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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
ab naina aur raj dance floor par ho...aur dono ek saath dance naa kare...NOT POSSIBLE!
SO HERE GOES....

d lights were dimmed...
"alright everyone...get ready for a game...we'll b blindfolding u..
after some dancing d music's gonna stop & so will u..mind u..u'll b changin ur dance partners blindly...dat's were d fun lies...our spotlight will focuss in d end on dat dance couple who'll
have shared d best chemistry & vibes....so losers step out...& winners step in" the DJ yelled

"come on ritu...bahut ho gaya"
"hey raj...we're soldiers not losers...don't b a spoil-sport yaar"
"theek hai.."he agreed although reluctant

"aalekh chalein..."
"paagal hai naina...abhi to asli mazaa shuru hua hai"
"alright"

after a lot of dancing..& change of partners..naina & raj were where dey truly belonged..in each other's arms.....

kaash naina...it was u who was in my arms...near me..
kaash raj...meri baahon mein tum hote...close to me...

deewaana dil kahin kho jaaye na
humse khata koi ho jaaye naa..
touch me...don't touch me...cum touch me soniya...

(perfect song...perfect place.....perfect partners...too big duffers aren't they??
deewana dil bhi kho chuka hai aur khata bhi ho rahi hai!!!)

"STOP!! AAAAH..PERFECT COUPLE...OPEN UR FOLDS GUYS & CHECK OUT D WINNERS...OUR COUPLE OF D DAY!!"

"thank god dis is over...bahut ho gaya..." our perfect couple thought aloud...yeah...aloud!!
"naina??"
"raj?"
"hmmmmm" d two said together...& instantly freed demselves from each other...

"ouch!!"

"ruko naina..." he removed his blindfold...& without realising dat d spotlight
had fallen on d two ...helped her remove hers too..

"ur hair r entangled in my collar button...so don't move...else it'll hurt"

naina blushed...had i been dat close to him...my face..his neck...her blush deepened

she helped him disentangle her hair..their hands brushing against each other...making raj overly conscious of their closeness.....she was free now....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
she looked him in d eye "thnx..."

but never got back a reply...he stood mute...gazing at her slender form..her beautiful eyes...dey were lost..yet again...
(man!! dis is happening too often...gettin lost in each other i mean!!)

sumthing wasn't right.....ooooh d silence..."well must say d spotlight did choose d best couple..watsay guys...isn't d jodi rockin?" the DJ announced...

yeah!! a roar went up at d disc..

"wat? its us?"...

"yes guys its u...& well none of us will b surprised to find d two of u married!!...ooops..
ur blush proves otherwise...anyway...free drinks for u guys...hope u think bout goin around..
u guys look damn cute together!! enjoy!"

dey stared a little uncomfortably at each other..."lets get down d dance floor raj"
"absolutely!"
.....................

aalekh & huda had been standing together..drinking..
"waah yaar...free drinks.."

"zyaada khush mat ho huda...none of us will b drinking..."raj said

"i won't mind a small one actually..." naina readily defying raj

"naina...i don't think...navin nahi chahta ki tum aaj drink karo..dere's a call coming..
main aata hun...yahaan signal weak hai.."

"hello..haan navin bol?"

"raj , main aur shaalu long drive par hain...we'll reach home late..don't let naina drink aaj"

"fine but why?"

"bas she's not been feelin well since morning..usse bolna sleeping pills lena naa bhoole..k?"

"pills? hua kya hai?"
"nothing yaar...jst take care...bye"

"bye"
why is she takin pills...aisa kya hua hai..i hope she's fine!

.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
"shit" as he enters d disc again he sees naina gulping down a drink...
"one more plzz..."

"one more!! is she crazy?...yeh ladki itni ziddi kyon hai?"
he runs & snatches away d glass from her hands..

"naina tum kisi ki baat sunti kyon nahi ho??..& u two..maine mana kiya tha na...y d hell didn't u stop her?" he yelled at alekh & huda

"apun ko laga ek glass se kya hoga?"

"aalekh u r a habitual drinker...naina nahi hai...dekh kaise jhool rahi hai ab...woh bhi ek peg ke baad" woh naina ko sambhalta hai...

"i'm takin her home...u guys come wen ur finished"

"abbey tu kyon? apun chodta hai naina ko ghar?"

"nashe ki haalat mein ! taaki pakde gaye to tumhaare saath naina bhi andar jaaye...main isse bhaga kar nahi le jaa raha!! ghar par mil lena...waise bhi kal to main jaa raha hun..i need to pack" he lied

huda patted raj's back..he was drunk or so it seemed..
"jaa...apun yahaan hai..sabko sambhaal lega"

"useless bunch of people!! khud to pee kar tun hai..khud ko sambhaal le yahi ganeemat hai"
he muttered to himself..den held naina by her waist & escorted her to d car...

.....
in d disc....

"MISSION ACCOMPLISHED!! CHEERS" huda & aalekh yelled ..

"itni jaldi tum kahaan jaaoge raj...abhi to khel shuru hua hai" d two chuckled...fully in control of their senses...

"oye huda...jitna bola tha...utna hi pilaaya na naina ko...agar nashe ki wajaah se so gayi to saara khel chaupat!!"

"arrey fikar mat kar qaidi...bas samajh le kaam ho gaya...ab to naina nashe ki haalat mein raj ko apne dil ki baat bol hi degi...
aur phir..."

"hum tum ek kamre mein band ho ,aur chaabi kho jaaye" d two danced away to glory...happy dat dey had helped their friends....

"waise iska saara credit to mujhe hi jaata hai...jab humne unhe us din horseriding karte dekha...baahon mein baahein daal...tab maine tujhe kaha tha...ki dono mein lafda hai..par tu to maan hi nahi raha tha" delete &n bsp;
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
"accha par saara plan to apun ka hi tha na..raj ko jalaane ka..."

"oye qaidi...ye galat hai haan...plan ko execute to maine kiya na...raj ka gussa bhi maine jhela"

"to naina ke saath dance apun kiya...bakra bhi apun bana...raj ko jhoot bhi apun ne hi bola...
naina ko chane ke jhaad par chadaaya.."

"accha woh sab theek hai par DJ ko to maine pataaya na"

"saale pataane se kya hota hai...drinks ka paisa to apun bharega na..tu to nahi.."

"theek hai bhaai mere...tu jeeta...khush..par kuch bhi keh jab
tak plan successful na ho jaaye kuch kaha nahi ja sakta..naina ko jaal mein fasna to padega"

"hmmm...dekhon kya hota hai...."

"apun dono ne to apna kaam kar diya na...baaki un dono sarfiron ke haath mein hai....
kitne bade ullu hai...itna pyaar kar baithe par bolne ki himmat nahi hai..."

"yaar yeh pyaar bahut khel khilaata hai..."

"waise huda...naina itni sundar hai..tera dil nahi aaya kya uspar..."

"oye qaidi...main itna bada kamina nahi hu...waise sach kahoon..main to sirf ek ladki par latoo hun..jo mujhe zara bhi bhaav nahi deti" he looked in her direction

"kya?? RITU!!!...HAAY RE BECHAARI KI KISMAT....MILA BHI TO HUDA"

"saale ruk...bhaagta kahaan hai"
& dey chased each other around d disc
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
hey guys i give my story a break at dis point...hope u njoyed it so far...i updated in d morning so dat i could read ur replies by evening b4 i leave...naina & raj..alone at home...perfect setting 4 a rocking romantic scene...i'll update on d 23rd now..i'm goin out of station...hope u miss me & my fic...do give me lots of replies on dis update & how u found huda & aalekh ke characters in d end...
cya ...bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
😊 😛 That was a nice part please continue soon. 😊 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
that ws such a cool part.. i luvd that.. esp the conv b/w huda n alekh.. i cud totally imagine it.. .lol...!!! kya plan banaya dono ne.. bole to.. ekdum rabchik!!! n every kebav main haddi is outta the pic.. navin n shalini r away.. all others r at the party.. raj n naina.. seriously alone.. n naina's tipsy.. haha.. cant wait to find out wat happens next.. hope 23rd comes soooooooon!!! hv a nice vacation dipika.. i'll miss u and ur ff.. come back n update soon yaar.. ab to aadat si ho gayi hai..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
nice update.have a gr8 vacation.waiting for 23rd.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
wonderful parts. will wait for the 23rd really enjoying ur FF.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
Too Good Dipika

I am Replying after such a long

but please dont stop writing

it is amazing FF

pl continue

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