KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 71

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Posted: 16 years ago

brilliant update!!!!

arghhhhhhhhhhh hate sujals mom, she is sooooooooo selfish
keep up da gud work and cont soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
yeh maa hai ki dayan.......mera matlab kaise sujal ke saath aisa kar sakti hai.....kahi yeh soteli maa to nahi...........mera matlab sujal gala fad fad ke keh raha hai ki use kashish se shaadi karni hai aur uski maa hai ki archie ke piche padi hai.......lagta hai uski maa andhi hai jo sujal ke pyaar ko aur kashish ki khubsurati ko dekh nahi rahi.........kash main use kahi durr bhej sakti........i hope sujal apne kamre me jane ke bad ek bar jake kashish ko dekhe ki woh akeli hai...use tumhari zaroorat hai......uske aanshu pochne ke liye.........use abhi ek sahare ki zaroorat hai........sujal ke pyaar ka sahara..........ab jaldi se sujal ki ma ki asliyat samne aajaye warna main kuch gadbad kar dungi............bahot hi achcha part tha.........ab jaldi se dusra part bhi likh do.......thanks
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kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

really a nice one⭐️ so sweetly written😊 please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Yaad aaye mujhe jb aapki…
Dil nay mehsoos ki kami aapki,
Yeh aarzu nhi k kisi ko rulayen hum,
Bus itna kaafi hai,
K kisi ko yaad aayen hum…."

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Posted: 16 years ago

S doesn't say anything,bass gusse se goes upstairs into his room

Abb mom goes to K's room & knocks

K knock sunke apne asoo ponchti hai & opens the door

k-arre m..mam aap

m-haan ye lo take this. [gives her a box]

k-ye kya hai?

m-dress hai, Indian suit. Puja mein jaana hai Archie ke ghar,ye pehenke jaana. Chalo jao get ready,jaldi

k-oh thanku mam . abhi aai 5 min [ingratituated]

m-thik hai pehenke mujhe dikhana

k-jii

k goes to change

kuch der baad-

s ki mom apne upar make up thop rahi hai apne room mein

k comes bilkul darri darri sehmi sehmi si

k-emm..mam…

m-oh pehen lia fine,jao sujal ko bulake lao late ho raha hai

actually jo suit k ko pehnne ke lie s ki mom ne k ko dia hai uska gala kuch zyada hi deep hai hadd se zyada hi

she is not feelin comfortable in that at all,coz wo kabhi aise kapde nahi pehenti naa

k-emm..wo..wo..mam..ye..mam..ye ajeeb sa..iska gala..kuch

m-shut up , pehle kapde do phir maharani ke nakhre uthao,main sujal nahi hun samjhi ,jao sujal ko bula lao late ho raha hai

k ko bura lagta hai par what can she say

she turns to go & call sujal

m-aur suno jo subah baat hui thi yaad rakhna

k nods in yes & goes to s ka room

she enters s ka room,par door kr paas khadi rehti hai

s is ready in his Indian kurta pajama bass gadi pehen raha hai

k-emm..aapki mumma bula rahi hai

s-haan aa raha hun [still engrossed in wearin the watch]

watch slips offs ka haath aur zameen par gir jaata ha

k goes & jhuk ke goes to pick up the watch

s sees her reflection on the mirror in front

k uthake watch s ko dene lagti hai

s-ye kya pehna hai? [strictly] jao change karke aao

k-emm..emmm..aapki mumma ne dia

s-mom ne? ye mom naa [murmers]

k-waise bhi late ho raha hai

s-hmm, dhyaan rakhna zyada jhukna mat,aur haan,duppatta odh lo

k-jii

k as told by s,duppatte ko bilkul failake odh leti hai,par kuch zyada fark nahi as the duppatta is treansparent

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Posted: 16 years ago
bechari kashish suli beech supari ban gayi.........maa ko kuch kah nahi sakti aur sujal ko sach bata nahi sakti........aur yeh kaise aurat hai khud apne bete ke pyaar ko aise kapde de rahi hai....ab aage kuch ho gaya to kaun jawab dega iska..........lekin koi baat nahi sujal hai na use sambhalne ke liye.....lekin aaj to sujal ne kurta pehna hai to coat bhi nahi hoga........ab puja me kya hoga..........ple jaldi se part likh do..........
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kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Abb they reach archie?s place

Wahan ouja kam party zyada hai

S ki maa zabardasti s ko archie se baat karne ke lie majbur kar rahi kisi bahane se

Ya kisi aur jagah busy rakh rahi hai

Jisse s ka dhyaan k ki taraf naa jae

Some guys r thr who r completely chekin out k

Tabhi-

Ar ke dad go up on stage

Ar dad- aaj bohot khushi ka din hai,iss waqt main apni beti archie aur sujal ko stage pe bulana chahunga

S is shocked ki aisi kya baat ho gayi

B s cld understand anything he is dragged by ar onto the stage

Ar is holdin his arm smiling & all

Ar dad- mujhe ye batane mein bohot khushi hai ki kal meri beti archi khanna ki sagai sujal gareal ke saath kal hone wali hai

All applaud

S is shell shocked his heart sinks

Uski maa bhi stage pe aake smiling to media & all

Huggin s & ar etc

S whispers to her mom

s-mom ye sab kya..? aapne to?

m-arre sujal unhone aise force kia sabke saamne main kya kehti,arre chinta mat kar sab thik hoga,sagai hi to hai shaadi thode hi hai, kar le,aur agar mujhe kashsih sahi lagi to

s-kab tak intezaar karun main aapke faisle ka,I am fed up,mujhe to lagta hai ki aap chahti hi nahi ki?

m-beta main teri maa hu,tu jaanta hai naa maa ka dil apne bachche ke lie dekh parakh ke bahu laungi,aur?

while uski maa apna fake sa motherhood pe lecture suna rahi hai

s locates k atlast in the bhid

wo bilkul kone mein akele khadi hai

k bohot mayus hai s ki sagai ki khabar pe,par wo kya kare wo utni hi bebas hai

shayad khushiyan uske naseeb mein hi nahi

sujal ka saath uski kismet mein hi nahi

she is lookin down to hide her tears from flowin

some guys come to her

they pretend as if they r passin her

par uss bahane se deliberately they brush agains her

aur jab side se jaate hain to they peep at her cleavage

k is feelin verry uneasy & uncomfortable,par kare bhi to kya kare

usne kuch kaha to sab log chid jaenge usse,aur wo hai hi kaun

they r so big ppl

par s se ye scene naa dekha jaa raha hai naa bardasht ho raha hai

waise hi gusse mein irritation mein tha apni maa ki wajah se aab k ko pareshaan dekh lia

aape se bahar ho raha hai

he is fuming

his anger risin

his fist clenchin

his face stiffnin

wo sab kuch chodkar bina kuch soche samje stage se utar jaata hai

grabs k by her hand aur uska haath thaanke usko pakad ke car tak le jaata hai puri duniya ke saamne

usko apni car mein bithake drives off

s ke iss action se k to hairaan hai hi

balki uski maa archi & family aur party mein maujood saare log bilkul daang aur shocked to hell hain

Edited by belanila - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part.........per yeh kya ho raha hai s ki sagai us archei se........aisa nahi ho sakta.....achcha hua sujal sagai ke pehle hi kashish ko leke nikal gaya.........aur puja thi ki party........how can it be both at same time..........bechari kashish puri tarah se tut gayi.........use to ab aisa mehsoos hone lagaa hoga ki woh kitni akeli hai.........lekin nahi tumhe pareshan hone ki koi zarrorat nahi kyunki sujal hai na sab ka muh bandha karne aur tumhara khyal karne........ab aage kya hoga ........kaha gaye woh dono.......bahot se swaal hai isi bane naya part lkh do........thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago

S drives off in highesttttttttt speed

K ki kuch himmat nahi ho rahi ki s se kuch bhi kahe,bcoz she can gauge out ki s ka gussa iss waqt satve kya chudhve aasmaan par hai

S gadi rokta hai ghar pohonchke

K ka haath pakadke k ko khinchke ghar ke andaar le aata hai

s-yahin raho .

kicks the floor in his rage,jisse ki thoda gussa thanda hota hai uska

k hairaani se bass s ko dekh rahi hai

realization strikes him ki uske gusse ki wajah se he acted harshly & rudely with her

his features milden a bit,he turns to her

s-tum thik ho?

She nods in yes

s-shaadi karlo mujse,marry me

k ke eyes widen in shock

k-nahi,aapki shaadi to…

k-par main pyaar tumse karta hun kashish,bohot pyaar karta hun

k ko apni bahon mein thaam leta hai

k closes her eyes,pighal si rahi hai uski bahon mein

ye ehsaas uske lie kitna naya anokha aur pyaara hai

then realization strikes s

she pushes s

k-nahi [with forced disgust] aisa nahi ho sakta

s-kyun nahi ho sakta????????

k-aap kaise ..aise..main ek rape victim hun . aap aisi ladki se kaise pyaar kar sakte hain [her eyes r welling up]

s-pyaar kia nahi jaata kashish ho jaata hai. Mujhe bhi hua hai tumse. Aur maine pehle hi kaha hai tumhare atit se koi lena dena nahi hai mera. Wo bass ek haadsaa tha. Usse mere pyaar pe koi asaar nahi hua hai .main tumhe bohot chahta hun

k-main aapko nahi chahti bass

s-jhooth kisko bol rahi ho kyun bol rahi ho. Kiske dabav mein bol rahi ho kashsih batao mujhe? Kisse darr rahi ho? Kyun darr rahi ho? Main hun naa tumhare saath,mere hote hue daarne ki to koi baat hi nahi hai koi wajah hi nahi hai [holdin her both arms]

k-[s ke alfaaz sunke k apne asoo rok nahi paa rahi] mat pyaar karie mujse,plz

s-nahi rok sakta,jaise tum nahi rok sakti apne aapko mujko chahne se

k-[with a strictness] kaun kehta hai ki main aapko …

s-tumhari ankhen,keh kyun nahi deti ,kyun itna inkaar hai

k-nahi nahi nahi,nahi karti main aaaapse pyaar bass. I DON'T LOVE U. get me?

s-got u. but I love u madly. Tumhe to main paake hi rahungi,zindagi ki meri sabse badi aur ahem khushi ho tum. Zindagi mujse meri zindagi mera pyaar nahi chiin sakti . ye main hone nahi dunga. Shaadi to main tumse hi karunga kashish chahe jo ho,chahe jaise bhi

k jitna bhi try kare she is unable to even shake is love for her,she is fed of her tries & failures

she wants to avoid him as she knws ki agar zyada der s ke saaamne wo rahi to kamzor pad jaegi,apne pyaar ko nahi maar paegi

islie she walks into her room

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Posted: 16 years ago
absolutely brilliant
nd wat kind of mom is sujals mom, sooooooooo selfish and soooooooo greedy for money that she will sacrifice her sons life arghhh
nd wat is kashish doin she sud just tel sujal aout his mom !
keep up the good work and cont soon !!!!!
Edited by anishaumer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar very nice part........this is our sujal..........comes with storm..........kya baat hai aaj to baad sidhi shaadi tak pahonch gayi........mann gaye.......lekin yeh kashish thodi pagal hai....shadi karo ya na karo lekin sujal ka hakk banta hi kyun woh uske pyaar ko thukra rahi hai.....use bhi pata lage ki ghar ka koi apna hi uski khushiyon ko aag laga raha hai............ab sujal kya karega....usne to kaha ki woh kisi bhi hal me kashish se shaadi karega........ple jaldi se next part post karo.......thanks
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