Colours of my Life (AK): The End (Pg 33) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gud thing u arent gonna start until ur free, coz then u have time to
update soon, nd u wont have people running after u with dandas!!! lol!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when will u start this fic & what is this fick about???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andekhi

Thanks guys! But, I won't start this FF, until I am a little free.

Are you happy now Hina?

lol HAHAHA:P:P umm.. well not really cus like im sooo bored right now lol and i was like oooo wat happend to that new story that u were gonna start.. lol ok im lieing lmao lol i didnt remember this new story of urs lol
but like i WAS bored.. and i was gooing through the stories and i saw this post and i was like OOO YEA lol:P:P

soo lol not a COMPLETLY a lie:P and plus not really a lie lie cus like i told u lol:P my teacher said its ok to "white lie" lol hahaahha shes like if ur gonna lie to me by saying "can i go to the bathroom" and be looking out side the door and waving to sum1 i'll let uu go lol cus htat would be a WHITE lie and its ok to white lie.. i guess lol hahahaha
lol i alwasy just tell my self this cus it helps me NOT feel gulty that i lied lol WITCH i didnt:):) 😃

oo and were u gonna conintue last monday or the monday cumig up?? cus if it was last monday ur soo far behind lol:P:P

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desi Pride

its okay start it now or later, i'll get first dibs on the story anyway!!! how bout u start dis after liek june 15 okay lolz That sounds good! Your wish is my command! 😃😃

ps- did i forget to say how happy i am to read another great work of literature from ya? 😆 Karishmaaaaa... that was just sooo hilariousss i always seem to forget to important stuff 😆

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

gud thing u arent gonna start until ur free, coz then u have time to
update soon, nd u wont have people running after u with dandas!!! lol!!! I received a lot of angry PM's actually, so had no other option but to continue Identity as well as the other one...

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

when will u start this fic It all depends on response.. if ppl are not too interested, then I won't be regular with this FF. At present, I get the impression that ppl love Perfect Match over Identity...& what is this fick about??? Check concept on Page 3!

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol HAHAHA:P:P umm.. well not really cus like im sooo bored right now LOL lol and i was like oooo wat happend to that new story that u were gonna start.. lol ok im lieing <--- now that is exactly why I like you! You are just sooo frank! lmao lol i didnt remember this new story of urs lol
but like i WAS bored.. and i was gooing through the stories and i saw this post and i was like OOO YEA lol:P:P LOL!

soo lol not a COMPLETLY a lie:P and plus not really a lie lie cus like i told u lol:P my teacher said its ok to "white lie" lol.... lol hahaahha shes like if ur gonna lie to me by saying "can i go to the bathroom" and be looking out side the door and waving to sum1 i'll let uu go 😕 really??? wow!! lol cus htat would be a WHITE lie and its ok to white lie.. i guess lol hahahaha hehehehe
lol i alwasy just tell my self this cus it helps me NOT feel gulty that i lied lol WITCH i didnt:):) 😃 LOL! that "witch" is hilarious.. for a second I was completely blank..

oo and were u gonna conintue last monday or the monday cumig up?? cus if it was last monday ur soo far behind lol:P:P lol.. pshhh

Thanks guys for your wonderful comments!! 🤗 I hope you will like the concept...

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very cool!!! jobless ppl kick ass!!!!! cont for sureeee but after my finals lolz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Elle Magazine

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Short Story: The "bully"

By Neha Sharma

We met back in Secondary years. I was a twelve year old nobody with braided hair sitting on my head like a nest, arriving on a bicycle, while he was the thirteen year old, everybody, wearing branded clothing, arriving in a BMW, and at times even in a limousine. Actually, come to think of it almost every other day he switched cars.

While, I was ahead of my age in school, but I wasn't the brain of the school. I was always an average student, with an average brain, and an average look, he was the best student in the school, with a brain as good as Einstein's, with a gorgeous look, or at least that's what others said it was.

It's not like he had just recently shifted in the area, nor neither had I moved or anything. Actually, we were together since our junior KG days, of which I vividly remember only one thing - during our playground time he would always come and throw sand at me, while I would sit there crying in the sand, until the teacher came and lifted me off.

He was a bully. If I would be eating my lunch, he would come and snatch my lunch box. All I did in turn was sit howling out loud, while the teacher chased behind him with a stick for my lunch box. Incase, you haven't figured it out already I was always the crybaby type kid.

After junior KG, we never shared any sort of interaction, he went on to form a huge group, while I went on to being the shy quiet individual in class, whose existence people weren't aware of.

Secretly, I always feared him, hence whenever he passed by in the hallway I would either turn my gaze down, or walk away quickly. I mostly stayed away from him, if I knew he would walk down during the gym hallway after Period 3, I would purposely take the tech hallway, a longer route to get to our Period 4 class, which was the same. He always remained the bully he was in my eyes.

I never saw him interact with his friends. He mostly remained to him self, even while they were playing cards, while others cracked jokes, gossiped about other boys – talking about how stupid they were, he never bothered to take part, and just remained to him self.

'How do I know?' You ask.

I do know. I answer.

I sat right behind his table during lunch. His back facing me. My friends had a crush on him, actually come to think of it, there were only three females in our school, who did not have a crush on him, out of the three, two found him cute, while the one, which is me did not even find him cute.

Sometimes I wondered whether my definition of cute was wrong. That had to explain the 739 girls, who find him cute.

'739?' You say, 'Is that even a accurate number?'

Believe me it is. I sat down in my principal's office subtracting the number of girls from the total school population to find the number of girls that found him cute.

'Now, why would you do that?' You ask

I was bored. I answer. Or at least that is what I would like to believe is my answer.

***

In the midst of one particular sunny afternoon I sat under the mango tree behind the school during lunch time catching up with my homework. The afternoon sun casting it's light on me irritated me to no end, and I shifted from time to time uncomfortably trying to avoid its glare.

I heard shuffling of some feet from the back, and I turned around to catch no one in sight. I looked back at my book, and stared at the algebraic expression 4x +__ = 12.

Before I knew it someone had snatched the math book out of my hands, and a bunch of people laughed. I turned my gaze to find ten boys standing in front of me laughing.

'She is fat' one said

'No, she looks like a guy.'

'oho, so we will have to start calling her a 'he' from now on'

They all roared in laughter.

It was not funny. Yet, to them it was funny. Guys had the weirdest sense of humor. They took particular delight in laughing over someone – they never stopped to think about the person's feelings. They just never did.

'he she' one of them said

They roared in laughter again.

A very unpleasant feeling swept over me. I felt a lump in my throat growing. And, that's when I knew I was going to cry because their words had somehow gotten to me, but before I could stop myself the tears had fallen down on my cheeks.

'cry baby' they chanted, 'cry baby, cry baby, cry baby' laughter roared

I shut my ears, and ran out of the place tears running down my face. They all roared in laughter, and I heard them say 'what a coward'.

In my hurry to run away I bumped into someone. It was him.I looked at him, and he looked back. A second later, I had run away from the place.

Behind me I heard him say, 'that was good' or that is what I imagined it to be.

They all roared in laughter again, while I fought through my tears. They were sick, and perhaps the most insensitive jerks I would ever have the displeasure of dealing with in my life.

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Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
kids can be soo mean sometimes 😭
nice start!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: desiqt8806

kids can be soo mean sometimes 😭
nice start!

my thoughts exactly an interesting annd fascinating concept

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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAY... this sounds sooo wicked COOL!!! i LOVE it already, even though
every1 was mean to poor Kripa!!! tht was horrendous, sum guys
have like no feelings AT ALL nd really, they do have a wierd sense of
humor, lol... so the bully is Dev??? or is it Raunak??? u already confused
me hun, lol, jk, its just me, i was born confused, lol!!! i LOVED how
accurate she was abt the girls who like/think the bully is cute!!! lol... nd
the reason is, bcoz i was bored, lmao... 739... cud u cum up with a more
random number??? lol... nd to answer ur ques: heck ya, u shud continue...
its totally illegal for u to ask tht ques!!! once u post the concept, u HAVE
to continue the FF, lol, jk... anywazzz... CANNOT wait to read more...
continue soon!!! 😛

<3 rutu 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
i like the start........
continue sooon

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