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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

hehe.....cool yaar.........this fic is too funny...keep it this way......its a welcome change from the other ff's 😆 .........its really funny n cool

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

hi guys, i wil cont a day after tomorrow,becoz i am not feeling well.
between thanks for appreciating my work. 😃 😃
sameer's character is inspired by rajeev .sameer is fun loving like rajeev, but he is'nt a bit funny. 😕 & my story is full of mysteries. 😉

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

ok.......waiting 4 u to continue the story

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

lets continue..........................................
haan to kahan the hum................ 😳
Part:3

Lets see what's happening to anvesha.what else, thinking bout S-a-m-ee-r in her office...
She had not met such an idiotic guy in two years of her business life.what an overconfident MCP..........But his name is SAMEER..........he for sure possesses a very magnetic persona...........is really intelligent...........but what the hell he thinks of himself.....huh!!!!!!!!!!!!!ur company is deserving enough to hav me in it.......................I think ur new to the business...........these words were hitting Anvesha hard...........I cud'nt tolerate such guy in my office................ no ,NEVER ever......she said to herself.............THIS FOR SURE WILL BE A SEVERE BLOW TO HIS OVERCONFIDENCE...........huh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Mr sameer.............u wont be in my company.But why the hell i am thinking bout this guy.....I hav lots of work to do............

Lets seewhat's happening on the other side.............
S: How is Avi doctor? 😭
D: his leg as well as 1 hand is fractured...............
nothing serious...but I insist on complete bed rest for at least 10 days..........(doctor goes)
S:It's all my fault......I'll never forgive myself......
B: chill yaar!!!!! I know how much u care for all ur friends...but yes if u cud hav driven properly....nothing of this sort cud hav happened

sameer remained silent.after sometimes.....
S:Its all becoz of that bullshit interview .I know very well, this Gal is not going to give me job....Tu kaise jhelti hai ise...(he asked bhoomi in irritated tone)
B: Oh dont ask......I certainly want u to be in my office...........
S: why.....(confused)
B: Ise seedha karne ke liye..... 😆 😆 😆
both smiled at each other....
S: But I cant stand her idiotic....specs.She looks horrible in them 😆 😆 😆
Tabhi, a nurse came
N: u can meet him now........
they came inside the room....

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

A:sameer, tu duur he raheoo!!...I dont want anything else of mine to get fractured 😆
S:sorry yaar(makes a puppy face)

B: tu chup kar avi.... sari galti teri hai.......apni fiance ke samne doosri gals ko impress kar rahe the... ab bhoogto.....sameer tu apni sorry waapis le 😡 😡

S: le li.....per yaar sachhi baat bolun to tujhe to jalan honi hi nahi chahiye.........main to ye sochke amazed hoon, tune ise haan keh diya....mere hote huwe
😆 😆 😆
B:kaash tune mujhe pehle propose kiya hota...... 😆
S:keh to abhi karoon 😆 😆 😆
A:(angrily)kya ho raha hai ye,.....sameer mera paer theek hone de,tab tujhe batata hun 😡 😡
S: yaar jabtak tu theek hoga tabtak bhoomi aur main apna ghar bhi basa chuke honge........let me propose her...... 😆 😆

sameer sits down on his knees.....takes bhoomi's hands in his hand & then........................................................ ..........................................
to be continued...... 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha....

I'll continue just after sometimes....so wait guys 😆 😆

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

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😆He looked at her like…………….oh cant express………..,then
He said……………………
100 bewafaai kabool hai , ek wafa ke liye………….
100 ansoo kabool hain ,ek muskaan ke liye……….
Hum to mohtaaj hai aap ki yaad ke liye,
100 dushman kabool hai aapke pyaar ke liye…….

Kya pyar karogi mujhse……………..
Khushian to sab dete hain……………..
Kya gum baantogi mera…….

He said this still looking in her eyes😛..........……she was just startled………both remained quite…………….
I love u………………..ya !!ya!! avi got a heart attack………😆.. 😆😆
After sometimes………. 😆
Sameer & bhoomi burst into laughter………….. 😆😆
S: to avi kaisi rahi?😉
B: really impressive yaar,but dear ur late .I am deeply in luv with the only guy in my life…….. 👏😭
S: no probs dear……….mera dil bhi mere paas nahi hai……😭
A& B together : kya bol raha hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
B: sameer & pyaar……………jaise…………………..jaise………………..Bandar & nariyal
S:I am serious guys……………….. 😡😡
A: bhoomi ko chhorke kaun hai who………………….
S: relax yaar, it was long time back……(he said sounding mysterious) 😳
B: say na……. Cant wait 😭
So to know sameer's love story, wait till my next post….. 😆

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

👏 .....wow!!!!!! what a comeback......three parts saath me........cool!!!!!!!1.....i luvd all three of them...........waiting 4 the next part 2 know the mystery girl in sameer's life n will anvesha keep sameer in her office or not 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

yaar, jab fanfic aapko pasand hai, to comments mein misery kyun????????????????? 😭 😭 😭

only two replies......... 😭

anyway my serious thanks & luv to togepe30& ravinder duggal(sorry don know ur name).............
its u guys who keep me going nahi to I wud hav stopped writing.............................. 😕