Colours of my Life (AK): The End (Pg 33) - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok Awesome Part!! Stupid jerks those bullies!! I hate bullies!! argh!! but DUDE... remember i told u not to use that name.. that friggin name reminds me of someone. .eww eeww ewew disgustinggg plz change it pretty plz!! lol!! and continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok first off... i m BACK!! party!!! lol..

ok ok.. great concept... i like it so far.. i like the way the first part went.. so she is writing an article or its just her life? i wanna kno.. my brain cells are dead to think bout it.. 😆 .. ok gtg read toerh two fics now...

luv ya
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man, i just noticed this ff was yours! and i just had to read it! 😆 i love the concept and the first part was really well written😊 cont all ur ffs, cuz i love them all.

x3 Prakriti

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great concept sounds really intresting
part 1 was good
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Im back! I have to catch up on so
many ff including urz! OMG! i can't
believe i haven't read them since
tyme! lol but when i found out you
had another new one i couldn't ressit 😉
so here i am 😛 and oh yeah
your ff is awsome what cruel kids 😭
it was a nice start 😉

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 really nice part poor kripa...she counted the amount of girls that liked angad??weird........but still that was a great part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part.those guys were so mean to her.poor kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aawwwww how meannnnn!!!!! so sad......neways saw u had a new ff and had 2 read 😛 great concept and the frst part is cool...kinda confused, is she writing about herself? neways do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please ignore the concept I posted earlier, since this part is very confusing...

Dedicated to readers who enjoyed Identity...

Part 2 - Unknown Territory

I open my eyes only to be hit by the sunlight. Holding a hand to my forehead I sit up. Rubbing my eyes, I lean against the bed frame, as I almost scream due to the awful pain in my head. I wish to crawl back in the covers, and fall back asleep, or at least dream about my boss giving me a promotion, except I can't do any of that, since I've to head back to work, where I'll be day dreaming as I sit in my stupid cubicle working on those god damn accounts. The thought of accounts is far from pleasing, I instantly turn my attention to the room, and that's exactly when I catch sight of my surroundings.

I'm sitting in a huge gigantic bedroom, except it's not mine, but someone else's. I'll spare you from the description; I know they do tend to be boring, occasionally while reading a novel I always make it a point to skip them. Who cares if there is a light breeze or it's raining? All you care about are the characters, and their conversations, not about the god damn setting or the weather.

I look around the room again – it's definitely not my room, for one, I can never afford such a big mansion. I can safely conclue it is a mansion partly because, if the room is the size of an entire mall, wait, I'm exaggerating, the room is the size of washrooms in Movie theatres – bad example, I know, but really that's all I could come up with in my fear of this unknown place, and my headache.

So, I'm hoping that I'd mysteriously moved out just a night or two before, but I can't seem to find that memory!! I know for a fact that I almost burned the Indian shaped roti (I had made a map of India last night, except Gujarat was not in my map) and then the smoke detector started ringing, my neighbors came running out, one of them a Chinese lady screamed, "uuuu dooo ruuti? No no ruti again"

Isn't she just cute? I love the way she communicates, her accent, her everything it's just so adorable, actually, come to think of it, I'd always had a fascination for people with different accents. Be it Chinese, Italian, Persian, Russian or even Indian. Sometimes in my fascination for those accounts, and at my obsessive attempts to learn them, I even go to the extent of communicating with these people in their accent, and their use of grammar. Wrong, I know. In a way I'm mimicking them, but really it's not in a bad way, but in a good way, I love their accents, and everything. I really do.

So, the room is definitely too rich and lavish to be mine. Besides, it's too neat. Too Too Neat. Really, now, I cannot imagine a room this neat to be mine. I hate it when things are too neat; I like to make them a little messy – so that it appears more real, and not a snapshot out of a 'House and Home' magazine!

In the next few minutes of thinking, I narrow down primary two things:

1) I've been kidnapped. I bet anything the poor guy or girl is sure going to "rethink" about this rather brilliant idea of theirs to KIDNAP me!

2) I'm dead! Is this heaven? Oh wait, or hell? But, hell can't be this pretty, can it?? I've committed a couple of sins in my life to be stuck in hell for sure. I'm not a saint. I broke up David's nose back in High School when he got the courage to ask me out. Why did I break his nose, you ask? Well, let's just say I wanted him to hate me so much that he will never ever dare to "like" or "love" me ever again – and it worked totally, he hated me so much that he always made it a point to throw paper balls on me every single day in Chemistry class. Did I mind? Not, at all. He got over me. That was the whole point. Did I mention that I carry a picture of Orlando Bloom in my wallet? My mom considered that to be a sin! She thought I was in luvee with the guy, but honestly, I wasn't in love, it was more than love.. Well, let's just say the minute I spotted him on television I obsessively did a million google searches for his pictures, and like a freak printed them all out, and stuck all those in my room, in my wallet, took a picture on my cell, and even posted them in my locker. He was my friend, my hero, my soul mate.

Oh wait, damn, the door is opening… I cannot even turn back around, and pretend to be asleep; I'll make too many noises for that. I cover my eyes with my hands, I slowly peep through my middle finger, a figure is entering, and it's a MAN!

DAMN…

And, he is too ULTRA goodlooking for me...

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Loved it or hated it?

In the next part hopefully things will be much more clear... 😃

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
awesome part!! loved it.. this is kripa in angad's house? why??? i wanna kno!! sounds really cool so far and i like it..

cont soon wit it..

luv mansi

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