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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 this part made me laugh sooo much yaar.......sujal is so sweet yaar...he loves kashish so much that he cant think abt others and he way he misunderstands 😆 😆 ..i am damn sure now khushi will come close to sujal...i waiting for that episodes...plzz continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: belanila

Ok nxt prt- both r quietly eatin


paar dono ek dusre ki naazre churake


khaate khaate ek dusre ki taraf teerchi nigahon se dekh rahe hain


kuch pal aise hi beet jaate hain


there is an air of uncomfortness & coldness bet them


k-sujal!


s-haan


k-wo..kuch kehna tha!


s-kaho!


k-khushi aane wali hai……….kal…subah!


s-khushi?


k-haan meri rishtedaar hai.kuch din hamare saath hi rahegi.


s-tumhari rishtedaar????hamare saath kyun???????


k-mumma,papa ki dekhbhaal mein busy rehti hain,islie khushi kuch din hamare saath…janti thi tumhe mere kisi rishtedaar ka ana pasand nahi hoga,hum saab sar dard hai naa,bojh hai na tum paar.


s-kashih plz!don't strt it out again!


k-fine!to,kya keh rahi thi main..haan..khushi aane wali hai,I hope tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai,agar hai bhi to.muje kya!


s-ye jo khushi jo bhi naam hai,ladki hai?


k-khushi ladkiyon ka hi naa hota hai!Mr Einstein!


s-jo bhi!paar koi ladki,mere ghar mein nahi rahegi![k raises her eyebrow]……sivae…tu..tumhare!


k-paar kyun?


s-kyun matlab?keh dia naa nahi rahegi to nahi rahegi!


k-khushi yahin rahegi mere sath..hamare saath!tumhe achcha laage ya naa laage!aur ek aur baat ye ki wo yahan rahegi bhi aur hum dono ke beech mein bed paar soyegi bhi,kyunki usse nahi to bhooton se darr laagta hai!


s-kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??????????????hamare beech mein?????????bed paar?aur bhooton se darrrrrrrrrr???????????tum ye kya keh rahi ho??????


k-arre!kya keh rahi hoon,wohi jo tum sunn rahe ho!


s-kashish,tum ye kya keh rahi ho jaanti bhi ho,wo ek laadki hia,haamaare saath rahegi,maana!paar wo haamare beech mein soyegi!


k-haan to!


s-to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!to????????????beech mein sone ka matlab jaanti ho??matlab ki,mere side mein,mere bagal mein!!!!!!!!!


k-haan pata hai!sujal,bohot achchi hai khushi,bohot pyaari,dekhna tumhe bhi usse pyaar ho jaega!tum bhi usse god mein uthaoge,use pyaar karoge!


s-kashish tum!manaa hamare beech abhi ..i mean jhagde hue hain.paar tum mere saath,apne pati ke saath,uski bagal mein kisi aur ladki ko kaise sone de saakti ho?????I mean kashish tum zameen pe sati ho,tum chaho to meri pagal mein bed paar so sakti ho,I don't hav prob ,paar koi aur!!!!!!!!!!!!!koi aur ladki!!!!!aur tum muje keh rahi ho!!!!!aisa kaise karr sakta hoon main,aisa kaise karr skati ho tum???aur ye saab kya hai,tum chahti ho ki main,main!kisi aur se pyaar karun,usse apni bahon mein lunn,god mein uthaun????tumhe kya ho gaya hai,tum apne pati ko,kisi aur se kyun.wo bhi khud kidi aur ladki se pyaar karne ko keh rahi ho!!!!!!!!!!kashish,how..how cld u!!!!!!!!!


K is all confused,


She is looking at s lik s is a lunatic,kuch bhi bol raha hai


k-sujal,tum ye kya keh rahe ho???????


s-kya keh raha hoon?main bilkul thik keh raha hoon!main kisi aur se pyaar karai nahi kaar sakta!!!!!!!


k-sujal!khushi ek 3 saal ki bachchi hai!


Now s is feelin lik a fool,khoda pahad nikla chuha


s-oh.oh..matlab..oh..khushi..bass 3 saal ki hai?


k-haan,aur nahi to kya?wo meri cousin ki beti hai!mere cousin ke sasural mein kisi ki death ho gai hai to,wo log urgently jaa rahe hain,paar khushi baachchi hai to usse nahi le jaa rahe,mummy busy rehti hain,to maine kaha ki khushi ko itne din main sambhal lungi!aur haan,kal khushi ki maa usse 6 baje railway station paar hamare pass drop karke chali jaegi!islie humein kal railway station jaana hai!


s-oh,jo bhi!ye khushi –vushi ki zimmedaari tumhari,don't involve me in all this!wo bachchi muje pareshaan nahi karni chahie!


k-thik hai,tumhe uss bare mein pareshaan hone ki bilkul zarurat nahi,ye mera take care hai,ok!


K goes frm there aisa kehke


S rolls his eyes & murmers


s-uff!..pehle ye kashish..abb khush!…phaas gae sujal!abb to phaas gae!

😆 oh my GOD now what is this yara?aik aur twist per bara funny sa n e wayz cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neeeluz dear great part amazing tooooooooooooooooo tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooood...donon apna dinner kar rahein hai chup chap avoiding eachoda'z presence..abh kashish sujal seh kehti hai keh uski rishtehar kushi anneh wali hai unkeh ghar thode dinon keh liye ...sujal thoda shoked ho jata hai keh kashish keh rishtehdar usseh to aunty (kashish ki mom) ke pass rehna chaiye par yahan kaise phir kashish kehti hai keh uski mom busy hogi k ki papa ki dekhbaal mein so unneh time nahin milega isiliye she has to stay with us..and kashish even clears keh i know u don't like us we are a burdenz n u sujal says plzzz abh hir seh maat shuru karo he knows ke pehle hi sujal neh kashish ko itna kuch kehdia aur agar kashish neh phir seh shuru kiya toh sujal ka moooh bbi khullega and he does't want to tell kashish anny thing else usseh uska dil nahin dukkhana..he gets shoked keh humare ghar kushi mutlab ek larki lolz kashish usseh kehti hai obviously its a gul naam seh hi patah chalta hai he declines n says no way humare ghar mein ek ladki kabi nahin doesn't agree to that..kashish bi zidd kari hai keh yes she will kam chahe jo b ho and hse'll sleep between us kyunke usseh bhoton seh dar lagta hai raat kko sujal again gets a shock lagta hai usseh heart attack anne wala hai woh aur humare beech mein kashish agrees to that haaan humare beech mein and kashish even says she is so sweet tumeh dekhte hi usseh pyr hojaega tum usseh apni godh mein utha logeh abh sujal can't ake it anymore he says keh tum kya pagal hoga ho u neve slept close to me aur woh kushi soegi how can u let me sleep near some gull ..kasish is shell cnfused sujal says whatever i said is right how could phr kashish says woh ek 3 saal ki chotti bachi hai lolz mg omg omg can't belive it sujal made a fool out of hmself woh kya soch raha tha aur kya niklalolz can't stop laghing.. 😆 thn kashish explains keh uski cousin ki sasural walon men kisiki det ho gai hai so they hv to leave urgently isiliye woh log kushi koh humare sath chor keh jaa rahein hai sujal saaf saaf clear kar detta hai keh don't involve me to this please esse expression seh lagta hai sujal hates kidz lagta hai kabbi kisi bacche ki compny experience nahin kii..kashish says keh she is my resonsibility looks like she loves kidz how sweeet.. 😳 abh kashish wahan seh chall jatti ha and sujal kehta hai pehle kashish keh sath has gaya abh yeh kushi bichara doesn't ike guls 👏 ..lolz great part neelz really very funnnny loved it continue soooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neeluuuu. what a funny part 😆. purre part me main has has ke pagal ho chuki hu yaar 😆.it was damn funny, especially when sujal say ki how could kashish do with him like this 😉.the way he told her that how could she see him sleeping with someone else on their own bed and in their own bedroom 😲.GOD, kya hoga sujal ka aage jakar . neelu, he is so stupid usse tabhi hi samaj jana chahiye tha jab kashish tells him that woh ladki bhooto se darti hai . i mean come on that was the biggest clue 😉😉😉 . he should have immediately asked her age. khali pili itna sab kuch kehekar bechari kashish ko confusion me dal diya 😕. lekin neelu ye sab padkar bahut maza aaya khas kar ke sujal ki baat par👏, aur yeh bhi ehsaas hua ki sujal loves kashish so much and this is revealed when he tells kashish that he can't let any other girl stay in his house except her and also when he says that he can't love anyone else ever 😳. this means that he truly loves her from bottom of his heart❤️. neelu it was a fantastic, hilarious and damn humourous part yaar 😃. just loved it 😊. neelu ab i think ki sujal ki yeh reaction dekhkar kahin na kahin kashish ko yeh ehsaas hoga ki sujal can't have any relationship with other girls cause when kashish told him that khushi will sleep in between them he got so worried and told kashish that she can sleep with him on bed but not other girl 😳. and NOW that khushi will come in their life for some time, i think ki woh sujal aur kashish ki puri zindagi khushiyoon se bhar dengi ⭐️. u know what i mean?for ex. like, kashish usually sleeps on floor but now as khushi will come she will for sure sleep on bed besides sujal lekin when khushi will see that kashish sleeps on floor she will 100% tell kashish to sleep on bed with sujal and her,aur phir hamari kashish na na kahegi par khushi ke jid ke samane usse jhukna hoga 😉. khushi kii jid use majbur kar dengi and even sujal will take a chance and will tell kashish to sleep with him and khushi 🥱. tab jakar hamari kashish maan jayengi.neelu the best situation will be when kashish will not be able to sleep properly in her place. u know ki kashish ko neend me yahan wahan sarakne ki aadat hai aur yeh sujal ko bhi pata hai.shayad iss khushi ki wajah se woh dono aur bhi kareeb aa jaye😳 .neelu this is my guess for the further parts. i think kuch haad tak aisa hi hoga. neelu, very nice part yaar. awesome one 👍🏼 .and yeah continue soon, plz..........can't wait any longer😍😍. take care. bye.😊😛😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg it was sooo cute and funny...god sujal...khushi bas teen saal ki bachi hai...he bhagwan aur main soch rahi thi ki ek aur villain aa rahi hai...sujal's reaction was sooo damn hillarious...bechare ki halat kharaab ho gayi 😆 😆 😆...he was acting lyk ki kisi ladki ke rahne se uski maan maryada ko aanch aa jayegi...i am sure khushi wil bring happiness 4 them....o god i am desperate to read the next part.....plz plz plz cont asap 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neelu dear dekh tune next part post kar diya.. and me aagayi apni vishesh tipenni lekar on the part you have posted... 😃 ab part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan pe dono chup-chaap baitke khana kha rahein hai.. there is a kind off quiteness and coldness in between them.. dono mein se koi bhi kuch nahii keh raha hai.. shayad they both are trying to azma the saying silence is golden.. i think they are trying to see kii kya silent rehne se gold miltha hai yaa nahi.. issi liye they r so chup... God plshh aap unko zubaan ko thodi awaaz dedo woh pati-patni hai but they are acting like two strangers inko forcibily saath bitaya gaya ho... hahahaha... ab kuch dhair ke baad kashish ko i think realize ho jaatha hai kii chup rehne se swarn i mean hold nahii milne wala tho she breaks the silence and calls his name.. ab sujal is like haan... tho kashish is like kuch kehna tha.. well kashish agar tumko sujal se kuch kehna hai tho bejhijhak kaho na..usse permission kyun maang rahii ho.. jis tarah you reacted and gave sujal jawaab uske baat sujal yeh himmat khatehii nahii karega , woh yeh ghalthi kabhi nahii karega the ghalthi of not listening to you.. ab sujal is like kaho... kashish comes straight to the point and says kii kal khushi aane waali hai kal subah.. she does not want to do idhar-udhar kii baat with sujal because sujal ne pehle se hii uske dimaak ko paka diya hai warna aise kaise ho saktha hai kii hamesha bhaj-bhak karne wali kashish itni shaant baiti hui hai.... me sure kashish must be wondering the same kii woh kyun nahi bol rahii hai.. uske zubaan mein dard hua hoga and that's why she broke the silence...haha.. ab sujal is like khushi who.. tho kashish seedhe-seedhe jawaab dethi hai kii meri rishtedaar hai..kuch din humare saath rahegi... ab sujal perks his ears up and kind off raises kii eye-brow and asks tumhari rishtedaar humare saath kyun... well sujal ko pehle kashish ke rishtedaar bolke sunke the first thing he would have thought is..hey..Ram.. yahaan kashish kii baatein main sun nahii paa raha hoon..ab uske rishtedaar ko bhi jheloon...uff..this must be sujal's thought...hahaha.. ab kashish usko explanation dethe hue kehthi hai kii her mother is busy taking care of her dad... tho that's why woh unke saath rahegi.. ab lekin kashish sujal ko taunt karne ke liye sarcastically kehthi hai jaanthi hoon mere kisi rishtedaar ka ana pasand nahi hoga hum saab sar dard hai naa bojh hai na tum par.. well kashish kii is baat par mujhko badi hassi aa rahi hai.. kya taana marr rahi hai sujal pe.. bohat achche...sujal might have really got his food choked when kashish ne usse aisa kaha..ab sujal is like kashish don't start it again.. well i don't think sujal wants to again see the ghussa roop of kashish tho he did not want any further arguments... issi liye usne kuch aisa kaha.. bechara abhi bhi kashish ke usko kuch dhair pehle diye hue jhatke ko nahii bhulla paya.. aur i think woh tho darr hii gaya...issi liye woh us topic ko avoid kar raha hai kyunke agar us topic ne wapas zor pakad liya na tho sujal ke tho pasine choot jayenge.. bechare kii haalat dekhne layak hogi....hahaha.... ab kashish is like fine... tho main kya keh rahi thi...khushi aane wali hai... i hope tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai...agar hai bhi tho muje kya... well well well yahaan zara kashish ko tho dekho she has so much of attitude haan... mazaa aagaya.. the way she told sujal kii agar tumhe koi problem hai bhi tho mujhe kya... kashish yaar tum na just too good ho.... meri tho haalat aisi hai kii if i just think about sujal ka haal meri hassi choot rahi hai.... me liking the way kashish is behaving.... she is behaving as cold as possible with sujal but still she has things going her way.. she is totally ordering sujal...wow yaar...simply superb... and kashish ka telling was like fine...waise bhi tumse baat kaun karna chahtha hai...... ab sujal is like yeh joh khushi hai woh ladki hai... are sujal naam khushi hai tho obviously ladkii hii hogi na.... ab kashish telling him kii khushi ladki ka naam hii hotha hai..and she calls him MR.Einstein.... me sure sujal ne is baat par ek aisa expression diya hoga which will be like mooh phoolake expression.... the sulking cute expression.. ab sujal is like joh bhi ho.. mere ghar mein koi bhi ladki nahii rahegi...he then says sivaye yeh kehkar woh stop ho jaatha hai then he says sivaye tumhare.... how cute sujal..this is being so honest... he does not want any other ladki in that house except kashish... and usse himmat jutakar yeh baat kahii bhi... ab kashish raises her eye-brow and says par kyun... ab sujal is very firm and says kii kya kyun.. keh diya na nahii rahegi tho nahii rahegi.. well sujal is baat pe mujhko tumse yeh kehna hai kii sujal tum shayad bhool rahe ho kii tumhare ghar mein saare faisle kashish lethi hai... haan shayad ghar tumhara , zindagi tumhari ho sakthi hai...lekin tumhare zindagi par , tumhare ghar mein faisle lene ka hakh bas kashish ko hai..... ab kashish usse kehthi hai kii khushi mere saath hii rahegi..chahe tumhe achcha laga ya na lage... well kashish bohat achche jaa rahi ho...she then continues saying kii khushi un dono ke beech mein bed par soyegi kyunke usko bhootho se darr lagtha hai.. i think kii kashish ko bhi bhootho se darr lagtha hai itne din bade mushkhil se she managed sleeping on the ground akele..ab khushi ke bahane kashish ko bhi mouka mil gaya to sleep on the bed sujal ke pass... kyun.... ab sujal is like kya...humare beech... bhootho se darr lagtha hai..tum yeh kya keh rahii ho.. well it looks like nothing is going onto sujal ka dimaak he is totally confooseddddddddd... aur yahaan kashish is behaving extraodinarily normal and she is like main kya keh rahii hoon..wahii joh tum sunn rahe ho... good jawaab kashish..sujal is behaving as if woh behra hogaya hai... hahaha.. ab sujal is like tum kya keh rahi ho jaanthi bhi ho woh ek ladki hai yahaan rahegi maana.. lekin woh humare beech soyegi...tho ab mujhko sujal kii problem samaj mein aayi woh yeh soch raha hai kii how can kashish let any other girl to sleep in between them... ab kashish casually kehthi hai haan tho... ab sujal gets hyper and says thoooo.... beech mein sone ka matlab jaanthi ho woh mere bagal mein soyegi.. mere side mein.. well this shows kii sujal kitna sachcha hai.. he does not want any other ladki by his side , jisko woh apne close rakh sake he wants that ladki only to be kashish...shoooo sweeett.... ab kashish is like she knows and she says kii khushi badi pyaari hai..even you will love her.. tum usko godh mein bhi utaoge....well i think kashish ke is baat par tho sujal ke dimaak kii bhatti ko light ho jaana chahiye... kyunke kya kashish bewakoof dikh rahi hai kii woh apna haatho se apne pati ko kissi aur ladki ke pass jaane degi...kashish ke baaton se jaise usko bhootho se darr lagtha hai...woh unke beech mein soyegi and all stuff like that seems to be like she is talking about a small kid... lekin sujal ke dimaak mein tho koi baat aathi hii nahii.. ab sujal usse kehtha hai kiii kashish tum........manaa hamare beech abhi ..i mean jhagde hue hain..... well sujal jhagde hue nahii tum dono ke beech tumne jaan bhoojkar phoot dalli tum dono ke beech..ab tum bhuktho....... ab sujal continues saying paar tum mere saath apne pati ke saath uski bagal mein kisi aur ladki ko kaise sone de saakti ho...... well sujal ke aise reaction par tho mujhko zabardast haasi aa rahi hai...... he is like tum apne pati ke saath aisa kaise kar sakthi ho.....lagtha hai sujal ko khushi ko lekar ek aur misunderstanding ho gayi....... ab he says I mean kashish tum zameen pe sati ho tum chaho to meri pagal mein bed paar so sakti ho I don't hav prob paar koi aur......koi aur ladki.......aur tum muje keh rahi ho.......aisa kaise karr sakta hoon main aisa kaise karr sakti ho tum...... well sujal tumhe tho koi problem hogi bhi nahii agar kashish tumhare baghal mein soyegi tho... afterall tumhari biwi hai.... ab he he main aise kaise kar saktha hoon....this means kii he is indirectly asking kashish how can i cheat on you..... and sujal is feeling helpless kyunke woh hamesha tho kashish kii baat hii maantha hai na is liye is baar woh boora phasa.... and that's why he is asking her in a helpless state kii how can you do this to me...... he says ye saab kya hai tum chahti ho ki main kisi aur se pyaar karun usse apni bahon mein lunn godh mein uthaun.... well kashish tum bhi sujal kii haalat samajhthi hii nahii ho......sujal tumhare sivaye kissi ko bhi pyaar nahii kar saktha....woh tumhare siva kissi aur ko godhi mein nahii lega..... aur sujal ko tho tumhare siwai aur kuch dikhtha hii nahii.... and you tell him kii he will love khushi.... yeh tho sujal ko problem mein daal rahi hai.... ab sujal kehtha hai kii tumhe kya ho gaya hai tum apne pati ko kisi aur se kyun.....wo bhi khud kisi aur ladki se pyaar karne ko keh rahi ho...kashish how..how could u... we sujal kin in sab baaton se mujhko lag raha hai kii uski bas ek hii problem hai... kii he does not want to give kashish any kind off dhokka.. woh bas kashish ke saath hii har pal chahtha hai...agar kashish uske saath hai tho usse kisse aur kii koi zaroorat hii nahii... ab kashish is confused and she is looking at sujal like a pagal with wierd expressions bina kuch bole... well kashish tum ne pehle sujal ko poori baat na batake usko confuse kiya aur ab khud confuse hogayi..kya baat hai... ab kashish is like tum yeh kya keh rahe ho sujal... ab sujal says main sahii keh raha hoon..main kissi aur se pyaar nahii kar saktha....well actually sujal yeh kehna chahtha tha kii kashish main tumhare siwaye kissi aur se pyaar kar hii nahii saktha... ab shayad kashish ko sujal ke soch ke baare mein patah chal gaya hai tho she clarifies saying kii khushi theen saal kii bachchi hai... ab sujal ka mann shaant zaroor hotha hai..lekin he is feeling like a fool.. well is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal tum english fool nahii balki hindi phool ho...sabse achche... sujal ka thinking all ulta-seedha about khushi and he saying kii won't do it shows the innocent side of sujal.. ab sujal is like khoda pahaad nikla chooha...well sujal i think might have surely felt like to hide his face and chupa his embarrasment while kashish might have felt like laughing at his confusion agar kashish ko patah hotha kii what is he thinking.. ab sujal clarifies saying kii khushi theen saal kii bachchi hai..well sujal obviously woh ek bachchi hii hogi.. kashish ne bas tisha , tina ka naam sunke tumhare upar itna badak utti... tho do you think kii woh khud tumhe kissi aur ladki ke kareeb karegi...analyse mr.bhudhu... ab kashish is like giving explanations to sujal kii yeshh she is her cousin's daughter...uske cousin ke sasuraal mein kissiki death ho gayi and woh khushi ko nahii le jaa rahe hai...and her mother is busy tho usne kaha kii she will take care of khushi.. kashish tumko sujal ko koi bhi explanation dene kii koi bhi zaroorat nahii hai... tum bas hukhm kaaro aur sujal tumhare kadmo mein apni jaan nisaar kar dega...bas sujal is waiting like hukum keejiye mere aaka... and then kashish tells him kii kal evening they have to go and pick khushi from the railway station... well dekho yeh hui na kashish wali baat... jaise she is ordering sujal kii unko jaana hai..anyway she knows kii sujal joh bhii natak kare woh akhir mein uski hii baat sunega.... kashish taking fayada of this baat.....hahaha.. ab sujal is like haan..woh khushi-vushi joh bhi ho.. zimedaari tumhari..don't involve me in all this.. woh bachchi mujhko pareshaan nahii karni chahiye... well i think sujal aisa keh raha hai because he wants to hide the stupidity of his soch..and he says kii khushi ko sambhalna kashish kii problem.. well is baat pe i wanna ask sujal sujal kashish khud ko sambhal nahii paathi , she needs you for support and woh kya us bachchi ko khak sambhalegi... me sure you will be a better baby-sitter for khushi than kashish... well sujal bachche hai tho woh shaitaani tho karenge hii tho taiyaar rehna.. ab kashish is like theek hai..you need not worry woh meri zimedaari hai.. kashish pehle khud kii tho zimedaari poori tarah utalo..phir doosro ko sambhalna.. ab kashish wahaan se chali jaathi hai.. aur yahaan reh jaatha hai sujal who murmurs to himself saying kii pehle yeh kashish ab yeh khushi...ab tho phas gaye... well sujal mahashay is absolutely right is baar woh bura phasa... kashish ko sambhal na hii uske bas se bahar hue jaa raha hai ab yeh khushi...dono kashish aur khushi milkar sujal ke sar par sawaar hokar naachenge aur usse pareshaan karenge.. especially khushi..these scenes were so damn hillarious..main ghir ghirke has rahi hoon... mere pait mein tho has haske dard ho raha hai.. i cannot stop laughing to damn funny..kashish ka ordering him sujal kii confusion khushi ko lekar... wah wah wah.. kya baat hai.. is part mein comedy mast tha..........😆 🤣 ab neelu itne mast part ke baad next part ke liye mera guess yeh hai kii khushi next part mein apni entry maregi..sujal will be all the sulking with khushi around..lekin khushi will be more attached and drawn towards sujal then kashish... woh sujal ke pass hii aana chahegi.. i think jab woh kashish usse utayegi tho khushi royegi lekin jab sujal usse utayega she be happy.. and woh sujal ko achcha-khasa tang karegi...woh sujal ke naakh mein dum karke hii rahegi.. sujal will be high time very irritated with khushi.. lekin he will start liking her too...but he will not show it.. shayad raat mein sothe waqt khushi will get up and start doing halla... kashish tho ghode-bhejke so rahii hogi tab sujal utega shayad khushi ko loorry sunayega..aur shayad he may even start telling her pariyo kii kahaniyaan... sujal bhi khushi ke liye care karna shuru kar dega.. kashish ko bhi seeing sujal like this she will be liking it very much... aur sabse badi baat khushi ke sujal , kashish kii zindagi mein aane kii wajah se sujal , kashish dono kii zindagi mein badlaav aayega...woh dono kareeb aayenge because of the coming of khushi... khushi will have a possitive effect on sujal , kashish's lives..and khushi for sure will get sujal , kashish kii zindagi on track... woh un dono ko kareeb leyegi... me some what sure about it.... neelu yeh hai mera guess...ab tu bol kya mera guess sahii hai yaa ghalat i really want to know.... 😉 😉 ab yaar please do post the next part soon... me waiting for it eagerly...actually very damn eagerly.... yaar shooo sorry woh comment itna late post kiya..actually me typing since morning par koi na koi diversion aa raha tha..hope you understand....plshhhhhhhhhh post soon...hope you liked the comment........ 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part 👏
wow sujal didnt like any1 cming btn him n kashish lol 😆
cont. soon
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Ok nxt prt-

S rolls his eyes & murmers

s-uff!..pehle ye kashish..abb khush!…phaas gae sujal!abb to phaas gae!
Abb s goes in the room

Aur dekhta hai ki k lights off karke zameen paar so gai hai

S ko andhere mein kuch nazar nahi aa raha

Islie wo light on karta hai

k-uff!!!!!!!!!

s-oh sorry!

S jaldi se hadbada ke light off karta hai

s-emm..kashish!

k-kya hai?

s-emm muje,change karna hai,paar kapde kaise loon,light off karke kuch dikh nahi raha

k-uff,budhdhu,2 min light jalake kapde le lo ,phir band kar dena

s-haan,sahi kaha

k-hmm

s change karke,goes 2 sleep on bed
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subah hoti hai

subah ke kareeb 4 baje hain

k uth jaati hai,aur fresh hoke change kar leti hai

aur kareeb 5 baje,sujal ko uthane jaati hai

jo gehri neend mein so raha hai

k-sujal!

S is sleepin

k-sujal utho!

s-emm..hmm![neend mein]

k-sujal utho naa !jaldi![shakin him]

s-kya?emm.kya..kya hai?[neend mein]

k-utho naa jaldi!!!!!!!humein jaanaa hai!

s-huh..kya?kahan..jaanaa hai…?abhi to bass…….[looks at the clock]..5 baaje hain..abhi kahan jana hai!,shh sone do,mera office 9 baje khulta hai![again sone laagta hai]

k-main jaanti hoon!paar humein khushi ko lene jaanaa hai railway station!

s-kya khushi?abhi nahi jaanaa,baad mein challenge,sone do!

k-thik hai nahi jaana to matt jao,main khud chali jaungi,waise bhi tumhe kya,itni subah chahe muje koi bus ya auto mile ya nahi,aur itni subah sunsaan raaston paar mure saath kuch ho jae ya nahi!

s-achcha,achcha,chaal raha hoon naa!

S gets up,sleepily

Wo abhi bhi neend mein hai,uska dimaag abhi bhi puri tarah se activate nehi hua

Wo bed se utaarkaar,khada hota hai

Aur cutely,scratches his head

s-emm..abb muje kya karana hai?[neend mein]

k-tumhe abb jake washroom mein fresh honaa hai,aur change karna hai![s ke haath mein kaapde deke usse shakelke washroom mein bhej deti hai]

s comes afta while,aft changing


Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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as usual it was awesome.......kashish is so bossy sometimes ....but i love their pair v much......waiting earely for khushi's arrival... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
too cool
do continue soon
i'm waiting
😉 😉
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