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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww just started reading and i love it, how sad kripa's family died...update soon i loved it 😳
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awesome part
the part where she was singing the song tanhayiiiii that was so awesome i was almost cracking she herself didn't knew whether she was singing out loud 😆 😆 😆
and the doc is so sweet better then the green eyed boy.
poor kripa felt bad for her the way she was remembering all her moments she spent wid her parents.
and thanx a lot for dedicating this part for me that was really sweet of u 😳 😳

lots of love 🤗 🤗


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😆 funny part she sang out loud!!! i think random things when i am scraed tooo I HAVE A theory that when in trouble think bad things and there leats likly 2 happen lol great part plz continue soon 👏 😳 👏
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Can;t wait for the next part so we can get some insight into the story and is the green eyed boy Angad or someone else? HOpefully its Angad. TAke care.
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👏 so sweet thanks for update 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: erier101

It was horrible! Sike. I'm not that nice sweetie! And yes I do love every part, ya got a problem with that? :P Your gonna love my comment. I was disappointed (ure fave word) at the length. Andddd the one scene that still doesnt answer anything, besides the fact that her parents are dead and the doc dude is real nice! lol! so missy cont soon and answer our q's in your parts ;)

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😃😃😃 Yes, horrible, and disappointment are my fav wordsss! Thanks a lottttttt Madihaaa! 🤗 I'll work on length now... 😊

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

sorry 4 not commenting 😛 the 2nd part kinda confused me as usual...lol did angad kidnap her? lol kripa thinks weird things..she's in heaven or hell 😆 😆 neways this part...omg thanhyi!!!!! hahha thts a fab song n she sings it out loud, talk about embarassing herself 😆 😆 😆 but omg her parents r dead......poor kripa....maybe im thinking this guy isnt angad but is maybe a reative 😕 i dunoo....guess things will b clear soon enuff....will b waiting 4 the next part 👏

Heyy don't be sorry at alll!!! 😃😃 lol yes, she does sing out loudddly.. Unfortunately, her parents are dead 😔 The guy is Angad, so don't worry about that! 😊😊 The next part will reveal everything, I hope..

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~



lmao i would if school was still on next year private school so very less skipping less reading ur ffs more working lmao

anyways great part continue soon 😛

Oh yes, I totally forgot about vacationsss... But, it's really nice to know that you will be working hard next year. Goodluck!!!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

im confused...again...so im gonna read it...again.

but it was REALLY well written and i waz friggin lmao when she was singing and then she randomly started laughing...it soundz lyke me!

great part, cont soon please.

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wowww...thanksss Kirann!!! 🤗🤗I will try to update regularly.. 😃

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

awww just started reading and i love it, how sad kripa's family died...update soon i loved it 😳

Yeeeee Thanksssssss!!! 🤗🤗I'm soo glad you love it!! 😊

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part Thankss Sana!!! 😃😃😃
the part where she was singing the song tanhayiiiii that was so awesome lolll i was almost cracking she herself didn't knew whether she was singing out loud 😆 😆 😆
and the doc is so sweet better then the green eyed boy. yesss..
poor kripa felt bad for her the way she was remembering all her moments she spent wid her parents. ohh no, I hope the next part isn't a lil sadd....
and thanx a lot for dedicating this part for me that was really sweet of u 😳 😳 Sanaaa 🤗🤗 it's really sweet of you to take out the time to comment regularly, and that too bless me with such lovely lovely words, which I'm not even sure I deservee...

lots of love 🤗 🤗 lots of loveee to you tooo!! 😃

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Originally posted by: imdudehead

😆 funny part she sang out loud!!! lol yess i think random things when i am scraed tooo lollll I HAVE A theory that when in trouble think bad things and there leats likly 2 happen lol yess, my cousin believes in thattt great part Thanksss 🤗🤗plz continue soon 👏 😳 👏 I willll

Originally posted by: jdsean

Can;t wait for the next part so we can get some insight into the story yesss and is the green eyed boy Angad or someone else? It's Angad!!! HOpefully its Angad. TAke care You tooo

Thankss jdsean!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 so sweet Thankssss!!! 🤗thanks for update 👏 👏 👏

You guys are sooo sweeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!! 🤗

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Dedicated to Kiran (kIrAn...E>GA<3) 😃😃😃

Part Four

When I woke up next, I just felt utterly horrible. This sad feeling, this dread. Sudden weight on my shoulders. What was wrong? And, that's when I managed to remember the most disheartening piece of news, and it finally sunk in my heart.

My parents were dead, I winced with the 'd' word.

How could they dead?

I tried to strain my mind, and the only thing I could remember was cuddling beside Mr. Snooper (my dog), burning the roti, chatting around with Prithvi, the shower, annoying Ian, and me falling asleep on the couch, as I watched this crazy hairdo guy sing on American Idol. And, my parents? They had gone out to a party leaving me alone. Had they met with an accident there or something?

I couldn't bear to think of anything. So, I just sat with my legs propped up together with my arms around them rocking back and forth, as I sobbed silently.

I cursed myself, as I vaguely recollected all the times I fought with my mom (especially) we both never got along, it's like we'd to disagree on everything. I could remember so many times when I'd slammed the door on her face, and screamed I hate you. Then, insulted her in front of my friends, never respected her, made fun over her suggestions, and did all the crazy things I shouldn't have done.

But, now, I wanted to jump out, go and hug her, and scream out I loved her.

There was so much I'd to tell her. I wanted to hug her so close, and keep her to myself, and never let her out of my sight again. I wanted to apologize for all the stupid things I'd done, but most importantly I wanted to sit by her side, and listen to her.

Thoughtlessly, I started to tell her what I should have done earlier it self. If she was really dead, the thought made me shiver, then she must be listening to me now. And, I wanted her to know a few things…

'I love you mom. I love you' I whispered silently in the darkness staring at my hands, 'I'm s-sorry mom for the awful things I did to you.' I turned my gaze to the ceiling, must stop the tears, I'll not cry, I decided, 'I'm sorry for being a bad kid mom. I'm sorry. Just really sorry' uh, I could feel tears slightly falling on my cheeks, I quickly wiped them, 'I swear I'll never invite any of my friends for dinner without ever informing you' must not cry 'I swear I'll keep my room clean, I swear I'll help you out in the daily house chores - I swear I'll not jump out on you for disapproving over my clothes' images flashed in my head of my mom cleaning my room, I felt awful, I wiped the tears, I must continue 'I swear I'll never ever sneak out of my room in the middle of the night, and crawl in the back yard counting the stars.

I swear mom I'll listen to you every night, and take a few minutes everyday to talk to you, to listen to your problems.' that reminded me of my mom's melodious voice calling out to me, while I yelled back, god mom, you're annoying, I started to cry with that vision in my head, but I stopped, I'd to continue 'I'll never ever give you a chance to complain, mom, please come back mom, please come back. Pleaaaaase god let this be a bad joke! Because, the truth is no matter what I've said, I love you mom, and I can't bear to live without you. I didn't realize it before, but now I do mom, I do. And, I'm s-sorry. Come back. Please. Dad, you too.'

I didn't realize how long I spent praying, and hoping it was a bad joke. Because, the only thing I remember was that I felt my eyes hurt to the point that I couldn't cry anymore. Rising, I'd almost stumbled, but I managed to find my balance, and walked out of the bedroom to get a glass of water.

The hallway was pitch dark, and my heart jumped right in my throat, as I heard a voice behind me, "Are you alright?"

I turned around, and found myself gazing into the eyes of the green eyed man, he appeared to be concerned, and that touched me more than anything. I smiled at him informing him that I was perfectly fine, and walked down to the kitchen.

In the last few minutes, I'd come to realize one more thing he could not be my kidnapper he was the one who'd revealed to me about my parents death, so he couldn't be my kidnapper at all. A new possibility struck me right then. Perhaps, he was my god father. I couldn't see that yet, since he was too young to be my god father.

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Walking back from the kitchen with the jug of water, my face dripping wet, I made my way up the stairs, and noticed that the man had disappeared. I felt slightly disappointed, I was hoping to learn more about my parents death from him.

Holding the jug steadily in my hand, I made my way across to the room I'd been assigned, opening the door slightly I walked in placed the jug in the side, and went to stand by the window.

I stared at the moon, and the stars. Someone had once told me that when you loose someone close to you they become the stars in the sky. There were infinite number of stars in the sky, and somewhere I knew two of them belonged to my parents. If only I was with them.

The light was flicked on, annoyed I turned around, and noticed the green eyed man watching me. He was wearing a beige t-shirt, and a pair of shorts. Looking much more handsome than the last time I'd seen him.

Shut up, Kripa, a voice crept in my head. I immediately felt guilty for easily drooling over a good looking guy, and forgetting that my parents were dead. I was a horrible person, I decided.

"Did you want something?" I asked him grimly with my hands folded. He shrugged his shoulders, and I was immediately annoyed by his lack response. But, somewhere a part of me felt that he had come to check on me. If that was the case, it was indeed quite sweet of him, though his outward appearance was quite deceiving - it always gave the impression that there was nothing sweet of him.

I turned back around wiped my tears. Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed him walk to the bed lift a pillow (was this house short of pillows or something?) and walk back to the door.

As if answering my question, he announced, "I can't sleep without my pillow". What a baby.

He was walking out.

"Wait…" I said quickly as I noticed him leave, and asked him one of the puzzling questions in my head, since the time he had revealed to me about my parents disappearance, "I would like to know when my parents left?" I could not muster up the courage to use the 'd' word. I still refused to believe they were gone, and I wouldn't believe it, until I'd somehow managed to convince that to myself.

He looked at me. "You need to take some rest" he announced lazily, "We will leave this matter for tomorrow"

"No!" I hastily screamed back, "I wish to know about everything right now, otherwise this will haunt me tonight…"

"Tomorrow"

"I swear" I screamed violently, "If you do not tell me anything, then I'll come, and strangle you in the middle of the night - oh, and that won't be a pretty picture at all!" that was a threat. Very intelligent of you, Kripa, to extract information by resorting to threat.

Honestly, by now, I could care less about my manners or anything. I just wished to learn what I was doing in this house with a man who did not know how to smile, and could come across as a very rude arrogant cold person.

He chuckled, something quite rude of him when I was moaning over my parents d- "Interesting" he said in amusement, "I wasn't familiar with your violent side at all!"

"What do you mean?" I asked in confusion.

"In the past one year that I have known you…" he almost began, then stopped to catch sight of my expression "You always managed to remain distant, reserved, and silent."

"How is that possible?" I retorted back straining my mind to remember him, "I don't know you at all! All I can remember is my final exams are approaching, and I've to start my revision" I could feel my heart beat wildly in my chest.

He didn't reply anything. And, just stood there watching me. I was greatly infuriated by now. This man was making me more and more confused by the second. And, from confusion, I'd managed to get angry as well within a matter of seconds, he just knew how to press the right buttons to piss me off. God, and I never had a temper, but due to this man I was apparently getting one.

"Which grade are you in Kripa?" he asked silently with his arms folded, as he looked at me.

"Grade 11" I answered lightly, "And, my final exams will begin in Ap -- OH MY GODD-" I screamed in horror catching sight of the calendar on the wall, "we're in July already? What happened to my ex - 2007? WHAT?" I ran to the calendar pulling it off the hook, and stared at it. My eyes darkening, I turned back around to the green eyed man, "You're not good with dates, are you? God, you've lost your mind, we're still in 200-" I scrambled back the pages only to see 2006 & 2005 peeking out, "You don't have a 2002 calendar?" in those mere seconds I contemplated on my weird state of mind, and I felt panic surging through my veins, "When did my parents die?" I asked him finally again.

This time he didn't disappoint me.

"Two years back" he announced gently, "2005" as he watched me. This time I nearly had to stop myself from screaming. 2005? How the hell was that even possible? We were still in 2002! This man had lost his mind, I decided. And, he was wrong about my parents death as well, I felt better thinking that, yes, my parents weren't dead. This man had lost his mind and somehow I'd ended up in his house. Now, I just had to locate the phone and call the cops. And, then I would be safely back with my parents. Yup, that's all it was, as simple as that.

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As I scrambled out of the room, he did not ask me anything nor did he follow me. This was much easier than I thought it was. I ran to the door only to almost collide with someone. It was the doc.

"Kripa, woh woh, hold steady darling" he said catching me, "Where are you in such a rush?"

"You know that man upstairs" I said hastily, "Doc, you need to check him out. He has lost his mind! He has a 2007 calendar back up there, when he should have a 2002 one" after I'd said all that I tried to move out of his way, but he blocked me, "what're you doing?" I asked in annoyance.

"Kripa" he said studying my face, "will you listen to what I've to say?" he asked gently holding my hands.

"Listen, doc, I need to catch my parents, you know they will be extremely worried about me - especially my mom, you know she freaks out at the silliest things, I bet you doc, she must be on the floor crying her eyes out worried that someone kidnapped her daughter, so you see I've to tell her that I'm fine-"

"Kripa" he interrupted, "You're parents are dead!"

I looked up in annoyance, "What is this the whole house has lost their mind?" I joked, but when he looked serious, I grew worried. Oh my god, both of them were teaming up in this plan, how stupid of me to trust this one.

"Are you going to listen to me Kripa?" He asked looking at me, but I knew instantly he'd been aware of my thoughts, since his grip on my wrist was tight. My stupid face, I always expressed everything I felt, my mother always called my face a television screen always reflecting my mood and my feelings.

I decided right then that I'd to deceive them into believing that I was with them, and I wasn't aware of their kidnapping ploy. Pretending to smile, I shook my head in approval, "Yes, I'll listen to you"

"Kripa, no one has kidnapped you, get that straight in you're head first okay?" Yeah, right, I thought.

"Okay" I announced brightly with a smile.

"You don't believe me, do you?" he asked placing his hand on my shoulder.

"Of course I do doc, don't worry" I replied softly

To my response, he appear suspicious, fishing out his card from his left pant pocket, he handed it to me. It had his picture on it as well, I noticed, it was his driving license, Mahen Khanna was the name. I calculated his age mentally in my head, he was 18. But, how was that possible? He appeared about 23. And, then my eyes flipped to the date he got his license 10th June, 2005. What? How was that even possible?

With my eyes widening, I peered at him, he smiled back gently, and patted my arm. "Sit" he ordered, once I sat down contemplating over a few things, I felt his hand on my shoulder, "Relax Kripa" he said in the sweetest voice, "I believe I've quite a few questions to answer."

I didn't think before I asked "Where am I?" in a bewildered state staring at my surroundings. Somewhere a part of me was beginning to grow afraid of my state of mind.

"You're at present in the Khanna Mansion, in the state of Ohio" he declared brightly, "And, I'm quite certain you're good at your geography to be aware where Ohio is"

That last part was an attempt to lighten the situation, I realized later, but I was so deeply involved in thinking how I could possibly lost out on five years that I did not even smile to it.

"What am I doing here?" was my next question. Mahen smiled at this one "You live here"

"Why do I live here?" I asked in confusion, then as if answering it, I said, "I'm with my god father right?" I was pretty sure he was aware that by my god father I referred to that green eyed man.

Mahen grinned, "A what?"

"Godfather" I said more clearly this time.

He chuckled, "Don't let him hear that!" he announced with a smile.

The green eyed man was not my godfather? Actually, that was quite certain. In fact, it was fairly certain from the beginning it self. I should have thought about it earlier, when I realized he was too young to be a god father.

"I don't understand" I said in confusion, "then, why I'm here?"

"Do you need a reason to be here?" he asked with his eyebrows raised

"I mean --" I started trying to think of a better way to put this together, "what is my relationship with you all?"

He stiffened at that. I noticed. "I'm sorry, if I offended you, but you see I'm trying to figure out things here, and I need to know the answer to this question, otherwise it will drive me crazy. If it's too personal, then it's fine, I'll try to figure it out myself!"

"It's not" he said seriously, "It's not personal."

"Then, what is the problem?"

"I'm afraid you're not quite ready to hear it yet."

"What is it?" I prodded sitting at the edge of my seat. What was it that I wasn't prepared to hear? "Please inform me everything, because you see now by just declaring that I'll be very curious, and you see I'm a very curious person. I just cannot bear suspense and things like that. I need to know everything. You know." I said gently, then added quickly "Do you understand what I'm saying?"

"Not quite." he answered grimly staring at the table, as if contemplating over something, "But, I'm trying to"

"So, you will tell me everything right?" I asked pleasantly.

"I will" he answered, "But, not now"

"Please" I almost begged, "Please. Please. Tell me now, or else I'll literally run away from here or I'll" I tried to think of something crazy, which might prompt him to reveal this, "basically just hurt myself"

"You absolutely will not" He snapped back, his gaze sliding attentively

over mine

"I absolutely will. Watch me" I announced with a smile.

"You're making this difficult for me, Kripa" he announced leaning back on the sofa, "Angad is going to call me a emotional fool at the end of this!"

"If you do not wish to see me inflicting any harm upon myself, open your mouth, and start talking…" I stated firmly, ah he was a emotional fool, how stupid of him to reveal his weakness. A part of me felt horrible for resorting to this, but really I'd the right to know everything that was going on. I'd enough of the suspense.

"The relationship" he started, then paused to look at me, annoyed, I urged him to continue "Go on" I added, "You do share a relationship with the Khanna's" he said finally.

"duh" I replied throwing my hands in the air, and rolling my eyes, "That much I already figured" I announced, "I swear Mahen, if it's something as lame as a friend, then I'll kill you. Because, you're making it appear, as if it's something HUGE"

He smiled at my sentence, and then replied, "It is."

"Well, what is it?"

"I've- umm- two conditions"

"That's fine"

"You're not going to stress over - the thing - that I'm about to inform you."

"Deal"

"You're not going to try to do anything stupid after that. I don't want to catch you running away, Kripa"

"No deal"

"What?"

"Just kidding. I was trying to make it like deal or no deal. You know that game show?"

"Kripa, you're not being serious here" he pointed out

"Okay. Baba. Sorry sorry. I'm being very much serious now. Okay? So, hurry up, and tell me, because, if you keep the suspense any second more, I'm going to poke your eye with my own finger, and pull your eye ball out, then I'm going to proceed to --"

"I'm having a hard time understanding that this (he looked at me) is you, Kripa" he said in a amused tone rubbing his muscles.

"Why is that?"

"The, Kripa, I knew never ever spoke. The amount of talking you have in a matter of a few minutes is not even close to the amount of talk she has done in a whole year"

"She sound so boring…" I announced yawning, "And, you mister are too talkative!"

"Am I now?" he asked grinning

"Yes, and, you've carefully avoided the subject of the relationship I share with the Khanna's" I pointed out, "now before I strangle you, hurry up"

He chuckled. "I heard you use that threat on my brother as well"

"You both are brothers?" I asked in surprise distracting myself by that thought, "That is so hard to believe!"

"Why is that?"

"I don't know" I mumbled, "Please don't mind my words, but you appear so sweet, and nice, while he is so horr-- I mean not so nice"

Mahen smiled, "I don't think you're husband would appreciate learning that"

At first, I didn't hear his reply properly, "Why wouldn't he?" I asked in daze, "Wait, WHAT? My husband? What have you lost your mind? I'm sixteen! And, eighteen is the legal age to get married, you moron!"

With his next sentence, I felt like a moron, "Kripa, you were sixteen in 2002, after five years you become twenty-one, which comes under legal age to be married" Oh yes. Right.

Panic. I felt like jumping up and down, breaking all the things in this place, screaming on top of my lungs, and running away to the jungle. Hopefully, if my husband learnt from the Khanna's that the spirit of a gorrilla or a chimpanzee or anything for that matter entered in his wife's body he would at least divorce me. Relax, Kripa, I told myself, do not freak out with the word husband. It's just a word.

"I don't understand" I started, "Why would my husband have a problem, if I'm criticizing that expressionless jerk?"

"Because, the expressionless jerk happens to be your husband!" announced Mahen with a finely smile brightening up his face, as I stood in shock.

The song chal chahiyaaa chahiyaaa chahiyaaaaaaaaaa chahiyaaaaaaaaaa chahiyaaaaaaaaaa chal chahiyaaaaaaaaaaaa chahiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa popped into my head.

Too numb to react, I didn't even take notice of my surroundings as I blabbered without thinking, "Are you telling me that out of the 6.3 billions people inhibiting the planet earth, and assuming 3.15 billion are males, I found only him to marry?"

"Why is that so hard to believe Kripa?" asked a deep voice from behind making my heart somersault.

I turned around to find myself gazing into those piercing green eyes of the ULTRA good-looking man, who also happened to be my unfortunate husband. Can you believe it?

Well, I can't. Out of all the possibilities I'd come up with, husband was never on the list.

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Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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woahhhhhh angads her husband!!!!!! maaan never expected tht n wth has happened.......she thinks its 2002 when its 2007.....maybe she lost her memory or something...n now has got it bak but cant remember anything frm the past few years......or she had an accident...n she has amneisa n thinks its 2002.....but woah never expected anything like tht......man felt so sorry 4 her and the way she prayed 4 her mom 2 b bak, id b crushed if it was my mom n yeah the first thing u think about is the things uve done wrong....poor girl......neways do continue soon cuz i might b in a state of confusion still😆 will b waiting!
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Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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OMGosh i dont believe this that angad is kripa's husband omgggggggggosh what a twist woah
this part was superbbbb . loved the way songs appear in her mind wen she's in shock 😆
i think she was in coma till 2yrs
well i still can't believe that angad khanna is her "husband" lolz the boy who would make fun of her in high school. ur stories r filled wid mysteries love to read them. [Are you telling me that out of the 6.3 billions people inhibiting the planet earth, and assuming 3.15 billion are males, I found only him to marry?"

"Why is that so hard to believe Kripa?"] loved this line 😆 😆
thx for continuing so fast
awesome part


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Edited by iamsmart - 18 years ago
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lmaoo, loved this part man, it's amazing, poor kripa, I feel bad for her, lol this story is confusing, please continue soon, ur such a wonderful writer.. 👏

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