Colours of my Life (AK): The End (Pg 33) - Page 4

i luved this part
i was seriously waiting for u too continue
and atlast u did it well thanx
and awesome part




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sana

lalala it was a great part who kidnapped her...hmmm angad yup angad lol u know im saying this faster then im typing it yup im a fast typer anyways continue sooon enough of my talking to much i need to breath bye ill comment agian later after u post the next part no duh obviously 😆

Lovedddddddd it!! I get why you say things are confusing cuz of the concept! lolz! but i reallyyy honestly thought the part was SHORT, yet great! and i'm letting ya off the hook cuz i know u need a break lady! u need a vacation to chicago remember? too much work, and tiredness and all that!! and dont go to delawareeeeee i hope u remember my words 😉 😉 lol. So yea, the hot guy is of course Angad na? Or is it some other dude? cuz then angad is gonna be even more than ultra good looking na? lol... ANYWAYS I wonder why she is at Too-Hot-to-Handle-Mystery-Dude-who-might-have-kidnapped-her
-and-could-be-some-creep's house?! I'm waitinggggggggggggggggggggg!! Cont Soon!!

<3 Madz

P.S- COME ON YAHOO!! OR MSN!! or whatever-- cuz I need to talk to u real bad and you have to tell me details of what happened (u know what im talking about) and if ure ok missy-- u scared the crap outta me, i was like WH-WHAT! lol! &&& there is a higher chance of me going to pakiland instead of your country =[ lol see wwe have lots to talk about so COME ONLINE!!

deff loved it! i dunno where she is, or y she dont want guys to lyke her...or y she's obsessively infatuated with orlando bloom (acttually i kno dat one. 😆 ) but she's damn funny!

i love dis story already! the first post waz really good tho too, u sould turn it into a story, id TOTALLY read dat.

cont soon 👏

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

Originally posted by: mansi1219

awesome part!! loved it.. this is kripa in angad's house? why??? i wanna kno!! sounds really cool so far and i like it..

cont soon wit it..

luv mansi

Thanks a lott Mansi 🤗 Yes, Kripa is in Angad's house. For the why you have to wait & watchh 😉😉

Originally posted by: iamsmart

i luved this part
i was seriously waiting for u too continue
and atlast u did it well thanx
and awesome part

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sana

Thankss Sana!!! 🤗 I'm just sooo glad that you enjoy this FF! 😃😃

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

lalala it was a great part who kidnapped her...hmmm angad yup angad lol u know im saying this faster then im typing it yup im a fast typer anyways continue sooon enough of my talking to much i need to breath bye ill comment agian later after u post the next part no duh obviously 😆

Thanksss Milly!! 😃 lollllll How are you? We are no longer skipping studies right?

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome dear

Thankss monikaaa 😊 I haven't seen you in soo long. Glad to see you here now thoughh 😃

Originally posted by: erier101

Lovedddddddd it!! I get why you say things are confusing cuz of the concept! lolz! but i reallyyy honestly thought the part was SHORT, yet great! and i'm letting ya off the hook cuz i know u need a break lady! u need a vacation to chicago remember? too much work, and tiredness and all that!! and dont go to delawareeeeee i hope u remember my words 😉 😉 lol. So yea, the hot guy is of course Angad na? Or is it some other dude? cuz then angad is gonna be even more than ultra good looking na? lol... ANYWAYS I wonder why she is at Too-Hot-to-Handle-Mystery-Dude-who-might-have-kidnapped-her
-and-could-be-some-creep's house?! I'm waitinggggggggggggggggggggg!! Cont Soon!!

<3 Madz

P.S- COME ON YAHOO!! OR MSN!! or whatever-- cuz I need to talk to u real bad and you have to tell me details of what happened (u know what im talking about) and if ure ok missy-- u scared the crap outta me, i was like WH-WHAT! lol! &&& there is a higher chance of me going to pakiland instead of your country =[ lol see wwe have lots to talk about so COME ONLINE!!

Madiha, do you honestly love every part I like? lol isn't there a saying short is sweet??? 😃 I'm soo sorry for scaringg you, but please don't worry everything is finee 😳 The charming guy is none other than Angad 😊😊

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

deff loved it! i dunno where she is, or y she dont want guys to lyke her...or y she's obsessively infatuated with orlando bloom (acttually i kno dat one. 😆 ) but she's damn funny!

i love dis story already! the first post waz really good tho too, u sould turn it into a story, id TOTALLY read dat.

cont soon 👏

<3 kiran

E> GA <3

Kiran, I lovedd the way you put it all together! And, thanks a lot for yourr sweet, kind and lovely words they make me want to writee more 😳

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Thanksss a lotttt everyone for your lovely wordsssss!!! 🤗They encourage me a lot 😃😃

Dedicated to Sana (iamsmart)

Part Three

"Hello, Kripa" says the too-good looking guy to me.

Startled, by that deep voice, I gave him a light smile, but rather than reassuring myself, it only made me even more nervous, since the guy did not even have the courtesy to smile back.

So, I sit back against the bed frame with my posture erect and my hands folded, as I focus my attention at him. I'm trying to provide the picture that I'm being very attentive to him. Does he care? No. He is now standing by the window gazing outside. We're currently in silence mood.

Do I wish to break the silence? Yes. Definitely. Primarily because silence always kills me. I can never ever bear silence. Some or the other silly thought wanders into my head when we're in silence mode - either I'm singing or my mind is restless, and in that state of restlessness I end up making a complete fool out of myself. So, in this period of silence, what is my mind doing? Singing! And, that would be…

Dil ke raaste mein, meine thokar kaisi khayi

What? How is that song possibly even in my mind at this point? Shouldn't I be freaking out that this guy could be my kidnapper, a mass murderer or a rapist? But, those matters are not at all my concern at this point, why? I've no idea. Perhaps, I'm just blessed with courage.

So, I just feel like singing, and I'm going to do just that.

Dil ke raaste mein, meineeeeeeee thokaaaaaaaaaarrr kaisi khayiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………

Dhoonde ab jahaan tu kaisi maayusi hai chahiiiiiiiiii

I put a dramatic hand on my head, and picture Amir Khan in this song - I pretend to be sad, as I sing out Tanhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeeeeeeeenn….

Tanhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennn…

Tanhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Kaisi huyi kaisi meri tanhayiiiii

OOPS! He is looking at me now, as if I'm some mad person. Did I just sing out loud? Is that a smile? OH MY GOD! He must think, I'm some sort of a freak for singing out some random song when he is obviously my kidnapper. Damn! "HA…." I say out loud trying to get rid of my embarrassment, anyone ever hear of laugh out loud when you make a fool out of yourself? Well, that's what I'm trying to do. Except, it's so lame I realize later, "HA HA HA HA hha haa" now I feel stupid because that was so fake. I pretend to stare at my fingers, because I cannot bear his peculiar gaze on me.

And, that's when the door opens. In steps another man he is wearing a black shirt, I notice, and a pair of casual jeans. He has a briefcase in his right hand, and a stethoscope strapped around his shirt. A doc. I suppose. He smiles at me, and I instantly take a liking to him. At least, someone here knows how to smile

"How are we doing today darling?" the doc asks, as he touches my forehead, "Was I bad yesterday?" I ask surprised, then remembering his last word, I add 'darling' as well. The green eyed boy standing behind him is studying my face in disapproval. What? What did I do now?

The doc smiles. "Don't you remember yesterday?" he asks still smiling.

"No" I answer positively confused, and afraid this time. Was I losing my mind?

"Relax" he answers, as he places his comforting hand on mine, "There is nothing to worry about. You're doing absolutely fine."

"Where are my parents?" I ask instead glancing around the room, "And, where am I?"

"They're dead!" answers the gorgeous green eyed man standing by the window, "I beg your pardon" I say feeling something horrible in my stomach, "They're dead" he answers again, as his eyes flicker in my direction, and rest in level with my eyes.

My eyes flicker back on the bed. I cannot see anything. I'm devoid of my voice, and my eyesight.

All I can picture is the happy image of my parents, running on the beach, the pillow fight we had every night, the screaming, the tantrums, the insanity. I want them back, I decide, I want to see my parents. I want to see them, because the truth is I cannot imagine my live without them. I just cannot. I love them, god damn it, I just love them. And, I want them back!

"You're joking!" I respond searching his face, but he continues to look at me blankly, masking his expressions, "I'm not" he answers calmly, yet firmly, and this time the matter finally breaks in my heart. I feel a a flame erupt in my chest, and a dead sensation in my heart.

That's the last I remember, as I feel something press in my arm before I'm lost in the world of dreams.

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How was it?

It was horrible! Sike. I'm not that nice sweetie! And yes I do love every part, ya got a problem with that? :P Your gonna love my comment. I was disappointed (ure fave word) at the length. Andddd the one scene that still doesnt answer anything, besides the fact that her parents are dead and the doc dude is real nice! lol! so missy cont soon and answer our q's in your parts ;)

<3 Madzzzz

sorry 4 not commenting 😛 the 2nd part kinda confused me as usual...lol did angad kidnap her? lol kripa thinks weird things..she's in heaven or hell 😆 😆 neways this part...omg thanhyi!!!!! hahha thts a fab song n she sings it out loud, talk about embarassing herself 😆 😆 😆 but omg her parents r dead......poor kripa....maybe im thinking this guy isnt angad but is maybe a reative 😕 i dunoo....guess things will b clear soon enuff....will b waiting 4 the next part 👏

Originally posted by: Andekhi

Thanksss Milly!! lollllll How are you? We are no longer skipping studies right?

lmao i would if school was still on next year private school so very less skipping less reading ur ffs more working lmao

anyways great part continue soon 😛

im confused...again...so im gonna read it...again.

but it was REALLY well written and i waz friggin lmao when she was singing and then she randomly started laughing...it soundz lyke me!

great part, cont soon please.

<3 kiran
E> GA <3