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Posted: 18 years ago
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neelu yaar tune part post kar di..aur main aagayi apne comments lekar tumhari story pe...i hope you like the comment... aur is baar jaise me promised koi deri nahii kar rahi hoon... 😃
tho part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan khushi makes a cute face saying ohoooo..typical a bachcha types of expression.... ab kashish kehthi hai ab ghar chalthe hai.....ab khushi is like ok..chalthe hai...ab kashish sujal se kehthi hai kii woh khushi ko godhi mein utaye... yeh kashish bhi na how can she tell sujal kii woh khushi ko godhi mein utaye.. kashish yeh kya bechare sujal pe roub jama rahii ho..usko kya bachcho ko ytane kii aadat hai kii he will do it with perfection..nahii na..usko thoda sa time do woh seekhega.. aur kashish tum tho badi-badi baatein kar rahi thi kii tum khushi ko sambhal logi..ab kya ho gaya..ab tum usse utaa bhi nahii paa rahi ho... hahaha.. kashish ko dekhkar aise lagtha hai kii baatein badi aur darshan chotte.... ab sujal kehtha hai kii kya..godh mein... kyun woh chal nahii sakthi... well ius baat pe mujhko sujal se kehthi hai kii sujal aise thodi na kehthe hai woh ek chotti si , pyaari si bachchi hai.... jab tum apne honeymoon par kashish ke zidd ke saamne jhukke kashish ko godhi mein le sakthe ho tho yeh khushi tho itni chotti si bachchi hai.. ab kashish tells sujal kii woh chal tho sakhthi hai lekin yahaan itni bheed mein woh ghir sakthi hai... aur stairs chadne mein bhi woh time legi... well kashish does have a point khushi ke itne beed mein ghirne ke tho chances hai hii...tho kashish says kii stairs chadne mein bhi woh waqt lagayegi... well is baat pe mujhko kashish se poochna hai kii kashish tum bhi tho utta sakthi hona khushi ko... bechare sujal ko kayeky phassa rahii ho haan..bolo.. bolo... ab sujal ka kehna kii mujhe yeh bachcho-vachcho ko godh mein utana nahii aatha.... hmm..lagtha hai sujal sirf apni pyaari si biwi kashish ko godhi mein utana jaantha hai... lekin sujal agar tumhe bachon-vachcho ko utana nahii aatha tho jald hii seekh lo...kyunke jab tumhare aur kashish ke bachche honge future mein tab unko tumhe hii tho sambhalna hai na.. kyunke kashish bhi hai hii ek bachchi... tho tumhe hii sambhalna hoga na... hahaha...ab kashish is like sorry maine tumse kuch expect kiya... ab tum kum se kum khushi ka suit-case tho utta hii sakthe ho na warna usse bhi tumhare haath toot jayenge... kashish that is very sarcastic..and very bad... tum kya sujal ko itna kamzor samajthi ho kii he cannot lift a chotti bachchi ka bag.... and woh kashish ka irritation kii sorry maine tumse kuch expect kiya kehna... well is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish tumna sujal se kuch bhi expect karna chod hii do..kyunke sujal tumhe will always give double then what you expect.. chahe kuch time baad hii sahii lekin sujal wahii kartha hai joh tum chahthi ho...yeh tho sujal kii aadat hai kii woh zara sa bhaav khata hai.. ab sujal is like do pakad raha ho... me sure sujal might have also made a irritated cute expression on his face sulking and all aur khushi sujal , kashish ke beech ke inter-action ko dekhkar smile kar rahii hogi... rather aisa kahoongi tho theek hoga kii woh giggle kar rahi hogi... ab kashish hands him the suit case which is very light aur uske upar kayi cartoon characters ke photos bane hue hai... ab sujal sees that bag and is like yeh bag iska hai... obviously sujal tumhare aur kashish ke saath rehne tho khushi hii waali hai na tho obviously ussi ka bag hogi na.. kyunke khushi tho na tumhare aur na hii kashish ke kapde pehen sakthi hai na... waise sujal khushi tumhari shirt pehen sakthi hai par woh bhi uske liye bada hoga.... hahaha... ab kashish asks him kii kyun tumhe kya laga.. kashish is like obviously yeh iska hii hoga na.... ab sujal usse kehtha hai kii nahii bada anoka suit-case hai... sujal bachcho ka suit-case aisa hii hotha hai.. woh ek chotti si bachchi hai... and it is very clear kii bachcho ko cartoon bohat pasand aayega... ab kashish is hmm... ab theeno bhi start to walk... sujal aage chal raha hotha hai aur kashish khushi ka haath pakde hue peeche chal rahi hothi hai... sujal yeh kya tumne tho kashish ke saath , saath pherre lethe hue wadaa kiya hoga na kii hamesha uske saath chaloge tho aaj kyun aage chal rahe ho... kashish ke saath chalo... ab khushi is walking very very slowly... kyunke chotti hai na tho woh theek se chal nahii paa rahi hothi hai... ab kashish mein energy nahii kii woh khushi ko utaye... tho isliye woh khushi ka haath pakadke is guiding the way... are wah kashish tum khud tho khushi ko uta nahii rahi ho aur sujal se expect kar rahi ho kii woh khushi koutaye..wah.. yaar.. kya expectation hai... ab woh stairs ke pass pohanchthe hai ab khushi is walking on each step slowly... kashish ke saath... ab sujal joh thoda aage hai sees kii kashish aur khushi bas wahii se theen ya chaar steps aage hai... ab phir bhi sujal starts to walk and jab mudhke dekhtha hai tho he sees kii khushi aur kashish bohat peecheee reh gaye hai... aise theen chaar baar hotha hai.. sujal must be thinking like yeh dono tho delucate darlings kii tarah chal rahe hai rukh rukhkhe... sujal ko laga hoga kii agar yeh dono aise hii chalthi rahii tho main yahaan jhade khade hii so jaaunga... ab sujal phir thoda aage jaatha hai... he sees kii ab bhi woh dono sirf kuch kadam hii chali hai... tab sujal apne aap se kehtha hai kii agar yeh dono aise hii chalthi rahii tho din bhar station mein hii rehna padega... sujal isse bachne ke liye ek tarika hai ek kaam karo go and carry khushi and kashish...un dono ko apne godhi mein lelo aur chale-chalo....... hahahaha... ab sujal cannot wait for more time...he turns runs towards kashish , khushi.. wahaan jaakar jhat se jhushi ko apne godh mein uta letha hai... ab kashish is suprised aur woh kehthi hai kii are tum kyun aaye... tumhe khushi ko utane kii zaroorat nahii.. are kashish usko abhi se practice karne do kalko uske bhi tho bachche honge na... hahahahaha... ab sujal is like haan haan dekh raha hoon....kiss speed se aa rahe ho tum dono.... ab kashish kuch nahii kehthi hai because she pretty well knows what sujal is trying to say... aur kashish kuch nahii kehthi..hahaha.... ab sujal , kashish chal rahe hothe hai and sujal is carrying khushi in his godh... ab kuch dhair baad khushi kehthi hai kii aap mecho hona... sujal is like haan...sujal might have surely felt really good kii usse bhi rishthe mil rahe hai.. he must be really happy... ab khushi says kii aapka naam mecho hai.. this shows khushi ka innocence.... and sujal says kii nahii mera naam sujal hai... ab khushi kehthi hai dujal... are waah khushi sujal ko dujal bana diya..hahaha... ab sujal is like correcting her trying to teach her saying sujal... ab khushi again get's it wrong and says jujal.. khushi bachchi hai tho she is not able to spell sujal ka naam achche se... ab sujal is sujallllllll..aur khushi ussi tarike main repeat karthi hai dujallllllllll... well sujal ab tumhe samah aagaya kii tumhara palla kisse hua hai.. ek khushi hii hai joh tumko seedha kar sakthi hai... hahaha... too funny.... ab sujal ko samaj aajaathi hai kii khushi will not get his name tho he is like uff.chodo... tumhara naam kya hai... ab khushi says kii her name is khoochi.. ab sujal bade naughty , shrarthi andaaz mein kehtha hai maine tho socha khushi hai... well sujal bas us bachchi ke saath mazaak kar raha hai.... ab khushi is like wahii tho.. hye..she is shoo sweet... aur khushi kii yeh baat sujal ke chehre par bhi muskaan laa dethi hai... very good going... ab sujal is like wohii tho.. ab he points to kashish and asks yeh joh pink salwaar pehne hui hai uska naam kya hai.. sujal lagtha hai badi masti kii mood mein hai.. kashish ko chidane ke mood mein..haha.. ab khushi sweetly says kii woh tho maachi hai...ab sujal islike haan.. lekin naam batao... khushi says khachich... i totally love this kid's totli baasha.. it is just too sweet for sweets.... ab sujal is like achcha lekin mujhe tho kashish batathi hai.. me sure kashish seeing the inter-action between sujal aur khushi kashish ke chehre kii muskaan badi hui hogi... ab khushi justifies and says kii are wahii tho kaha kachich... kachich chinha... ab sujal is like nahii kashish garewal.. sujal might have really loved it to call kashish as kashish garewal..... somewhere in his heart he must be proud too , to be calling kashish his wife me cent percent sure of it... ab khushi bhii sujal ka peeche hii pad gayi hai she says nahii kachich chinha... sujal tho phas gaya... ab sujal bhi is just acting like a kid and says nahii kaha na garewal.. ab khushi bhi dikhne mein bachchi hai lekin hai badi shatir aur equally sujal se meeti sii argue karthe kehthi hai kaha na chinha.. well khushi is just too cute..shoo innocent... aur woh apne saath sujal ke innocence ko bhi bahar laa rahi hai.. badi hii mast baat hai yaar yeh tho... fulltoo raapchik... dhamaal..kamaal kii baat... ab sujal explain karne kii koshish karne kii try kartha hai kyunke he knows kii agar dono hii nahi garewal nahii chinha karne lagenge tho argument nahii end hogi... tho he says pehle yeh kashish sinha thi ab yeh kashish garewal hai.. ab khushi makes a cute face and is like kyun...ab sujal says kii kyunke mera naam sujal ga-re-wal hai.. ab i think sujal has learnt to act with khushi from kashish...kyunke he saw kashish behaving with her... and sujal spells the garewal word split karke kyunke he knows kii khushi ko mushkhil hogi to spell the word..... sujal na khushi ke saath bilkul bachcha ban gaya hai... aur mujhe yeh baat badi achchi lag rahi hai... ab khushi like tho... ab sujal seedhe se keh detha hai tho isliye... ab khushi is like ohoooooooooo isliye dono hii galewal ho... yeh bachchi na sachchi bohat hii zyada pyaari hai...uski baatein all about the kid is just too fantastic.... bohat hii raapchik..... ab sujal is like haan..lekin woh nahii jaantha tha kii khushi ka agla sawaal uspe bomb ghirane waali thi ab khushi asks him she is like ohoooo tho iska matlab aap dono bhai-behen ho... i felt like laughing at this statement of khushi...sachchi main pait pakad pakadke has rahi hoon... yeh baat sunthe hii sujal yahii soch raha hoga kii are meri maa kahaan phasa rahi ho mujhko.... kashish meri biwi hai..behen nahi.. he must be mumbling and making wierd expressions.. aur kashish bhi sujal ko dekhkar aisi haalat mein hogi kii woh kissi bhi pal has de sakthi hai... neelu sach keh rahi hoon yaar yeh part padke tho meri hasi rukh hii nahii rahii hai aur has-haske mere pait mein dard ho raha hai... sachchi it was too damn good... the fun-element , the masti was all just damnnnnnnnnnn wonderful... mazaa aagaya..... i loved it completely.....🤣
😆🤣 ab neelu my guess for the next part would be kii abhi tho khushi kii entry hui hai sujal , kashish kii zindagi mein , yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai... ab khushi ko shayad sujaal yeh baat explain karega kii woh aur kashish pati-patni hai na kii bhai-behen...he may act quite cutely with her.. and at sometimes even sulk kyunke khushi ko kuch samaj nahii aa raha hotha hai.. phir bhi sujal khushi ko samjhane mein kamiyaab bhi ho jayega...aur shayad khushi aur sujal ke beech ke scene ko dekhkar kashish khud ko rokh nahii payegi aur has degi...ab sujal bura phasa.... khushi usse mast pareshaan karegi.... but may be in the starting sujal khushi kii harkato se pareshaan hoga..lekin then slowly-slowly woh khushi ke sharathe usko achche lagne lagenge.... shayad ek aisa waqt bhi aayega jahaan par sujal khushi kii harkato se pareshaan hokar bechari bachchi ko daant dega..... aur iske baad may be khushi bilkul chup-chaap si ho jayegi.... lekin ab sujal ka haal aisa hoga kii ek taraf kashish bhi will be behaving roota hua with sujal kyunke even she will not like the way he has behaved with khushi.... ab sujal bohat hii sweet tarike se khushi ko manayega.... aur khushi will like to be more with sujal then kashish... sujal aur khushi dost banenge aur woh dono hii milke kashish aur dadi pe pranks khelenge... i think khushi ke unki zindagiyo mein aane se sujal ka bachpan joh kahiin kho gaya tha due to the circumstances ab wohii bachpan nikharkar bahar aayega... sujal , khushi ke saath achchi masti karega.. kashish also will be suprised to see this side of sujal... so all i think of when i think of the next part is loads of masti , loads of fun.. hum sabko aane waale parts khoob hasaenge.... ab neelu this is my guess for the next part ab tum mujhko batao kii kya mera guess sahii hai ya phir ghalat..i really want to know it from you.... 😉 😉 😉 ab neelu yaar please do post the next part soon...me waiting for it damn very very eagerly..... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok nxt prt-

Kh-oooooooo dono hi galewal!

s-haan!

Kh-oooooooo ishka matlab aap dono bhai behen ho!

s-nahhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bhai behen nahi,bhai behen to bilkul nahi!kabhi nahi!pati patni,hain hum!husband wife!

Kh-pathi pathni?

s-haan pati patni,chaho to apni maasi se puchlo!

S k ko bulata hai

s-kashish!hum pati patni hai naa bolo!patni patni hai naa!

k-kya?haan paar kyun?

s-hai ki nahi bolo

k-haan hain!

s-suna hum dono pati patni hai,pati patni!kya hain?

Kh-pathi-pathni!

s-haan,abb samji!

Kuch der teeno aise hi chup chaap chalet rehte hain

Kuch der ke baad

Kh cutely apne saar pe haath maarti hai

Kh-oh no!

s-kya hua?

Kh-muje aapshe bath nahi kalni chahie!

s-paar kyun?

Kh-mummy ne maalaa kia hai!

s-maana kia hai?kya kaha hai?

Kh-mummy kehthi hain ki amit ji she baat nahi kalni chahie!

s-to?main amit ji kahan hoon,main to sujal ji hoon!

K interuupts sayin

k-khushi amit ji nahi ajnaabee! Tumhari mummy ne kaha hai ajnaabeeyon se baat nahyi karni chahie!

Kh-wohi tho kaha maine!

k-khushi ye ajnaabee nahi,ye tumhare mesho haintum inse baat kar sakti ho!

Kh-ooooooo thik hai![smiling cutely]

s-haan to aab batao,tumm….

Kh-kya?

s-tum school-vool jaati ho?

Kh-haan play shcool!

s-oh!iska matlab,anpaad!

Kh-huh?

s-kaalaa akshaar bhais barabaar!

Kh-huh?

k-sujal!pareshan matt karo usse,uska nursery mein admission hone wala hai!

s-arre baap re! itni sinior class!

Kh-paal muje naa..muje naa..kuch kuch..alpalates aate hain!

s-alpalates?

k-sujal,wo alphabates kehna chahti hai!

s-oh nice!waise khushi,tumhare school ka naam kya hai?

Kh-pleet pulpic school!

s-kya?

k-preet public school, hai iske school ka naam!

s-oh achcha! Badiya!

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Abb they reach 2 the car

S kh ko apni god se utaarkaar, piiche ki seat paar bithata hai

Aur k aake s ke saath wali seat pe baith jaati hai

s-kashish!

k-haan!

s-kashish..wo..emm..wo..

k-kya?

s-wo..tum..kuch bhul nahi rahi ho…

k-kya?

s-wo..wo..jo lae the wo…wo..emm…usse..do naa..emm ..wo..

k-oh!han,achcha yaad dilaya!

K gives kh the chocolates

k-ye lo khushi,ye tumhe mesho ne dia!

Kh-[bohot khush hoke]wowwwwwwww!!!!!!! Choclaches!

Kh ko khush dekhkaar s thoda muskurata hai

Kh-[gives a sweet smile]thanku mecho!

S smiles thoda sa twrds kh,as acknoledgin her thanks

Kh-mecho!

s-haan!

Kh-neeche jhuko!

s-kya?

Kh-jhuko naa![pyaar se]

S neche hota hain

s-haan?

Aur kh gives him a pyaara sa kiss on his cheeks

Kh-thanku mecho!

S is a bit surprised

Looks at kh pyaar se with thodi si muskurahat

Aur kh ke sar pe affectionately pat karta hai!




Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
so sweet........ 😊

awesome part.......... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
awwwwww that was such a sweet partt 👏 ...sujal bhi na choti si bachi ko tease karta hai 😆 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow neeeelu great part aur bohot hi cute..abh khushi aur sujal ka conversation chal raha thha usne toh sujal ko sayyah seh bhaiya hi banna diya kya larki hai yaaar and sujal ko toh shock sah edeti hai sujal ka reactoon omg noway he says keh woh peri patni hai aur mein uska patti ..husband wife..sujal itna ucchal raha tha ke basss balkeh woh kashish seh bi keh raha tha ke usseh batao keh hum patti patni hai sujal haan men haan keh rahin thi aur thodi suprised ho jatti hai dono ki behaviours dekh kar..abh yeh log gadi ki taraf chal rahe the aur khushi phirse appni yar pyari batein karne lagti hai can u believe it usne kaha keh uski mom neh manna kiya tha not to talk to amit ji sujal theeek seh samajta nahin she men't ajneeebee seh batein nahin karni chaiye par sujal neh socha uska naam leh rahin hai so he corrects her mein to sujal ji hun..abh kashish even corrects keh iska mautlab uski mom neh kaha hai ajnabiyoon seh baat nahin kar sakte..phir kashsh useh samjatti hain keh sall ajnabee nahn hai wh rishteh mein tumhare mecho hai abh bichari chotti bachi theek seh samati nahin hai itna chotta sah dimag yeh riishte vishte samjeg bi nahin phir woh kashish joh keh rahi thi usseh haan haaan keh rahin thi ..phir sujal usseh puchta hai kya school jatti ho and sujal usseh confue kar raha hai with weird phrases..phir kashish says keh sujal bass now bechari ko pareshan math karo usne admisson one wala hai ek nursery schook men and sujal phir se makaaz uddane lagta hai lolz..phir khushi says keh she know alpalates bechari can say she meant alphabets abh sujal bi naaa kitna buddhu hai dekh nahin raha chotti bachi hai abh theek seh pronounce nahin kar sakti lolz..abh sujl phir se shuru hogaya apna reporter ka dhanda usseh puchta hai what skool are u in and woh pyar seh kehti hai pleet pulpic school..abh usseh preet public school atta nahin tha toh kashsh corrects her ..shukar iskeh badh sujal neh kuch aur nahin pucha warna khshi kehti kya app reporter hai...😆 abh chalte chalte they reach in the car and sal pehele thoda hich kicha raha tha phhir ishara mein kehta hai keh usseh woh choclates dedo jo maine kharda tha mall seh woh khushi ko dedeeti hai and khushi ko toh kushi hoti hai woh choclates lekar ans sujal usseh dekhta hai tho woh bi smile karta ha she says thnx to sujal and pyar eh sussseh ek kiss deti hai issseh sujal ko aur kushi hotti hai ..and gets a bari si smile how sweeet 😳 wow neeeelu awesome part loved it continue soooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 ......... sujal and khushi are so sweet ........... 😊 ......... i think khushi n sujal will have a great time toghter .................... continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz 👏 ....... it's awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sooooooooooooooo sweet 😛. OH MY GOD neelu hasa hasa kar jaan nikal di tumne 🤣 . what a part yaar! simply superb 👏! khushi is so adorable and cute 😳 . and above all this she has so much manners 😛😛😛 . after getting chocolates she immidiately say thanks to sujal and also gives him a loving kiss ⭐️ . sooooooo cuteeeeeee! just loved her character 😃😃😃 . but our poor sujal khushi ki adhi baat to samaj mein hi nahin aati 😕😕😕 . that is so damn funny neelu 🤣 , pleet plupic school, and the best one was bhai-behen wala😆 . us samay sujal kya daar jata hai. he doesn't want her to think that they are bhai-behen at all. this shows that sujal loves kashish so much that he doesn't want any one, not even a kid to misunderstand their relation. he wants it to be pati-patni in any case 😳 . that was awesome neelu 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 . another best part ever👏 👏👏. neelu i am sure next part will be as humourous and with loads of masti 😛 . we are all going to enjoy it a lot yaar. this is my guess for the next part also i think that as the days will pass by sujal will surely get attached to khushi and with that woh shayad apne bachpan uske saath jee lenga aur ye sab dekhkar kashish will feel realy happy 😊 . neelu continue soon yaar plz....... can't wait any longer yaar. 😊😛😊
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Ok nxt prt-

Looks at kh pyaar se with thodi si muskurahat

Aur kh ke sar pe affectionately pat karta hai!

S strts 2 drive

Aft some time they reach ghar ke bahar

k-to khushi,ye hai apke mecho ka ghar,jahan aap kuch din rahengi!

kh is looking at the large mansion with awe

kh-mecho,aap price ho chindrella ki stry jaishe?

s-[hairaan]nahi to,kyun?

Kh-aap itneeeeeeeeeeeee bale mahal mein ho rehle ho!aapko akele dall nahi lagta?

s-darr nahi to! Aapki maasi bhi to rehti hai naa mere sath!

Kh-hmm[makin a cute sa face]

They reach the house,aur s kh ko god mein uthake upar le jaata hai

Kh-mecho sach mein aapka ghal bohot bohot bohot bohot bohot bala hai!

s-aapko achcha laga to achchi baat hai

s takes kh 2 bedroom,aur usse bitha deta hai bed paar while k is following them

kh-nahi mecho,nahi nahi nahi,godi she nai utharna hai

k-khushi! Shhhhh mesho ko pareshaan matt karo,unhe abhi office jaanaa hai,wo aapko office se aake god mein lenge,ok!

Kh-ok![smiles cutely]

K calls ram singh

Rs comes

k-ram singh ji khushi baby ko neeche ke jaiye zaraa

rs-ji memsahab!

k-khushi jao,ram singh ji ke saath

kh-bye ,bye maachi bye bye mecho

rs takes kh along with him

s aur k kamre mein akale hain

s office jaane ke lie taiyaar ho jaata hai

& k helps him in it by givin the things he needs & all

k-sujal!thanx!

s-kis baat ke lie?

k-tumne bina kuch kahe khushi ke lie chocolates kharide,uska itna khayal rakha uske lie!

s-tumhe thanxs kehne ki zarurat nahi hai!

K smiles sweetly

Abb kuch der baad

A aur k neeche aate hain

Jahan rs aur khushi khel rahe hain

Kh-mecchhhhhhhhoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-haan

kh-aap office jaa lahe ho?

s-haan

kh-byeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

s-[s miles a bit]bye!

S darwaze ke pass pohonch jaata hai

k-sujal!

S turns

s-haan

k comes to s,so tht kh cant hear their talks

k-ek baat puchun?

s-pucho!

k-tumne achanak,….I mean aisa kyun…. ,I mean tumne kaha naa ….ki… khushi bachchi hai… to tum…. uske saamne smoke ya drink nahi….

s-hmm..kashish wo..[puts his both hands inside pockets & sighs]..kashish,main nahi chahta ki..bachpann mein jo mere saath hua,wo..thoda sa bhi..kisi aur ke saath…

both s & k r uncomfortable with the topic

k nazar jhuka leti hai

s-..emm…emm..[2 change the topic]to main..chalun?

k-hmm

s mudta hai jane ko

k-suno!

S turns

s-haan?

k-emm..aaj..jaldi ghar ..aanaa

s-kyun?koi khaas baat?

k-nahi,aise hi!

s-koshish karunga!

k-hmm

s mudta hai 2 leave

k-suno!

S turns

S haan?

k-emm..gaadi sambhalke chalaana,aur..lunch time pe kar lena..emm..aur..

s-aur…jaldi aane ki koshish karunga..shaam ko!

K smiles at s

S phir musta hai 2 go

k-suno!

S turns

s-kahao!

k-bye!

S bye!

S takes a step 2 go

Phir mudta hai

K looks at him questioningly

s-aur kuch to nahi kehna!

k-[smiles]nahi..bass bye!

s-kashish! I l.l…. wo….[smiles at himself,cutely thoda sharmaake]..kuch nahi..bye!

s leaves


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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehe..........how cute...............khushi is choooooo cweet yaar.........and loved the last part......sujal kashish ka scene............bahut hi cute part tha........

luv,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow neeelu dear awesome part toooooooooooo toooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooood...loved it..abh yeh log ghar pohonchteh hai sujal keh to face peh muskurahat hai he is sooo sweeet usseh khushi badal rahin hai..kashish kehti hai keh yeh hai mech ka ghar jahan hum rehteh hain abh khushi shooked hojatti hai aur kehti hai itna bada ghar mehel mei shayad usne kabi essa nahin dekha hoga lekin isseh dekh karh shayad usseh thoda weird bi lagega ..abh ussneh yeh ghar cinderella ke stories mein hi dekha hai..ach woh kehti hi cutely keh kya appko darh nain lagta phir sujal kehta hai keh tumhari massi hai na how sweeeeeeet..of him..abh jab wh log ghar mein enter karteh hai toh usseh godh mein uthatta hai aur upar lejattah hai wow sujal toh khushi keh sath ek hi din mein bohot hi gul mil jata hai..and usseh bi khushi keh ath mazaah atta hai shayad yehin ek wajeh hai sujal uski pareshaniyan bhul jaega..they reah in kashish and sujal's bedroom wahan usseh bed par bithata hai lekin naughty cute si khushi iss baat seh khush nahin usseh wahn sujal ki godddi mein rehna hai phir kashish says keh apne mecho ko disturb maath kari unneh office janna hai..phir woh mannn jatti hai and ramsingh usseh lejatah ha neeche..abh sujal and kashish akele hotteh hai kamre mein kashih dil seh sjal koh thnx karti hai jeaise usne khushi keh sath bartav kiya usskeh sath itna ghul milgaya aur woh bohot kush hojatti hai..abh sujal ffice ke liye nikale wala hottah hai bidzz bye to everyone and kashish sujal koh baarh baarh bulatti hai haeee yeh dialouge jaiisse perfect husband and wife..suno ..suno ..suno..pehle woh tum khushi keh anne seh smoke aur drink chor rahe ho kyun phir sujal ko apna bachpan yaad ajjaata hai jo uskeh bachpan mein ho raha thaa woh nahin chata keh kisi aur keh sath ho..phir donoo ko ajeeb lagta hai yeh topic ke barreh mein baat karna now sujal says abb mein chalu..phir seh kashish suno aur bahane banna rahin hottti hai kaise sujal seh thodi baat karreh pehle jaldi ghar aajana,phir gadi sambhalkeh chalana aur lunch time peh karna aur bye finally..phir sujal kehta hain kuch aur bakki hai kya.. phir woh kuch kehne jaa raha tha lekin sharma jatta hai mutlab kuch toh garbaarh hai phir bi keh nahin paahtah and sujal leaves saying bye 😳 ..wow such a cute part loved it continue soooooon dear

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