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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Ok nxt prt-

k-kya?????????????tum..tum bilkul pagal ho!abb chalo,uff aur kitna der lagaoge!

s-ok ok chalo!

They reach the railway station

Jahan ki haad se zyaada bheed hai

s-ok pohonch gaye!abb,kahan jaanaa hai?muje yahan ke bare mein nahi pata.

k-humein ye stairs cross karke platform no.5 pe jaanaa hai!

s-kya???????staira???stairs kyun?escalator le lete hain!

k-sujal,yahan escalator nahi hai.yahan agar itni bheed mein escalator lagaenge naa,to saare escalator kharab ho jaenge,samje!islie humein paidaal hi jaanaa hoga

s-hmm[sighs],thik hai

they strt 2 walk uss vheed bhaad mein

to abb hamare AC mein rehne wale,raizaade yaani sujal ko uss bheed,garmi dhaakka mukki mein chalne mein badi prob ho rahi hai

k-uff,chalo naa jaldi sujal!aise to hum late ho jaenge!

s-haan chaal hi to raha hoon,istni bheed mein isse tez kaise chalun,pairon mein ghode ki naal laga loon kya?[sarcastically]

k-uff tum bhi naa!

s-kya?

k-kuch nahi!

K holds s ka hand firmly & guides him through the crowd,with her middle class crowd handellin capabilities

Aur s bhi obediently lts himself lts himself guided by k

Finally,they reach the place

k-[looking at some direction & pointing]wo rahe!

K goes [almost runs] twrds tht direction & s follows

Wahan ek auraat,[dikhne mein k se badi],ek chooti si naati si moti si cute si bachchi ka haath pakadkaar khadi hai

Unhe dekhkar k ke chehre paar khushi saaf jhalak rahi hai

K goes & hugs the lady

k-hi sushmita di!

Sushmita-hi kashish!kaisi ho?

k-main thik hoon!aur aap?

Su-main bhi thik hoon!

Aur jhukke k kisses the kid

k-aur hamari khushi kaisi hai?

Su-khushi bhi thik hai,bass thodi shararati ho gai hai,isile usse wahan saath nahi le jaa rahi,aur tuje takleef de rahi hoon!

k-di aap bhi naa kaisi baatein kaar rahi hai,khushi to itni pyaari hai,usse sath rakhne mein takleef kaisi!

Both the sis smile

k-oh di!main bhi naa baton baton mein intro karana hi bhul gai![touchin s arm dheere se]ye sujal hain,mere………aur sujal!ye sushmita di hain meri cousin aur khushi ki mummy!

Su-hello

s-hi sushmita!

Su-chal !kashish main chalti hoon,train chutne wali hai thik hai naa,bye!

k-bye

su-bye khushi!

Kh-bye mumma!

Sushmita goes

k-chalo khushi ghar chalet hain!

Kh-thik hai,ghal pe mehal maashi aul nani hongi naa!

k-nahi,baby ye hain naa[s ko dikhate hue],tumhare mesho,hum unke ghar jaa rahe hain!

Kh-mecho?oooooo mumma ne kaha tha,wahan new mecho honge,maachi ke shaath!paar hum inke ghal kyun jaenge?

k-kyunki main inke ghar hi rehti hoon

kh-kyun?aap to nani ke shaath lehti ho!

k-nahi,aabb main inke saath rehti hoon,kyunki meri inse shaadi ho gai hai!

Kh-to!

k-to ye ki shaadi ke baad ladkiyan apne husband ke saath rehti hain!

Kh-to ye aapke hoos-hoosh—hushbandh hain?

k-haan ye mere husband hain!

Kh-paar bahi to kaha mecho hain!

k-arre ye aapke mesho hain,mere husband hain!jaise apke papa aapki mummy ke husbad hain waise

kh-oooooooooo [makin a cutie face]

Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
good one plz keep posting love ur story
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
awwwwwwww...it was such a chweet part...angad was having trouble in railwat station...poor man 😆...khushi sounds like a sweety lol bali pyali bachi hai...o god i want to pull her cheeks so much 😆 😳 ...awsum honey 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
wowo neeelu dearz awesome part reallly sorrry 4 commenting late hope understand..abh sujal bechara kushi keh lliyeh itni jaldi subha subha uthna parh raha hai aur plus kashish ki s callled emotional blackmailing abh kya karh sakta hai afer all he loves kashish aur usseh akeleh toh jannneh deh hi nahin sakta..abh they go out kashish ussseh sawal kpeh sawal pucheh ja rahin hai kiski gadi mein ja rahein hai ?gadi kya tum challa rahein h sirf isiliye kyunke he forgot to take the keys lagta hai kashish neh samja hoga he is in half neeeed bechara feel sorry for him...lolz..abh both are silent in the car sujal breaks the silience and says railway station jannna hai kya she keeps on saying yes abh he wants to know more realation ship between kushi and kashish wh usseh sawal puchtah hai tum uski kya lagti ho an all she says keh masi aur sujal mauusa ...jab kashish bngali mein words kehti hai lolz sujal wahin atak jataa hai shaya pehli barh esse words sunnah hoga and he thinks for a while phir kashish seh kehta hai keh kushi ek chotti bachi hai toh its not rigt agar mein sharaab piun yah smoking bacche peh burrra asar par sakta hai and kashish sujal ki issss behaviour seh bohot shoked hojatti hai lekin smilles aur ander seh lkuch ho rahin hai...abh they pass a smile ..achanak chalte chalte sujal ek mall ke pass rukjataa hai kashish gets shoked and apni bak bak shuru karti hai yahan kyun roka gadi ko kabi railway station nahin gae kya woh agee hai yahan seh...sujal kehta hein ke he knows lekin chocolates bacchi ke liye how sweeet wah wah achanak seh yeh pyar kahan seh jaaag uthha kashsh says haaan passand hai usse woh to harrrh bachon ko pasand hotti hai very very obvious..basss keh keh wahan chala jataa hai kashsh uska gadi mein intezar kar rahin hi and can u belive it atteh attteh itni sarri choclates leh attah hai and keeps them in the cr kashush wahin hairaan ho jatti hai...kashish kehti hai itni sarri ujal says tumhare liye aur kushi ke lye phir bi kashish ko extra lag rahin thi sujal says mene toh dukan walleh seh aur kaha hai aaa raha hun lennne lolz yahi sujal ko thodi si laggi ..and both leave...abh donon railway station pohonchteh hai kashish sujal seh platform ka number batati hai and all details aur usseh guide karti hai where to go abh kya karreh mr sujal garewal kabi trin mein toh gae hi nae airplane keh ilawa lolz kashish holds sujals hand as bohot sarri bihir thi and ussseh raasta bi maluum nahin tha...abh they spot kashish's couzin sushmita thoda emotional scene hota hai donon hug and susita had to leave woh ese kushi ko kashish keh hawaleh chor kar jatti hai ..kashish says lets go home and kushi is ecited to meeet mehekk and kashish mom how chwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet and she starts her sweeeet talkings ismien kashish bi pigaal jatti hai she introduces sujal and kushi sawal puchti rehti hai...how cuteeeeee great part neeeeeelz continue sooooooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

AWWWWWW....another sweet and cute part😳...i love kushi.....i hope she can make sujal and kashish get together...😳....keep up the good work....ur doing great......👏

Btw whats ur name???

continue soon😭😭

ISRAA

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute and sweet scene !!!!!!!! 😛 khushi is so sweet and funny 😆 .......... i think is the person who will bring sujal and kashish together 😊 ......... great update ............ 👏 ............continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neelu sorry for the late comment....reallyy sorry..😭
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neelu me here with my comments on your story..i know i'am late with the comments but i'am unwell and hope you understand.... i hope you like the comments... 😃
tho part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan where sujal goes to his room...aur yahaan kashish has already sleeping on the ground...... he sees that the lights are off... ab sujal bechare ko tho kuch dikhayi nahii de raha tha....actually andhere mein tho kissi ko bhi kuch nazar nahii aatha.. tho kya sujal koi exceptional case hai kii usko andhere mein dikhagi... hahaha.... ab sujal light on kartha hai.... tho yahaan kashish madam ko irritate hotha hai with the switching on of the light...she is like uff... well kashish ka behaving so irritated jab light on hui is just too noramal.. you know what jab bhi main sothi rehthi hoon aur koi aake light on kartha hai tab tab mera jee kartha hai kii main cheekon at the heights of my voice.. me sure kashish ko bhi aisa hii kuch laga hoga.. lekin i think kii kashish was thinking about the days events kii kaise first sujal treated her..then her ghussa..then back to the dinner time....i think kashish had all these thoughts back on her mind that time shayad sujal ne light on kii hogi aur it might have disturbed her thoughts..shayad issi liye kashish irritate hui hogi... ab kashish kii irritation sunthe hii sujal mahashay is like i'am sorry..aur woh hadbadi mein lights off kar detha hai.. well well sujal tum ne sorry kaha kashish se..mere kaano ko yakeen nahii ho raha hai kii sujal ne sorry kaha...i think sujal ke sorry kehne kii wajah yahaan par kuch aur hii hai.. i feel like this kyunke agar kashish ko light se problem ho rahii hothi tho sujal ne tho light band kar diya foran.. aur yeh itni badi ghalthi hai hii nahii jiske liye he has to say sorry.. i think according to me sujal is saying sorry to her for the way he is behaving with her and is hurting her.. bas yahaan is matter mein sujal ko ek mouka sa mil gaya kashish se sorry kehne ka....ab coming to his switching off the lights hadbadi se light off kar dena.. this was soo sweet.. it showed sujal kitna darrtha hai kashish ko ghusse mein dekhne se.. ab sujal thoda sa hesitates and is like kashish...kashish ko tho kuch samaj nahii aatha why sujal is calling her aur woh kehthi hai kya hai.... kashish kii yeh kya hai has a sense of irritation in her voice too.. usse ghussa aa raha hai sujal par for the woh uske saath pesh aa raha hai... lekin uske irritation kii sabse badi wajah yeh bhi hai kii kashish is not able to understand the correct side of sujal....woh samaj nahii paa rahii thi kii sujal ka asal roop kya hai.. kabhi woh itna achcha hai tho kabhi kabhi dil ko taiz pohancha detha hai...basically kashish kii irritation is questioning sujal ka bartaav... ab sujal zara sa hichckhicha kar kehtha hai kii usko change karna hai.. he has to take clothes to change......aur light off hai and he is not able to see anything...ohh..sujal is too cute...bechare ko kapde nikaalne hai aur us wajah se he has to switch on the light lekin yeh kashish maharani kii sochkar woh light nahii on kar raha hai... that was soo sweet of him to ask like this... mujhe sujal ke is cuteness par sujal pe bohat zyada pyaar aa raha hai.... ab kashish is like uff..bhudhu...do min ke liye light jalake kapde lelo..phir off kar dena.. well i think kashish also might have felt to laugh at sujal ka aisa question... me sure sujal kii itni cute sii baat ko sunke kashish ka dil sujal kii taraf pighal gaya hoga..... and kashish ka calling him a bhudhu.....very damn nice... aur sujal haan hii ek number ka sweet-cute-sabse pyaara bhudhu...
lekin waise shayad kashish ek baat bhool rahi hai kii sujal ne jab kapde lene ke liye light on karri thi woh kashish hii thi jiske irritate hone kii wajah se sujal ne light band kii... aur agar kashish tab irritate na hui hothi tho tab bhi sujal wahii kartha , woh light on kartha kapde leletha aur light off kar detha.... me kind off sure kii sujal aisa hii kuch kartha... dekho un dono kii soch kitni zyada milthi hai....isliye tho main kehthi hoon they are made for each other...... ab sujal is like sahii hai..sujal tho kashish ke har baat ko sahii maantha hai...mere hisaab se tho sujal ke liye wahii rule hai , wahii law hai joh kashish kahe...ab sujal goes to change then woh aake so jaatha hai.. ab subah hothi hai.. it's 4 in the morning aur kashish uth jaathi hai... 4 baje in the subah tho main ghode bhejke so rahii hothi hoon gheri neend mein... patah nahii yeh kashish kaise uth gayi.. ab she gets ready aur takriban 5 baje woh sujal ko utane lagthi hai..joh kii aaram se so raha hai... i think sujal kashish ke sapne dekh raha hai.... aur issi wajah he is in such ghehri neend... ab kashish calls sujal.... sujal tho so raha raha hai....ab kashish again says sujal utto..sujal just keeps groaning in his sleep like hmm..haan.... bechara neend mein hai... aur kashish uski neend ko kharab kar rahii hai.. pehli baat tho sujal raat ke do baje thak ya theen baje thak nahii soya aur ab yeh kashish madam usko subah ke paanch baje utane mein tuli hui hai.. ab kashish sujal ke pass jaathi hai and starts shaking him and says sujal utto na jaldi... ab sujal neend mein hii kehtha hai.. kya hai.... sujal sachchi neend mein bada pyaara lagtha hai... ab kashish usse kehthi hai utto na jaldi humein jaana hai.... ab sujal gaadi dekhtha hai aur kehtha hai kahaan jaana hai.. abhi tho bas 5 hii baje hai... he says kii mera office tho 9 baje khultha hai...aur phir woh sone lagtha hai....sujal mahashay mujhe is baat par tumse kehna hai kii hamesha zindagi aisi nahii honi chahiye ghar se office aur office se ghar..uff it becomes so boring...so monotonous..sujal kabhi kabhi tumko tumhari biwi ko bahar bhii le jaana chahiye...chahe tumhari biwi yeh chahe kii tum subah ke paanch baje usse lekar jao...tumhe tho lekar jaana hii padega...hahaha.. ab kashish is like she knows..aur unhe khushi ko lene jaana hai... ab sujal kehtha hai kya khushi..abhi nahii baad mein challenge..well is baat par mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal tum chahe aise hii sothe raho lekin train tho time par aayegi na..woh tumhari tarah soyegi nahii.. ab kashish says theek hai nahi jaana to matt jao.....main khud chali jaungi.... are wah kashish itni himmat aagayi tum mein kii tum akeli jao...... ab kashish aage kehthi hai waise bhi tumhe kya...itni subah chahe mujhe koi bus ya auto mile ya nahi......aur itni subah sunsaan raaston paar mere saath kuch ho jae ya nahi....ahaannnnn ab samjhi baat kashish mein koi himmat-vimmat nahii aagayi woh tho bas apne pyaare se pati-dev yaani kii sujal ko emotional blackmail kar rahi hai....woh jaanthi hai kii uska yeh trick will surely work on sujal kyunke kuch bhi ho jaye she knows kii sujal nahii chahega kii woh mushkhil mein pade.. she knows kii though sujal does not show but he is still protective about her... ab sujal is like achcha woh chalega.. jab kashish ne aisa trick use kiya tho ovbiously woh chalega hii na..sujal gets up and is still sleepy ab is like ab mujhe kya karna hai..he runs is hand very sweetly on his head like he is confused... how cutee....aur sujal tho confused hoga hii na usne tho raat bhar theek se nahii soya ab at the crack of the dawn kashish usko tang kar rahi hai... hehe...waise i can sujal in that state kitta shona lag raha hoga sachchi... meri jaan nikaal dega woh tho... sujal ka tho dimaak is not at all active...bechara neend mein hai.. uska apne sar ko scratch karna...hye..how cuteeeeeeeee..... you know me want to give sujal a kiss on his cheeks for his such sweet behaviour... he asks ab kya karna hai.. tho kashish tells him kii he has to go get freshen-up and get ready... aur kashish sujal ke haatho mein kapde thamakar usse shake karthi and pushes off him to the washroom....me sure kashish sujal ke washroom jaane ke baad she must have surely given a sweet smile hit on her head and said yeh sujal bhi na...after a while sujal bahar aatha hai after changing clothes... ab sujal comes and says ho gaya.... sujal starts walking aage when kashish tells him rukho... ab sujal mahashay is confused like kya hua... ab kashish is like hum gaadi mein jaa rahe hai na... sujal is like yesh.. ab kashish is like tumhari hii gaadi mein jaa rahe hai na...sujal is baat ke liye bhi haami bhartha hai... ab kashish wapas poochthi hai gaadi tum hi chala rahe ho na... ab sujal kehtha hai haan haan...bechara ek tho pehle se hii neend mein hai aur upar se yeh kashish msdam ke sawaal sujal ko subah subah paka rahe hai.. ab kashish asks to kya gaadi bina chabbi ke hii chalaoge..uff..kashish itni si baat kehne ko itna ghuma-phirake kyun baat kii...pehle hii straight to the point nahii aa sakthi thi kya....aise ulte-seedhe sawaal pooch rahi ho.. ab sujal chabbi idhar-udhar dhoondtha hai... and kashish hands him over the key saying chabbi.. i think kashish sujal ko jatana chahthi hai kii uske bina sujal ka ek bhi kaam dhang se nahii hotha.. sujal might have also felt the same thing and would have taken the key from her and gone... ab woh car ke pass pohanchthe hai...they sit in and then sujal starts to drive.. ab dono hii chuo hai hamesha kii tarah.. mereko ek baat samaj mein nahii aathi in dono ke beech sab normal kab hogi...jab dekho ek doosre se kissi na kissi baat par roote hue hothe hai.. lagtha hai yeh dono mouka dhoondthe rehthe hai.. ab kuch dhair baad sujal breaks the silence and asks railway station jaana hai na... i think sujal ko kashish kii bhak bhak sunke itni zyada aadat hogayi hai kii woh chup reh hi nahii paaya..ab kashish is like haan...tho sujal kuch kehna chahtha hai aur kehtha hai tho... ab kashish is like woh kya kehna chahtha hai... ab sujal poochtha hai khushi naam hai na uska...i think sujal is really feeling an attachment to the bachchi even before he has seen her... ab kashish haan kehthi hai... ab sujal zara rukh rukhkar kehtha hai kii tum kashish kii kya lagthi ho... kashish says main uski maasi hoon.. ab sujal kehtha hai aur main.. kashish tells him ki he is her mausa.. ab sujal us like mauuuuuuuuusaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... bechare ke halak se nahii uthar rahii hai yeh baat.. ab kashish smile karthi hai aur kehthi hai kii lekin woh tumko mausa nahii bulayegi.. ab sujal is like kyun.. well jab kashish ne yeh baat kahii hogi kii khushi will not call him mausaa tab sujal kii jaan atak gayi hogi.. he must have thought kii are main tumhara pati hoon...tum khushi kii maasi ho aur kyunke main tumhara pati hoon main uska mausa hoon na yeh hakh mujhse koi cheen nahi saktha...... ab kashish tells kii kyunke they are bengali unke yahaan mausaa ko mesho-moshai kehthe hai.. ab sujal kii jaan mein jaan aayi aur woh ok keh detha hai..lekin ab kashish tells him kii kyunke khushi bohat chotti hai tho usko mesho-moshai kehne ko nahii aatha... tho she will call sujal mesho and her maassiii..ab sujal is like oh..ok.....sujallllllllllllllll meeeeesssssssseshhhhhhhooooooooooooo... well sujal ke aisa kehna shows kii usmein bachpane kii koi kami nahii hai.. how gooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd...... ab sujal ke in saabhi antics par kashish smile kar dethi hai and she says haan sujal mesho....kashish sujal tumhara pati hai tum kayeku usko sujal mesho bula rahi ho..haha... sujal says tho kashish and stops like always najaane sujal kab seekhega apni baat ko poori karna..... jab dekho tab aadhi adhuri baat kartha hai.. ab kashish bas hummes a reply..and sujal asks she is a bachchi na....bohat chotti hai na khushi.. kashish is baat par haami bharthi hai aur kehthi hai kii woh theen saal kii hai... ab sujal thoda sa hesitates and tells kii tho mujhe.... ab shayad kashish understands kii sujal kya kehna chah raha hai and tells him kii tum fikar na karo woh achchi hai aur cute bhi woh tumhe pareshaan nahii karegi.. well kashish pehle tum sujal kii poori baat tho sun lo... shayad woh kuch aur kehna chahtha hai.. kyunke jis tarah se sujal pesh aa raha hai it shows kii he surely has lagaav for kids... aur shayad issi wajah se he is so close to kashish too kyunke though woh itni badi hii kyun na hogayi ho she is still having her bachpana along with her wise thinking...ab sujal kehtha hai nahii woh baat nahii hai woh bohay chotti hai na.. i think sujal ko lag raha hai kii kahiin woh us nanhi si jaan ko hurt na kar de koi takleef na pohanchaye....kyunke kashish ke uske zindagi mein aane se pehle usko yeh maloom bhii nahii tha kii rishthe-naathe kya hothe hai...yeh tho he learnt after kashish came into his life...may be he is scared kii rishtho ko sambhalne mein kahiin he does not commit a mistake.. ab kashish is like tho.. ab sujal kehtha hai uske saamne main..woh... i cannot drink or smoke na... he continues saying i mean who chotti hai na aur bachcho par bura asar padtha hai na... how thoughtful of sujal..he is such a sweetie-cutie-pie....really a sweetheart.... aur kashish samaj rahii thi kii he is talking about kii woh khushi usse pareshaan na kare...well kashish tum sujal ko kab samjogi... lekin jab thak tum sujal ko poori tarah se samjogi nahii achcha hii hoga kyunke tab atleast sujal apne mooh se baatein bolega... warna aisa hoga kii saari baatein kashish bolegi aur sujal ko bhi kashish bina kuch kahe samaj jayegi....aur bechara sujal bolne ke liye taras jayega...and i do not want that to happen..it is better this way....hahahahahaha... ab kashish hairaani se sujal kii taraf dekhthi hai shayad yeh sochkar kii woh itna achcha kaise behave kar raha hai... she is seeing the other side of sujal and may be she is suprised because he is the same sujal joh kuch ghanto pehle was sulking kii khushi wahaan nahii aayegi...she is seeing the different sides of sujal and me sure she is liking it too... woh sujal ko dekhkar smile karthi hai...and sujal also looks at her and gives her a chutko smile...awwwwww...how cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee..... main varijawaan...main tho gayi... ab gaadi mein phir se khamoshi hothi hai...and sujal keeps driving....kuch dhair baad he stops the in front of the mall... ab kashish kehthi hai kii gaadi kyun rokh dii... ab kashish tells him kii may be he does not know kii railway station kahaan par hai..she tells kii tum kabhi gaye nahii na.. railway station yahaan nahii aage hai..well is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish jee tumna us sheher mein abhi kuch mahine pehle aayi ho sujal wahaan bachpan se hai...aur paida hothe hii sujal ko sone ke palne mein nahii tha..balki he has faced the hards-ships of life.. woh zaroor jaantha hai kii railway station kahaan hai.. yahaan tho gaadi sujal ne kissi aur wajah se rokhi hai...aur sujal apne city ke chappe chappe se waakif hoga me sure of it....aur tum hokii najaane kya kya assumptions karthi rehthi ho...ufff... ab sujal kashish se kehtha hai kii woh jaantha hai... see i told you.... ab he asks kii choclates pasand hai khushi ko...oh...tho ab samjhi sujal khushi ke liye choclate khareed na chahtha hai... very nice and caring sujal.. lekin ab bhi kashish ke dimaak mein yeh baat nahii aayi kii sujal aise kyun pooch raha hai she is confused and suprised kashish is acting like a bhudhu...but she says kii choclates tho har bachche ko pasand hothe hai.. yeh baat tho sahii hai choclates tho har bachche ko pasand aathe hai.. me tooo lovee eating choclates..... and she says kii waise tho mujhe bhi pasand hai.. kashish tum bhi koi bachchi se kum thodi na ho...tumhari harkato pe ghaur kare tho tum bhi ek bachchi ho.. ab sujal ok kehkar gaadi se utarkar goes to the mall... kashish intezaar kar rahi hothi hai sujal ka... me sure she still must be wondering kii akhir sujal gaya kyun mall mein...us bhudhu ko tho kuch samaj hii nahii aa raha hoga.. ab kuch dhair baad woh aatha hai tho uske haath mein there are 2 huge se bhi huge boxes of swiss choclates... he is carrying them towards the car.. he places them in the rear seat and ab kashish is suprised and she asks kii yeh kya hai...ab sujal tho casually jawaab detha hai choclates.. ab kashish ke chehre par question mark hotha hai aur woh kehthi hai choclates itne saare..well sach bataoon tho mera bhi reaction kuch kashish jaise hii hai after knowing kii usne huge se bhi huge do choclate boxes khareedhe... ab sujal says haan bachon ko choclate pasand hothe hai na.... sujal maine maana bachon ko choclate pasand hothe hai lekin itne choclate khayenge tho unke daant sadh jayenge.... lekin phir bhi i loved what sujal did..kyunke it showed kii he cared.. ab kashish is like haan par itni..koi bhi kashish kii jagah hotha tho aisa hii react kartha itni saari choclates dekhkar.... ab sujal justifies his act and says kii itni saari kahaan kashish ek tumhare liye aur ek khushi ke liye... tho aisa bolo na sujal mahashay kii tumne apni pyaari si biwi kii bhi khwaish poori kii kyunke usne kaha kii she likes choclates...sujal kii justification is just being too innocent... he is really a darling baby.. ab kashish like a perfect biwi says kii par itni saari lethe hai kya..woh bhi swiss choclates...me sure kashish ke dil mein tho ladoo phoot rahe honge kii he brought one for her thinking about her... but she is acting like a typical biwi joh apne husband ko sahii aur ghalat samjhathi hai..woh bhii bade hii pyaar se.. ab sujal is like kyun mujhe tho laag raha tha ki kumm hai main to dukaan wale se kehkaar aaya ki aur lene aa raha hoon.... hahaha..mujhe pe tho ghir-ghirke hasne ko jeekar raha hai... he has told the dukaan wala kii woh aur lene aa raha hai..agar woh aur lene gaya na choclates to me sure kashish usko dhande se maaregi..hahahahehe.... ab kashish is shocked and she is like kya...tum pagal ho sujal..ab chalo...aur kitni dhair karoge.. well kashish ke is baat par mujhko kehna hai kii haan kashish sujal pagal hai tumhare pyaar main woh pagal hai... tumhari khushi ke liye he will put up with everything.. he is simply the best of the best.. ab sujal kashish se aur nahii sunna chahtha lecture tho woh kehtha hai ok ok chalo....well this ok of sujal means kii kashish main samaj gaya tum kya kehna chah rahii ho..please mujhko bhaksh do.... hahahahaha.. yaar these three parts were awesome totally...it had all the ingrediants and all the spice in it.... fun , pyaar , care , emotions.. it had everything...it was stupendous....splendid jod done... mujhko bada mazaa aaya.... awesome... sujal . kashish ke pyaar par tho main fulltoo fida... very damn well written scenes... i liked it to the maximum extent.... simply outstanding...out of the world.... unka woh sweet romance..bina kuch kahe hii sab bayaan kar dena.. ek doosre ke feeling...unke chehro kii smiles..the content on their faces...all par excellence... ab coming to the part you have just posted...... tho part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan they readh the station aur wahaan poori bheed hothi hai...... ab sujal is like pohanch gaye..... he says kii ab woh us jagah ke baare mein kuch nahii jaantha..... kahaan jaana hai.. how true is he being..shabash..... ab kashish is like strairs cross karke platform number 5..... aur sujal is shocked like strairs.. he says escaletor le lethe hai...... sujal baby yeh India ka railway station hai yahaan escaletor nahii hothe......he asks kii kya yahaan escalator nahii hothe..... sujal how silly... ab kashish says kii agar itni bheed mein escaletor lagaye tho saare escaletor kharab ho jayenge...... aur haan agar escalator hothe tho sab ussi mein teherkar mazaa utathe aur sabki train choot jaathi..... ab kashish tells him kii unko paidal jaana hoga...... ab sujal sighs and is like theek hai........ ab they both start walking us bheed mein chal rahe hai.... ab bechare sujal joh hamesha ac mein raha ab yeh dhoop mein , bheed mein chalne ko sujal ko badi problem ho rahii hai.... mereko tho sujal ke haal par badii hasii aa rahi hai.....sujal ke pasine choot rahe hai aur meri hassi....... ab kashish usse kehthi hai kii uff sujal chalo na.....aise tho hum late ho jayenge....ab sujal kehtha hai kii chal tho raha ho..itne bheed mein isse jaldi kaise challoon... sujal then sarcastically comments kii pairo mein ghode kii naal laga loon kya.... ghodhe kii naal..hahahaha...... waise i think sujal ke mann mein yeh bhi baat aayi hogi ya tho phir mere par hai jiske kii main ud sakoon.... tum keh rahii ho jaldi jaldi...... sujal must have really got irritated with kashish ka is tarah ka nudging..... ab kashish is like uff tum bhi... is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish tum na bechare sujal ko samaj hii nahii rahi ho..ek tho sujal ko pehle se itne dhoop mein chalne kiii aadat nahi...uske upar uski biwi joh tum ho tum bhi itni hot ho kii sujal ko bohat hii zyada gharmi ho rahii hai..hahahahahahaha......sorry bad joke...... ab sujal is like kya perking his ears up.. kashish tell him kii kuch nahi... kashish ne sujal ke baat ko jawaab nahii diya and she diverted the topic...... ab kashish holds sujal hands firmly and starts leading the way... she guides him very well....aur sujal bhi chup chaap is going behind her following her jahaan bhi woh usse le jaa rahii hai.... waise bhi sujal hamesha tho wohii kartha hai na kii chup-chaap he follows kashish..... hamesha sirf kashish kii baaton par hii chaltha hai sujal itna pyaara hai..... kabhi koi kaam nahii karega joh kashish ke khilaaf hogi..... he is such a sweetheart he puts up with everything joh kashish usse kehthi hai.... ab bhi though he is not used to the bheed , dhakka and all stuff like that he still is there only for kashish kyunke he cannot afford to leave her alone kyunke for him kashish is priceless.... bohat achche jaa raha hai sujal..me liking each and every bit of it......and sujal ka obediently following kashish..very damn excellent... waise bhi zindagi bhar tho ussi ke sath rehna hai ussi kii baat maanni hai.... tho sujal abhi se seekh raha hai.... he is surely a early learner.... hahahahahaha...... ab finally they reach the place.... kashish ko apni cousin dikh jaathi hai and she points out saying kii woh rahe..... ab kashish starts walking there or rather runs to that place...and me sure she is dragging sujal along too....... kashish apna nahii tho sujal ka tho sochcho..... usse kyun bhaga rahii ho...aur agar kahiin tum ghir gayi tho sujal will have to carry you all the way out woh bhi itni bheed mein.....ho kashish zara dheere se jao samjhi...... ab wahaan ek lady hai who looks elder to kashish..and ek chotti se pyaari si moti sii bachchi hai standing us lady ka haath pakadke.... ab kashish ke chehre par khushi saaf jhalak rahii hai seeing them...well relatives ko dekhkar har koi khush hotha hai... kashish goes and hugs the lady tightly..kashish says hii sushmitha dii..... sushmitha is like hii..kaisi hai.... uff is baat pe i want to ask kashish's sister kii kya woh nahii dekh sakthi kii kashish kitni khushi hai... aur woh pooch rahii hai kaisi hai....... zahir si baat hai agar kashish sujal ke saath hai tho achchi se bhi zyada achchi hogi naa... ab yeh baatein hothi kii how are they fine just a general stuff like that.... ab kashish jhukke kisses the kid..sujal must have surely seen kii kashish like kids... she asks aur humari khushi kaisi hai... ab khushi's mom kehthi hai kii bas thodi shararthi ho gayi hai iss liye she is not taking her along...oh..tho bachchi shararthi hai haan.... well ab tho sujal gaya kaam se.. mazaa aayega ab.... hahaha........ her sis also says kii isliye tujhe takleef de rahi hoon..... ab kashish says kii khushi itni pyaari hai kii usse apne saath rakhne mein kya takleef.... is baat pe i want to tell kashish kii kashish abhi tumko patah nahii chalega kii kya takleef jab woh khushi shaitaani pe uthar aayegi tab tumhe patah chalega..kii bachche ko sambhalna kitna mushkhil kaam hai.... and me sure sujal , kashish ka haal dekhne layak hoga..i think it will be toooo damn funnyy..... ab both the sis smile.... ab kashish ko yaad aatha hai kii sujal is standing as a audience and seeing all the scene tho she says kii dii main tho batana hii bhoo, gayi she catches sujal's arm slowly me sure sujal ke dil mein kuch hua hoga when kashish caught his arm...... and kashish says yeh mere..and stops...oh tho kashish madam ko sharam aa rahii hai apne priy-pati dev ka intro dethe hue..isliye tho keh rahii hai kii dii yeh mere..wah wah wah..... well mereko koi suprise nahii hotha agar kashish had introduced saying yeh mere woh hai... hahaha... then she stops abruptly and tells sujal kii she is my sister... ab unke beech kii hi hello chalthi hai....aur sujal is behaving like a perfect husband.... maintaining his dignity koi over action nahii , sulking nahiii.... that's really very damn good..... ab sushmitha kehthi hai kii she will leave.... then after all the byes sushmitha leaves khushi with sujal and kashish aur chali jaathi hai.... ab kashish is like ghar chalein..... tho tab khushi kehthi hai kii ghar mein mehak massi aur naani bhi honge na.... i really love this chottu kid accent.... woh tothla ke bolna.... very sweetttttttttttt.....an kashish kehthi hai kii chalo khushi ghar chalthe hai.... ab khushi kehthi hai kii ghal par mehal maashi aur naani honge na.... how sweet.. jee kar raha hai kii main is pyaari is bachchi ko ek pyaara sa kissy doon.... ab kashish usse samajhathe hue kehthi hai nahii baby... yeh hai na she says pointing to sujal and says tumhare mesho unke ghar jaayenge.... kashish tumhe yeh bhi baat add karni thi woh mera bhi ghar hai...... i like the way kashish is handling the kid..... aur she must be knowing how to handle kyunke chahe kashish itni badi hai phir bhi she is bachchi at heart... that's why she handling khushi so well... ab khushi tho is a chottu kid tho uska mesho bhi bolna nahii aatha and she is like mecho... mumma na bataya kii wahaan new mecho honge... maachi ke saath par hum unke ghar kyun jayenge.... ab kashish very patiently says kyunke main inke saath rehthi hoon... kashish mein badi patience hai kii she is acting with so much of sabar... ab khushi asks kyun aap tho nani ke ghal lehthi hona... ab kashish says kii nahii ab main inke saath rehthi hoon... kyunke meri inse shaddi hogayi hai na.... are kashish yeh kya kar diya ab khushi tumse aur sawaal poochegi kii shaddi kya hai and all... you know seeing the interaction between kashish and khushi sujal might have surely thought.... kii she is just like kashish the only difference is kashish itni badi hokar keeps asking him questions aur yahaan may be he has a feeling kii he is seeing the chottu version of kashish.... ab khushi is like tho..... ab kashish says kii shaddi ke baad ladkiyaan stay in her husband's home.... husband ke saath rehthi hai.... tho ab khushi kehthi hai tho yeh aapke husband hai.... kashish kya tum directly nahii keh sakthi thi kii sujal tumhara pati hai bechari khushi ko husband shabd kehne mein itti mushkhil hui.... waise khushi still managed to say the word that is the best part of all...... ab kashish is like haan yeh mere husband hai... me sure sujal ne kashish ko dekha hoga when she told khushi kii woh uska husband hai.... he must have surely felt good... ab khushi says kii lekin abhi tho aapne kaha mecho hai.... ab kashish says kii yeh tumhare mesho hai... lekin mere husband hai... aapke papa aapki mummy ke husband hai waise.... kashish kitne achche se samjha rahi hai khushi ko... i never thought woh bachcho ko itne achche se manage kar sakthi hai... too good... this also shows kii kashish will prove to be a very good mother in future..... and me sure sujal ne bhi yeh baat notice kii hogi and he must have thought of it.. ab khushi is like ohooooooooooooo and she makes a cute face.... very very damn sweet...honey se bhii zyada sweet tha..mast part.... i think khushi sawaal poochke thak gayi..isliye she says ohooooooo....... but i would like to say yeh bachchi is sooo very sweett... mujhe badi achchi lagi... very well written keep up the good work going....... mujhe teri writing bot zyada achchi lagthi hai... your writing rocks totally.... i enjoyed these scenes a way too much..... ☺️
☺️ ab neelu my guess for the next part would be that kii agle part ab joh khushi kii entry ho chuki hai tho next oart se all the masti shuru ho jayegi......me sure 100% kii khushi shaitaan hogi woh actually bohat hii zyada shaitaan hogi........ woh sujal ko tang karegi.... lekin khushi hii sujal ke chehre par muskaan kii bahar bhii layegi...sujal khushi ke saath jab hoga tab woh dil khol ke hasega..he will enjoy khushi kii company very much... kashish will see kii sujal aaj thak jitna khush nahii tha utna khush hoga with khushi..uske saath khelthe-khoodtha hoga.... i think sujal bhi khushi ke saath milke shaitaani karega.... sujal and khushi will play pranks on kashish and dadi..... ghar mein chaaro taraf khushi ke aane se khushi kii bahaar aajayegi....shayad yeh bhi ho saktha hai kii woh khushi ko bahar ghoomne bhi lejayega.. aur khushi ke bahane kii kashish , sujal dono kareeb aayenge..woh dono milkar khushi ka khayal rakhenge....par khushi will be more attached to sujal.. woh sujal ko mast pareshaan karegi apni pyaari pyaari harkahto ke saath par phir bhi sujal will not mind it at all.... sujal will be more than happy kii he has a kid in his home joh ghar kii rounak bada rahii hai..he will surely like khushi and due to khushi ka uski zindagi mein aana sujal will change for the better.. kashish will see the other side of sujal which is very good and a entirely different one..kashish will see kii sijal ko bachcho se kitna zyada laghaav hai.. sjal , kashish ka rishtha will surely head towards a betterment by the coming of khushi into their lives..khushi's entry in their change both their lives for the better and not for worse.... me sure there is a lot of fun coming up in their lives... i also think in the next part jab sujal aur kashish kamre mein akele honge tab sujal will ask her kii woh itna hichkicha rahii thi to tell sushmitha that he is her husband....he will be sulking.... ab kashish usko batayegi kii usko sharam aa rahi thi and how can she herself introduce..... then may be sujal , kashish kii nazro ka milna hoga.... and may be isse pehle kii unke beech kuch romantic ho khushi aadhamkegi khwaab mein haddi banke..... agar aisa hua tho it will be too damn funny......hahahaha....ab neelu this is what i think now you tell me is my guess sahii ya phir ghalat..... 😉 😉 neelu dear i hope you liked the whole of the comment....please do post the next part soon...will be waiting for it damn eagerly....😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesomr part 👏
khushi is so sweet n guess da person who wil be able to bring SK 2gether
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lovely part neel.. 👏 ..so @ last khushi came... 😃 ..now it would be fun... 😉 ..she talks v sweetly... 😳 ...cont soon... 😊

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