raj- aamna YE JO HAI ZINDAGiiii - Page 4

Originally posted by: aaakkii

yaar, jab fanfic aapko pasand hai, to comments mein misery kyun????????????????? 😭 😭 😭

only two replies......... 😭

anyway my serious thanks & luv to togepe30& ravinder duggal(sorry don know ur name).............
its u guys who keep me going nahi to I wud hav stopped writing.............................. 😕

My name is Ruhi 😊 and continue soon

fabulous parts yaar 👏 loved the proposing part....that was funny 😆 poor sameer 😭 😭 can't wait to know his past 😭 😭 cont soon 😃

S: she 's my first & forever crush….I was in class 10^th schooling in st. mecanly international school in U.S..Angad's dad used to bear the cost of my studies those days which I certainly didn't want him to do.👏👏

But I didn't hav anyother option. , reason, I had no money of my own. But , I requested Angad , to let me pay at least my room fare.Badi mushkil se he agreed.

So I started doing part time jobs like selling something. Since , I was good in math & physics, so I decided to give tuitions to some junior class kids.😛

A: ok to she was ur junior………..😉
S: ya!! She was in class 8th, she came to me for math tuition, was weak in calculations.
B: (excited) whats her name? 😳
S: her………………………Ashi………………..Ashi Gupta 😃
(guys imagine RAJEEV as a class 10th kiddo)
B:ur luv story seems kinda cute.So how did it all started………………… 😛
S: I used to chide her often for wrong calculations(he smiled). I thought she wud never improve……..but,(he smiled again)her math improved a lot. Now , I used to give her example to others who came for tuition.Then one day I said I am sorry for all that misbehave to her. But she said there's no need as her maths has improved becoz of those misbehaves& pleaded to do so in future………..I began to like this gal……………she was cute na………………..😃 😃😃

B: Ya very…… 😳
S: One day I was waiting for the bus……………I saw her.I went to her & asked what she was doing there….she said she has taken admission in St. Mechanly………she was so estacic., then what………………..we were always together, whether on bus stop……….or during recess………or on the bus seat………..We became very nice friends 😉

B: when did u say u like her??????????????????? 😡
S: wait dear I'll come on that also. Then came the conti party. It is celebrated in the bar in which only couples r allowed. for guys, this party means to feel like a man.But………………………😭
A& B: wo ho…………………!!!!!!!!!!but…………..
S:Others in my class used to tease me&made fun of me as I had no girlfriend even in class Xth . 😭
In bus,I told my problem to her. She said, she'll go with me& u know, mygirlfriend was the most stunning of all out there. We were the sexiest pair(he smiled).Angad too was overshadowed. We danced whole night together. But, at 4'o clock in the morning, we were so sleepy……………….😆. 😆😆
We went home.
A& B: then……………… 😛
S: Relax guys,it was long time back……….yaad bhi to karne do………………😆..haan, one day, both of us bunked school & went to see DILWALE DULHANIA LE JAYENGE .I think it's the first film based on NRI's. I spent 20 dollars of mine to see this movie in the hall. It was a great movie. We enjoyed a lot. But , when we were returning back, it was raining heavily & our school guard caught us……………………. 😡

B: romantic but so problematic………..then……….. 😕
S(smiled): Anyhow, we managed to run away………we were completely wet.😆(enthusiastically)I thought ………this is the chance….I came close to her……………but before I cud say something, she demanded to eat some ice cream…………😆

B: oh no…………..then………. 😉
S: then what…………..I got some ice cream for her…………..she came close to me & said ki I am so cute & she has fell in luv with me…………………..oh god!!!!! I cudnt believe my ears. 😃😃😃
All three of them smiled………..
S: she demanded me to hold her in my arms like Srk held kajol in DDLJ.(he laughed) I tried my best & held her that way…………..but I was a kid then & was struggling………….. 😆😆😆

Suddenly, we saw the guard…..

A: saala!! Sahi time pe galat place pe chalaa aaya.😡

S: harbadi mein I dropped her in mud & also fell in it. The guard came running & he too slipped in the mud…………………😆…(he laughed). We were laughing like hell. Anyhow we managed to run away again…😆…😆…..

A: abhi kahan hai Ashi. Don't tell me she is married with 2-3 kids of her calling u uncle………..😆😆😆

S(with blank face): she died in a plane crash

Saying this he went away.

B: avi, tu kuchh bhi bina soche samjhe bol deta hai. Sameer ko kitna bura laga hoga.main abhi aati hun.😡

Saying this ,she went out to search for him but cudnt find him. She returned back.

B: pata nahin kahan gaya……………………😭

A: mujhe kya pata tha Ashi is dead……………😭 😭

ok this is the 4th part......for me its the best part i hav written so far........... 😃 😃 😃
ur comments r eagerly awaited..... 😊

👏 .....hey twas a lovely part...........u cn write serious stuff pretty well too.........cool!!!!!!!!.....good going!!

luv,
vandana 😛

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.....hey twas a lovely part...........u cn write serious stuff pretty well too.........cool!!!!!!!!.....good going!!

luv,
vandana

thanks vandana 😊

its was fantastic. Sorry cldnt comment earlier was on a holiday. But ur story is great. Me loving it. Pls cont will b waiitng for the next part.

Originally posted by: nm16

its was fantastic. Sorry cldnt comment earlier was on a holiday. But ur story is great. Me loving it. Pls cont will b waiitng for the next part.

thanks nm 16, sorry dont know ur name