KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 69

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Posted: 17 years ago
I like your fan fiction its nice.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ye kashish pagal hui hai kya..lol archie ki waja sy itna ghusy mei agai es stupid archie ka kuch karo lol the prt waz gud continue asap:D
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Posted: 17 years ago
s-kashsih tumhe kya ho gaya hai,u dont behave lik thi. kya prob hai mujhe batao. i'l solve it. i jst thought ki v confessed love 4 each other 2day so v'l..

k-love? wht love! i dont love u!

s ka heart sinks

s-par..tumne to aaj subah kaha tha ki..

k-haan kaha tha,mujhe laga aap aise hi mazak kar rahe hain,to maine bhi mazak mein keh dia,mujhe kya pata ki aap uss mazak ko seriously le lenge!

s-mazak? itni badi baat ka mazak,kashsih.

k-aur waise bhi,aapke saath koi relationship,ur gettin married MR ,ghtiya insaan dono kashtiyon mein kadam rakhna chahte hain!

kehke strts 2 go

s grabs her hand

k is shocked

s-nahi! main nahi maan sakta,ye meri kashish nahi ho sakti. kuch to baat hai

k haath chudake goes 2 her room



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Posted: 17 years ago
k goes 2 her room & cries her heart content

wo jisse pyaar karti hai,uske paas jaa nahi skati kyunki ye galat hai,aur apne dil ko samjha bhi nahi sakti

udhar s bhi bohot pareshaan hai k ke behaviur se par usko samaj nahi aa raha whts wrong

tabhi s ka ph aata hai

s-hello,oh mumma kaisi hain?

mom-main thik hun,par tumhe kya hua beta,y r u mis treatin archie she called me bechari bohot dukhi thi!

s-i dont lik her mom!

m-u told me,par sujal ur gettin married 2 her naa,wo log kya samjhenge!

s-i cant marry her!i love some1 else!

m-wht??????? paiso ka kya...emm..i mean beta..tum to jaante hi ho...

s-I CANT BE HAPPY WITH ARCHIE!i love kashsih,mom!

m-kashsih? ye kaun hai?

s-mumma,emm..kashsih mere saath rehti hai!

m-u r in live in u didnt tell me!

s-its not live in,usko maine bachaya tha she was gonna commit suicide,uske ghar walon ne nikal dia,uska rape hua tha! [pain on s ka face is visible while sayin all this].so i took her to my home,islie mere saath rehti hai bass,nothin else!

m-sujal,tum kitne bhole ho! tum inn middle class ladkiyon ko nahi jaante,rayizzaadon ko fasaane ki chalein hoti hai sab paison ke lie.tumhe kya pata uska rape naa hua ho,she must hav seduced tht guy!

s ka khun khaul uthta hai,he cant here more

s-mumma plz! wo aisi nahi hai,aur naa hi main koi bachcha hun jo insaan naa samaj paun!pyaar karta hun main usse!uske bina nahi jee sakta!

m-par sujal,bevkuf matt bann wo paise...

s-PAISE NAHI! PYAAR CHAHIE MUMMA ! PYAAR! KASHSIH CHAHIE!

m-thik hai sun meri baat,tu archie se shaadi karle,jisse humein faida bhi ho jaega aur kashish se tu pyaar karta hi hai

s-matlab?

m-matlab ye beta ki,shaadi archie se kar reh kashsih ke saath,ek aur ghar le le kashsih ko wahan rakh,aur usse apni rakhail bana le!she keep her!so its a win win situation



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Posted: 17 years ago
omg i feel like killin s mom how can she say such a thing yew 😡 .

and that stupid kashish she loves sujal let her admit it

any ways lovely part cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh dat is sick for a motha to say to her son arghh 😡 😡

nd kasish bless her,

reli reli reli good update plz lz cont soon!! 👏 👏

want to know sujals rection!!!
lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ufff idiot sujal ki mom 🤬 tamiz he nai 🤬 i wanna kill her reallyyyyyy 🤬 n sujal ka role tu bohot acha laga👍🏼 par ye kashish es ka kuch nai ho sakta ab sujal he kuch kary lol
Edited by Anam azhar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
the part was nice but the conversation btw sujal and sujal's mom was like 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ..i luv ur fanfic..!! finally i read ur whole fanfic..n i must say u r a gr88 writter!!! 👏 plzz do continue sooon!!

*iMan
Edited by beauty_queen - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi....sorry for not commenting for so long but I was not active 😭 😭 ......i have read the part....its great expect the conversation between sujal and his mom, that was totally 🤢......I can't believe a mother can think like this for her own son bcoz of money 🤢 .....hope sujal doesn't listen to her..... 😛

Sorry Again, Hope u don't mind 😛
Ruhee 😳
Edited by Ravinder duggal - 17 years ago

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