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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
hey i came to read the story.........no part today 😭
continue soon......

vandana 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Anvesha came home at bout 12'0 clock at night. Her father was really worried as it was the first time in 2 years , she was this much late…..(sameer ke aane se dekhte jao bechari ka routine kaise change hota hai) 😆
Anvesha had some biodatas in her hand to study &to zero on anyone of them……….no guesses for that ki sameer's biodata wasn't there in her hand…..
As soon as she passed from the dining table she saw some wrappers, Aluminium foils etc. on it.

A: dad!! U ordered food frm outside…….?????????????? 😡
L: no beta who told u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😕
A: there's no need to lie . If doctor has strictly suggested not to eat anything frm outside, don't u think theres a serious reason for it…………..u r a heart patient………dad u shud be honest to urself..👏 👏
L: sorry dear daughter . I promise not to repeat it again………..but beta what took u so long that u came home so late………….. 😉
A: actually I was working on the new project………….that's why……….I am very tired dad….. 😭
D: go & hav a sound sleep. We'll talk tomorrow. 😃

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
Lets see what sameer & company r doing……………..
Room ki lights on hain………… TV is on………..bhoomi is sleeping on the sofa, Avi on his bed & sameer…………… guess where …………………………..on the floor without even the pillow……….BECHARA 😆 😆 😆

Next morning……………………..

B: sameer utth!!!!!!! Kitna soyega……………. 😡
S(angrily): ye to nahi socha ki kaise so raha hun main….khud to aaram se sofe pe so rahi thi…………. 😡
B: yaar avi ko discharge to tu hi karaayega na……..Its already 9:30 . I hav to rush…..pata nahi office mein mera kya hoga………..(no reply frm sameer, no guesses he is sleeping) 😆 😆 😆
B(shouts): S-a-m-m-e-e-e-e-r-r-rrrrrr 😡 😡
S: kya hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sone de naaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡

B: kuch nahi ho sakta iska!!!!!!!!!!! Main ja rahi hun……….
Bhoomi goes…….
As soon as she goes Sameer jumps on the sofa & sleeps on it peacefully…………….
Bhoomi goes to her home where her mom (vasu of kth)was waiting for her.
V:where were u beta? 😕
B: actually, Avi had an accident, so we were attending him 😳
V: (raised her brows) WE…………………
B: oh sameer was also there 😳
V: I don't like that guy…na naam ka pata hai na khaandaan ka? 😡
B: (irritated) come on give me a break kis century mein jee rahi ho mom……… 😡 naam aur khaandaan ka kya karna hai………….anchaar daalogi uska…… 😡 …..come on mom, he is a nice guy….I am going to take bath……..nahi to wo miss anvesha & uski P.S. mera anchaar zarur daal denge. 😆

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

At anvesha's bungalow lets see what's happening………….
She comes out of the bathroom in a towel with all her hair wet……..her room is

looking amazingly clean & she is looking so pure……….so soft as an angel……..she

sits down before the mirror & with a drier in her hand started drying her

hair…………..she didn't seem happy at all . She was thinking of her alone &

monotonous life………In two years of her career she had lost herself completely…the

glowon her face was deteriorating………..


I don't think I am beautiful………….she said sadly…. But I really don't

bother…….& professionally I hav to take ECOWA group to No. 1 slot…..I am just 24

& so much successful…….beauty lies in the brain ……….she assured herself….


She as usual took out a classic business suit, black coloured as she had already

finished with the drier…
After sometimes we see a businesswoman, with lots of confidence………..that baby

like innocence which we saw sometimes before has completely disappeared ………

she was coming out of her room ki she thought she is missing out

something………..itni jaldi bhool gaye aaplog…….are what sameer calls it her

IDIOTIC SPECS……… 😆 😆
As soon as she reached the garden outside her big bungalow, she saw her dad………..


L: beta I forgot to ask at night……………how was the interview………..U liked anyone. 😳


A: pata nahin kahan kahan se log interview dene chale aate hain…….I didn't like anyone of them 😡


L: what????????????????? U interviewed almost 50 people & didn't like anyone………I had personally selected 30 of them for the interview & was really impressed with the records of one of the applicants (no guesses) ………did some sameer malhotra turned up at the interview… 😆


Anvesha was blank. Lalit continued….


L: u know this guy has been given the award of most promising professional by the Business Times magazine in U.S.though I haven't seen him………….but his work speaks for him. He'll be a good chice for our company………I don't know what this young man is upto………he was getting so much money out there………..but chose to give interview to a not so established firm in India…u shud give him a call. I personally wanna meet him….. 😆


By now anvesha was fed up of the praise of the most Indisciplined man of the earth …………….Mr sameer malhotra.. 😡 😡 😡


A: if u have finished up with it, may I go now(is she very disciplined) 😆



Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey wow..............thats like a mega update dear................no points 4 guessing that all the parts were superb n completely rocking!!!!!!!! 👏
👏


by the way may i know ur name??? 😊

continue soon

luv,
vandana 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
hi thanks ,my name is akanksha 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

L: I just don't know what has happened to this girl
(She didn't hear anything, she was gone)
ab lets go to sameer, mujhe uski bohot yaad aa rahi hai…………………………… 😆 😆 😆
Sameer & avi still sleeping, not fair………lets wake them up……………….. 😆 😆 😆
Dono ghode bech kar so rahe the tabhi a nurse came with crutches in her hand………saw them sleeping peacefully.
She came to sameer & then
N: suniye mr. Its 11'0 clock(she tried to wake him up)
S: (yawning)haan!! Haan!! Kya hai
He opened his eyes………
S: oh!! Hello.How cud I help u…….. 😉
N: I hav got crutches for the patient… 😕
S: (smiling)waapis le jao 😆 😆 😆
N: what???????????????
S:ya !! madam he needs two hands for using crutches & for
ur kind information his one hand is fractured , kindly get him a wheelchair…………… 😆

N: oh !! I see


Now, it will take 1 hour or more to get avi discharged, so lets go to anvesha's office………………to see what's happening there. 😆 😆
Bhoomi came to office at 11………….late naa……. 😆 .as soon as she entered, a gal in mini…………..oh no……… 😆 micromini came to her………..meet anvesha's P.S.
Chandra mukhi(rakhi sawant……..background music…PARDESIA …….ye sach hai piya………..sab kehte hain maine ……….tujhko dil de dia…………..ha ha ha) 😆 😆 😆
C: miss bhoomi virani………….maam is calling u 😡
B: (in mind)mar gayi
She goes there……………..
A: good morning Miss bhoomi………….welcome to office 😡
B: sorry maam !! actually one of my friends came & wanted to hav a cup of tea with me……….. 😭
A: oh really…………………so u were having tea for the rest of the day also 😆 😆 .
B:my fianc had an accident………….that's why I wasn't able to return to the office 😭
A: good………..very good………..but atleast u cud hav informed me………….u know I had to cancel a very imp meeting due to ur carelessness 😡
B: I am really sorry………. 😭
A: and yes …….what bout coming late today? 😡
B: (speechless)
A: u'll complete ur yesterdays work & well ask C.M. (chandra mukhi)what u hav to do today & yes the work shud be completed today itself…………….U may go out now
Bhoomi came out of the cabin with a god save me kind of expression

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
👏 nice part!!!!!
lol 😆 😆 ...........loved the part where sameer(lol........i've edited it😆) asks the nurse to take back the crutches........hehe 😆 .......lol.....he's funny..... 😆

luv,
vandu 😉
Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
sujal nahi, sameer dear........ab sujal ko dimaag se nikaal kar, sameer ko dil mein basa lo 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sameer finally got avi discharged…… 😆
They came home…….. sameer was opening the lock tabhi a small boy came(aditya balraj's son in resham dankh)
He caught sameer's hand & began weeping……….
S: what happened? 😕
Boy: sameer uncle………….papa ne aaj fir mamma ko bohot mara………….wo bohot ro rahi hai 😭
S:aur tumhare papa????????? 😡
Boy:Wo to sharaab pee ke behosh pade hain………. 😭
S: kahaan hai mummy????????????? 😕
Sameer opened the lock, took avi inside
S: I am just coming avi………..
He went out with the boy……….In the park, we see a girl……..bruised & weeping. Let me introduce her…….
She is Vidya(played by vidya balan)…..A doctor by profession………she is very good natured & very loving.
She was married to an unemployed depressed guy, ansh mittal (akashdeep sehgal)at

a very young age of 20 & became a mother when she was just 21.her son ,5 years old

deepu is in prep in a very reputed D.P.S. Her husband often beat her but today he had

crossed all limits……..he had raped his own wife in drunk state………now lets see

what's
going to happen .
S: vidya……….. 😭 😭
(he sat close to her)
vidya began to weep loudly & hugged him tightly
S: chalo mere ghar chalke baat karenge.
Vidya was quiet. He took her to his apartment…….
In the house
S: vidya go take a bath….tabtak main khane ka intezaam karta hun. 😃
Vidya quietly goes in the bathroom.
In the room both were completely silent. Only her sobbing was heard in the room………sameer went into the kitchen
A: ye bhi pata hai chai kaise banti hai……. 😆 😆
S: try karne mein kya jata hai……… 😆 ….waise bhi Indian stuff is so spicy…..I am gonna cook Indian food in western style………..tu dekhtaa jaa. 😆 😆
A: hey sameer vidya ko kuch kapde to de de 😳
S: tu de naa…tera paer tutaa hai kya????………oh sorry yaar, abhi deta hun… 😳
Sameer comes in the room to search for some tight fitting t-shirt & pyjama for her tabhi telephone rings
He goes to pick up the phone & then after sometimes………
S: nooooooooooooooooo…………….. 😆 😆
A: kya huwa 😕
S: S.S. is coming………….saala sardard he had left this message yesterday only……….ye bhoomi bhi naa usi ne bataya hoga……….I won't leave her 😡
A: jaa pehle kuch to banaa………..mere pet mein sher daud rahe hain 😡 😡
S: haan haan
Sameer gets something from his wardrobe……..& leaves it on the bench which was lying close to the bathroom…….
Then he goes into the kitchen…………..2 hours ki kadi mehnat ke baad & haan apne kapdon ko bhi khaana khilane ke baad……….he comes out of the kitchen proudly .seeing vidya sad he wanted to lighten up her mood.obviously he knew nothing bout the rape thing..........he also didnt want to ask what happened......so he started the conversation in the already very quiet room

S: kaha tha naa main bhi cook kar sakta hun……….come vidya & avi food is ready. 😆 😆
A: mujhe to tu hi le jayega naa 😆 😆
S: yes yes I'm coming.
On the dining table……….avi sees the food……… 😆 😆
A: yaar tu ne sabji banaayi hai.. 😆 😆
S: dikhta nahi kya…………do casseroles hain 😡
A: to in me daal kaun si hai aur sabji kaunsi………. 😆 .
Sameer looks into the casseroles confused
S: shayad ye sabji hai (pointing at one) & ye daal …… 😆 …….ya shayad ye daal hai aur ye sabji……… 😆 .(totally confused)yaar dimaag kyun kharab kartaa hai…….just do inki pinki ponki … 😆 …..jahan it ends is daal other one is sabji……… 😆 …….so simple.
Avi looks at the roti………..
A: (holding 1 roti in his hand)ye roti hai ya papad………
Saale kaise banaayi hai…….daant toot jayen per rotiyan naa tooten ……….tu ek sar dard kam tha ki ab wo angad bhi yanhi aa rahaa hai mera bheja khaane…saala indian food in western style....😆 😆😆😆
😆 😆 (vidya was quietly eating &smiling . sameer was eating the stuff aaraam se) avi continued…………..


Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago

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