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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
😛 😉 😊

waiting for the 23rd
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
11:50 pm(7 hours ago) "arrey naina aur raj kahaan jaa rahe hain...?"

aalekh & huda gave each other nervous glances ...

"woh ritu...naina ki khopdi mein dard tha aur raj to kal jaa raha hai..usse packing karni thi ........to woh dono ghar chale gaye..."

"well...even i'm quite tired...lets go back...."

oh shit! agar yeh wahaan pahunch gayi to hamaare plan ka band baj jaayega...the 2 thought...

"NAHI!!...mera matlab hai raat suhaani hai...aur main hoon na tere saath..ritu mere saath ek dance nahi karegi kya?...dekh mana mat kariyo...tu bas chal.."

& huda dragged her to d dance floor...as aalekh breathed a sigh of relief...
...........................................

she was sitting too close to him....he could almost feel her pulse.....
how does she expect me to drive like dis...??...

"r..raj...i want another dr..drink..plz.." naina whispered in a drunken state...

"you what??...have you lost your senses...tumhe apni haalat nazar nahi aa rahi hai kya?...
pata nahi is ladki ka kya hoga..she's impossible...ek peg aur tum jhool rahi ho....u have another & i'll hv to carry you in my arms to your room..."

"an absolutely enticing idea ..isn't it?"

"wat?? d..did u say enticing......?"
he was havin serious trouble driving now,
she & her statements were absolutely unpredictable...
and d way her hair fell on her cheek...
he only wished to kiss dem away...

"RAAAAAJ!!! it's me whose drunk not u....aa...aage dekh kar ...ch..chalao...stop...staring at me"
she blurted out as a truck nearly grazed d car

"haan...kya kaha tumne..?..oh yeah..." with great effort he turned his face towards d road..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
"do u want some music??...naina...?" he looked at her..only to find her sound asleep...

so innocent yet so naughty...he wanted to touch her......to embrace her...to kiss her...
to feel the length of her body against him...to listen to her heartbeats...& ....to make love to her.....

it was den dat d harsh reality hit him again....she was in love wid his friend..& he ...he had to leave d followin morning....

"all d best naina...& i hope you have a great life ahead.." curt ,disciplined & strong willed ,he knew dat dis was d end of wat could have been a beautiful beginning....d end of his hopes...
his love..his dreams...his life...
.....................

"oh no!!" he banged his fist at d steering wheel..."i didn't realise dat fuel khatam hai..."

"woh raha petrol pump....thank god...nahi to itni raat ko problem ho jaati....in madam ko to koi hosh hai nahi..."he glanced at her

he was outside gettin d fuel filled wen he saw four guys staring at d car.....hang on !!
they weren't staring at d car...dey were staring at NAINA!!!!!!!....BLOODY IDIOTS...
How dare they? he could feel his anger rising...

"waah yaar kya item hai!!"
"kya zulfen hai....aur "...he gazed down d length of her
"arrey kabhi akele mein mile to chak kar zaroor dekhoonga!!"

he had had enough!!..

"saale akele mein milega...main hoon na...aa chak kar dekh!!" & he banged his fist in dat goon's mouth...
"soldier hoon...tere jaisi gandagi ko chutkiyon mein saaf karna meri duty hai" sayin dis
he thrust his knee in another's stomach....

"aur tu...tujhe uski zulfen pasand hai...tujhe to main ganja karoonga" & he pulled his hair..while thrashing him across d face...

"aye hero!...woh teri biwi yaan behen hai kya...nahi na...to aa aadha aadha baat lete hai"...the fourth one winked at him...

raj's breathing became ragged..his shoulders rigid & his muscles tense...u'r dead !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
he hit d man wid such an intensity dat his own hand began to bleed...but he continued
"hai...hai woh meri biwi...she's my wife..."he muttered while continually thrashing d man...
"ab bol saale kya karega?" he yanked at him while holding his collar

"sir....sir plz stop...yeh aawaara log hain..our guards will handle dem..we're sorry for d inconvenience caused..."

"sorry!! to hell wid ur sorry!" angrily he stepped inside & started d car...

"NAINA!! NAINA....GET UP DAMMIT!!" shouting he jerked her up

"w...wat...we've reached kya...kya hua?" she asked him...her eyes heavy...but senses sharp

"tie ur hair & wear dis jacket" he handed a jacket to her

she was lookin at him as if he had gone half mad...

"tumne mujhe ye kehne ke liye uthaaya........ooooh raj..let me sleep!!...........
aaaaaaaaaaah....raaaaaj chodo...." she shouted....raj had held her wrist tightly & was forcing d jacket on her.....

"baal baandh rahi ho ya phir woh bhi mujhe karna padega???" he asked her without a smile..

"you've lost it..." she touched his forehead
"no fever either...dat means you've really gone beserk"
she loosely tied her hair....shaking her head...tryin to understand his insane behaviour...
.................
he stopped d car...finally ..we're home ...

"naina...naina...get up..ghar aa gaya..." he shook her lightly..he was a little embarassed for his behaviour...but den she didn't have to be so beautiful always!!

"naina utho..." arrey yaar ....kitni gehri neend so rahi hai...uff!!

he held her tightly by her waist....& had walked only a few steps "koi faayda nahin.."
he muttered as he saw her sway in his arms...well ..ur askin 4 dis naina....

he bent & picked her up in his arms effortlesly.... he could smell her perfume....feel her touch

i shouldn't have...he cursed himself....i'll need a hell lot of self control to put you down now
..except probably ...if i put u down on my....bed!!..........

where you're concerned miss ahluwalia...my thoughts can never be straight...!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
he'd barely reached d stairs in d hall dat took dem to her room....when ....he saw naina staring at him ....lo...longingly....rather..lo...lovingly!

"you're up!! kab se??"
.....oh man....i hope i didn't mutter my thoughts aloud...i don't even remember if i did....

"i wasn't asleep at all...not after u asked me to tie my hair....told u didn't i....?" she smiled

"told me wat??" he was so confused...wat had got into her!!?

she touched his cheek...her slender fingers feeling his face....his lips...
"dat i found d idea of you holding me in ur arms enticing.....& exciting.."
she boldly stared into his beautiful eyes ...drowning in dem....

he took a deep breath..& put her down..
"go back to sleep naina..you're not in ur senses abhi"
he faced away & was retreating from her....

she felt as if she had been slapped....determined & feeling light due to her drink..she tried again..

"raj..." she held his wrist...her touch was igniting him...making him heady..

"hmmm" he was at loss of words

"you know wat?..i find you really charming"

he faced her & smiled....i know tum nashe mein ho...but ..i won't get to hear you ever again...
atleast not like dis..he thought...

"i find you absolutely stunning & hot" she stepped closer to him....
his smile widening wid every passing second

"bas?"

"no...u'r irresistible" she was a breath away
"and....and...AND I LOVE YOU RAJ!"

his smile disappeared..."enough naina...you'll either forget wat u'r sayin or regret your words in d morning...
don't take dis furthur...ab kehne ko kuch nahi baccha hai..."

she held him....

theher ho padi hai raat yeh saari
kahe ki jaldi jaaneman
thaame hue yeh reshmi baahein
yun hi lipte raho tum gulbadan
taqdeer se yeh mil gaya mauka
aage khud hi jaan lo aur kya kahein
jaanam samjha karo...

raat shabnami, bheegi chaandani
teesra koi door tak nahi...
iske aage hum aur kya kahein
jaanam samjha karo....

she hugged him tightly, resting her head on his shoulders..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
"i love you too naina"
...he had to tell her...before it was too late...before he left...atleast i'll have d satisfction dat i expressed my feelings to you..."i really do....naina...a lot...naina?....naina?"

"oh naina...y?? y did u have to go to sleep again..."

he picked her up again...& put her on her bed...
"have sweet dreams naina....i'll miss u ...
but will always love you....kaash ki tumne dil se mujhe chaaha hota ...
wish u weren't drunk when you confessed your love...
you'd probably hate yourself for sayin dese words to me...provided tumhe kuch yaad rahe"
a lump rose in his throat...a tear threatened to fall....he kissed her on her cheek lightly..
anything beyond dat would be treading on dangerous ground....

taqdir ne chaaha, taqdir ne bataaya,
taqdir ne humko aur tumko milaaya,
khushnasib the hum ya woh pal,
jab aap sa dost is zindagi me aaya...

bye...naina....tum shaayad mujhe bhool jao...par main...
u'll always b a part of my life & my dreams....

agar hum kabhi mile....den all i hope is to see you smiling...& happy...God bless you...my love!
...........................
he walked away to his room unaware dat the night had just begun....a night full of surprises ...& desire....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
hey guys...i'm bac...sorry 4 d delay...do reply guys...it'll take atleast 10 replies to drive me furthur...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
waiting for ur update dipika,superb yaar,its fabulous 👏 .plz continue soon 😊n thanx for a long update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
plz continue.....i wanna read more.....itz really nice...
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey... soooo glad ur back.. how i missed u yaar... nice continuation.. glad to know the night isnt over yet.. n its still full of surprises.. plz naina ko dobara utha do.. dont leave the love story hangin in mid air dipika.. continue soon..

p.s. do u want 10 replies from 10 diff ppl ya phir same person se chalegi.. i can give lotsa replies for u to write the next part.. lol.. jus kiddin..

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