PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic [cont.-part 2] - Page 3

hmmm nice yaar gud ab me w8ing 4 that khushi i hope k uske ane se kahni mein kuch nice n cute twist yenge haina?aur s/k k beech kuch tou acah hoga their misunderstanding will b clear n they will accept their love 4 each other ok aur ab again same line cont soon dear lu n yah thnx 4 writting the part thnx 😳 👏 😳

gr8 parts neel.. 👏 ..story is gng on gr8 track.. 😃 ..jus loved it... 😳 ..nw khushi comng..so sujal will hav fun nw...do cont soon... 😊

Hi,

I just discovered ur fanfics a few days before and all i can say is its AWESOME...👏it took me only one day to read all of them...i got so addicted to it....ur an amazing writer...i really really loved ur fanfics and ur ff is the best ff that av ever read...And hats of to all loyal readers and mostly to sun_423 who give all those long and nice comments..👏..all the best in ur writing😛

Please continue soon😭

ISRAA

hey neelu awesome, too good yaar 👏👏👏. i am so happy that sujal and kashish are leading a normal life 😛. no jhagda and anger for some time 😊😊😊. subah subah kya shuruwat ki hai neelu bahut hi khub 👍🏼. kashish ka subah subah sujal ko utthana. sujal ka na kehena and then kashish saying that agar us ke satth raste mein kuch hua to. and then sujal getting worried and immidiately waking up for her. it was so romantic😳 . perfect pati ⭐️ . patni yaar. neelu you are best 👏👏👏 . and continue soon yaar plz..... can't wait any longer.bye. take care. 😊

awsomeeee neelu 👏 ...k ka s ko blackmail karne ka tareeka mast tha yaar...kudi samajhdar ho gayi hai...sujal is sooo lazy just lyk me 😆 😳...cnt w8 4 khushi's arrival...lol it wud b really fun if she is a troublesom kid...always troubling s... 😆 ...cont soooon

Originally posted by: mitali_s

awsomeeee neelu 👏 ...k ka s ko blackmail karne ka tareeka mast tha yaar...kudi samajhdar ho gayi hai...sujal is sooo lazy just lyk me 😆 😳...cnt w8 4 khushi's arrival...lol it wud b really fun if she is a troublesom kid...always troubling s... 😆 ...cont soooon

yes even i was thining the same kaash k us ke ane se kuch acha sa ho ajye may b hope 4 best n nona dear cont soon dear plz n A VERY BIG PART

gr8 part 👏
waitng for khushi's entry
cont. soon

Ok nxt prt-

s comes afta while,aft changing

s-ho gaya!

k-ok

s-chalo!

S aage chalne laagta hai

k-ruko!

s-[confused]kya hua?

k-hum gaadi mein jaa rahe hai naa?

s-haan

k-tumhari gaadi mein jaa rahein hai naa?

s-haan

k-gaadi tum hi chala rahe ho naa!

s-haan,haan!

k-to phir gaadi kya bina chaabi ke hi chalaoge?

s-huh?[chaabi idhar udhar dhundte hue]

k-chaabi![hands over the keys 2 him]

s takes the key,& go twrds the car
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wo car ke pass pohonchte hain

both sit inside the car

s strts 2 drive

both r silent

aft a while

s-emm..railway station jaanaa hai naa?

k-haan

s-to…..emm….!!!!!!

k-haan?

s-khushi..khushi hi naam hai naa uska?

k-haan

s-ok,emm tum khushi ki kya laagti ho?

k-main khushi ki maasi hoon

s-aur,main?

k-waise to tum uske mausaa ho…!

s-mauuuuuuu…..sssssaaaaaaaa….!!!!!!!!

k-haan[smiles a bit],paar wo tumhe mausaa nahi bulaegi

s-kyun?

k-kyunki hum log Bengali hain,aur hamare mein mausaa ko mesho-moshai kehte hain!

s-ok,fine!

k-paar khushi ko mesho-moshai itna bada bolna nahi aata,islie wo tumhe sirf mesho bulaegi aur muje maashi!

s-oh,ok!suuuuuu……..jaaaaaallllllll meeeeeeeeshhhhhhoooooo!!!!!!!

k-[smiles]haan,sujal mesho!

s-to……kashsih!

k-hmm?

s-wo bohot chotti hai naa!bilkul bachchi hai naa!..khushi!

k-haan 3 saal ki hai!

s-..emm…to..muje..p…

k-chinta matt karo,wo bohot achchi hai aur cute bhi,wo tumhe pareshaan nahi karegi!

s-nahi,o baat nahi hai,emm..i mean..wo bohot chotti hai naa,to…

k-to?

s-to uske saamne,main..wo..i cant smoke or drink naa…emm..i mean..wo chotti bachchi hai naa..aur..bachchon paar bura asaar padta hai naa!

K looks at s hairaani se,

She is pleasantly surprised

She gives a sweet smile 2 s

S also smiles back thoda saa

thanxs 2 hinal & SweetAngel18 my newest readers,dears plz keep readin & keep commenting ,i am glad u liked my stry,coz as a new writer ur comments count a lot

wow neeluz dear great part awesme toooooooooooooooo tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooood loved it ..abh sujal toh ahein bharta hai jesse he is fed up pehle yeh kashish abh yeh sujal bichara soch raha hoga kahan phassa gaya mein..lolz thn he sees ke andhera hi roommein aur kashish zameen peh soh rahin hai jab lights on karta hai toh kashish gets annoyed sujal sorry keh keh jhat seh light offf kar detta hai ohhon yeh majnu kab seh baanh gaya kabi kabi toh we never understand sujal kabi angry kabi kind rang badalteh rehteh hai uskeh phir he tells kashish keh usseh change karna hai and its dark so mein kapde kaise lunga arreh bichara appneh hi rooom mein soch raha hai yeh kaise karunga woh kaise karunga....lolz kashish tells him bilkul pagal hai do min light on karlo kapde lelo aur jao sojao simple lekin abbbh neend arahin hogi toh bhejeh mein toh nahin uuj rahah hoga sirf popcorn phut rahein honge..abh subha hotteh hi kashish jald se jaldi tayar ho jatti hai by 5 oh no itni subha subha she goes wakes up sujal lekin woh toh apneh sapno ki duniyah mein khoya hua hai time dekh keh tellls kashish meri office itni subha subha nahn kulti until 9 lekin she says they have to go pick kushi abh bichra sujal kushi ke liyeh ussh itnin jaldi subha uthna parega kya ...lolz uska toh mann kar rahah hoga kushi ka gallah dhabanega soch rahah hoga yehh kshi hai kya cheez jiskeh wajeh seh kashsh itni uttawli ho rahin hai lolz...he tells are baad mein jaenge abh snne doh and now kashish kehti hai theek hai meinkhud chali jaungi waise y do u care mujeh kuch b hojae whatever lekin tumeh kya ..emotional blak mailing hairee yeh toh barri forward nikli...he sraing away gets up and says mujeh kya karna hoga how cute isseh toh hamesha emotionallly black mail karna parega ...lolz abh she says keh jao change karlo 😆 wow neelu dear awesome part tooo gooooooooood loved t continue soooooon