PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic [cont.-part 2] - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
wow its really nice ayra v gud the way sujal says about his smoke n driking was really cute an n kashish ka surprise hona au husna was aweasome veru nice keep it up n w8ing 4 the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Hey I love this part...its awesome...its soo cute between both of them.......sizzling chemistry...sorry yaar but am commenting for the 1st time dats y its short but next time i promise to write a long one😳

Do continue😭

ISRAA

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Ok nxt prt-

She gives a sweet smile 2 s

S also smiles back thoda saa

Aise kuch der drive karte karte

Achanak s ek mall pe car rokta hai

K[surprised] –arre! ye kya kia?sujal????car yahan kyun roki??????sujal,tumhe shayad pata nahi ki railway station kahan hai,tum kabhi gae nahi naa,sujal railway station yaha nahi aage hai!

s-main jaanta hoon kashish!choclate?choclate pasand hai khushi ko?

k-[surprised & confused]haan,pasand hai,harr bachche ko hi hoti hai,muje bhi pasand hai waise to!

s-ok fine!

S jaldi se car se utharkaar,goes inside the mall

K is waitin in the car

S comes aft a while

Haath mein choclate se bhaare hue,do badeeeeeeeeeee –badeeeeeeeeeee[extreme big size] polythene bags lekaar which r full of the word's best swiss chocolates

S comes & puts them on the rear seat of the car

k-[hairaan]arre ye saab kya utha lae?

s-choclates!

k-choclates?itni saari?????

s-haan bachchon ko chocolates pasand hoti hai naa!

k-haan paar itni saari?????

s-kahan itni saari ek packet tumhara hai ek khushi ka!

k-paar koi itna saara leta hai kya?wo bhi swiss chocolates!

s-kyun?muje to laag raha tha ki kamm hai,main to dukaan wale se kehkaar aaya ki aur lene aa raha hoon!

k-kya?????????????tum..tum bilkul pagal ho!abb chalo,uff aur kitna der lagaoge!

s-ok ok chalo!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

Awww😳....dats was a really really cute scene between them...swiss chocolate...yaar i wanna eat chocolate as welll....sujal is soo loving...he said he is gonna hurt her but now he is loving her...he even bought chocolate for her...awwww😳...dats was shoo sweet and cute...ur FF is going more and more fabulous...👏

Plz do continue soon😭

ISRAA

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S A VERY VERY CUTE UPDATE ................. 😊 ............. LOOK'S LIKE HE LOVES KID'S 😉 😉 😉 ........ HOW MANY CHOCOLATES HE BOUGHT FOR KHUSHI AND THAN 4 KASHISH ALSO...... 😆 ........... HE TRYS TO HER KASHISH, BUT CAN'T BCOZ WHEN HE TRY'S SOMETING HAPPEN THAT HE FORGET ABT IT ............... 😊 .............. AWESOME UPDATE .......... YOUR STORY IS ROCKING 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
such a cute part neelu...sujal brought choclates 4 khushi and kashish...awwwwwww that was soooo sweet...i am sure he wud make a gr8 father 👏
cont soooooon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
such a sweet part neelu 😉😉😉. bahut hi accha tha 👏 . especially sujal bringing chocolates for kashish and khushi😳. i am sure khushi ke wajah se jarur sudhar jayega.no more smoking and drinking for sometime atleast ⭐️. neelu i am really excited for next parts. bahut hi humourous or masti wale hoge agle part cause of khushi 😊. they will be the best. i am so happy. neelu you are the best 👍🏼 . continue soon yaar plz......... can't wait any longer.bye.take care.😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
nice part 👏 abe intni temptation ab un chocolates ka liye 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
sujal is cho chweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt 😉 nice part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
😛
sujal is so sweet ........ he has a soft corner in his rock like heart
i only wish he shuld come to know all the reality of kashish and then both shuld be of each other
just like happy married life
😉 😉 😉
any ways continue fast
its rocking
Edited by hiral - 18 years ago

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