PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic [cont.-part 2] - Page 6

wooooooow,neelu yaar bahut hi acha part tha 👏 . it was awesome and superb 😉. neelu you are too good in giving discription about characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️ . the way u have written about khushi reveals her whole personality and character yaar 😛😛😛. i am damn sure she is the one who will bring sujal kashish close 😉 . though she is small. but ahe is indeed a sweet as sugar, cute, obedient, bubbly girl with this all she also seems more mature than her age 👏 . i mean the way she asks quesions in soo cute.yes she is the one who will get everything changed in between them 😊😊😊 . i am sure next parts will be humourous and full of masti neelu 😉.neelu continue soon yaar plz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊😛😊

Thanxs captain kia &Ravinder duggal 4 commentin,keep commentin.by the way Isra my name is Nilanjana

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k-arre ye aapke mesho hain,mere husband hain!jaise apke papa aapki mummy ke husbad hain waise

kh-oooooooooo [makin a cutie face]

k-ok,khushi chalo aap ghar chalte hain ok!

Kh-ok![smiling cutely]

k-sujal!khushi ko god mein lo!

s-kyaa?god mein?kyun?usse chalna aata to hai!

k-haan chalna aata hai paar yahan bohot bheed hai,wo gir sakti hai,aur uske upar wo stairs chadne mein time lagati hai!

s-muje ye saab bachon ko god-vod mein uthana nahi aata!

k-thik hai matt uthao,sorry maine tumse kuch expect kia,abb kam se kam khushi ka suitcase to pakad sakte ho naa,ya wo pakadne mein tumhara haath tutt jaega!

s-do pakad raha hoon!

K gives kh ka suitcase 2 s,jo bilkul bachon wala hai chotta sa,aur jismein bohot saare cartoon characters bane hue hain!

s-ye iska suitcase hai!

k-kyun tumhe kya lagg raha hai?

s-nahi!bada hi anokha suitcase hai!

k-hmm!

Abb sk & kh strt 2 walk

S aage aage jaa raha hai

Aur k kh ka haath pakad kaar peeche peeche aa rahi hai

Abb kh bohot hi dheere dheere aa chaal rahi hai

Kyunki usse thik se chalna nahi aata

Aur k mein to dum nahi ki usse godi le,islie wo kh ka hath pakad ke usse chalaa rahi hai

Abb they reach the stairs

Abb kh stairs pe ek ek step karke dheere dheere karke chaal rahi hai k ke saath

Abb s jo thoda aage nikal gaya hai dekhta hai

Ki k & kh dono jahan usne dekha tha last wahan se bass 3-4 step hi aage aae hain

Phir se s strts 2 walk aur phir se mudta hai to dekhta hai ki k aur kh bohoooooooooot peeche reh gai hain

Aisa 3-4 baar hota hai

Abb s is fed up

Phir mudta hai to dekhta hai ki wo thoda hi aage chali hain

s-[murmers]uff agar aisa hi chalta raha to humein aaj ka din railway station paar hi bitana padega!

He turns

Bhaagkaar k aur kh ke pas jaata hai

Aur kh ko jhaat se god mein uthaa leta hai

k-arre!tum kyun aae,hum aa rahe the naa,tumhe khushi ko godi mein lene ki kori zarurat nahi hai!

s-haan,dekh raha tha,kis speed se aa rahe the!

K doesn't argue any more

S aur k dono hi chaal rahe hain,aur kh s ki god mein hai

Kuch der baad kh bol paadti hai

Kh-aap mecho ho naa!

s-haan

kh-aapka naam mecho hai?

s-nahi mera naam sujal hai!

Kh-dujal!

s-sujal!

Kh-jujal!

s-suuuu-jaall!!!!

Kh-duuuuuujaal!

s-su…uff!chodo!..emm… tumhara naam kya hai?

Kh-koochi!

s-oh really!muje laga khushi hai!

Kh-wohi to!

S smiles a bit

s-haan wohi to!achcha!..ye jo pink salwaar wali hai uska naam kya hai?[referin 2 kashish]

kh-wo to maachi hai!

s-haan naam batao!

Kh-kachich!

s-achcha!muje to kashish batati thi!

Kh-wo hi to!kaha!!!!!!!!!kachich hi to!kachcih hi to naam hai!kachich chinha!

s-nahi kashish garewal!

Kh-nahi,kachcih chinha!

s-arre kaha naa garewal!

Kh-kaha naa chinha!

s-nahi!uska naam pehle kashish sinha tha abb ,kashish garewal ho gaya hai!

Kh-kyun?[makin an innoscent sa cute sa face]

s-kyun ki mera naa sujal ga-re-wal hai!

Kh-to?

s-to islie!

Kh-oooooooo dono hi galewal!

s-haan!

Kh-oooooooo ishka matlab aap dono bhai behen ho!

bhai behan!!!!!!!!! 🤣

hey khushi is so cute ya.............. 😍

very very very cuuuttttteeee part 😊

wow neeeluz dear awsome part toooooooooooo otoooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooood masth part great loved it..especially the cuty pie kushi her character is so chhhhhhhooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeet...abh kooi ar kashish aur sujal ki zindagi mein kadam rakhta hai thats none other than kushi the great ek 3 saal ki bacchi shayad aggeee chal kar yahin in donn ko mila deh lolz still have crossed fingers...abh itni sweet si bachi hai itni bheeed mein chal nahin paegi kahin khojanneh ka darrh hai kashish ko isiliye she tells sujal to carry her lekin sujal says a straight no kashish kind a gets angry because she know she can't expect anything from sujal woh hai bohot hi zidddi usne toh kashish seh pehle hi kediya tha not to insert him iss bachon keh mamle mein shayad he sux in taking care of kids yah bichara experienced hi nahin hai..so she says toh yeh suit case hi pakad lo i hope ismein koi prooblem nahin hein abh jab woh suit case dekhta hai it u can see some cartooon characters omg sujal garewal usseh dekhteh hi suprised ho jatta hai and he can't belve t keh he's holding it abh majbuuri hai no choice..abh sujal kashish and kushi jaaa rahein hai kushi aur kashish neh hath pakda hai donn and sujal agee nikal gaya per woh donon bohot thak gai hai barrh barh kuch stops peh ruk jatti hein mainly kushi as abbi bachi hai and sujal toh mann hi nahin raha kushi ko uthannne ko..kashsh bichari khud khushi ko nahin uthha sakti again they wal agin sujal agge nikal jatta hai and woh dono thoda piche reh jatteh hai now sujal gets irritated he goes to them aur kehta hai keh agar esseh chalteh rahoge toh yahin pura din biith jaega..abh woh jakke khushi ko goddi mein uthata hai kashish thoda argue krti hai u don;'t need to carry her ar sujal koh koi shonk nahin tha majburi hai itnin slow chal rahin hai toh abh usseh godi mein lennah hi padega abbh sweet khushi stars are sewwt talks she tells sujal app mecho ho na lekin lagta hai he is not cmfortable with that name woh kehta ha nahin mein sujal huwoh bhar bhar naaames ko daudati hai woh bi wrong trrikeh seh pehle dujaal, phit juujal abh hir seh duuujal and sujal gets tired he says rehne doh and leki appka naam kiya hai she says koohi hooooooooo shwwwwwwwetttttttt and sujal usseh coreect karta hai meine socha kushi hai she again says a wohi wohi and now sujal asks kushi about kashish's name lagta hai usseh khushi keh pronunciatioz cute lagta aias she prononces her nae as kachich chinnah how sweeet..lekin sujal says nahin sinah nahin garewal they start arging about this he says kyunke kashish is married to me isliye i am sujal garewal and kashish is even garewal and omg omg omg can u belive it usne kaha toh kya app log bhai behen ho bechar sujal sayaah seh bhaiya lolz awesome part neeelz continue sooon loved it such a cute part..😳

o god...amazing khushi is sooo cute...bechare s aur k ko sis bro bana dia 🤣... meri to hasi hi nahi ruk rahi hai...cont sooon!!!

gr8 part 👏
wt an innocen question bt khushi 'ap dono bhai behen ho' lol 😆
cont. soon

gr8 part specially the conversation b/w sujal and khushi. it was really soooooooooo sweet i like the way u right it is really interesting and plz continue soon i will be waiting for khushi to make sujal smile. 😊

....bhai behen....hahaha....dats sooo funny😆

🤣i love this part

continue soon👏

neelu, bhai behen 🤣[=))🤣 🤣. only god can save him from this khushi's made up relation for him 😉. neelu part was too good as usual 😛😛 . kya humourous that 😆 😆 😆 . i was like getting mad as i was reading. first duuuujal, then koochi, then kachich chinha. sounsa like china yaar. aur ab brother and sister. OH MY GOD neelu i am not able to control my laughter.this khushi will surely wreak up sujal's head. i am damn sure. i am so excited for the next part. sujal ki shakal dekne layak hogi after khushi says this to him. bechara from husband he has turned into a brother and that too in a second 😕😕😕 . he will surely feel akward yaar 😕😕 . khushi ne kya nikali hai sujal ki. too good. it was awesome yaar. continue soon yaar plz........ can't wait any longer.bye. take care. 😊 😛 😊