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Posted: 17 years ago
chithi na koi sandeesh.......jaane kaha pardesh tum chale gaye.......iss dil pe laga kar thes......na post karke abhi story in this space 😆 ......kyun tum chale gaye 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Hey Guriya u said u will update regularly its been 4 days

sorry dear..m updatng in a while...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

chithi na koi sandeesh.......jaane kaha pardesh tum chale gaye.......iss dil pe laga kar thes......na post karke abhi story in this space 😆 ......kyun tum chale gaye 😭

m here only..don worry...m postng da part..in a min...so ur wait is ova now..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part - 30
After da rain scence...
manial reaches...afshan's room...n closes da door behind her...coz of running so fast..her heart is beating very fastly....she keeps a hand on her heart...n then...infront of her is da mirror..n she looks up in it...n then moves away blushng...as today...she can't see her own image in mirror...bt someone's eyes...looking at her image...keenly...
Yes that was shayan's image and she was abt 2 go n touch da mirror as she was thnkng hes there..soon his image vanished away...n also da feeling manial gt in his heart a min ago...4 some seconds..she was dreaming that shayan would be his now..nothing has remain da same..n now something might happen..bt reality was standing nicely infront of her..as she was seeing..image of shayan...wid aaima..infront of her in da mirror...n she knew..she can neva be his..neva...then why she should dream of such a day...slowly she went toward da washroom...2 wipe da tears whch unknownigly appeared on her face...after some time..she came out...n was now sittng wid afshan on bed...afshan..whoz nt well..n was jus staring at her sister..as she was nt in her senses...she only knew..there was some relation of her wid this grl...bt she was unaware...of evrythng in her life..she was lik a kid..who has jus born...so innocent...so pure...yet unaware of cruelities of world and its people...manial when saw afshan was awake..she smiled at her...n then she herself had no idea...why she was talking wid her..bt u knw..when therez so much pain in ur heart...n u can't take it anymore u want to tell thngs 2 someone v close 2 u..n tht was wht manial was doing now...
M:app tu khuskismat ho afshan baji...app ko hosh he nahee k ass pass kya ho raha hai...kuch na yaad hai..na app kuch yaad karna chahte hain...seriously when i see u..i feel ur lucky...k kamse kam...app ko koi darr tu nahee hai na ab..k duniya aur is mein basney waley log app ke saath aur kuch bura karein ge..idhar meri taraf dekhye..zindagi ne phele ghum k mor pe kahara kiya..jahan dukh tha..k agha ji..ney baap hotey huey..yun kiya..apni he beti ko..is tarah kisi k bhi paley bandney chale the..phir..shayan mano farishta ban k aye..maa ko chorney ka ghum mila...par dil mein ik khushi thi..k ab shayad zindagi sehal hogi..magar nahee meri kismat...shayan is shadi k hak mein he na they..woh tu un k mehrbani k ab tak unhon ne..mujhe apni biwi banaye rakha hai..magar yeh dil...janta tha na..k woh iska nahe hai..na hosakta hai..kyunki woh tu pheli he se kisi aur ka hai..phir kyun..us ka dewana howa..kyun usey chahney laga...aur ab tu itna k ..uske bin zindagi..maut he lagti hai...kaisay jeyoon ge bin shayan k..nahee janti..par itna janti hoon k yeh saath umar bhar ka nahee hai..chor k jana hai..ik din...woh apni raah honge..mein apni..unko tu shayad unki raah maloom bhi hai..magar mein..kahan jaon ge..kahan..har waqt..har ghari ik darr..ik dharka laga rehta hai..k mujhe sab chor jana hai..kisi bhi waqt woh mujhe tanha kar deinge...kya karoon ge..mein...shayan ne tu keh diya..nayee zindagi shuru karna..kisi aur k saath..ha..kisi aur..woh kya janey..k ik bar jisey dil ne maakam de diya..uski jagah..yeh dil kambhakt..kisi aur ko nahee deta na...nayee zindagi..kehna asaan hai..magar..guzarna..kaisey..shayad..ab unki yaadein he jena ka sahara honge...is liye..chahte hoon..zyada se zyada samet loon...k ab umar bhar in ke bal pe jina hai..phele darr tha..k akeli..kya karoon ge..ab app agaye hain na..chalo zindagi ney ik maqsad de diya...ab shayad..zindagi thori asaan ho jaye..thori...
n she strted cryng badly...n afshan who was nt in senses...felt somethng..n her hand went up...n she touched manial's hand..whch were on her lap...n manial..looked up shocked...bt saw no response..frm afshan...anymore
M:chalye..app ne kuch tu ishara kiya..mein janti hoon..app merey saath hain..tabhi tu...khushi hai..k koi apna..abhi bhi hai...bas app jaldi theek ho jaye...aur hum..dono behne..mil kar ik naye zindagi jeyein ge...zaroor...
while this convo was taking place inside..someone who came on da door...heard it...n we can't see his face..jus can hear wht he said..2 himslef...while gng out again...
Person:tumhe bhi jena ka haq hai manial...aur tum jeyo gi..zindagi woh bhi..khushi ke saath...aur tumhari behan bhi apney hisey k khsuhiyan zaroor paye ge..i promise u...ab mein kuch bura nahee honey doon ga..buhat bura ho gaya..ab aur nahe...
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Next day...we see...shayan in his apartment..alone..manial is still at mahad's place...shayan is walking impatiently frm here n there..as if waitng 4 someone..n bell rings..n he quickly goes n open da door...its none other than.....
u guyz thought aaima..no...its his friends...umair n ali...he let them come in..all gt seated..n r quite when...
U:tu..jo mahad ne..ajj subah...bataya humein..its true...
shayan jus nods...in affirmation...
A:so kya socha tuney then..mahad had given u a gud decision...tht u shld talk 2 aaima abt it..ke tuney phir baat..
moves his head in no direction..
U(angry a bit now):yeh kya chup laga k betha hai..jab...karnama kiya tha..tab ...tu barey araam se...phir raha tha..kisi ko kan o kan...khabar tak na..lagney de thi..ab..kyun aise..betha hai...bol na...
shayan still quite..
A:yeh kya bolega..bacha kya hai..bolney ko..tu janta hai..tu kar kya raha hai..ik saath tu do larkiyon k zindagi tabah kar raha hai...kyun nahee bataya tuney aaima ko abhi tak..bol..
S:woh..(was nt able 2 speak..infront of both)
U:woh woh kya kar raha hai..bol bhi..
S(now he becomes angry 2...angry on mahad tht...why he tld them...):kya karoon..haan..jake bata doon..kehna buhat assan ahi..par i knw..she wont be able 2 accept wht i said..i knw..h much she loves me..aur kaisey bol doon usey k mainey..dhoka diya..i..damn it..(hit on da table infrnt of him...don worry wood k thi..kuch nahee hua...he was frustated..angr on mahad ..bt later he knew..even mahad did rite.as he needed help..n only his three frnds can help him now...)
U(cools down a bit...n sits infront of him..now):dekh shayan...no doubt she loves u a lt...bt..sachai yeh bhi hai..k usey yeh sach pata chalna chahye..tu kehta hai..k tu manial ko chor dega after sometime..bt soch..tu aaima ko ajj nahee bolta..kal usey khud maloom para tu..kya hoga..u shld be honest 2 person...u say ur in love wid..right
nods in yes..
A(comes near 2):dekh i knw its hard par..karna tu parega na...
S:i knw guyz..main kal se yahe koshish kar raha hoon..par..frst..she was unavailable..n now..when i was jus abt 2 tell her...i cldn't u knw..i m scared..of..i dono..m so confused...even now a days..i dono..wht m feeling..its like..4gt it guyz..u don worry..mein surely is baar us sey baat karonga...i will call her up..n plan 2 meet..2day only..
U:good idea...mein aur ali chalte hain..call n tell her 2 come at home..u can talk in peace here..
A:yah it would be better..n don worry..jaisey tujhe lagey..juti utha k marney wali..hai..bell de dayein..bachaney k liye..pohanch jayenge..
all laugh on tht...
S:tu na ali..acha bol yaar..abhi se dara raha hai...i hop all goes well..
U:it surely will...n jitna hum aaima ko jante hain..m sure...ali n jo bola..woh ho bhi sakta hai..u dono her...she hates us..ur frnds..being near u...n a grl..ur wife..living wid u..Allah tere khair karey beta...bst of lck..
S:haan aur darao..Allah ji..kya dost diye hain...ik woh idiot..bola tha..kisey ko nahee photey ga..puri duniya mein...ishtehar laga raha hai..aur ab yeh dono..bajaye..k hosla dein..ulta..darway de rahein hain..
A:beta hum tu sach bol rahein hain..apki gf se tu...hum so gaz ke dori pe chalte hain..waisey bhi..u can handle her only..only u hav nerves..no doubt..wht u saw in her....hum se us ko..kutey bili wali khaar hai..any way..chalte hai..bye...phone kar k report dayein phir..k hoya..
U:haan..dhokra app..ab apna ...phone pe he sunayoo.....k kitne..chapal lagey..aur kitne phatke..
n both ran out...as they saw..shayan...picking his slipper 2 hit..both now...
shayan was now bit relax..n called aaima..bt 2 his shock..she wasn't picking up..his call...he thought she might be busy...so he messaged her...
Have to talk to you about an urgent matter.Come to my place soon.
Shayan
After an hour...the door bell rang again..he had da hint it was aaima..so he composed himslef..made him ready..2 speak da truth..n opened da door...infront of him was indeed..aaima..bt shocking part was..she was in v bad state...nt properly dress..she was v concious abt her dressng n it was strange 4 shayan..tht she wasnt..dressed properly...was wearng a worn out dress..whch was nt even ironed properly..or lookng lik nt ironed..might be because of other reason..another shocking part was..tht..her eyes were red n swollen...n he was ...confused 2 see her in tht state..she came in...sat ..he came behind...n sat infront of her...
both were quiet..shayan spoke..
S:aaima..yeh tum..are u alright..i mean tumahri tabiyat..ur nt..lookng quite well...kuch howa kya??
A(wid sarcastic smile on her face):jo howa..us ke baad ab shayad honey ko kuch aur bacha nahee hai..mr shayan..yah ab bhi kuch bacha hai..
S:kya howa..n wht ur talking abt...saaf saaf kaho..
A:oh really..as if u don't know..u liar..u knew shayan..u knew me ..so well..tum jante the..i hate..liars...i hate people who...lie 2 me..who hide things from me...n u..tum..kyun kiya aisa tum ne why...bolo..
S:aaima woh mein...tumhe kaisa..
A:kaisey ko choro shayan..tum ney...mujhe se chupaya..jante the na tum..i can neva share u wid anyone...u knew..h possesive i m abt u..phir bhi..kya kami paye shayan...mere payar mein bolo..(tears now flowing down frm her eyes...)
S:aaima...i w anted 2 tell u..us waqt..sab jaldi mein hua..baba ne..mujhe se..u dono...mein kis kis halaat se guzra..
n he tells her da whole story...
A:tum mujhe bata skatey the na shayan..k nahee..par tum..
S:mein akey sab se phele..yahi socha tha...par tum se mil kar..i can't hurt u...kaisey...apney samney apney pyar ko dukh deta..is liye....mein..par socha tha..tumhein bata doon..par tumhe khus he pata lag gaya...i had no intention 2 hide lik tht frm u...aur manial..se mera rishta sirf ik ache dost ka hai us se zyada kuch nahee..seriously we r jus good frnds...m ajj bhi..sirf tumhe ko chahta hoon..jus u...
aaima remain quite...jus her sobs could be heard..in da room..
S:plz aaima...don cry lik that...mainey faisla kar liya hai..aur ab sirf tum par hai...jo tum kaho..so tell me..ab kia faisla hai tumhara...
A:faisla..kitni asani se bol diya..u knw..its nt easy 4 me....mein buhat chahti hoon tumhein...par jo howa..use kaisey bhula doon..mein ne khud usey..apni ankhon se..tumhare ghar mein dekha...living wid u..h cld i trust u..h cld..iw nat 2...par..kya karoon..
S:plz don thnk lik tht...aisa kuch nahee tha hum dono k beech..rishta tha..yah hai..tu bas naam ka nothng more...nothng..more..plz...say somethng...now its totaly up 2 u...tumhara ik faisla meri aneylwali zindagi k raah ho ga...so speak..say sumthng.....i knew..u won't leave me like this...
A(wiping off her tears...):thek hai shayan...agar yahe baat hai tu...mera faisla yeh hai k...
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ok guyz this is up 4 now...sorry 4 da dely...i was busy at home..wid some personal work...do comments on this part..n tell me h it was..will be waitng 4 ur response..next part is da second last part...n then will be last part...so tell me abt ur guesses 2..wht u thnk...aaima..will decide 2 do...n wht will happen 2 shayan n manial...
till nxt time..tc u all..
wid luv..
guriya...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
You r finishing the FF 😭 😭

I think Aaima will go away from Shayan b/c of the reason Mhad gave abt. the ttalak and all.

The part was awesome 😊 poor Manial, Afshan gave some response 🥳 i think keh that person was Mahad lekin ab pata nahin kyun lag raha hai keh Aaima bhi ho sakti hai , plz post the next part soon u have left it at a very interesting note 😊 eagerly waiting for it 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 awesoem part dear...m happpy aaima itni angry nahin hui lekin hope uska faisla manial ko affect na karreh..continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aimaa......hmm well pata nahi.....usne ab tak kuch negative to nahi kiya ki usko bura kahoon but kya karein shayan ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai.....the person who over-heard manial is mahad not aaima.....coz the person said "kuch bura nahi hone doonga...not doongi" ....chalo ji next part ka wait karna hi hoga....but sirf 2 parts bache hain.....i thought aaima bahut drama karegi 😆 ....2 part ke ander uska drama, nd sath sath story bhi over 😆 😆 😆 ......oye i hope conversation adha chod ke tum leap nahi logi agle episode me....ki flashback me pata chal raha hai ki kya kaha tha aaima ne shayan se 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

You r finishing the FF 😭 😭

yah dear i am...thts why i started a new one..coz this was abt 2 finish...i can't drag it...u knw...

I think Aaima will go away from Shayan b/c of the reason Mahad gave abt. the ttalak and all.

lets see h much of ur guess is correct...

The part was awesome 😊 ...thnx....poor Manial, Afshan gave some response 🥳 i think keh that person was Mahad lekin ab pata nahin kyun lag raha hai keh Aaima bhi ho sakti hai ,u will knw soon...who da perosn was... plz post the next part soon u have left it at a very interesting note 😊 eagerly waiting for it 😊 ...i am posting soon..don worry...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

👏 awesoem part dear...m happpy aaima itni angry nahin hui lekin hope uska faisla manial ko affect na karreh..continue soon 👏

thnx...n don be sure thngs r still f9...therez more 2 come...will post soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Aimaa......hmm well pata nahi.....usne ab tak kuch negative to nahi kiya ki usko bura kahoon but kya karein shayan ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai...true,n u dono when a gud perosn turns into villian..the person who over-heard manial is mahad not aaima..coz the person said "kuch bura nahi hone doonga...not doongi" ..why r u so sure dear...donga tu kaha i agree...par abhi aur bhi male characters hain is fic k..😉..chalo ji next part ka wait karna hi hoga....but sirf 2 parts bache hain.....i thought aaima bahut drama karegi 😆 ....2 part ke ander uska drama, nd sath sath story bhi over 😆 😆 😆 ...drama..i dono..i don thnk tht suits her..or will..par..u dono wht will be da end dear...shayad..woh maan jaye..aur manial ko humein bye bolna parey...u neva knw wid me...oye i hope conversation adha chod ke tum leap nahi logi agle episode me....ki flashback me pata chal raha hai ki kya kaha tha aaima ne shayan se 😆 ...oh u knew me so well...k main aisa karoon gi...so chk out nxt part 2 see...wht i did...

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