DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC) - Page 8

"wow naina..d rings r beautiful.." ritu pointed out

"aalekh aur meri choice thi...dey had to b gud.." she grinned
"aur haan bhaai..aalekh na hota to main shaayad hi kuch kar paati...
akele rings decide karna ..not my cup of tea"

"waah qaidi..maan gaya tujhe" huda winked at him..

"kya tarika dhoondha hai " he whispered to raj..

"kya matlab?"

"navin ke dil mein jagah banaane ke liye...after all yeh navin ka future jija jo hone waala hai"

"tu phir shuru ho gaya...naina & aalekh r jst FRIENDS!!" he shouted d last word out...

everyone turned towards him..

"kya hua...friends wat?" yudi asked

"f..friends woh haan..i was jst sayin ki ab navin aur shaalu r more dan jst friends..
lets raise a toast to dis occasion guys.." cursing himself for his outburst....

yet again two people knew wat was goin on in his head...&
dey tried dere best to control their giggles

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after a little more partying...d guys were tired to d bone...

wishin pooja & ali (who were to leave for ali's hometown d followin day..)
a very happy married life...d guys decided to leave..
.......

shaalu, navin, naina & raj were in d same car wid raj driving & navin beside him

on their way back...

"thanx naina...i couldn't have asked for a better surprise..." with tears in her eyes..shaalu hugged naina...

"come on shaalu...oh bhabhi..u know u don't hv to thank me...waise i called up uncle & aunty..dey were really happy...& r planing to come to india soon...do call dem up aaj hi..dey were very excited.."

"aur bhaai engagement to maine kara di...atleast shaadi khud kar lena" she laughed off

"kya hua raj...y r u so subdued?"
navin asked him

"kuch nahin...just a little tired...waise sab se zyaada tired to naina ko hona chahiye...
d way she danced wid aalekh...it was just gr8!"

"haan ...tired to hun!" she forced a smile..
had she just imagined it or did raj really sound upset?

i wish i could tell him my feelings...par kya faayda...
unnecessarily putting him into an embarassing situation..
when i know he doesn't feel d same 4 me..
i'm tired raj...tired of hiding my emotions..tired of concealing my true feelings..
i wish dere had been no one in ur life....it just struck her dat she loved him...
wow!! so much for first love...
i wish it wasn't one sided...she sighed

due to their tireness they were all unaware as to when their heads hit the pillow...
& wen dey were all sound asleep ...dreaming about their loved ones..
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another beautiful morning dawned...d day was too pleasant to b spent indoors...
so all of dem went for a picnic..

"yaar dis is one of d best holidays i've had" yudi exclaimed

"ya & all thnx to naina...ek saath hum sab ko pata nahi kaise jhel rahi hai" ritu added

"oh come on ritu!!..u guys r like my family..mom-dad ke baad...ek bhaai ko chodkar ..i had no one..par now i hv all of u...
main abhi aayi.."
remimded of her parents...naina was tryin hard to fight back her tears..

"navin ..naina..she's upset..." raj pointed out to navin who had been cozying up wid shaalu
"i think usse apne parents ki yaad aa rahi hai..she needs u"...

it seemed raj could read her face..or rather her thoughts...& her heart...
yet the two seemed only to go furthur away from each other wid each passing day
.............. dele te


DIPIKA 6:31 am(15 minutes ago) apne parents ke baare mein sunte hi

..navin became rigid....reminded of all d pain..he went upto naina

standing alone on a cliff lookin at d vast expanse of d mountains & d clear blue sky...
naina felt small & insignificant...
the world seemed too large a place for her ....
her eyes brimmed wid tears...
those dark images beggining to haunt her once again...

she felt deathly pale.. shivering ..her knees unable to support her weight....gave way & she fell into navin's arms ...

"bh..bhaai" she looked up at his hardened face...& his moist eyes

"naina"

d two looked at each other for wat seemed an eternity...

not able to fight herself anymore..she resigned herself in her brother's arms...tears flowing freely..

unable to see her little sis upset ..navin hugged her tightly ..
not realising wen a tear wet his cheek...

"bas naina...bas yaar...u forgot ur promise..."

"i know bhaai...par aaj...aaj control nahi hua...aaj ma-baba ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai..."

a lump had risen in his throat..& he fought his desire to let his tears roll by...

the two snuggled tightly too each other..forgetting the world...sheltering each other from their own hurt...their own grief...

"u know i can't c u cry naina..yaar tu hi to meri himmat hai...my pride...my strength..aur agar tu toot gayi to mujhe kaun sambhalega..."
he tried his best to console her..while succumbing to his loss..his pain every passing second

6:37 am(10 minutes ago) she wiped away her tears..& stood erect...
" i'm sorry bhaai...i didn't mean to cry...aapne to
army hi isliye join ki thi ...so dat no other children would have to bear d same loss...d same loneliness...
i remember ur promise to wipe away terrorism from dis world...
i'll always remember it....& i'll also remember d promise dat i made to u...never will i cry again bhaai..never.. chalein"
she forced a smile & started moving..

navin held her wrist.."naina,..r u tryin to hide sumthing?..kahin woh dreams tumhe phir se..."
"oh my god! tumne pehle kyon nahi bataaya...kab se naina?" he asked wen she nodded

"since d day u guys came here...jab aapne apni..d..death ka naatak kiya tha..."

"i'm such a jerk...shit yaar...i'm really sorry naina...we're seeing d psychiatrist kal whether u like it or not"

"nahi bhaai...i'm takin sleeping pills...tension mat le.."

"u sure?? chal phir" he added seeing her nod
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"in dono ko kaafi der ho gayi".. raj thought..
"i hope dey're fine...main jaake dekhta hun.."

"raj ruk...baith ja..bhaai behen ko akela chod de yaar"huda stopped him
"i guess ur right..."

"raj..naina ke aate hi yahaan ka mood improve karna hoga...get ready wid ur guitar..aaj naina needs our support...& we'll all give dat to her.." shalini gave raj a smile..

"hmmmm"

nice updates... poor naina.. feel really sad for her.. hope she n raj get together soon n she can forget her pain..

nice one yaar plz continue soon 👏

hey guys...i doubt i'll update now...i hardly get back any replies despite regularly updating...

Originally posted by: crystalspark

hey guys...i doubt i'll update now...i hardly get back any replies despite regularly updating...

yaar tumhari fic awsome hai you should updaye

actuallu kuch yahan padte hai kuch orkut pe silye bhi kabhi yaha kabhi vahan hote hai

maine isse pahle sare reply vahin kiyethe

plz upadte soon you are axcellent amainxing love your fiv totatlly👏

Reading your ff everyday. It is a great work. Please continue updating regularly. Your are doing a great job. Do not let out.

Please update regularly as it is very nice to read.

waaatt???? no dont do that.. i always leave comments.. after every update.. mujhe sazaa mat do yaar.. plzz.. update karo na.. first thing i checked today ws ur ff.. n i ws surprised to see no update.. plz yaar.. i luv ur ff.. its one of the rare ones in which navin is alive.. i luv the concept..continue plz..

I love reading ur ff yaar.Its really diff n excellent.plz update it soon 😊