PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic [cont.-part 2]

link 4 prev parts-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=366351&T PN=162

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[thanxs 143786 & Ravinder duggal 4 commentin]

kuch ghante baad-

abhi karib raat ke 2 baje hain

k ussi position pe bed pe so rahi hai

aur sujal window ke saamne khada hokaar smoke kaar raha hai

achanak k ki neend khulti hai

she yawns & sits on the bed

s ko ehsaas hota hai ki k uth gai hai

wo jaldi se ciggret window se phek deta hai

k is still sleepy

k-[yawnin,she asks s]kya time ho raha hai?

s-do..so baaj rahe hain raat ke

k-do?raat ke?oh shayad ankh laag gai hogi!tumne muje jaagaaya kyun nahi?

s-tum so rahi thi to……..wo..emm..maine socha ki…….

k-khana kha lia?

s-khana?..emm..nahi

k-nahi?nahi khaya?paar kyun?

s-emm..wo..emm..tum so rahi thi naa..wo..islie..emm..wo

k is looking at s

s-wo..emm..main neeche jaata hoon,tum bhi chalo..dinner karenge..emm..ok

k-tum neeche jao,main aati hoon,change karke

s-ok..fine!

s goes neeche

kuch der baad

k comes neeche change karke,wearin a nightie

k dinin table ke pass pohonchti hai

wahan pe saab glass cutlery plates etc saab saajaa ke rakhe hue hain

paar s wahan kahin nahi hai

paar wahan s ko naa dekhkaar zara hairaan ho jaati hai

tabhi she hears some noise comin frm the kitchen

she peeps,

wo jhaankke dekhti hai

aur dekhti hai ki

s microwave pe khana garam karr raha hai

k hairaan ho jaati hai

k-sujal!

s-emm..haan![turns twrds k]

k-tum!ye..saab!

s-emm..wo..emm..kashish..socha jabb taak tum nahi aati taab taak..emm..waise saab ho gaya hai,bass ek dish garam karni reh gai hai

k-nahi tum jao,main karti hoon!

s-nahi tum baitho,bass ho gaya hai!..baitho!

k-hmm!

K jaake dinin table paar sits

k-[mann mein]sujal ne..ye saab kia!paar..kyun?

Kuch der baad s comes with the dishes,& keeps it on the table

s-ye lo..ho gaya!emm..lts strt!

k-hmm

both r quietly eatin

paar dono ek dusre ki naazre churake

khaate khaate ek dusre ki taraf teerchi nigahon se dekh rahe hain

amazinggg partttt...yay i am first one to cmnt in new topic...sujal is a sweet heart...usne kash ki wajah se cigrattee fenk di 😃 😳 ...superb yaaar...sujal ki akal finally thikane aa rahi hai.. 😛 ...plz cont soon 👏

and yes congrats...bhagwan kare tumhe teesra topic bhi kholna pade😃

so sweet 😳 ........ sujal ne kashish ki liye cigratte phekdi...........i wanna knw wht happened btw them next....... 😊 😊 😊 .......it's obvious that they like each otehr and their company ............ continue soonnnnn plzzzzzzzz

gr8 part 👏 👏 👏
sujal is feeling guilty nw 😳
cont. soon

wow neelz dear masth part awesome toooooooooooo toooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooood ab kashish wahin peh otteh rotteh soo jatti hai tabbi sujal uskeh passa attah hai useh pyar se chhutha hai ..kuch deher baaad its 2 in the morning sujal window ke saamne smoke kar raha hai and he notices keh kashish uth gai hai dekhte dekhte he throws the cigrt away kyunke woh janta hai keh kashish will get pissed on seeing him smoking aur kashish ko dhuuen seh allergy hai ..kashish uth keh time puchne lagti hai woh usseh time kehta hai and woh thoda shocked ho jatti hai keh itni dehr hogai aur uski ankh lag gai thi she was sleeping in the ame state..kashish usseh pyar seh puchti hai keh kya usne khana khaya sujal says keh nahin kunke woh so rahin thi thodi deher kshish sujal ko dekhti hai phir se badlav behaviour mein and sujal says hum sath mein dinner karenge ....kuch deher baad kashish neeche atttti hai she's doen changing thoda sa shoked ho jatii hai as she didn't seesujal jab kitchen mein dekhti hai toh woh microwave mein khaannna garam karh raha tha uskeh aur kashish keh liye..kashsh ussehpuchti hai as if he will manage doing all this par he was fine yeh sab uske liyeh asaaan tha kashish is confused to sjal ka essah behaviour ....abh sujal neh khanna garam kar lia hai hey both sit on the table and start eating there are no words in between them sirf ishareh ho rahein hai tryin their best to avoid eachother kyunke unko yaaad araha hai kya hua tha inke beech mein kuch ghanteh pehle 😕 ....neeelu dear great parrt just wonderful continue soooon can't wait more...

hey neelu awesome part yaar 😊. soch bhi nahi sakti ki sujal itna sudhar gaya aur woh bhi itne jaldi 😉😉😉. too good yaar 👏. can't believe at all 😕😕😕 . main to kya, even kashish would be in bame state. uska expression i can clearly imagine it 😕. use lagta hoga ki isse kya ho gaya . kuch ghante pehele to itne kadvi batein suna raha tha ab itna change ho gaya, kahi mein sapna to nahi dekh rahi hoon 😳 . it was so good neelu. i was continuously laughing 😆 when sujal was doing this all for them or especially for her😳. neelu i am so happy that he is getting good with her again. but yaar daar lag raha hai kahi wapas aisa n kuch karde jis ke wajah se wapas sab bikhar jaye. aur remember woh shart jo sujal kashish ko batane wala tha that is still remaining. after this all i am worried ki wapas kuch dino mein bura banke use shart na yaad aajaye 😡. neelu i really don't have any idea that will take place after this part lekin lag raha hai that after having dinner shayad dono aik doosre se thodi thodi "yes", "no" main baat karenge and maybe sujal sudharne lage ka which will make kashish feel better 😊😊😊 . it was simply nice sweet part neelu 👏 . thanks. and continue soon plz........ can't wait any longer yaar 😛 .

hi neelu nice part ab jaldi se cont karo its lovely to see sujals atitude

wow yara GR8 n thnx per mujhay yeh sujal na bohat confusing lagta hai yaar kabhi tou bina baat k cheekhga ghalat ghalt baatein karega aur kabhi aik dam opposite ab kia is ke baad phir se kuch ghalat kerne wala hai? 😳 😳

neelu yaar dekh me aagayi with my comments on the part you have posted... well yaar i hope kii tumko mere comments utne hii achche lage jitne kii mujhko teri story ka har part mujhko pasand aatha hai... 😃
ab part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan se kashish abhi bhi soyi hui hai ussi position mein... raat ke takreeban do baj rahe the.. sujal tho window ke pass teherkar smole kar raha hotha hai.. uff sujal tum smoke kyun kar rahe ho smoking isdbad for health samjhe...agar kashish jaggi hui hothi tho woh foran tumko smike kartha hua dekhkat tumhare pass aathi aur tumhare haath se ciggarrettee cheen kar pher daalthi... me sure kashish zaroor aisa hii kuch karthi.... ab sujal wahaan teher kar is completely lost in his thoughts.. i think sujal yeh baatein soch raha hai he must thinking kii akhir woh kya kar raha hai is it right or wrong.... he is analyzing the existing situation for sure.. he is thinking kii kya sahii hai kya ghalat hai... he must be thinking about kashish... uske zehen mein poori tarah se bas kashish hii kashish chayi hui hogi....he is thinking and may be even blaming himself kii ab kashish kii is haalat ka zimeedaar , uske dukh ka zimedaar woh hii hai... woh yeh soch raha hoga kii kya woh apne dil kii sune ya phir dimaak kii... uska dimaak tho yahii keh raha hoga kii kashish ka yeh ek aur natak hai.. woh ek aur drama kar rahi hai.. par uska dil zaroor yeh keh raha hoga kii kashish dil kii badi sachchi aur achchi hai.. woh kissi ko bhi kabhi bhi dhoka nahi de sakthi... sujal ke dil aur dimaak ke beech ajeeb si kasmakash chal rahii hogi.. he is not able to decide kii woh karein tho kya karein..kya woh apne dil kii baat maan kar kashish ke pass jaye..uske saath rahe...ya nahii tho kashish se ussi tarah ka bura bhartaav kare which will hurt kashish aur bhi zyada.. basically sujal is already very confused and now sujal is confusing himself pehle se bhii zyada.. i think he wants to become the king of confusion , issi liye woh aise kar raha hai.... hahahahaha... ab achanak kashish kii aankhein khulthi hai.. woh yawn karthi hai aur bed par utkar bait jaathi hai... aur humare sujal mahashay realizes kii kashish jaagi hui hai aur woh foran apna ciggarrette phek detha hai.. well sujal ke is action ke do wajah ho sakthein hai pehli wajah yeh hai kii shayad sujal did not want kashish to see him smoking the ciggarrette... may be he knew that kashish would not like it aur kashish joh pehlse se hii zara sa ghusse mein thi woh kashish usko smoke karthe hue dekhkar kahiin aur bhi zyada na bhadak jaye...yeh ek reason ho saktha hai and the second reason yeh hai kii may be sujal ko patah hoga kii kashish madam ko ciggarrette ke due se allergy hogi.... shayad sujal ka maloom hai kii ciggarrette ke due se khansi hothi hai.. tho he cares for kashish aur issi liye usne foran apna ciggarrette phek diya.... and i think yeh second reason of mine is more apt.. considering the fact that sujal kashish kii itni zyada , sabse se zyada sirf care kartha hai... tho issi liye i think my second reasoning of why he threw away the ciggarrette is more significant in the current existing situation... ab kashish is still sleepy woh sujal se poochthi hai kii time kya hua hai.. kashish seems to me like a chotti bachchi yawning and stuff... and sujal is like do..do baj rahe hai.... well sujal is unable to talk aur woh rukh rukhkar baatein kar raha hai...lagtha hai bechare ko ab thak yeh baat hazam nahii hua kii kashish behaved with so much of ghussa just some time back... aur ab woh phir wapas is acting like a khila hua phool.. soft , as sweet as honey.... ab kashish gets hyped up saying kii do baj rahein hai...lagtha hai aankh lag gayi.. tumne mujhe jagaya kyun nahii.. well mujhe is baat pe kashish se kehna hai kii kashish tum sothe hue itne achchi , innocent lag rahi thi kii sujal ko tumko jagane ka mann hii nahii kiya..woh bas bohat dhair tumko dekhtha hua raha tha aur ab window ke saamne khade hue is thinking about his life... and waise bhii he likes to look at you for a long time.. woh kya bewakoof hai kii itni achchi oppurchunity woh chod de.. naah i don't think so.. hahaha... ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii tum soyi hui thi..the he says woh..emm... maine socha kii.. saying this he stops.... uff..sujal baaton ko poora kiya karo na aise aadhe adure baat karogi tho kissi ke samaj mein kya aayega... kaho naa ki tumne socha kii not to disturb your sweet , pyaari si , innocent si neend mein biwi.. sujal you are never frank... very bad... ab kashish asks him khana kha liya... are wah this is a typical biwi style act... kashish ko neend se utkar bhi apne pati-dev kii itni chinta hai.. though woh usse naraaz hai she is not showing it at all and behaving at her best as a achchi , caring biwi... ab kashish sujal ke jawaab se is confused and is like nahii..nahi khaya..par kyun.. well kashish manages to ask sujal this even though she is still confused kii sujal ne nahii khaya.. ab sujal mahashay ne tho prun liya hai kii woh hichkhichane mein confuse hone mein aur doosro ko confuse karne mein maharaj banega tho he says kii rukh rukhe kehtha hai..woh..emm..tum tho rahii thi...isliye... uff sujal kya tum directly nahii keh sakthe the kii kashish mujhko roz tumhare saath khane kii , khate waqt tumhari bhak bhak sunne kii , tumhe apne saame dekhne kii aadat sii hogayi thi aur isliye maine nahii khaya... sujal tum na ek number ke bhondu ram ho... directly joh baat dil mein hai woh honto par laao na... aise indirectly kyun baatein kar rahe ho... ab shayad kashish ko sujal ke baaton ka matlab patah chal jaatha hai and she looks at him... i think kashish ka woh look is rather a suprised and a amused look kii sujal did not eat kyunke woh so rahii thi.. and this indirectly meant kii woh usko jagana nahii chahtha tha..usse disturb nahii karna chahtha tha.. ab sujal again fumbles gathers his courage and usse kehtha hai kii main neeche jaatha hoon....tum bhi chalo dinner karthe hai... lagtha hai sujal ko bhook lagi hai.. lekin kashish ke company ke na hone ke wajah se bechara ab thak bhooka raha.. i think he was waiting for kashish kab jaage kab woh uske saath dinner kare.. ab kashish usse keh dethi hai kii woh neeche jaye she will just change and come... ab sujal neeche chala jaatha hai.. ab kuch dhair baad kashish comes down wearing her nightie.. kashish neeche dinner table ke pohanchchi kii she sees that wahaan par cutlery , places sab placed hai already... and kashish sujal ko wahaan kahiin nahii paathi... kashish tho is again suprised and confused kii sujal gaya kahaan.. see what i told you was right kii sujal has decided kii woh khud bhi confuse hoga doosro ko bhi confuse karega.. kashish issi confusion mein hothi hai jab kashish hears some noice from the kitchen tho kashish kitchen ke pass jaakar peep karthi hai tab she sees sujal joh kii microwave mein khana gharam kar raha hai...i love sujal completely.. he is being such a good pati... he knows kii kashish abhi neend se jagi hai and does not want to disturb her... so sweet of him.. joh chotti-chotti cheezein woh kartha hai na all take my breath away.. yeh chotti chotti cheezein bohat mayine rakhthi hai.. ab kashish is suprized and me sure she is happy too seeing sujal doing the household work..like a sweet gharelu husband...... ab kashish calls sujal... ab sujal mahashay is seriously feeling embarrssed... he manages to look back at kashish and is like haan.. ab kashish ko ek jhatka laga hai ek achcha sa jhatka seeing sujal like this.. indeed , really a pleasant jhatka i must say... tho kashish asks him kii tum yeh sab... ab sujal tells her kii maine socha kii jab thak tum nahii aathi.. tab thak.. he again hesitates fumbles and continues..sujal for God's sake stop fumbling like this..tumhare saamne tumhari biwi hai who is just asking you something..tum kyun aise baat kar rahe ho jaise kii ek employee kaam na khatam karne par apne boss se baat kartha hai.. sujal it's kashish and not your boss.. waise dekha jaye kashish hai bhi tumhari zindagi kii boss hii.. tho tumhara fumble karna bhii theek hai..then he is like sirf is dish ko gharam hii karni thi.. well sujal yahaan tho kashish ke liye tumne khana gharam kiya hai...agar kashish kehthi na tho tum usko full-fledged khana bhi khilathe woh bhi khud apne haatho se banake... ab kashish is like she will do it.. par sujal says to her kii woh jaake bait jaye...he will come.. kashish reluctantly goes away..are kashish tum chali kyun gayi wahiin rehthi na sujal ke pass aur usko company dethi... kyunke sujal ko tumhare bina tho kuch bhi nahii soojtha.. ab kashish table pe aakar bai jaathi hai... and she is thinking kii sujal aisa sab kyun kar raha hai.. well yahii doubt mere mann mein bhi hai.. lekin is baat par mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish jab thak sujal is behaving normal waise hii rehne do..tum apna mooh kholkar kuch bhi ulta-seedha na bol dena which will blow things out of proportion... so you just keep quite joh jaisa chal raha hai chalne do uske waise...take things as it comes and never anticipate anything.. ab kuch dhair baad sujal comes there places the khana on the table and is like ho gaya lets start..ab yahaan yeh sujal ko samajna tho mere samaj ke paare hai yaar sachchi keh rahi hoon..he is behaving extraodinarily sweet..too good... par joh bhi ho i love this roop of sujal... which is soft , kind really a sweetie-cutie pie.. ab kashish is like hmm... ab dono bhi chup chaap kha rahein hai.. woh dono ek doosre se nazar chura rahe hai.. lekin they are aswell looking at each other from the corner of their eyes..chori chori when they feel that the other is not looking... yaar sachchi me saying aise chori-chori dekhne ka alag hii ek mazaa hotha hai pyaar mein... you know what neelu yaar mereko yeh gaana gaane ko jee kar raha hai and that is "ragh ragh mein is tarah tu samane laga..jaise mujhi ko mujhse churane laga...dil mera le gaya lootke...chori chori-chupe chupke..." yaar these scenes were damn sweet.. mujhko bada achcha laga... it was romantic also , it was sweet , cute.. very nicely written... it was simple.. i liked the simplicity the scene had.. you keep up the good work going... 👏 ☺️
ab yaar itne sweet sa part padne ke baad next part ke liye mera guess yeh hogi kii sujal , kashish obviously apne beech ke us cold-war ke baare mein bhool hii jayenge.. and the life will carry on in a normal way.. lekin i think kii sujal ke dimaak mein koi aur hii khichidi pakh rahi hai... according to me sujal is trying to act like the meeti-churi types... i mean sujal ke dimaak mein kuch aur hii chal raha hai.. it is something like sujal ke dimaak mein kuch aur zubaan par kuch hai.. according to me he is behaving so good to kashish may be because he knows kii agar woh kashish pe cheekega-chillayega tho kashish par ab koi asar nahii hoga.. tho i think now sujal has planned kii woh kashish ke kareeb jayega pyaar se aur phir usko chot pohanchayega.. i think sujal has taken-up this stratergy to hurt kashish.... because he knows kii kashish is too sensitive tho sujal has decide kii ab woh direct kashish ke dil pe vaar karega.. lekin ek baat he will not understand kii if he hurts kashish inturn uska dil bhi dukhega... i think sujal , kashish kareeb aayenge in the game sujal is playing.. and also sujal will get more attached than before too kashish..... neelu yaar yeh hai mera guess ab bolo kya mera guess sahii hai ya phir ghalat... 😉 😉
ab neelu yaar please do post the next part soon..me waiting for it eagerly... 😃

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both r quietly eatin

paar dono ek dusre ki naazre churake

khaate khaate ek dusre ki taraf teerchi nigahon se dekh rahe hain

kuch pal aise hi beet jaate hain

there is an air of uncomfortness & coldness bet them

k-sujal!

s-haan

k-wo..kuch kehna tha!

s-kaho!

k-khushi aane wali hai……….kal…subah!

s-khushi?

k-haan meri rishtedaar hai.kuch din hamare saath hi rahegi.

s-tumhari rishtedaar????hamare saath kyun???????

k-mumma,papa ki dekhbhaal mein busy rehti hain,islie khushi kuch din hamare saath…janti thi tumhe mere kisi rishtedaar ka ana pasand nahi hoga,hum saab sar dard hai naa,bojh hai na tum paar.

s-kashih plz!don't strt it out again!

k-fine!to,kya keh rahi thi main..haan..khushi aane wali hai,I hope tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai,agar hai bhi to.muje kya!

s-ye jo khushi jo bhi naam hai,ladki hai?

k-khushi ladkiyon ka hi naa hota hai!Mr Einstein!

s-jo bhi!paar koi ladki,mere ghar mein nahi rahegi![k raises her eyebrow]……sivae…tu..tumhare!

k-paar kyun?

s-kyun matlab?keh dia naa nahi rahegi to nahi rahegi!

k-khushi yahin rahegi mere sath..hamare saath!tumhe achcha laage ya naa laage!aur ek aur baat ye ki wo yahan rahegi bhi aur hum dono ke beech mein bed paar soyegi bhi,kyunki usse nahi to bhooton se darr laagta hai!

s-kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????????????hamare beech mein?????????bed paar?aur bhooton se darrrrrrrrrr???????????tum ye kya keh rahi ho??????

k-arre!kya keh rahi hoon,wohi jo tum sunn rahe ho!

s-kashish,tum ye kya keh rahi ho jaanti bhi ho,wo ek laadki hia,haamaare saath rahegi,maana!paar wo haamare beech mein soyegi!

k-haan to!

s-to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!to????????????beech mein sone ka matlab jaanti ho??matlab ki,mere side mein,mere bagal mein!!!!!!!!!

k-haan pata hai!sujal,bohot achchi hai khushi,bohot pyaari,dekhna tumhe bhi usse pyaar ho jaega!tum bhi usse god mein uthaoge,use pyaar karoge!

s-kashish tum!manaa hamare beech abhi ..i mean jhagde hue hain.paar tum mere saath,apne pati ke saath,uski bagal mein kisi aur ladki ko kaise sone de saakti ho?????I mean kashish tum zameen pe sati ho,tum chaho to meri pagal mein bed paar so sakti ho,I don't hav prob ,paar koi aur!!!!!!!!!!!!!koi aur ladki!!!!!aur tum muje keh rahi ho!!!!!aisa kaise karr sakta hoon main,aisa kaise karr skati ho tum???aur ye saab kya hai,tum chahti ho ki main,main!kisi aur se pyaar karun,usse apni bahon mein lunn,god mein uthaun????tumhe kya ho gaya hai,tum apne pati ko,kisi aur se kyun.wo bhi khud kidi aur ladki se pyaar karne ko keh rahi ho!!!!!!!!!!kashish,how..how cld u!!!!!!!!!

K is all confused,

She is looking at s lik s is a lunatic,kuch bhi bol raha hai

k-sujal,tum ye kya keh rahe ho???????

s-kya keh raha hoon?main bilkul thik keh raha hoon!main kisi aur se pyaar karai nahi kaar sakta!!!!!!!

k-sujal!khushi ek 3 saal ki bachchi hai!

Now s is feelin lik a fool,khoda pahad nikla chuha

s-oh.oh..matlab..oh..khushi..bass 3 saal ki hai?

k-haan,aur nahi to kya?wo meri cousin ki beti hai!mere cousin ke sasural mein kisi ki death ho gai hai to,wo log urgently jaa rahe hain,paar khushi baachchi hai to usse nahi le jaa rahe,mummy busy rehti hain,to maine kaha ki khushi ko itne din main sambhal lungi!aur haan,kal khushi ki maa usse 6 baje railway station paar hamare pass drop karke chali jaegi!islie humein kal railway station jaana hai!

s-oh,jo bhi!ye khushi –vushi ki zimmedaari tumhari,don't involve me in all this!wo bachchi muje pareshaan nahi karni chahie!

k-thik hai,tumhe uss bare mein pareshaan hone ki bilkul zarurat nahi,ye mera take care hai,ok!

K goes frm there aisa kehke

S rolls his eyes & murmers

s-uff!..pehle ye kashish..abb khush!…phaas gae sujal!abb to phaas gae!