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Posted: 16 years ago

Kuch der baad s ki mom comes back

Aur wo dekhti hai ki s bar mein baithkar he is drinking

m-sujal inn sabka kya matlab hai?

S turns,his eyes r red, a bit disbalanced

s-kis..ka?

m-tum aise aa kyun gae party se sabne kya socha hoga, aur haan parso tumhari shaadi tae ho gai hai archie se

s gets up a bit tipsy

he claps thrice

s-wah, abb shaadi bhi..wah . aapse..kyun umed rakhi maine…jo karma hai mujhe karma hai..

m-sujal tu hosh mein nahi hai,jaa jaake apne kamre mein jaake so jaa

s-hosh….hosh mein to main abb aaya hun..aur ye samjha hun..mumma aap..sun lijie ye…duniya ki koi bhi takat mujhe mere..pyaar se juda nahi kar sakti..I WILL MARRY KASHSIH… thts it

aisa kehke he staggers into his room, leavin his mom in complete shock & bewildered

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Posted: 16 years ago
👏👏👏 wow a fab part loved the way sujal argued and told his mom his that he will only marry kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
ab toh sujal kashish se shaadi kar ke hi rahega...mujhe poora yaheen hai mere sujal par😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
yay!!! finally sujal has told is mom on what he wants!!!!
yay again!!
keep up the good work and cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey very nice part.........per yeh kya sujal ki maa ne shaadi archie se karne ko kaha...........aur yeh kashish bhi na.......lekin kya baat kahe hum apne sujal ke bare me........kehta hai shaadi karega to kashish se woh bhi pure hakk se jaise kashish uski ho.........ab kya shaadi karega sujal kisse.........kya kashish manegi...........kya sujal ko sachchi pata chalegi.........in sabhi sawalo ke jawab chahiye....thanks
love
kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Nxt day-

S subah bina kisi se bhi baat kie nikal gaya office ke lie

He was looking angry depressed & sad from inside

Abb shaam tak sari taiyaariyan karni hai

S ki engagement ki

K se naukron ki tarah chilla chilla ke saara kaam karwa rahi hai s ki maa

m-aye ladki jaldi kaam kar! Jaldi haath chala!

k-jii

she is cutting some vegetables

m-aaj sagai hai sujal ki pata hai naa,kal shaadi unke wahan se koi shikayat naa aae

shaadi ki baat sunke hi k is so shocked & heart broken ki galti se chaaku se apni ungli kaat leti hai

k-aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!

m-aaye thik se kaam kar! Useless clumsy gal!

mom goes

k apni patti watti khud karti hai ghao ki par dil ke ghao kaise bhare

abb shaam ko-

archie & family aur sab aa chuke hain

par s ka koi naamonishaan nahi

s mom calls s repeatedly & s keeps keeps on sayin tht he is comin

8 baje ka time tha s comes at 10

kapde bhi nahi badle sidha aake office ke kapro mein hi as said to him ring exchange karli ar ke saath

ring to pehna raha hai ark o nazre hain k pe

k ne unn nazro ke darr se hi apni nazre jhuka rakhi hain

s sidha as a chore ring exchange karke sab ar family sabke saamne without greetin any1 sits on the bar & strts drinkin

k looks at him achanak s koaise kya ho gaya hai,her heart aches for him par she is helpless

abb all ppl go

andaar dining hall mein s mom ne archie ki family ke lie dinner organize kia hai

all r sitting

k is doing all the work

m-jao jaake sujal ko khane pe bulake lao ,kashish

k-jii

k goes

s bar mein hi baitha hua hai

he is half drunk

still drinking

he is tryin to went out his frustration & helplessness in his drinks

k comes

k-wo…su..sujal ji [thoda dur khadi hai]

he is not rplyin jst drinking

k-emm..[she comes a bit coser as she thinks ki s ne shayad suna nahi]…sujal wo aapko khan eke lie aapko bula rahe hain

then also no rply

she is confused ki kya kare

dheere se puts her hand on his shoulder to nudge him a bit

k-sujal..emm..wo..main..

k ke haath rakhte hi s grabs her hand

s k ka haath pakad leta hai

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Posted: 16 years ago

S holds her hand

K is shockedddddddddd

s-….[he splurs]..tum..tu..sirf..mujse..pyaar karti ho..sirf..mujse..hai naa…haan..bolo…

k-emm..plz chalie naa sab aapka intezzar kar rahe hain,khane par…[she doesn't knw wht to do]

s-pehle..ans me…

k-emm..plz..plz mera haath chod dijie

s-na..nahi chunga..jab tak tum nahi kahogi kit um..muj..mujse ..pyaar ..karti ho..tab tak nahi chodunga…

tabhi s mom comes & sees everythin

m-sujal! Kya ho raha hai ye!

s-shhhhhhhhhh..aap chup rahie…..main..main kashsih se baat kar raha hun

m-sujal kya badtameezi hai ye..uska haath chodo aur chalo khana khane

s-nahi..nahi chodunga….bcoz I love her

m-kashsih samjhao isko!

k-emm..err..jii..[abb k bhi kya kare]..wo plz sujal ji..haath chod dijie mera.

s-kaho..kaho naa..ki tum..mujse..pyaar karti ho..plz..

m-sujal ye sab kya..dont I act lik a love lorn…

s-shhhhhhhhhh…shut up…I am talking k..kashish

k is all confused kya kare

m-thik hai main jaati hun,I will take care of the guest kashsih tum sujal ko jaldi dinner table pe leke aao

k-par main..

m-mujhe nahi pata kit um apna haath kaise chudaogi,par jst bring him thr

kehke mom goes

s-hmm..haan..kashish..kya..keh..keh raha tha main…hmm…han…kaho naa..ek baar plz..tht u love me…

her eyes r wellin up seein s in this state

k-plz mera haath chodie naa,ye thik nahi

s-haan thik nahi..thik nahi..jo ho..raha hai thik nahi…..mujhe bass itna pata hai ki…main tumse pyaar karta hun..tumhare lie kuch bhi kar sakta hun

k-to chalie khana kha lijie sabke saath..plz…

s-naa..kaha naa…

k-plz..mere lie

s looks at k for a while with his intoxicated love filled red eyes

leaves her hand

gets up a bit disbalanced

& walks staggerin into the dining hall

she follows him

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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww poor sujal
he is sufferin soooo much and whu is kashish listnin to his stupid mom
arghh hate her lol
newaz was brillaitn part plz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Abb s staggers into the dining hall

All of them including ar family & ar are lookin at him

His mom is getting embarrassed at his state

He is tysy drunk staggerin,flushed face,ted intoxicated eyes splured speech & on to top it all he is carryin a half filled whiskey bottle in his hand

Through which he is gulpin more & more

Aur k bilkul uske peeche hai

He comes & sits at his chair

S is least bothered abt ppl's stares & their whispered comments

m-kashish chalo khana paroso

k-jii

s-k..kashsih…

k turns

she is all confused,ki usko kya karma chahie

every1 is lookin at s & k

s-k..kashsih…yahan..aao..yahan..

k looks yahan wahan

goes to s

k-jii..kuch chahie tha..

he grabs her hand aur khinchke usko apne saath wali chair pe bitha deta hai

all ppl gasp including k

he is still holding her hand,so she cat get up

s-kashsih..kashsih..tum hamare saath hi khaogi bass…kashsih khao naa..bass aur kuch nahi sununga main…kisi ko koi aitraaz? Hmm?

All r lookin at sk bilkul surprised

& specially s mom & ark e chere par to 12 baje hain

s-jis..jisko..bhi aitraaz ho..wo chala jae..uski zarurat nahi hai…

zabardasti k ko apne saath bithake khilata hai

aur isse pehle koi kuch kahe

khana khake s uthke goes into his room

s mom to is totally irritated,feelin defeated ki uska paasaa hi palat gaya

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Posted: 16 years ago
kya part likhe tumne.........maza aa gaya lekin yeh kya sujal ki aarchie se sagai ho gayi........yeh achcha nahi hua..........maine to socha ki sagai ke din tamasha hoga aur sagai tut jayegi lekin yaha pe kuch aur hi hua..........ab bechari kashish kya kare apne pyaar ko kisi ke saath dekh nahi sakti aur use is tarah dard me bhi nahi dekh sakti........kyun kiya sujal ki maa ne aisa.........do pyaar karnewalo ko alag kar diya.....duniya ka sab se bada gunah kiya hai........khaie jane do usme akal hi nahi......warna kya woh apne bete ki khushi ke saath aisa karti..........aur yeh jab sujal ne kashish ka haath pakda woh party me pakadta to aur maza aata kya tamasha banta........archie ka chehra dekhne layak hota na.........per ab kya hoga shaadi hogi ki nahi........mera bas chale to dulhan hi badal doon archie ki jagah kashsih ko........main aisa karti hoon archie ko kidnap kara deti hoon......phir maza aayega...........saath main sujal ki maa ko bhi.......phir unhe milne se koi nahi rok sakta..........kya kehti ho........waise part to bade hi mast the......ab jaldi se dusre part post kar do.....thanks
love
kashish

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