love"

We see a train station and Kripa is coming out of the train in a traditional Indian suit and we see Angad walking and Kripa gives him her luggage and starts walking ahead while Angad is walking behind her. Kripa gets a rickshaw and tell Angad to put the luggage here but then some guy and puts it there and Kripa is embarrassed so she gives him the money but he declines it and Kripa leaves and the song Bol na Halke comes on .

(Dhaage to d laao chaanadani se noor ke
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke) - 2
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le
ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thi
woh ik din sau saal ka, sau saal ki woh raat thi
kaisa lage jo chup chaap dono,
ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayein

bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke
o dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
o ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

" The train from California has arrived" says an announcement and with that Angad and Kripa come out of their fantasy. " Well I got to go" Kripa says giving Angad a hug and leaves and so does Angad. We see Kripa and Angad smiling at the person and hugging them . " Gosh you guys were late Kanza. Next time I'm not picking you guys up" Kripa says. " Kya Josh intni dare chalo ghar chalte hai" Angad says. " Okay". Kripa is walking when she calls her friend " Hello Kein I'm in love".

Guys thanks for the comments. Sorry for not updating but since school started I have been really busy. Hope you guys like it and LEAVE COMMENTS.

Luv ya all,

Mani