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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
hi just read ur fic its awesome............lolzzzzzz nice name 4 anvesha........."kyun"....hehe...........nd sameer actually jumping over cars in the traffic,huh,.really inspired by krish haan...............and i wonder wat happened to avi's bike ......lolzzzzz........

continue soon......its a nice story
Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
part:2

sameer was coming out ki wo kisi se takara gaya. it was agirl.
girl is bhoomi of ksbkbt
Bh: sameer whatare u doin oer here
S: bhoomi u work here.I came here for an interview for the post of MARKETTING EXECUTIVE
B: wow nice job dear. salary u expect!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S:Its upon ur boss.I do quality work & dont go on salary 👏 👏 👏

B: shall we have a coffee together 😳 😳
S:ya sure

the view shifts to the restaurant were both r having coffee
Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hey that was a reallyyyyyyyyyyy small teeny weeny part...........write a longer one plz....... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continued.......................
b: how was the interview?😳

s: one amazing experience(makes a face)😆


Bh: i must sayU hav changed sameer


S:I hav changed for good (he replied instantly)


B: ha tabhi main kahun, the guy who used to shy away from girls was actually flirting with my own boss 😆 😉 😉


S:u saw all that . 😊


B:nah main toh andhi hun. 😆 😆 .khair ur my friend.who cud understand u better.u pretend to be happy na!!!!!!!!!!!


S:(looks at her with penetrating eyes)I hav cried a lot yaar.not anymore.I had gone thru many sufferings.but u know when u actually laugh at ur problems & frustrations,they shy away frm u.I am happy with my life. 😊


B: ALL ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........ 😭


silence prevails& an unusual tension seems to occupy the table,tabhi


S:how cud I ever feel alone with friends like U ,angad,avi.........,accompanying me thru al my thick & thin.............AVI..................shit ..........aaj toh mar gaya.avi will kill me........oh no.how cud i be so stupid.shit.......... 😭 😭 😭


B:relax..........take adeep breath.what happened!!!!!!!!!!!


S: yaar will u please give me apne car ki chabi!!


B: but why !!!! kuchh to bol kya huwa?


S: I have no time.please yaar.I'll tell u latter.yaar de na chabi 😭 😭 😭


B:haan!! haan!! PER meri car to kharab hai.actually gear is not working prorerly 😳 😳


S(angrily):pehle nahi bata sakti thi?!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡



tabi he sees a delivery boy

S: bhai sahab,!! will u please wait a moment


G:ji !! kya hai?


S: main ye khana given address pe pahucha dunga.mujhe us scooter ki chabi de do...


G:aise kaise!!! meri naukari chali jayegi.


S:meri jaan chali jayegi.jaan is imp than naukari.


anyhow he manages to get the keyfrom him & yes the food& the address.
he goes to the place where he left avi's bike.but to his horrors there was no bike.


S: 😭 😭 ab kya karoon???????????????


he calls avi
A:hi yaar!!!! kaisa raha interview?


S:yaar kya bataun 😭 😭 mujhse kuch badmaashon ne teri bike chheen li.


A: what!!!!!!!!!!! 😡
S:aur haan 😭 😭 maine bohot koshish ki.....but wo bike lekar bhaagne mein successful rahe........
A: u think I'm gonna believe u.saale,meri bike khowa kar bahane banata hai. 😡 😡 😡 tu ghar aa.i'm gonna kill u
he disconnects

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
S: mere doston ko kaise pata chal jata hai ki main jhoot bol raha hoon.Oh ye khana bhi to le jana hai.chal mere bhai!!!! ab yahi baaki reh gaya hai.
saying this he takes the food &goes to a very big house.
the bell rings.A man opens the door.Meet mr LALIT BAJAJ, ya ya anvesha's dad.
S: may I come in sir.

l:ya!!!!!!!!!!!!
S:sir! this is the food u ordered 😊
L: give it to me.Oh ya!! wait a min. 😃
Lalit goes inside & brings a Rs100 note 😆 😆 😆
L:this ones for u
s:U better keep it urself . I wont be able to buy a bike out of it 😆
L:(confused)what!!!!!
S:Oh sorry sir.I meanour restaurant doesnt allow to take what u call it................. bakshish
L: 😕 oh I see
S goes back to the restaurant& hands over the scooter to the boy.

G: meri bakshish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S:khana pahuchaun main & bakshish lega tu 😡 😡 😡

G:matlab!!!
sameer takes out Rs 500 & gives it to the guy.He goes inside & sees bhoomi waiting.
B: ab to batao kya huwa?

S:tragedy darling 😭 Kal newspaper ki headlines hone waali hain,"SAMEER MALHOTRA IS NO MORE"

B: what rubbish? 😡

then he narrated the whole thing to bhoomi.At the end of it bhoomi was holding her head& sameer was thinking of some idea to get out of the situation.

B:u wud hav told me earliar.when u were gone ,I invited him to lunch with us in this restaurant abhi. he 'll be here anytime 😲

S:(gives her a cursory look)kya!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡 tumhare jaise dost hon to dushmanon ki kya zarurat hai...ab mujhe yahan se bhagana padega..............

he stands up & starts running out ,people begin to look at him 😆 😆 😆

But,

just after a min,sameer runs back to the restaurant with DOUBLE THE SPEED at which he left

😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!! Ya ya avi was chasing him
Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16

avi entered & both started running ,BETWEEN THE TABLES, in the restaurant. seeing this people became bewildered& astonished at the same time.Avi's speed was more than sameers.he was about to catch him,ki sameer jumped&crossed the table on which 4 girls were seeing the tamaasha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆

girls shouted: WOW!!!!! what a jump👏👏👏

seeing this Avi too wanted to jump, but to his horrors he landed on the table itself with food all over his face & body& haan the table broke down.

now ,the girls shouted loudly: oouucchh....................... Bachao!!!!!!!!

😆 😆 Sameer started laughing his heart out.THIS made avi red with ragelike 😡

sameer now clapped zor zor se & said: wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a jump😆😆😆

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
this is wonderful. I am loving it. Sameer so sweet.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
🤣 lolzzzzzzzzzz awesome update yaar............these guys are actually jumping around a restaurant .......heehee...........oh god....wat next i wonder 😆 ........

update soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Avi is looking like a bhikhari.seeing sameer laughing, he somehow collects himself& jumps to catch sameer. sameer in order to protect himself,sees a knife& jumps to holds it. he finally takes the knife & runs towards bhoomi, jisco dekh ke lagta hai ki current lag gaya hai.



Sameer goes towards her & takes the knife towards her neck...............


S:(to people whose faces are nearly numb with shock)sab bhago yahan se warna isko jaan se maar doonga 😆


People start running away, tabhi restaurant ka maalik comes.he pleads before the people ki ruk jao. but no one listens. sameer gets a chance & vanishes in the crowd.

But he returns back to the restaurant& sees Bhoomi holding avi& removing dirt frm his face& body .

S:SAALE, kameene, bike to bahar lagi hai............


saying this sameer comes to him& all three of them start laughing loudly


A: dekh tune pure restaurant ka kachra kar diya.
😆 😆 😆
S: acchha 😡 table kisne toda....kaun mere peechhe aise bhaga ki laga ki meri jaan leke rahega.....

....
A: tu kuch bhi bol zyada nuksaan tune kiya hai................logon ko to tune bhagaya, life threatening dekar.............saala restaurant ka owner bhi bhaag gaya.............


All three start laughing again 😆 ,tabhi bhoomi says


B: ab bhaago yahan se warna nuksaan bhi hame hi bharna hoga...........

ya ya she was absolutely right,they thought. 😃
they started running out ki


Av: aah!! aah!! my legs r hurting.I think mera paer tutgaya...............


S: abhi just run, bhoomi ki car paas mein hi hai.


all three sit in the car & sameer starts driving
ON THE ROAD.......................


B: ye to tmhari car hai na!!!!!!(to sameer)


S: nahi tumhari.


B: mazak ker rahe ho!!!!!!!!!!! meri car ka gear kharab hai 😕 😕


S: what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ab avi tu marne waale hai(avi starts crying)


S: yaar main to mazak kar raha hun. 😡 tu hi nahi, hum bhi hain tujhe company dene ke liye
B: sameer concentrate on driving. if u'll drive properly, kuchh nahi hoga 😊


tabhi, on the turning the car turns thoda jyada& the car hits the tree.sameer & bhoomi remain safe becoz of the seat belt, but Avi ka haath front seat se buri tarah takara jata hai becoz he was without belt...............BECHARA

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
😆 very interesting stry i must say. sameer is so funny 🤣 gr8 job 👏 cont soon. 😊

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