KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 70

Please aap continue kijie na jaldi....kaahe ko humko sata rahi hain? 😛

m-matlab ye beta ki,shaadi archie se kar reh kashsih ke saath,ek aur ghar le le kashsih ko wahan rakh,aur usse apni rakhail bana le!she keep her!so its a win win situation

s-mumma wo!

m-thik hai fine! U can marry her! But usse pehle main India aake usko dekhungi,parkhungi agar thik lage to shaadi karlena,warna u'l only get married to archie! Waise khanna family chahti hain ki jaldi se u & archie get married, tumhare dad ke paas to business se time nahi to he cant come, but I am comin tomorrow beta! Bye!

The mom cuts the ph

k-aaj! ..aaj aapki mumma aa rahin hain!

s-haan thode der pohonch jaengi! Mujhe office mein zara kaam hai,main..

k-par aapki mumma!

s-kaam hote hi aa jaunga!

k-thik hai!

S goes

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k ghar-var saaf kar rahi hai mom aa rahi hain to islie

tabhi the door cell rings

k bhagke jaati hai door kholne

she opens the door

a hip lady in halter neck blouse & sari,& sauve jewellery highlighted hair with so much proud in her features is standin in front of her

she is old paar aisa tadkila make up kia hai manao 16 saal ki ho

she is s mom

m-sujal kahan hai?

k-emm..ji..aap? [she neva expected a mom to be lik tht]

m-tum kaun hoti ho to ask me! Sujal se kehke abhi tumhe kaam se nikal dungi! Main uski maa hun bulao usse!

k-oh ! sorry! Hello aunty!

She rolls her eyes;hearin aunty

k-andaar aaie naa,main..emm..main kashish hun! Main…

m-oh to tum ho kashsih! Jaanti hun tumhare bare mein!

k-how was ur trip aunty?

m-MAM! Mam kaho mujhe! Aur hana go & fetch me a glass of water now!

k-emm..[k feels a pang of hurt,but over looks it]..ye..yes mam!

Wo jaati hai brings a glass of water

k-emm.ye pani..

m-haan haan,pura naam kya bataya?

k-kashish..kashsih sinha!

m-sidha kama ki baat,kya maksad hai? kitna chahie?

k-[confused] jii..? main kuch..

m-kitne paise chahie?

k-paise? Mujhe koi paise nahi chahie!

m-samjhi, smart girl! Pura pura nigalna chahti ho! Saari jaedaad pe nazar hai! Lik father lik son ,sujal ke papa ne bhi apne zamane mein pyaar pyaar pyaar karke mujse shaadi karli par unhe kya pata tha,ki mera asli maksad. Khair meri baat chodo..tum batao..pyaar ke jaal mein to achche se fasa chuki ho,jahan usko naa kuch nazar aata hai,naa dikhai deta hai naa samajh aata hai,deewana kar dala hai,aage kya maksad hai!

k-aap ye kya keh rahi hain! Mera koi maksad nahi . sach sunn chahti hai naa to sach yahi hai ki ..ki..' I love sujal'..main dil se pyaar karti hun unse..bohot pyaar karti hun [ankhen mein asoo bhar rahe hain] mujhe unse ya unka kuch nahi chahie wo bohot achche insaan hai,unhone mujhe nayi zindagi di

abb tak to s ki ma bhi samaj gai hai ki she is not tht chaaluu types,& whtever she is sayin is true,paar uski ma ko ye bhi dhyaan hai ki archie se usse kitna faida hoga

m-jhooth,pyaar ka matlab bhi samajhti ho. Pyaar karne wale tumhari tarah swarthy nahi hote hain! Pyaar dene ka naam hai chinne ke nahi! Aur tum to sujal se uska sab kuch chiin rahi ho uski suckh shaanti khushi aisho aaraam sapne,sab kuch! Aisa pyaar hai tumhara! Jis sujal ne tumhare lie itna kuch kia,tumhe nayi zindagi di uske saath tum aisa kar rahi ho. Uske ehsaano ka ye sila de rahi ho!

k-matlab? [all confused]

m-matlab ye ki pehle to tum ghar tod rahi ho,bane banae rishte tod rahi ho. Tumhe kya lagta hai archie ka dil todko,usko dukhi karke tum kabhi khush reh paogi? Haan bolo. Kisi kie pyaar ki kabr par apne pyaar ka mahal nahi banaya jaa ta kashsih. Aur rahi baat sujal ki usse to tum pyaar karti ho naa,par usko hi itna bada dukh uska 750 crore ka nuksaan karvana chahti ho. Uski tarrakki ,uske sapno ka sabse bada kaanta tum ho!uski khushiyon ka grahan!

Ye sab k se suna nahi jaa raha aur uske asoo hain ki bahe hi jaa rahe hain,wo asoo dukh dard takleef bebasi ke hain jo uske dil ko chiir kar nikal rahe hain

m-tum agar usse sachche dil se chahti ho. Pyaar karti ho usse vaadaa karo ki jo main kahungi wohi tum karogi! Kaho vaada! Main uski maa hun sabse zyada main hi uska bhala sochungi.

k-[k looks at s ki mom,uake kaano mein archie aur mom ki baatein gunj rahi hain] jii vaada karti hun,aap job hi kahengi main wohi karungi!

m-to thik hai aaj se yaad rahe tumhe uske dil se apne lie pyaar ko mitaana hai,nafrat paida karni hai,aur nafrat tum paida karogi usse nafrat karke! Uskko apne se dur kar do! Jisse pachtae wo,apne aapko kose ki tumse pyaar kyun kia usne!

K in a determined hard tine says

k-aap jaisa chahengi,jaisa kahengi waisa hi hoga.

arghhhhhhhhh hate sujal's mom now shes messed it all up 😡

nice part............................but sujal mom like hell............................sujal kaha ho tum........................plz con't soon

Sujal - should know what he wants, what's the point of asking his mother when he knows she is going to say no

😉really an interesting one⭐️ awwsome😊 please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"When someone loves U,
U dont realise it...
When U realise it,
Its too late.
U always love the one who leaves U &
Leave the one who loves U!"

my analysis


s'mom total b**** i hate her i wish i could kill her how dare she talks to kashish like that.

kashish wats the meanin of bein so stupid cant she just see that s mom is tryin to trap her so that sujal can archie and she can get loads of money after selling her son.

sujal why are u not there when ur mom spoke to kasish

overall a well written part cont soon

To abb s comes home

Mumma is sittin in the livin room

K bechari o apne kamre mein phut phutke ro rahi hai

Apne sapno ashayon aur pyaar ko khone ke dukh ko asooyon ke zarie bahane ke alaawa koi rasta bhi nazar nahi aa raha usko

s aake-

s-arre mumma aap aa gai !

he hugs mom

m-haan ,how is my boy?

s-i am gud, mumma wo kashish ko dekha?

m-haan dekha bhi aur mila bhi

s-kaisi lagi? Khubsurat hai naa ! aap meri shadai usse hi karvaoge naa!

m-haan aur naa !

s-matlab? [confused]

m-matlab ye beta ki,haa wo khubsurat to hai, aur nahi I mean itni jaldi kisi ko kaise samjha jaata hai,mera vishvaas kar beta mujhe lagega ki kashsih tere lie sahi hai to main zarur teri shaadi ussi se karvaungi! Aur haan ek aur baat jaake taiyaar ho jaa!

s-taiyaar?

m-haan wo archie ke ghar mein ek chotti si puja hai,u knw!

s-kaisi puja? Wo log puja-paath mein kab se vishvaas karne lag gae?

m-u knw naa sujal unko shaadi ki kitni jaldi hai to ye shaadi ke pehle hone wali puja hai ,bass!

s-shaadi?????????????????? Maine kaha naa mujhe nahi karni archie se shaadi ! maine kaha naa I love kashish,bass!

m-haan to thik hai naa! Maine bhi kaha hai naa wo mujhke sahi lagi to teri shaadi usse mein karva dungi!

s-kaab?????????? Jab archie mere palle bandh jaegi tab?????

m-mujhpe bharosa hai naa!

s-nahi hai mujhe bharosa!!!!!! Kisi pe bharosa nahi hai!

m-sujal jazbaati mat bano,akal se kaam lo! Bass ek puja hi to hai ,please! Aur maine tujse kaha hai naa! Dekh teri khushiyon ka khayal,mujhe,teri maa ko nahi hoga to aur kise hoga bol. Abb jaa jaake puja ke lie ready ho jaa!

S doesn't say anything,bass gusse se goes upstairs into his room